Rikara FF: Tu hi meri Manzil(Index: Pg 1, Chapter 28 on Pg 84) - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
OK so love started blooming between rikara loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sneak peek into the next chapter:

O: "Kya main ek sawaal pooch saktha hoon?

G: "Poochiye

O: "Kal tum meri baahon mein so rahi thi na.. kya tum uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi? He asked the nudging question.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: yayini

Sneak peek into the next chapter:

O: "Kya main ek sawaal pooch saktha hoon?


G: "Poochiye


O: "Kal tum meri baahon mein so rahi thi
na.. kya tum uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi? He asked the nudging question.



Haye..!! He's going to ask that directly..?? Gosh..waiting for the update... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

<Chapter 13>

While Jhanvi took her medicines and rested, Gauri came to her room back. She had 3 hours before she started getting ready to the shift. She wanted to check on Jhanvi's prescription from Dr. Mishra which was lying in their room. To her surprise, Omkaara was in the room.

"aap abhi tak yaha hain. Mujhe laga aap bahar gaye"

"Nahi, jaane wala hi hoon" Half an hour later

"Oh.. teek hain. Maa abhi teek hain. Aap fikar mat kijiye" She smiled and went past him to take the prescriptions. She behaved as if nothing happened whereas what she did mattered very much to him. She was standing near the cupboard, while he hugged her from behind.

"Thank you Gauri" He buried his head in her shoulders. Gauri was taken aback by his sudden hug and was starting to melt the way he buried his head in her shoulders.

"Omkaara ji.. yeh kisliye?"

He turned her. "Svetlana is a dangerous woman and you have taken a very big risk for us. I don't know if am worth it but you have done a very big thing for me and mom. Thank you so much Gauri"

"Aap mujhe choti si baat ko thankyou kyun keh rahe"

"kyunki tum mujhe pati bhulake, meri problems apni haat pe uthayi. I am happy ki tum mere liye kar rahi ho, par yeh sab karna zaroori nahi hain Gauri. Svetlana shaant nahi baitegi. Koi na koi problem mein tumhe phasana chahegi. Iss liye keh raha hoon, tum bahut careful raho aur main sort out kuch na kuch karke. I don't want you to get into any trouble because of me. Tum fikar mat karo.. Main tumhe Svetlana se protect karoonga. Tumhe kuch nahi kar sakthi WO"

"Sach mein mujhe Svetlana ki darr nahi hain, Omkaaraji"

"Kya"

"Wo kya mujhe marna chahegi, max. Mujhe marne maraane se darr nahi hain. Meri paas hai kya jisse chodke ke jaane ke liye mujhe dard hogi.. Mere paas na to family hain ya koi rishthedaar. Meri jaane se kisko farak padne wala nahi hain, Omkaaraji. Issliye main yeh sab se darti nahi. Aap darna mat" She said with a smile and a plain voice.

Omkaara felt angry and petrified at the same time, at what she said. He couldn't to hear her speaking like this. He hugged her with shaken senses.

"Bas karo. Aise baatein mat karo. Please". He held her tight. Yearning in his voice made her feel something special. Like she mattered to him. After a minute, when he released her, her pins in the hair had come off. He pointed that and she moved next to mirror to adjust that. He came in from behind.

"Jab Svetlana mere upar haath rakh rahi thi, tumhe itna gussa aaya Gauri?"

"Gussa.. Wo.. nahi" She tried to avoid the topic

"Main dekh to raha tha. Tumhaari gaal laal hogayi, gusse mein. Pehli baar tumhe gusse karke dekh raha hoon main. Mujhe bahut acha laga" He was smiling mischievously.

"Wo besharmi ki bua, aapko bahut tang kar rahi thi naa. issliye mujhe gussa aaya" she accepted with a sheepish smile finally. She was trying to set the pin on her hair, it wasn't getting fixed.

"May I"

She looked at him and handed over the pin. He fixed it in her hair and caressed her forehead. Thinking something, he picked up the sindoor which she left without applying in the morning. He opened it and applied it on her forehead while she kept on staring at him, standing like a statue. He removed the drape choking around her neck.

"Agar mangalsutra pehen li ho, sindoor bhi laga lo" He pecked her on her cheeks and went away.

In the night, Gauri was in her shift and was sitting in the nurse's lounge. Patient inflow has been particularly less today and she was free. She took her mobile without anyone noticing and unlocked it. She got reminded of his pic and opened the gallery to find his pic. She kept looking at it for 5 minutes and felt like talking to him so badly. She looked around, her peer came around and she asked her to manage for 5 minutes as she had to make a call.

Omkaara was done with his work and lying on the bed. He looked at the clock, it struck 11. She must be in middle of the shift, he thought. He looked at her side of the bed and looked back. He was reminded of the day's proceedings, how she stood in between him and Svetlana as if she is his fortress. Tiny fortress, he laughed to himself. Her bold avatar was a treat to watch and he thoroughy enjoyed it. He was thinking about her duel with Svetlana while his phone rang. He got more panicky than happy. Why is she calling him in middle of night? Is she in some danger? He picked up asap and started with panicky tone "Gauri.. kya hua. Tum teek to ho?

"Omkaaraji.. omkaaraji.. ghabra kyun rahein. Main teek hoon"

He calmed down after hearing her voice.

"Tum shift ke beech mein call nahi karti ho na.. issliye I was scared"

"Nahi nahi.. aaj patients bahut kam hain. Main todi free thi issliye call kiya. Aap so rahe the? Maine disturb kiya kya?"

He felt heart warming that she wanted to talk to him in her free time. "Nahi Gauri. Bolo"

"Kuch nahi bas aise hi call kiya. Kya kar rahein" She was wondering what to talk, scolding her inside to have called in the first place.

