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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Nice to see both Rudr and Paro spend some quality time together. They needed it.

Loved how Samrat stood up to his mother. At last he is standing up for himself.

How can mitra be Dilsher's daughter.


Thank u 4 ur cmt 😉
I slightly changed d FB of Mala Dilsher..
Nxt chapter mala'll open up..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I loved rudra saying that paro is his happiness and he wants to erase his past with it.moon scene was very romantic. Geetanjali...oh...shocking that mitra is dilsher's daughter


Yes, mitra s disher's daughter., slightly changed flashback of Mala..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AlooMatar

Mitra is Dilsher's daughter? How? Oh god there is so much going one. And Nandini's back story coming up too.

Thank you for making that house not about Laila. Can't stand her. But how much does Paro know about her at this point?


Thank u 4 ur cmt sis..
Yeah mitra s dilsher's daughter.. Slightly changed d FB of Mala..
Paro don't kno anything abt Laila bt she thought that Laila loves Rudra,tats y she try to kill her at Haldi..
I'll connect all thing to make Tejawat's stronger than in original story so that all r connect to one case...
So many characters r unjustified in d story i'l try to justify it wit d help these new characters...
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Chapter 29

At BSD, Danveer reached BSD and meet Rudra who gave him a file which contains Nandini's details. He says I know her, beta. Rudra asks how did you got to know about Nandini? He says I helped her to escape from her husband and four others who are all trying to misbehave with her. He says I couldn't get you Chacha, can you explain it clearly.

%Flash back%

Nandini's Barat reaches border and they are stopped by BSD securities. Check point officer got information about sand storm in Pakistan so Pakistan soldiers didn't allow barat to enter. They made a temporary tent to spend that night. Nandhini's tent is little bit far away from others tent. All men are started drinking to celebrate their half victory. Danveer checks them from the checkpoint. Four of them are going towards Nandini's tent. Danveer felt something wrong so came out of the checkpoint and went to her tent and overhears what they are talking. They are talking ill to her. She cried and shakes her husband to help her. Her husband pushes her and says I need to celebrate our wedding night with my friends. She is stunned and begged them to leave her but they pulled her dress. She used her full strength and pushed them who are trying to touch her and runs out of her tent. Danveer holds her hand and says shhh beta and hides her behind her tent. She cries. He points the checkpoint to her and wishpers go there, run as much as fast. After she run, he came to entrance of the tent and stops them who are all drunk but they are curies to find her. Danveer asks what happen. Why is your wife running away? He asks where she is. Danveer says that side, points the opposite direction. They went to search her. Danveer waits for an hour and come back to checkpoint where Nandini is sitting in the corner and shivering a lot. He offers her a shawl. She says thanks. He says beti, you need to leave from here, go to your home. She nods. He drops her at the main road. She folds her hand and thanked him again and left. (Did you remember my lovely reader, I mention about a soldier who saved her in border (Nandini's chapter) who is none other than Danveer)

%Flash back%

Rudra asks is she tell you anything about where she heading? He says I asked her to go to her home, after I dropped her at main road, I don't know anything after that. Rudra asks did her husband found her that night. He says no, I know that, they didn't found her and they went to Pakistan without her. Rudra asks did you share this secret with others. He says no Rudra. Rudra says thanks for your information. He nods and left.

It's almost morning, Rudra sitting in his cabin and sipping his tea. His thoughts are struck with Nandini, where she went? How she reached Mumbai? Who is kidnapped her? Or she willingly had gone to Mumbai? But., why? His thoughts are disturbed by Aman's call. He informs him that he is going to interrogate with Mala. He says ok Aman, carry on. Aman says sir, I... he says tell me Aman, is there any problem. He says no problem sir, I know a girl who is good in maths, and she is unemployed. He says ok, why are telling this to me. Aman says she can able to teach your sister sir. He says ok Aman, but you need to ask Sunheri about this. He says sir, you can talk to Sunheri first and then I'll bring her to haveli in evening time. Rudra says ok Aman, I'll talk to her before you came and cuts the call.

At haveli, Sumer wakes up and saw time and says it's late now. He rushed to bath room to get ready to go to office. Mohini went to his room and asks where are going? He says job. She smiles and says job? You're going to job; it's really a big joke of this year. He says oh ok, then stand aside and then laugh. She calls him to stop but he left.

