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Hi guys thanks for liking and comment on previous part..sry for late. If any grammatical and mistakes in this part , i am sorry..


Previous part link -part 1

Recap: khurana sisters( sam, NT and sasha) and Handa brothers( Brij, dev and Arjun) are enemies in professional field.unfortunately both coated same amount in one Govt tender project.both r more powerful. they donot want lose big project and also dont sharing project with them.sam hell angry how handa got tender coating amount..same handa brother also fuming..one single call, handa brother running to handa mansion with scary face.oh poor boys bow down infront of their little princess..yeah none other our herione , Geet. otherside NT and sasha called someone ..that person only bring back sam to normal mode..

ok they talk with whom and handa brother punishment..in this part😉

Part 2

Dream girl ...

After hearing his magical voice.noone say no to him.he such attractive and mix with husky pride voice .his voice cleverly declared to others like he is not slave to anyone.noone dominate him, no one guts fool him.ofcourse anyone fallen for his m-shaped lips right.obviously every girls waiting for his single smile.

A owner of voice whose kneel down in front of girl .A girl wore bridal dress with full attire bangles, heavy jewellery, payal . she look like angel in her back view..yeah she show him to her back view not her face..she nervous and breathing heavily.


U r my dream girl .I don't know when i fallen love with u, u r eyes have magical power. U r eyes sparkling not lesser than 10000 volt shock ( girl eyes lasher look down insake of blushing), u r bangle giggling sound make me to crazy..( girl hold her bangle to stop clicking sound) ur hair moving in air like sea waves.my hand want play with ur silky hair ( girl tucked her hair behind her ear with little smile) u r lip color like cherry fruit.i want eat raw ( girl bit her corner lip with her teeth ) u r more beautiful than apsaras /angel ( heaven living girls call to apsaras/ angel ).simple say, u r my breathe taken. If u mind i am want u see full moon face , dream girl..maan get up , held her shoulder ( both have some goosebump or electric shock in their bodies )and tried to turn her

His phone ring..he irritating hearing his phone ring .he pickup the phone and cut the call..once again he tried turn her and eagerly waiting for seeing her face..once again his phone ring. He attend call with irritate voice.


Hello, who the hell disturb, Maan singh Khurana with angry face even saying name in pride tone

Other side phone

Champ with sad voice.

Maan: sashu ...


Maan rolled down in his bed jerkly..his chocolate eyes scanning his whole room..one side big plazma TV placed in wall ,every items so modern and classic.maan get up and sit in bed as yawning face yeah holding his phone one hand .

Sasha: iam hell for u with sad and fake angry face.

Maan hit his forhead : fool, everything is my dream ..not real..with frustrated voice.

Sasha: first hell , now fool then what..with one hand in her hiccup.

Maan: no sashu, i am not mention u , today also she come to my dream with pout face.

Sasha giggled : oh god, atleast today dream , u see ur dream girl face or not.

Maan nods his head sadly : no sashu, i tried to turn and look at her face same time.u called disturbed my sleep like kabab mein haddi


Sasha: what now haddi for u..u changed so much , champ.when she come to ur dreams , u forgot us totally.this is unfair with complaint voice.

Maan: oh my dear sashu if she come to my life in real or not , my first priority only my sisters . U three of them my life.how is NT


Nt: iam here maanu baby

Maan: how many time i told u dont call me maanu baby with pout face

Nt: but u r my maanu baby with teasing tone.


Maan: ok , u call me whatever u want..where is my sweet sam

NT and sasha: opps After hearing ur voice, we forgot everything.we called u for our sam didi..

Maan: what happened to di..with worried voice ..

NT: nothing baba, oh morning itself she disturbed , because of


Maan: handas right with fuming voice.i dont know why everytime they troubled my sam.if they infront of me. I will beat them like my punching bag with angry voice.

Sasha And NT: yes champ, first u talk with sam di.u only bring her back to normal mode.

Maan: ok i chat with her in video call.after u both join us.by the way how is my old lady with chuckled face

NT: she is our dadi..give respect, champ.

Maan: ha, i know baba but in this age also her attitude, dominating nature to everyone .she order everyone like she is elizabeth queen.

Nt and sasha giggled: because she is khurana..khurana not only our surname champ , khurana not less than royal .whole world watching us .whole media eagerly waiting for single minute interview because We r pride of our country..then only dadi behave like that .she is elder of our family.obviously she is queen of our khurana empire .

Maan: no i cannot accept , she is not queen of khurana empire .my sam only ruler of khurana empire.

How it is possible..

