Rikara FF: Tu hi meri Manzil(Index: Pg 1, Chapter 28 on Pg 84) - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you eishe10, lourel and loveangel94.. keep reading.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rikara94

Ahaan🤣fevicol mila thoda sa duing her night shift😆 bhgwan aisi nightshits deta rahe🤣

He want to comfort her in evryway..
And almost one month finished she forgot what jhanvi said.. acha hai nahi yad toh😆
Botox lomdy is back.. and hume dono ka hug bhi dekhne ko mila svety ki wjah se but she cought them😲 pta nahi what she do after this😒
When omkara was waiting for gauri i though kidnap ho gyi 😆
But ek dum galt scene pe finish kiya chapi..what is this yarr..
Chlo update jldi jldi hume janna hai gauri's reaction after this


ab din mein bhi shuru hogaye.. phir Ri ki happy birthday wala party aayegi.. phir kab kahan shuru hota hai pata nahi 🤣🤣

Ri completely forgot that one month thingy.. yaad aayegi tab when she will realize that she is crossing the line.. tab tak omkie pagla chuka hoga.. and he will be fighting desperation.. 🤣🤣 Poor omie.. show mein bhi desperate yahan bhi..

Bahut sahi scene aaraha hain.. wait karo.. moh moh ke daage.. 🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: whity.007

Wow

So fakelana come back😆

At last om hugging gouri👏
And svety reaction🤣

Wow romantic scenes on the way
I hope so it is not fake romance🥺

If you want you can also give us the
Double update😆


Whity you are asking double update in this FF also.. 🤣🤣
I will do the same for SR cahpter..like i did..🤣
Its not fake romance.. yahan pe koi deal, mU, fakeromance yeh sab atyachaar nahi hain.. sirf feelings hain and lana bhi hain🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Finally things are getting in place

Both were not understanding each other
But now Omkara understands
She had lived a life so different
That all his care n concern were too much

They are getting used to each other
Even to Gauri's work routine
Loved the morning of the night shift
Omkara completely forgot
But Gauri held onto him

Hope similarly she keeps holding onto him
Don't leave him
Loved how Omkara ran to Gauri
To save himself from Svetlana
But Svetlana caught onto Gauri's reaction

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon


Hi vrinda.. thanks for the comments dear.. Yes her main weakness is going to be his niceness here also. She isn't used to all these and now when she gets from him more and more, she will naturally want more up until a point where she will be scared with herself. BTW Gauri doesn't know she held on to him. Svet zaroor fayda utayegi on the gauri's reluctance.. lets see.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: yayini


ab din mein bhi shuru hogaye.. phir Ri ki happy birthday wala party aayegi.. phir kab kahan shuru hota hai pata nahi 🤣🤣

Ri completely forgot that one month thingy.. yaad aayegi tab when she will realize that she is crossing the line.. tab tak omkie pagla chuka hoga.. and he will be fighting desperation.. 🤣🤣 Poor omie.. show mein bhi desperate yahan bhi..

Bahut sahi scene aaraha hain.. wait karo.. moh moh ke daage.. 🤣🤣

Omg gauri's bday
Limits cross
Pgla om
Moh moh ke dhage
Ahhh super excited i am😳 jldi jldi update ek sath 3-4😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

<Chapter 9>

In the room, Om left gauri slowly after closing the door.

"Kya hua? she asked with a puzzled expression

"Am sorry I had to .. you know.. Svetlana was crossing her limits. Issliye aise karna pada"

"Usse jalana chahthe hain aap?" She asked a direct question

"Nahi Gauri. Wo jale ya na jale. Koi matlab nahi hai mere liye. I didn't have any other option other than to physically push her out. Wo apni limits cross karti hai. Thank you for saving me once again" He smiled flashing his teeth. Gauri was taken aback by his smile for a moment.