Aman went to Shatabdi's house where all are having breakfast. Shatabdi welcomed him and ask him to have breakfast but he refused it. He says I want to see Mala Tejawat. She says Mala ma is in my room, I'll fetch her here. He says no need, shall I meet her in your room. She says ok, that's great idea so that we won't interfere in BSD investigation and smiled at him. He nods. In Shatabdi's room, he sits in front of Mala and says Mrs. Mala Tejawat, I... She signs him to stop and says I'm not Mrs. Tejawat. He asks then what? She says Mrs. Mala Dilsher Ranawat. He says so you're changed your husband name after you got know about his crime. She says no, I'm not married that criminal, I'm just an employee of Tejawat. He says ok, then how village people are calling you as Thakuranisa? Even Parvati is also calling you like that. She says no one know that, what happen 19 years ago. He says I think your testimony will help us to reach Tejawat and Mitra. Mala is shocked to hear Mitra's name. She asks how he knew about Mitra. He says I know about her but I want your statement first so that I'll help you to meet Mitra. She asks are you trying to blackmailing me? He says think what you want but I need your full cooperation. She nods at him.

%FLASH BACK%

All Ranawat family members are happily lives in the Haveli. But no one knows about one person's unhappiness that is Mohini who wasn't happy because she was refused by elders of the house. She is the one who gave birth to first child of the Ranawat mansion but no one care about it. After Rudra born, elders in the Haveli started loving Rudra and stating that Rudra is the heir of the Ranawat. Mohini & her kids are refused by Dilsher's mother. After 5 year Dilsher mother the only elder person remains in Ranawat haveli was passed away finally.

(2 year life was goes well without any problem. Rudra was six years old and Sunheri was two years old)

Rudra loves to play with Sunheri who loves Rudra much more than her own brothers. Sumer is also same age as Rudra. He didn't allow him to play with her. Rudra is always complaining about it to Dilsher who always laughed out so he goes to Mala who console him by singing his favorite song.

Its Rudra's 6th birthday, we are all waiting for Dilsher who is out with some business dealers. Mala called him and informed him to come home soon. He says oh, I forgot it; I'll be there within few minutes. After few minutes, Phone ringing in hall, Mala picked it and stunned to hear about accident. All are rushed to hospital. After few weeks, Dilsher was discharged from hospital. His one leg was not working properly so he was advised by Doctors to take rest for at least six month. At that time period, business wasn't gone well, they got loss in business. Danveer's salary is not enough for them. One day, Mohini said to Mala that I'll help you to get out of this loss. Mala asks how jeeja? She says I'll make duppata's here in our Haveli and you will took care outside business. Mala says I don't know anything about it. She says you studied 10th STD so you can easily get to know about it and I'll take care of Rudra and Dilsher. Mohini's words are encouraged her to handle outside business. Time was started moving faster finally exactly after six months, Mala sits next to Dilsher and says I felt relieved because today is your last check up; you are going to walk without any instrument. Dilsher smiles and says I'll go to my shop to continue my business. She nods and smiles at him. At hospital, Doctor checked him and says Dilsher your fine now but your one leg is not working till now so you can take some physiotherapy. Dilsher asks after that I can able to walk, am I right Doctor? He says not exactly but we can try this too. Dilsher angrily left Doctor's cabin. Mala try to console him but he didn't hear her. Without caring about family, He was slowly addicted to drinks. When Mala was out, Mohini poisoned Dilsher's mind with her words, she started talking ill about Mala with worker when Dilsher was near at them. He felt bad and started drinking in day time also and started taunting & treating Mala ill physically and also mindly.

Days and months are passed and its Rudra's 7th birthday but no one know about it. Danveer brought a cake for him. All kids and Danveer are tried to make him happy but he want his father with him so he went to call his father to his room. Dilsher was drunk, without listening Rudra, he pushed him away. Rudra cries and come to Danveer who consoled him. He refused to cut the cake and went to his room and cries and slept.

Late at night, Mala came back home. Dilsher waits for her at hall and asks what the time now was. She says sorry, I'm late today because of packing duppata's got delayed. He stops her and holds her hand pushed her. She holds her stomach and says my child. Dilsher says Rudra is my child not yours, he is Ranawat heir, and I don't want an ill woman who isn't worth to be a mother. Mala is scared to tell him that she is pregnant with his child. She sits on floor and cried hard. He says shhh, I don't want any drama, get out. She shouts for Rudra, but Rudra is slept. He holds her hand and drags her out of the Haveli and throws her and shut the door.