Maan rolled his eyes: u came, old lady with dragging tone

Dadi: ofcourse without me,even u r not come this world

Maan: ur kind information ,my mom gave me birth not u , old lady with taunting tone.

Dadi smirked:iam only gave birth ur father.without ur father u r not khurana , without me , ur father also not khurana.

NT :why u both fight like tom and jerry everytime.

Maan: leave it NT, she never changed in her life time.

Dadi: when u will come back and take charge of Khurana construction with serious tone.

Maan: why i will handle Kc.sam is here na with irritating face.

Dadi: but u r heir of KC.after their marriage they r going to their laws house then u only handle khurana empire. Before their marriage , u will take charge with authority voice.

Maan shake his head : u think i allow my sisters go to other home.in my dreams also never happen.


Dadi: what u mean, u dont want ur sisters settled down in their life.

Maan: no i not mean that way, i will select jamai raja for my sisters. After marriage they will stay in khurana with me and my sisters.

Dadi rolled her eyes: wow what idea..if they not accept ur condition..what u will do.

NT & Sasha: simple..we will not marry that person..we cannot live without our champ.

Maan: that is my sisters, u heared it , old lady.

Dadi: u and ur stupid sisters . (Look at NT and sasha.)if he got his life partner..he wil leave u all.he is going behind her even he will throw out u from mansion .then dont come to me and complaint about him.

NT and sasha: we accept happily his decision also with smiling face without even any sadness in their face only love show their face for little bro.

Maan: u old lady, u tried separate my sisters from me.what u said , i will throw my sister away from mansion.u thought i am cheapless person.if i got my lifepartner .i am going behind her without lookup my sisters.my sisters is my life. With angry voice ( NT ,sasha and dadi smiled ) now days ur imaginary power more superstitious than ur brain. Ur brain not working. I will arrange ur appoint to our family doctor with dramatic way

Dadi: why i need appoint to our family doctor

Maan: because ur mind thinking like mad person. Oh no our family doctor not treats mental illness right..no problem i will search good doctor for u with casual way.

Nt and sasha nods her head with giggling face.

Dadi eyes open widely: what u said i have mental illeness. I am ur dadi..

Maan: oh don't remind me everytime..i am ur dadi, iam ur dadi..i know very well , u r my old lady and elizabeth queen of our empire with teasing tone.

NT and sasha giggled silently and dadi fuming so much

NT and Sasha: u both stop ur cat fight. , champ first u talk with sam di..we call u later bye..cut the call.

Nt : dadi, why u behave rudely with him.

Dadi: what i did it.u three spoiled him so much..so i strictly with him.i dont want he changed to spoil brat person.he is prince of khurana empire.he have responsibility .he need to take care and handle everything .it s good for him.

Sasha: he is kid , dadi.

Dadi: he is not kid..he is 23 yrs old.he grown up man..now it is correct time to take responsibities..u three stay away from this matter.i will handled him and left inside with straight face

sasha: oh no my champ is right .she have more attitude.i dont know what dadi will do this time..if sam di know about..she got angry .she cannot tolerate if anyone interfere champ life and his freedom.

NT: then only we hide him infront of media..outer world they did not see his face also.

sasha: dont worry, champ so smart..he will handle his old lady with chuckling face.

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Handa mansion.

Handa brother standing in corner of room with head bow down.

Arjun: bhai, what punishment, we get from our little devil with little smile face.

Brij angry glare to Arjun: what u said..Arjun gulped his saliva..

Arjun sheepish smile : sry bhai , our little angel. Dev giggled seeing his elder bro angry face and his little bro pout face.

Brij: that better...with hard voice


Geet sit in chairs and her brothers standing infront of her yeah their head bow down to ground.

Geet: what s going on with heavy voice and cute face.

Dev: nothing sweety, they talk about ur punishment..

Arjun tapped dev foot through his own foot..dev screaming ouch..with slow voice.

Geet: yeah punishment. First promise me , what iam saying , u will do .u never deny my wish.

Dev: when we denied ur wish , sweety.

Geet: then promise

Brij ,dev and Arjun unison : ok god promise not my princess promise, we will do what u saying

Geet :Next three weeks no bodyguards follow me with hesitate voice.

Brij, Dev and Arjun shout : no ways..we cannot accept with shocking face

Geet glare them and three of them bow head down once again: i am not finish yet so stop ur screaming.boys nods his head

Geet: that good , i am going bali, in indonesia with my friends for next two weeks so no bodyguards come with me, even they not follow me with strict face but inside hell scare thinking about their reply.

Brij: u forgot ur trip ,u not going anywhere with strict and little harsh voice.

