SS: Na choorna Mera haath #3 epilogue pg 84 un/28

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Shocking teaser...

Hope raman is find...

Continue soon ...

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Congratulations on 50 pages!!

Teaser is shocking!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Please please please please please update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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omg dear

scary teaser

hope raman is fine

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Posted: 8 years ago

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hi friends
I wasn't going to update my stoey but a cute request from dinnu as she wanted a gift from me i couldn't deny...
happy birthday dinnu.. I wiah you get all happiness of life and your all dreams come true..wish her and make her day special...
Na choorna Mera Haath
Part 24
Raman enjoying dinner with his family... Ruhi sitting in her father lap and raman was feeding her while ishita was admiring the father and daughter...
Mr bhalla: raman...
Raman: jee papa...
Mr bhalla: how is our bedi associate project is going...
Raman: we are working on it... Hopefully we will able to launch our new product by the end of next month... Bedi associates are very cooperative...
Mr bhalla: i was thinking we should call a meeting with our legal advisor
Raman: why??
Mr bhalla: today i was checking the project file and there were some loop holes in the legal term...
Raman: sure papa...
Mrs bhalla: bhalla jee how many times i ask you not to bring office in home..
Mr bhalla: toshi jee
Ishita: papa mummy jee is right...
Raman: Ishita...
Ruhi giggle and says:papa mumma is always right...and blink her eye lashes
Ramam tickles her and says: aur papa...
Ruhi scratches her head as she was in thinking mode and says: papa is forever right ..
All laughs listening to ruhi cute talks..
Mrs bhalla: lets go for icecream party...
Ruhi dances in happiness and says: yaya.. haan papa chalo na...
Raman: to phir chalain...
Bhallas heads to a nearbyicecream parlour... They takes their table and raman goes to order icecream...
Ruhi: mumma today i want to eat butter scotch
Ishita: rooh but you always eat chocolate chip icecream...
Ruhi: mumma...
Mr bhalla: puttar call raman and tell him..
Ishita: papa his phone is with me.. no problem i will go and inform him about his nautanki daughter new wish...
Saying this Ishita leaves... Ishita sees raman ordering the order she moves to him and tells about ruhi want to eat butter scotch...
Raman smiles and says: as my princess say... You go i will come with icecream...
Ishita nods and leaves...
On her way again subbu comes in front of her and says: what are you doing with raman sir...
Ishita glares him and says: take a side subbu...
Subbu: answer me
Ishita: firstly I am not answerable to you secondly I don't talk with strangers... Thats none of your business...
Subbu gets angry and holds her hand harshly and says: how dare you...
Ishita winces in pain while subbu got a nice punch on his face from raman ishita hides behind raman and says: raman ye subbu...
Subbu spits out the blood and gets up and says: sir you are misunderstanding me... Sir she is very cunning lady...
Raman : how dare you hold her hand...
Subbu was fumbling with words while Raman hands over the icecreams to ishita and says: jaan go and enjoy icecream with family...
Ishita: raman...
Raman: ishita our daughter must be waiting for you... And i dont like if my daughter waits.. go... I want to have some talk with this subbu...
Ishita nods and leaves.. while raman holds subbu collar and drags him to corner and says: stay away from my wife and my family...
Subbu was shocked to know Ishita is raman wife...
Subbu: she is making you fool.. i know she havent told you about her past... She was married to me and was pregnant with my child when i left her...
Raman: how cheap and disgusting you are... I know everything about my wife... Don't stress yourself ... Just leave from our life...i will ruin you.. and i am not just warning you... I will not wait for second to destroy you if ever you seen near my family...
Subbu gets scared listening to Raman threat as he was just a middle class employee he has no match with millionaire Raman Kumar Bhalla...
Raman: kal a Kar chup chap apna resign dena and i dont want you in this city...
Subbu: sir i have family how will i earn if i leave this job... You know how much job market is tight...
Raman: I don't care...
Saying this raman leaves subbu thinking about how his life is now complete mess...
Ishita was worried as raman didn't return yet her face lit up as raman comes there flashing his dimple smile... He sit beside her and holds her hand and blinks his eyes to assure her that everything is fine...
All enjoy the icecreams and then head to home... All retard to their room Ishita was looking outside from Windows raman comes and hugs her
Ishita: raman
Raman: Ishita he is out of our life... Just relax...
Ishita looks at him while raman leans closer and rubs his lips on her cheeks and says: let spend some quality time...
Ishita blushes and wraps her arms around his neck while raman lifts her and moves towards bed and both drown themselves in the world of love...
Next day
Raman was working in his cabin when subbu comes Raman gives him a nice deadly glare subbu forward his resignation letter raman takes it and sign him to leave... Subbu turns to leave..
Raman: subbu... I hope you will remember my words and will not try to oversmart me...
Subbu nods...
Raman: you may leave now...
Subbu: i just want to ask one thing...
Raman: i don't have much time... With full attitude
Subbu: where is my child... Is ruhi is my child...
Raman gets angry listening to him his eyes were blood shot... He looks at him and says: ruhi is only my daughter... Meine pala hai usy... Just get lost.. he shouts...
Subbu leaves...
Raman was ao much angry... He notices a neatly wrapped gift he remember it is from his jaan.. all anger vanish and he smiles... He takes the gift and opens it... It was a nice photo frame filled with ishraru pictures...
Day passed in jiffy it was evening and raman wraps his work and sit in his car and start to drive to his home his phone rings.. his face lit up with smile as the phone screen flashes ishita name... he takes up the call and says: jaan... bus aaraha hoon
ishita: i am waiting raman...
raman: love you...
ishita: apka choto don rooh baby bohat tang kar raha hai... only saying i want papa...
raman smiles and says: aww... my baby... tell her that i am just coming in second...
saying this he accelerates the car but suddenly a huge truck comes from opposite making raman startled.. he tries to change the direction but in fraction the truck hit his car and ishita listens the crash of accident and raman scream... she scream ... RAMANNN !!!!!
Ishita: raman... Raman... You are fine na... Say something... No no nothing will happen to you... Raman ...
She was crying vigorously and screaming his name... Listening to her screams mrs bhalla comes there and holds her... Ishita was not in her senses...
Mrs bhalla: what happened ishita...
Ishita: mummy jee raman...wo...
Mrs bhalla: mata rani khair kary... What happen to raman...
Mra bhalla shook her while ishita cries and Tells her about raman accident .. ruhi who has listened start crying uncontrollably and hugs Ishita tightly...
Mrs bhalla felt bad seeing them broken she makes herself strong although as a mother her heart was bleeding for her son she calls mihir and ask him to reach asap while she hides ishru in her praying for raman...
That's it I hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comment and response don't forget to hit like also...

Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago

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kras

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Posted: 8 years ago

#326

Hello riddi

How r u

All fine na

Nice update yaar

U know na i love ruman bond the most in this story

This subbu is so cheap

I love raman attitude towards subbu and his support to Ishita

Chalo ho gaya accident

Kya subbu ne kiya ya nahi don't know

But yes u r very clever writer

2-2 cheej dedi sochne ko

Ye accident kisne kiya aur ab raman ka ishru ka senior bhallas ka aur business ka kya hoga

Not fair

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gargpoo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#327

Superb update
Ishraru r so happy with family
They gone for ice cream ...
Subbu came there n misbehaved with ishita
Raman punched him n warned him
Omg Raman met with an accident ..
Waiting for next

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anju9656

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Posted: 8 years ago

#328

omg raman met with an accident

hope raman is fine

waiting 4 ur next update

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Ishrasoul

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Posted: 8 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: kras
Hello riddi
How r u
All fine na

Nice update yaar
U know na i love ruman bond the most in this story
This subbu is so cheap
I love raman attitude towards subbu and his support to Ishita
Chalo ho gaya accident
Kya subbu ne kiya ya nahi don't know
But yes u r very clever writer
2-2 cheej dedi sochne ko
Ye accident kisne kiya aur ab raman ka ishru ka senior bhallas ka aur business ka kya hoga
Not fair