Shatabdi knocked the door and asks may I come in? Aman says come in. She serves him a cup of tea and refreshment. He says thank you. She says sorry for disturbing your investigation. He says it's ok. She smiled at him and left. He asks what about Tejawat? She says I left my house and went to my mother house where they are not accepting me us their daughter because of Dilsher who complaint about my behavior to my parents. She cried a little and continued I started walked on desert and it's started getting darker not only the sky but my eyes also, I fainted in front of the car. When I get my conscious I'm in Tejawat haveli with Shantanu who is Tejawat's son. Shantanu is a motherless child who loves me a lot, so Tejawat accept me as his worker. Shantanu started calling me mom. After Mitra born, he accepts her as his sister. All village people are thinking that I'm Tejawat's wife and Mitra is his daughter. Few years later, One day Tejawat came to my room and says all are assuming that we are husband and wife, are you interested to marry me. She says no, I won't, I'm already married and I'm not interested to remarry. He says ok, no problem but act like my wife in front of village people. She asks why? He says I'll take care of Mitra and her studies and future life too; this is your salary, is it ok for you? She didn't reply to him. He says take your own time and left. Mala accept his deal after few days of thinking, she didn't want to give Mitra a bad life like her, she want her child to learn everything about the world before Her marriage. After few years Parvati came in my life. Tejawat send his son and my daughter to Singapore for studies. Exactly after four year of Mitra's birth, he started doing Wedding to poor girls of Birpur. He is doing this marriage 15 years without any difficulties. All village people are trusted him and hated BSD.

%FLASHBACK%

Aman recorded everything. She asks where is Mitra? Is she fine? He nods and a ringing sound distrust their conversation. He answered the call. Rudra ordered him to ask about Nandini, and says I need complete report Aman, ask her if she met Nandini after her Bharat. Aman says ok sir. He cuts the call and thinks about V.K sir words about Nandini dairy. He immediately called him and asks him to brought Nandini's dairy.

At Shatabdi house, Aman asks is that the real reason? Or else? She says I'm not lying, at that time I have no other choices, so that I accepted it. He says ok, I need some clarification, did you know about Tejawat Smuggling? She says I don't know anything before he kidnapped me from Haveli. He asks why he kidnapped you. She says because he knows everything about my son Rudra, so he tries to use me as his shield. He asks how you got to know about him. She says I asked him why he doing all this, why ties me in a dark house, after 3 days Chandrika(Mamisa) is also kidnapped by him and tied up next to me. Chandrika told me everything about his ill business & smuggling. He asks did you know Nandini? She sadly smiles and says I know her, she is Parvati's sister. He asks did you meet her after her marriage. She says no, i didn't. He asks can you explain me about what are the illegal business Tejawat doing? She says Smuggling guns and sold Birpur innocent girls to someone who is the closely connected to Indian Government, but I don't know exactly who is he. He asks how you got know about it. She says Tejawat, he himself told me about his illegal actives, when I was tied up in his hiding place. He says ok, thank you for your cooperation, if I need further information, I'll... She says Mitra. He says she is fine and I don't want to take any risk before we catch Tejawat, hope you understand. She nods and says thank you.

At BSD HQ, V.K says Nandini didn't mention anything before she met Bharath, its starts from Mumbai and ends with her wish. Rudra says shall I read her diary. V.K nods and gave him a diary. Aman interrupts them and saluted them and submits Mala's report. Rudra says I don't want to know about her but I want Nandini's details. He says sir; she didn't meet her after her marriage. V.K says Rudra, its getting complicated. Rudra says no sir, it's very simple. V.K asks how? He says Kesari Ram, we forget our first soul witness. V.K says that's good idea, carry on Rudra and he left.

Rudra sits on his chair and reads Nandini's diary. Aman says Sir, you have to read this report. He says ok Aman, but not now. Aman nods and placed the file on his table and left. Aman got a call from control room and he rushed to Rudra's cabin and informed him about Tejawat's GPS signal. They rushed to Control room and got to know that they got the signal few minutes ago, its moves towards a collage, named Saakshar College. Rudra says shit, something wrong, its Sunheri's college. Rudra ordered Aman to inform everything. Aman says sir, take our team with you. He says if I need soldiers then I'll inform you and rushed out.

Someone in scooter entered into the college. The person removes his helmet, its none other than Shantanu who meets the office people and filled a form and submitted it to them and left. Rudra jeep entered into the college when Shantanu come out of it. Aman calls Rudra and says Signal travelling out of college now sir, but it stayed their more than 30 minutes. Rudra angrily disconnects the call and rushed to checks Sunheri's well being. Sunheri asks what happen Bhaisa? He says nothing, we need to leave now. She nods and with principal's permission, they left college. The signal disappeared in Jaipur market.