Dev and Arjun: bhai is right, u not going anywhere that final


Geet give sad face to them even her eyes moist and brij cannot see her moist eyes and sad face.his legs move out .

Dev: bhai..but brij did not stop..brij left

Geet: bhai with sad face

Arjun and Dev: don't put ur face..we cannot help this matter..we need ur safety more than anything.

Geet: but bhai , i am going with my friend.i become safe.

Arjun: no sweetheart, u want go bali, i will arrange our summer holiday to bali.

Geet: no bhai..i want going with my friends with stuborn voice


Dev: ok they also come with us in our summer vacation with tried cheer up

Geet : my friend engagement in next week .her engagement in Bali with sad face

Arjun: ok , we talk to ur friend family..they will postpone engagement to our summer holiday .

Geet angry glare him: get out with shouting voice..

Arjun and dev run out ..dev hide his body behind wall only show his face to geet in door step : princess

Geet look at there and here and pickup light weight pillow and throw to dev face but dev head back immediately .pillow hit to ground.

*******

Khurana mansion

In study room , Sam sitting in king size chair with angry face..

Sam phone ringed but she did not even glance to her phone..phone ring continuously.

Sam got irritating so much ( yeah same like her little bro) .she pickup phone with irritate face but after saw Phone id.her lips got little smile.automatically her finger touched attend the call.

Sam: hello, chotu

Maan: sam, why u take more time attend my call with complain voice.


Sam smiled lightly: little work tension , nothing else.

Maan: sam,what happen, why u r voice so dull.

Sam: chotu, I perfectly alright, when u return back us. I miss u so much with little sad voice.

Maan: I miss u too sam..come to video call, After sec Both connected in video call through their laptop.

Sam: don't roaming outside late night, chotu with little strict voice.

Maan: u think, u r bodyguard allowed me, outside in night time..with pout face.

Sam smiled: but no one guts stopped MSk right..teasing tone..

Maan: sam ,don't teasing me ..with fake angry voice.

Sam: yesterday u fooled them, went out ,enjoy with ur friends right even its too late night with little angry voice.

Maan crushing his hair : sam, how u know about my outing with confused face and sheepish smile

Sam: don't forgot, iam elder to u..my name sammera singh khurana..with pride voice..

Maan: opps how can I forgot , u r my sweet didi.

Sam: don't tried change topic.roaming night time, its not good for u, chotu.

Maan: ok baba iam not going outside in night time , no one defeat u, sam

Sam: yes my chotu always right .Noone defeat me..but for ur happiness I accept my defeat happily even I will die for u..

Maan shout: di, don't talk about die..without u people ( sam,NT and sasha)...I am nothing ..with angry voice. And turn his face to otherside.

Sam smiled seeing his childish behaviour: chotu while holding her ears through her index and thumbs fingers.

Maan lowered eyes seeing sam antics and but not turn his face to her.

Sam: ok , iam sor..

Maan interpet and turn look at her face: I am sorry..i did not like u ask sry to anyone even its me.my di always right.u never wrong.

Sam smiled: my pyaari bachoo. If u infront of me.i am pulling ur cute cheeks.

Maan pout face : iam not kid ,sam

Sam: even he reach 60 yrs old.u kid for me only..i love u bachoo.

Maan: I love u too, sam

Nt and Sasha: u love di not us..its too bad, champ..with fake angry face.

Maan: yeah , I love u too also..with chucking face

Sasha: this is not fair , champ. U saying fake voice

Maan: wow, nowdays u become more brilliant , sasha, u found out I fakely said with teasing tone

NT: see di, he teasing us.

Sam: u both deserve it, u both only called him .u inform about my mood not good with straight face

NT , sasha and maan looking here and there but not glancing sam face and sam smiled seeing behavior ,love for her

Sam: ok stop ur antics, chotu ,when will return back .with little serious tone.


Sasha: but di, he is going to ba..maan eyes popped out and gesture her to stop without sam notice.

Sam raise her eyes brow : he is going to..finish ur sentence, sasha

Maan: oh di, sashu what tried to say..i am going to meet my old friends ..so now I cannot come back ..iam right sashu with grinned teeth.

Sasha nods her head: ha di..he is right with faint smile

Sam: but I feel some thing fishy and u

Maan mindvoice: sry sam, I said lie to u, iam going bali in indonesia,if u know about my visit reason, u stop me.i want go, it is important for me..with guility face.

NT : sam di, come eat something. Day fully u did not eat anything

Sam: no u both have ur dinner.