Somehow she felt a little annoyed that he didn't come near her because he missed her. It was a fake gesture to show Svetlana. Her face was index of what she felt hence she moved away with a twitch in her face.

Omkaara noticed this. "Kya hua gauri. Tumhe kuch baat pareshaan kar rahi hai?"

"Nahi nahi.. kuch nahi" She tried to move, he caught her hand.

"Bolo kya baat hai"

"Main accept karti hoon yeh shaadi ek dikhawa hain. Par yeh sab cheezein jasbaat se jude hote hain. Kisi aur ko dikhane ke liye, yeh sab karna mujhe pasand nahi hain. Maaf kijiye" She went to the changing room

Omkaara felt a prick. She felt bad at him displaying affection to turn away Svetlana. But she does say that it has to be real. What if it was real.. Will she accept it?

Omkaara stopped thinking. She came out and was doing her usual thing like nothing happened, he called.

"Gauri"

"Haan"

"Am sorry if it hurt you. Aage se, I will not do it"

Gauri felt disappointed for this also, she was wondering why

"koi baat nahi omkaara ji. Bhool jayiye"

"Par sab kuch dikhawa nahi tha" he gave her a look and went away leaving her wondering what the hell did he mean?

Gauri was off for a very early shift in the morning and returned around early evening. Omkaara wasn't around. She freshened up and met Jhanvi and daadi and was back to the room. Their room

Gauri was pondering over the room for the first time. She found some old pictures of Om with family. She was lookin at those with so much interest, at him precisely. A random thought crossed her mind; he looks so handsome now, than in the pictures. She was startled at her thought process. Her mind is working in all wrong ways now a days. She gave her a whack inside and went near the window. The climate was wonderful and clouds were dark. It looked it was going to rain. Wow, Rain.

As a child also, gauri was always fond of rain. In her care home, no one would be able to stop her until she completely drenched herself after dancing out in the rain.Her mood was jubilant and the aura was so fulfilling. She felt so excited like a teenager after so long. She decided to sneak into the terrace without anyone noticing so that she can have a tryst with the rain.

Omkaara came almost drenched. He had to cancel few of his important meetings late afternoon and reached home early. It started to rain heavily almost and he was just in time. First thing he checked inside the room was her presence. Gauri wasn't there. Didn't she return, yet? Has she got stuck in the traffic? He dialed her number and it was phone was ringing on the bed. He heaved a sigh. She is in. But where is she? He was unsure why he was very restless today. He was very impatient to see her and her thoughts kept invading him during work. "Dikhawa ke liye paas mat aayiye the way she said it, it was running in his mind for so long

He went to meet Jhanvi hoping to see Gauri there. Jhanvi's was alone. All along his conversation with Jhanvi, his eyes were wandering here and there. Jhanvi understood immediately and smiled within herself.

"Omkaara.. tumhe kuch chahiye?"

"Wo mom.. kuch nahi". He turned to leave

"Gauri ko doondh rahe ho?" Now Jhanvi smiled openly

He looked like a caught school kid.. "Nahi to.. main kyun doondhunga. I wanted to check on you bas.".

"Omkaara yeh mat bhoolo main tumhaari maa hoon"

"Mom..??!!??"

"Gauri is not here. Pata nahi kahan hai. I searched for her too."

"Wo aagayi naa hospital se?"

"Haan, par uski baad kahin gayi hai shayad"

"Oh. Mujhe call bhi nahi kiya. Main check karke aata hoon" He was thoughtful.

Meanwhile in the terrace, Gauri was enjoying like a school kid. There was a magnificient pool and surrounding which there were orchids. She was playing with water in pool and getting drenched in rain. She wasn't even aware her suit getting stuck to her body and was playing in rain only to feel a sudden sensation of someone staring at her. She was shocked to find Omkaara staring at her with all the glory.

Gauri was looking like a caught school kid now. All her excitement drained out and she was standing nervous. What would he think? How can she behave in such an immature way?