"Tumhaari bare mein soch raha hoon" before he could stop, words came out from the mouth. For a moment he was feeling given up on himself considering what would she think at him saying such words at this time. There is no point thinking when he has already said it.

"Mere bare mein" Her voice was filled with anticipation more than anger

"wo tum aaj Svetlana se lad rahi thi naa. Jhansiki raani ki tharah. Uski bare mein soch raha tha ki wo tumhe kuch disturb na kar de" He made it up somehow

She fell silent for a moment. "Gauri.. are you there?"

"Haan Omkaara ji. Maine kaha naa aap fikar mat kijiye?"

"Nahi nahi kuch security arrangements ki bare mein soch raha tha.. aur kuch nahi"

"Aap ne doodh pee li? Badam wali doodh?" She was sounding like typical wife

Omkaara smirked for a moment. She sounds like a typical wife, but sleeps in the same bed with him like he is her roommate

"Haan pee liya maine. Tum kab aaoge?" Knowing that she will come around 5, he asked a stupid question to which he rebuked himself. He could have controlled a little yearning in his voice.

"Wo.. kal subah 5 baje aaongi. Aap na blanket moo pe daalke mat soyiye. Jab bhi main dekthi hoon aise hi sothe rehthe hain aap"

"Jee madam" somehow this attention made him happy.

He remembered their previous night, when they slept in each others embrace. He was startled to feel his longing for it again.

"Kya main ek sawaal pooch saktha hoon?"

"Poochiye"

"Kal tum meri baahon mein so rahi thi na.. kya tum uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi?" He asked the nudging question.

She bit her lips. What the hell she will answer for this? She herself dint know why she felt like a cocoon to be cuddled in his embrace

"Jitna mujhe yaad hain, jab hum so rahe the, aap meri baahon mein the. Pata nahi ulta kab hogaya" She tried to dodge his question without answering it, trying her best to avoid her heated up cheeks.

He was surprised at the lack of non-coyishness when she spoke. Like a matter of fact. Has she grown that comfortable with him or she lacks any feelings about it?

"Maine nahi kiya. Main bahut comfortable tha. Shayad tumne kiya hoga" He wanted to tease her to find out if she had any feelings about it.

"Main kyoon karoongi"

"Tumhe pasand nahi naa. Jab main ac ki temperature bahut kam karta hoon, toh. Tumhe garmi ki aadat hain, issliye shaayad mere upar so gayi"

"Aap kya heater ho?" She was remotely laughing at what he said, her cheeks were blushing. She thanked god he wasn't there in person.

"Tumhaare liye hoon. Isliye baarish ki din mein bhi, mujhe pakad rahi thi tum" He was so loving these teasy conversations.

"Aap bhi na.. Main aapki upar nahi so rahi thi. Aap ko pakadke so rahi.. "she was struggling to complete.

"Tum upar hi so rahi thi. Maine side pe roll kiya tumhe" He was wondering. No two stranger like people can have a conversation like this joking around on physical intimacy.

"Kya.. main kya aapki upar.. aap jhoot bol rahe ho"

"Nahi. Main kyun jhoot boloonga. Tum mujhe kas kar pakadke so rahi thi. Mujhe dar hai ki main roll karne ki waqt tumhaari upar mere weight na daal doon. Tum ho itni si. Meri weight se crush hojayegi" He purposefully told her these to tease her.

She didn't get what he was hinting at, initially. She got irked when he teased her stature. "Main itni bhi choti nahi hoon. Bahut taakat hain mujhme. Pata hai" Before she ended the sentence, he burst out into laughter. She was wondering why the hell was he laughing like this, only to realise the pun. She turned red as beetroot.

"Omkaara ji. Rounds jaana hain. Rakthi hoon" She cut the call before he could stop her.

<to be continued>


Luv,

Yay

Edited by yayini - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow dear u r just fabulous
loving caring side of omkaara

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Posted: 8 years ago
Ahaan..!! Their new found comfort in talking about intimacy..they're quite comfortable with each other..loved the ProtectiveKara..humein pata hain that he'll protect his biwi ji from that botox kumari nd she'll stand as shield for his pati dev before svetty...I wonder who'll fall for the other first..waiting for the next updates...thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow wow wow
How cute they are😆

They are talking like cute husband and wife😳
Shoo sweet
I have to wait till tomorrow morning
For next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww m loving this omkara. So caring, mischievous, vulnerable, cute n mostly who doesn't stop himself from showing his emotions. He is getting dependent on gauri n is even liking it. The thing jhanvi said about om, gauri is slowly realizing it. He is child who got matured prematurely n now through gauri is seeking and craving that love,care, attention, he missed. I m just loving him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Caringkara is here. I am really happy that Rikara are comfortable with each other. Om is worried for Gauri. Is that an indication that Swetlana might harm Gauri later? Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohoo...starting mein hi romantic moments wah kya bat hai
He hugger her from behind and kafi thanks wanks ho raha hai kabhi hug krke or kabhi pins set krke and and and sindhoor fill krke...he noticed? Agar manglsutra pehn liya toh sindhoor wah😆he is very loving and caring hann... and emotional bhi
See i told you na gauri dekhegi dono ki picture😆 wow call bhi kiya...he was scared when she called him kahin kuch hua toh nahi..and she behave like typical wife.. loved it
Phone convo mein aisa lga now they are comfortable with other.. omkie ka flirty or teasing convo🤣even she is talking about it in comfort zone haina
Tum mere uper soyi thi maine roll kiya hahah too teasing han..
Now bechari face kaise kregi.. and plz svety ko bolo na kuch harm kre gauri ko😆 i want to see dra huya kara ..
U did awesome job
Update soon

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