Ishra SS 'Hona Tha Pyar' part 13 pg 60 june 23 - Page 27

Raman doubting Ishita...hope she does forgive too quickly

Would also love to see a jealous Raman

mimi got married

ishu was so hurt by ramans words

he is asking permission but she is not redy

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Firstly sorry for late comment. I was out. I read it but couldn't comment. Secondly thanks a lot to update it so soon.

This is really that type of update which I really want, all mu ended. Wonderful update. Really enjoyed it. Mu were increasing and Raman and Mihika's hate towards ishita was also getting high but I love it when Ishita made an entry and proved herself innocent. Trio friends patched up again but our new love birds need a heart to heart conversation. I loved it completely. Waiting for how Raman will woo her? Update soon

Finally da culprit revealed

Itz da obvious shagoon

Ishu z hurt too much

Her best friend doubted her, her love misunderstood her

But he forgave miku

Not raman, coz she loves him way too much

N mimi marriage z revealed

Waiting to c rkb being a puppy to woo his madrasan

but y ishu forgave mihika so easily coz sge did the same thing ramsn did but not forgiving

raman

loved it so much

update soon

Awesome update...

Poor ishita raman & mihika did not trust her but thought she is the one who did it. Ishita try to explain to mihika but she deny to listen. Finally the truth out mimi is married & the real culpirt is shagun. Raman & mihika feel guilty & shame not to trust ishita. What will raman do to win his love...continue soon...

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Part 12

It was evening and its time for the drama,mihika and vandu made ishita ready in a beautiful red sari and takes her to the stage.mihir was all ready to announce the drama bg with his mike..saying ishita to take her position on the middle of stage mihir said to raise the curtain..when curtain raised he starts to starts his dialogue as the background..

Mihir: the two evergreen couple anr separating during the night of after thoughts..

Making the sad expression of separation ishita walks on the stage,and its time to hero's entry..

Mihir: lets hero come..mihir instructed to make ramans entry..

Mihir: arey jadi raman ko bulao..its his entry

Mihika: but where is raman?

Bala: I don't know where is he?

Mihir: yeh bhagvan..mera drama..go and find him I will manage with some dialogues..

Saying mihir looked at ishita then signaled her to continue walking,

"where is Raman? Ishita asked while doing the act..

Mihir: he will come,just continue the scene..

Ishita nodded her head and starts to act as she is waiting for her hero..

While mihir starts to explain the situation with big musics..

"she is waiting to say good bye to her love remembering gain and again the happy days of external love.

Meanwhile bala and romi find raman sitting outside at the cold floor,he was waering a kurtha paijama and seeing his state he under stood he is drunken..

Bala: raman..raman...he try to wake ramna up..raman opened his eyes and looked at bala..

Bala: raman,ishita is waiting for you at the stage,the drama is started..

Ramna: oh drama started? I will do my part now..saying he tried to gets up,and any how he stood straight but still he was shaking at the effect of alchahole..there a flute was in his hand,taking it in his hand raman walks to the stage..

Bala: hey raman,stage is here not there..bala tries to show the way to back stage but raman already went the way which is to the front stage...

Raman: hello give me way brothers..he said pushing the audience to side..all gets shocked seeing ramans drunken state..

Raman: I am coming madrasan..

Mihir: madrasan?

Mihika: raman ko kya hogeya?

Mihir: why his legs are shaking?

Bala: because he is drunk..

Mihir: oh god mera drama..kya kare ab..

Raman quikly gets on the stage and looked at ishita,she was confused yet shocked seeing him like this.mihir starts to panic thinking about his drama..he signaled ishita to say the dialogue..

Ishita: give that broken flute to me? She said her dialogue to raman..

Raman: what if I don't? raman said showing attitude..

Mihir: oh god,that is not in the script..he said tensely to mihika..ishita..continue your dualogue ..mihir again signaled her..

Ishita:I will keep it safe..saying she forwards her hands to take the flute..