At haveli, Mohini asks what happen Sunheri? Are you cut the college? Rudra enter into haveli and says I brought her from college, she is going to met Aman's friend for her maths tuition. Mohini says Tuition? For what? Sunheri is good in maths, so no need it. He saw her for a second with his burning glance and calls Maithili. Maithili came there and says Ji Devarjisa. He says Bhabisa, I need a cup of tea and on the sofa. Maithili give him a tea. Sunheri felt happy to hear Aman's name and asks Bhaisa, who did this for me? He says I think, Aman did this, when I taught maths, he is the one who admired it. Varsha came there and says so my problem is going to over soon. Rudra asks what your problem is. She smiles and says hereafter, My brother will pick me up and don't want to ask an angry man for lift. He grits his teeth. She says sorry, Major Ranawat, I'm not... Without giving heed to her talk, He says Sunheri, your decision is final about this. She says Bhaisa, before I appoint his relative, I'll does interview. He smiles and pats her head and left.

Aman drove his car and Mitra sits beside him. She asks where we are heading. He simply says Ranawat haveli. She is shocked and asked him to stop the car. He says Mitra don't worry. She says please stop the car, I want to talk to you before go there. He nods and stops near at temple. She gets out of car and went into the temple. Aman parked car and runs behind her and holds her hand to stop her. Parvati spotted them and says Aman Bhaisa. Inside the temple, Geethanjali is talking to someone. Geethanjali calls Parvati who says coming maasa. Parvati asks what happen, Bhaisa. When his grip losses, she leaves his hand and walked inside the temple. He says Parvati, she is my friend, Mitra, and she is going to teach maths for Sunheri. She says Bhaisa, but she looks so sad. He says han, Parvati and they walked inside. Mitra slips but Geethanjali holds her. Parvati and Aman come to her side to support her. Aarti started, all four of them are joined together and does pooja. After that, Geethanjali says congrats to Mitra who asks for what? She says Aman said that you are going to teach maths to Sunheri at Ranawat haveli. Mitra saw Aman who is smiled at her. Geethanjali says I wish a good teacher for my daughter too. Parvati asks why Maasa? She says to learn English. Aman says Mam, shall say something. She says go ahead my boy. He says if you don't mind, Mitra will teach her too. Geethanjali smiles and turns to Parvati and asks Parvati, is it ok for you. She says Maasa, are you feel happy about it. Geethanjali nods at her. Parvati holds her hand and says I'll do it for you, Maasa. All are smiles but Mitra eyes are only admires Aman who is standing next Geethanjali.

At BSD, Rudra saw his phone which show Paro's picture peeping. He attended her call and says Paro. She says Major saab, I had a surprise for you. He smiles and asks what? Paro. She says guess, where I'm now. He says in service center. She says no Major saab. He says your home. She says no Major Saab. He says I don't know Paro. She lovely says in OUR HOME. He thought that I want to meet you, Paro, before I left for mission. She says Major Saab, are you there? Majorrr. He says hmmm, Paro, I'll be there within an hour, stay there. She says ok, Major Saab.

At haveli, After few question, Sunheri accepted Mitra as her maths teacher. Mohini says Bhaisa, today is good day so you can start your job today. Mitra nods. Aman says yeah, go ahead Mitra, I'll wait for you. Mitra says no problem; you carry on with Varsha Bhaisa. Varsha says han Bhai, come lets go. He says ok, I'll drop her and come back to pick you up, is it ok. Sunheri says its good idea. Parvati and Sunheri sits together and Mitra says shall we go to any room. Sunheri asks why? She says without any disturbance, we can learn quickly.

After an hour, Rudra reached home. In Sunheri's room, Mitra says ok, now class was over, we will meet tomorrow and Parvati Bhabisa, complete your home work. She asks Bhabisa? Sunheri says you're my Bhabisa and Mitra is my friend so that she called you like that. Mitra smiles and says if you don't like... Parvati holds her hand before she completes her sentence and says call me like that, you too looks like a sister to Major Saab. Rudra overhears them. Mitra come to hall where Aman is waiting for her. She surprised to see him. Rudra stops her and asks about her certificates. Aman says sir, she is my... Rudra stops him and says Rudra, not sir and it's my duty to check. He says Rudra, she lost her passport and certificates two months ago. Rudra nods and says I trust you, Aman. He nods and says Parvati, shall we. Rudra says I need to talk to her, I mean., need to inquiry about Nandini. Parvati stands besides Rudra. Aman nods and left with Mitra who stops in mid and come to Rudra and took his blessing. Rudra is taken aback and asks what are doing. She says I have a brother like you. Aman says maybe she remember him. She says this is my first job, so I want his blessing but now he is not with me. Rudra says I can understand your situation, anyway, Congrats...Mmm what is your name? She says Mitra. He was shocked and holds Paro's hand for a second and says congrats Mitra. Parvati senses his tension and holds his hand back.