Omkaara came near holding an umbrella. He held it for her and him.She wasn't able to face him since she was embarrassed to move with her dress sticking to her like a second skin. She cursed herself for wearing an offwhite suit while dancing in the rain. She was nervous whether it went transparent but she didn't dare to move. He was taken aback to see her in this state. Her dress was sticking to her body and the suit didn't do justice either, to his wracking senses. It was displaying everything appropriate and inappropriate at the same time. He was struggling to see her straight. He managed to gather his senses after moments.

"Gauri.. sardi lag jayegi.. andar chalo" he could manage to tell only that with caring voice.

Gauri looked at him fondly. The rain, her exuberant state and all had brought her guard down, very much. She smiled at him "aap bahut sweet hain, Omkaara ji". He was pleasantly shocked. He realized that she just complimented him. He smiled back.

"Tum bhi bahut sweet ho.. Infact kaafi cute bhi ho" He was wondering what the hell was he talking like this.

Her smile widened more.. "Phir chaliye mere saath" she pushed the umbrella down and started enjoying the rain. Now both were drenched in rain and omkaara was looking at her enjoying the rain to the fullest. He never saw someone who is so pure and innocent in their expression of happiness. "Gauri" he touched her shoulders. She turned to look at him. "Bas aur nahi.. Sardi lag jayegi tumhe. Aajao" he clasped her cheeks with so much tenderness. Something melted inside her heart on hearing this very concerned voice. She lost her senses for a moment and hugged him tight, without thinking.

Omkaara was taken aback. He never expected her to hug him at this moment. His already awake senses and her proximity threw him out of balance. He hugged her back tightly.

Gauri was immersed in his bodily warmth. A warmth, which made her feel more secure and protected, a feeling which was unknown for her till now. His care was soothing the scars of her lonely soul and his embrace was magical.

Omkaara on the other hand was feeling pure bliss. He had come out a long time relationship years ago and has been living alone since then. He didn't have the luxury of experiencing a soulful love in his depressing situation. She was like a coming of fresh air in his already choked state. He couldn't stop his hands from feeling her petite soft stature. He didn't want to. He leaned down and buried his head in the nape of her neck to feel her feminine aura. Her subtle bodily scent was making him brush his face up and down her neck and her fingers, now entwined in his hair were pulling him towards her in anticipation for more.

Gauri was feeling a strange excitement spiking through her body. His hands were trailing all along and her hands were not listening to her as she told them to stop him from advancing. She arched more when he brushed his stubble in her neck and cheeks, giving in to her anticipation. His body musk and towering frame wrapped her entirely as she held him tight for her own grip. He entwined his fingers with hers and wrapped her arms around his chest.

Yeh moh moh ke daage

Tere ungliyoon se jaa uljhe...

Her arched frame gave him more confidence and he kissed her neck. Gauri felt a low key vibration but he held her still and kissed her chin. She moved her face since she felt a tickling sensation. He held her face in hands and brushed his fingers on her lips. She was getting lost in the whirlpool and her senses came to a jolt when he felt his tongue on her cheeks. Her cheeks flushed and she buried her face inside his chest. His hands went on to pull her sleeves off one side. Gauri s senses finally became aware of the state they were in while he was still lost in her. She was struggling to gather her up and get away when she felt his tongue in her shoulder bone. The spiking sensation threw her off balance and she pushed him off involuntarirly. Omkaara wasn't aware of his state for few moments while gauri turned aside breathing heavily. Rain had stopped completely and she turned crimson red looking at her disheaveled state. She corrected her dress and collected her veil which was flung aside by him and ran away from his sight.

<To be continued>

Edited by yayini - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Romance in the air. Cute scenes. Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome Loved it yar
romance is on full mode
the rain sequence was superb yar
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG so cute
Rainy romance
Bechara omkie 😆
Here after how he is going to
Sleep quite in the same bed🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago
Gosh it was so hot n romantic. Loved it

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