Raman: you must be careful.all the time of parting after break in love, all girls like you must be careful.raman said to her making her hsocked

Mihir: oh god everything is in a mess..what to ..ishita,,continue,,continue

Ishita starts to continue her dialogues..

"you mistook my friendship as love,it is your fault..

Raman: no..that is your fault..you acted your love as friendship..and now I've come to give you the best actress award for that..

"thoshi what raman is doing," the principal asked to thoshiji..she was shocked with his sons action,while appa gets happy seeing all the drama turning to an another twist..

Mihir:"ishita say this.." don't punish me with suiside," mihir said told the dialogue in his law voice to ishita seeing her searching for dialogues..

But raman heard this nad he said to mihir..

"not with suiside..one must punish her with whip..because she is acting infront of me..

Saying he turned to ishita and said..

Raman: hey madrasan,daughter of vishwanathan iyyer..raman said loudly which made appa laugh,all looked at appa and appa stopped his laugh getting embarrassed..

Raman: what you think? If you say good bye and go..this raman bhalla will hang on a rope? Ishita looked at him

"no my dear,that is in olden days"..hearing him te whole stadium starts to cheer for him.ishita looked at the clapping audience while raman throws the flute and he himself starts to clap saying..

"please clap silently guys" and again looked at ishita and continues..

"Yes..if a knot falls on my neck now you will hang on the other end..the dialogue made the audience clap again for him..he smiled fully and tried to balace his unbalancing feet

Raman: if I've to die,we'll die together,or if I've to live...without completing his sentence he looked at ishita expecting her to fill the words he left to say..but she was silently looking at him,not getting any response from her he again turned to audience and asked to them..

"if I've to live...?"

Audience: will live together..the audience screamed making ishita surprised..appa smiled fully seeing him confessing his love for her daughter openly while thoshiji gets tensed what her son is doing?

Raman turned to ishita and starts walking near to her asking..

"bolo..you want to live or die?" ishita agin remained silent which irked raman more..he walks dangerously close to her,seeing this mihir anf friends get worried thinking he will do something to ishita so mihir slowly signaled the stage boy to down the curtain

Mihir:pull the curtain down..fast..but for mihirs bad luch raman heard it and he turned to mihir then said pointing finger on his.

"if you will pull the curtain I'll kill you"

Mihir: raman come here..don't create a scene..don't do her anything..mihir tried to pull him to back stage but raman shrugged his hands off

"leave me..i won't do anything, everything is over..but she should tell in front of everyone that she didn't love me...and that she'll live happily even after separation from me..

saying looks at ishita agin with his moist eyes,ishita was speechless she don't know how to react..

raman: see,,you all see..she won't tell you..i know I committed a mistake,for that I'm ready to ask forgiveness even my life long..but due to that one mistake which I did unknowingly, I am not ready to consider the girl I love as a sister..you all forgive me...saying he turned to ishita and looked at her top to bottom then walks again to her..

ishita was like a scared kitten takes her steps back..all the audience stops there breaths to see what he is going to do..thats when ishita heard him..

raman: hey madrasan..i'm taking you with me to make my babies mummy..saying in a sudden moment raman takes her in his arms and throws her on him crossing his right shoulder..

ishita starts struggle saying to leave her,she starts to punch on his back but he tightens his hold making her more close to his body..

he climped down the steps taking her while the audience give him way to walk..

ishita: leave me...

raman: keep quite madrasan..

she tried many ways to get down but he was more than strong to hold her tight at last getting tired ishita raised her head and looked at his face,she see a naughty smile on his lips which made her to glare him only to get a wink from him, which made ishita too smile and at last she hugged him wrapping her hands around his neck,raman shook his head again smiling naughtily and walks away from the auditorium while mihir,mihika,appa,vandu,thoshiji..all clapped for them getting happy..

Hona tha pyar
Hona tha pyar, huwa mere yaar

Hona tha pyar
Hona tha pyar, huwa mere yaar

Aaye nazar chehre hazaar

Hona tha pyaar, huwa mere yaar
Hona tha pyaar

recap: the love story begins...

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