Few minutes later, Parvati come to Rudra's room and asks is there any problem in Missing Birpur girls case. He closed the file and turns to face her. She is looking him confusingly. He says problem nahi Paro, but problem hain. She says didn't get you. He asks did you see your sister Nandini after marriage. She says no Rudra, what happen? He says she is not crossed the border but Bharth found her at Mumbai, something missing in between Paro. She says I trust you, Major Saab. He hugged her. She asks Major Saab, what happen? I can feel your tension when you hears Mitra's name. He hugs her tighter and says shhh, Paro, shhh. She cares his back and says Shant Rudra. He breaks hug and says for new mission, I'm going to Kashmir and I don't know when the mission will end. She holds his cheek and says soon. He smiles and says before that I want to meet you, that why. She says that why you asked me to stay. He nods and drags her with him and hugs her. She says Major Saab., he hmmed., She says before going to mission, I need... He kissed her forehead and surprisingly says Paro, what is this? She breaks hug and asks what? He points her head. She turns to saw her reflection in mirror and smiles and says Sindoor Major Saab, I hide my filled Maang with my hair. He smiles and asks Why Paro? She says we are married so... He kissed her lips like rukmani touches her. She says Major... he kissed her again. She puts her hand on his mouth and says I need to meet you before you left for mission. He kissed her palm. She takes her hand back. He says I'll meet you with a gift. She smiles. He says but before that I need a gift from you. She asks what gift. He says kiss. She blushes. He says like yesterday. She recalls how she kissed him yesterday night at that house and her face blushes more. He points his lip. She holds his shirt collar and tugs him down to her height and placed her lips on his cheek and pushes him and runs. He calls her.

Precap:Rudra's gift and his mission mystery.

sorry for so many Flashbacks and less PaRud..

Dear readers please forgive my mistakes..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Bhavya,

Awesome update, many things become clear In this chapter. Its really nice that how u clarify mala track, how she went & which circumstances & why she was staying there & she was not actually tejawats wife. Coz in serial, it didn't feel good that when tejawat caught & his truth came in front , mala came to Ranawat hawali & after that mala & dilshar stay as husband wife. But here u show different story which look better that why she can come back to her family coz she didn't remarry or lived like tejwat's wife. Who kidnapped nandani?? Why Rudra going to Kashmir's & which case?? Did Rudra read aman's report? He was shocked to hear mitra's name??
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SPL thanx to u bhavya, I don't know u personally & we didn't talk but through ur story we are connected, cz we are only 5-7 readers, who reading this story but you a are still continuing it. I saw that many writer stops or discontinue their story when there readers reduce but u wrote of us, thank u so much this lovely & superb story. I am not so good in English & sometimes didn't get correct word to express but I always try what I wanted to say
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Flash backs are helping clear the mystery. So Mala is not married to Tejawat and Mitra is her daughter. She was actually kicked out of the house by Dilsher, how cruel. And yet he blames Mala. How is Rudra going to react when he comes to know the truth.
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Posted: 8 years ago
past is explained beautifully. it's better than what they showed on RR.in the show dilsher was shown horrible in the fb.but here it's mohini who brainwashed him against mala and mala hasn't loved of married tejawat unlike d show.liked it.parud scene was romantic
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Posted: 8 years ago
The ending made me laugh poor Rudra 😃

There were so many things going on simultaneously. Happy that Mitra is home finally and very curious as to what Rudra and Aman are upto.

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: thakurpreeti

Hey Bhavya,

Awesome update, many things become clear In this chapter. Its really nice that how u clarify mala track, how she went & which circumstances & why she was staying there & she was not actually tejawats wife. Coz in serial, it didn't feel good that when tejawat caught & his truth came in front , mala came to Ranawat hawali & after that mala & dilshar stay as husband wife. But here u show different story which look better that why she can come back to her family coz she didn't remarry or lived like tejwat's wife. Who kidnapped nandani?? Why Rudra going to Kashmir's & which case?? Did Rudra read aman's report? He was shocked to hear mitra's name??


Thank you for your brief cmt..
I'm nt at al satisfied with Original flash back of Mala who came to Haveli aft she lived wit Tejawat, I felt it was not suits for Indian culture..
Next Chapter wil answer some of your questions.. Rudra didn't told abt his past to till nw.. & how'll he told abt Mitra to Paro Bt hope Paro's Love'll change him..

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