New FF: Har Sanson mein tum hi ho; PART 19 UPDATED PG 28 - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello frnds Sorry I couldn't update for so long and also now busy in work. So I thought of posting one of my earlier VM on Tanshi. Many of u have not seen probably.
I will update the next part of the story very soon.

http://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzBAvqQcvZEidkpIVTdaeTZaZVk/view?usp=sharing
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Lornab

Hello frnds Sorry I couldn't update for so long and also now busy in work. So I thought of posting one of my earlier VM on Tanshi. Many of u have not seen probably.

I will update the next part of the story very soon.

http://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzBAvqQcvZEidkpIVTdaeTZaZVk/view?usp=sharing


tfs...waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Koi nai jab free ho tab update kar dena work come first.waiting for ur update.TFs
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Posted: 8 years ago
Updating the next part, Its a long one. Plss give comments.

PART 13

Next morning the doctor came to check Rishi, the bedis were anxious.

Raj: Doc , How is my son?

Doc: listen, he is out of danger now but his mental condition is not stable. He is broken from inside and seems like he doesn't want to recover.

Rano : No Doc, my son would be fine! Nothing could happen to him.

Suddenly they heard a voice , the Bedis turned to see Dr Manav there.

Manav: Do not worry Aunty, yor son would be fine, he saved a

Someone's life so God would help him.

Rano: Who r u and how dp u know my son?

Mr Mittal explained Rano about Manav.

Manav wanted to see Rishi once and the doctors also allowed him. He entered Rishi's cabin.

Rishi was awake then, he saw Manav .

Manav: How are u Rishi?

Rishi did no give any reply.

Manav: Yaar thanx a lot. You don't know how much I am grateful to u. You saved my daughter her favourite aunty.

Rishi was alarmed to hear Manav's words. He thought in his mind that: That lady, I saved is known to Manav. But I clearly saw her , she was my Tanuja.

Rishi asked Manav.

Rishi: Manav, you know that lady whom I saved.

Manav: Yes. Her name is

Rishi didn't gave him time to complete the sentence and he replied

Rishi: Tanuja. She was Tanuja.

Manav was surprised and he said,

Manav: No Rishi, her name is Tania and she is my fiancee.

Rishi was shocked and coulddn't utter anyhing. He again had breathing troubles and kept on saying Tanuja's name.

Manav went out of the cabin and also came to know from the doctor that Rishin is searching someone called Tanuja whom he loves immensely.

On the other hand at home, Tanuja was pacing up and down in tension.

Manav entered the house.

Tanuja: Where were u? Mr Saxena

Manav: Oh! I went to see Rishi in hospital

Tanuja was overjoyed as she wants t know about Rishi now.

Tanuja: how is he? He is fine na? What did the doctors told?

Manav: Are Are! Let me answer u, U are asking so many questions at a time.

Tanuja: Hmm, tell

Manav: Firstly Rishi is not fine.

Tanuja was shocked. Tanuja : What??

Manav: I really felt bad for him, he is searching for a girl named Tanuja like madly and that affecting his health.

Tanuja cried from inside. Manav went to his room.

Tanuja totally broke down and sat on the floor. She couldn't understand what to do?

The day passed by but no such improvement in Rishi's condition. All the Bedis are tensed. Sonia is staying in the hospital for nalmost 24 hrs.

It was night time. Rishi was sleeping in his cabin. Gentle breeze was blowing around.

Suddenly Rishi felt a warm air on his hand and a very known tender touch.

He opened his eyes and saw Tanuja was sitting just infront him, holding his hand. Her eyes are swollen red with tears and she looked at him longingly.

Rishi couldn't believe his eyes, he felt like he was dreaming but no, Tanuja was really there.

Rishi in excitement got up and shouted Tanuja, Tanuja.

Tanuja: Rishi, no Don't get up plss lie down, I am just here.

Rishi: Tanuja u came finally?

Tanuja: Ha ! Rishi, how could I stay away from u Rishi.

Tanuja kissed Rishi's hand and then again kissed him on his forhead.

Tears rolled down from Rishi's eyes.

Rishi made Tanuja to touch is heart to feel his heartbeat.

Rishi: Can u hear my heartbeat Tanuja? Its beating so fast now after so many days. I was almost dead without u Tanuja. My heartbeat became still just like a stone and now u came and it again began to beat.

Tanuja cupped his face and wiped off his tears.

Tanuja: Even my heart is beating now Rishi after seeing you.

Rishi got up slightly and both of them hugged each other tightly.

Rishi: Tanuja why did u leave me? Everyone always leave me .

U know, my family thought that u will never return as u have died but I knew that u cant leave me like this. I was breathing still so I also knew that u are alive somewhere otherwise I would have stopped breathing.

Tanuja: U have to recover soon Rishi, U have to get fine and again fight with me and ur brothers.

Rishi: Ha! Ha! You have come na, so I'll be fine, don't worry.

Just never ever leave me again Tanuja, I love u so much, without u I am nothing but a motionless stone.

Both of them kep staring at each other.

( Suna Suna Lambha Lambha song played as BG.)

Tanuja kept on caressing Rishi's hairs.

Rishi lied down on her lap and tightly hold her hand. Rishi saw tears in Tanuja's eyes so he wiped it off and cupped her face.

Tanuja: Rishi, I love u so much. I have never told u but I love u more than anything in this world. I came to this world only for u Rishi. I will never let anything happen to u, U are my heartbeat Rishi.

Rishi was very happy to hear this.

He kept on looking at Tanuja and slowly felt asleep on her lap.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Tiyas you just nailed with emotions..
rishi..aww how much he has longed for his tanuja and tanuja not less at all..At a certain stage we need only a partner..even in reality..Rishi jeena ka wajah..loving thus update so much..

plz next update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow finally tanshi meet.So emotional šŸ‘ .Both r so happy after metting each other.Plz continue it.love ur wirting plz continue.Update soon. šŸ‘šŸ¼ can't wait more for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AniSweety

Tiyas you just nailed with emotions..

rishi..aww how much he has longed for his tanuja and tanuja not less at all..At a certain stage we need only a partner..even in reality..Rishi jeena ka wajah..loving thus update so much..

plz next update soon


Thank u Ani, I will be updating the next part soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ayra1210

Wow finally tanshi meet.So emotional šŸ‘ .Both r so happy after metting each other.Plz continue it.love ur wirting plz continue.Update soon. šŸ‘šŸ¼ can't wait more for next part.

Thank u dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was really emotional
doctor said rishi is out of danger but he is mentally sick as he doesn't want to recover 😭
why manav told rishi Tania is his fiance? šŸ˜•
hearing rishi condition from manav tanuja broke down 🄺
finally tanuja came to meet rishi hope its not dream
it was really emotional yet happy reunion of tanshi ā¤ļø
continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb tanshi met
its so emo

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