Maan: sam , u did not eat ur food with shocking face


Sam nods her head negatively and maan glare her.

Sam: iam going to have my dinner so stop ur glaring session.

Maan look at nt and sasha: u both not said before , she did not eat anything with angry glare

NT and Sasha: oh .. look at sam to save from him


Sam: bachoo, leave them..they r my lovely sisters. Even they r not eat anything.iam right girls

NT and sasha nods their head with puppy face.

Maan: oh god , what I will do with u all, no one eat anything.

Sam: we r going to eat. We want ur smile not ur angry , bachoo

Maan showing his whole teeth : now happy with fake smile face

Sam: no this is not my prince smile.everyone fallen for his single smile.


Maan automatically give charming smile to them : no one defeat u di, u r best

NT and sasha hug to sam: yes di, u r best.

Maan: oyie , stay away from her..without me, u both hug my sam..stay away from her with possessive voice


NT and sasha: possessive

Sam: yeah stay away from me..without him, u cannot hug me..ok chotu.

Maan show his tongue to NT and sasha

NT and sasha release their hug: champ, if our jiju come between di and u.what u will do.with hi-fi each other.

Maan face change to pale and sam seeing his pale face..and glare to sasha and nt

Sam: u both shut ur mouth..noone come between my chotu and me..he is my first priority by the ways iam not married with anyone..stop pulling teasing my bachoo

Maan mindvoice: no di, I select best partner for u. I don't know where is he

Scene shift to handa mansion, brij room

Brij roaming one room end to other end.he remembering his princess moist face..he cannot slep.


Brij slient enter his princess room.she is sleeping in bed like baby closed her palm fit with her chin.

Brij sit in her bed and carring her hair and noticed her tears marked in her cheeks.it made him guilt more.he kissed her forehead and carrying her cheeks

Brij: princess, iam sorry, but ur safety is important for me..i know u have more restriction , u not roaming everywhere like ur same age girls enjoying their life.but u r our priceless treasure.u r nave, innocent.if anyone harm u, we cannot tolerate ur single tears ..how i will allow u going alone dear.i know u angry with me.but I am helpless..sry baby with tear eyes. One more time kissed her forhead and properly covered her blanket..turn arjun and dev infront of him.


Brij: u both not slept yet

Arjun: how we will sleep ,bhai. after seeing her crying face.


Dev: bhai, allow her going to trip.


Arjun: bhai, plz think one more time. plz with pleading face.

Brij: ok I will think about it..u both go sleep in ur room.

Arjun: thanks bhai .

Brij , arjun and dev look at their sleeping beauty and she snatched everyone sleep but madam sleeping peacefully..everyone means her prince charming also😉

Part end

Precap:

Handa brothers punishment by little princess😆


prince is going to indonesia and if princess also going mauritus or princess bhai stop her..

Ok thinking guys..wait for next part dearies.😉

What a coincidence prince and princess want go indonesia...If their destiny bring them closer or not..if they meet in indonesia or not.

If u likes this part and plz press like button and comment me..waiting for ur reply..


sry tomorrow / monday i will update , mera maasoom patidev..today i am going to see my nephew. new born baby..iam so happy today..😃😃😃


Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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updated😃
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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lovely update so maan was having a dream abt his dream girl but the moment he was about to see her face his phone rang it was sasha his sister cute maan complaining hiow he couldnt see his dream girl yet again maan sister teasing him dadi wanted his daughters married but apprentlyt maan wiull choose his jijus who will stay with him in same home if not his darlong sisters wont marry they love maan so much that if maan gets married and forgets abt his siters which isntb possible they still will love him loved maans bonding with his sisters here geet giving punishment to hier brothers she wants to go bali on vacation to attend her friends engagement without any gurds brij outriightly denied her saftey is his first pirority geet sad all borthers are trying to cheer up their sister sam was upset maan also hates handa he thinks his sister to be queen of khurana empire but dadi wants him to take responsibilty of kc but maan denied to take it he cheer up sam appraently maan is also going to bali for his friends engaement let me guess its adi letys see how they meet and what dhamaka happens
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Amazing update
Loved it
Update soon
Thanks 4 pm
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
So Happy to hear this that you are going to see Your nephew new born baby,Convey My wishes.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Maan Dream was so Cute.😳
Maan and His Sisters bonding was so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
Thank You So much for your Birthday Wishes to me..That so Sweet of You..😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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awesoem part favo ji
ye toh mein bhool chuki thi ji
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amazing part dear
loved itt soo much...
beautifully written every scene
thanks for the pm dear
waiting for next part...
pls update soon..

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