RoSid FF; Hello Mr. Gangster Completed FF - Page 16

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Ohh.. The gangster is crying. Remembering his family.. Now rosid r going to bharadwaj house... Waiting for next Akka...
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Part 23
Roli Pov

I took Siddhant to Bharatwaj house...

Yes... siddhant house... Our house...

It was with full of dry leaves covering the garden...

Swimming pool was having unclean water...

The bungalow was completely looking like ghost house shown in films...

I can see mixture of emotions on his face seeing the house in that way...

Of course... It is the place where he spent since childhood and will be full of wonderful memories...

Specially with his parents... Friends...

Now with our maintenance the bungalow was completely looking bad...

Moreover he might have remembered his parents on coming here...

When we were walking slowly inside an Oldman rushed towards us from outside...

'how are you babu??? How many days went even seeing you??? We were wondering whether something happened to you...' he expressed seeing my husband...

'uncle... I am his wife... ' i introduced myself...

'oh.. Babu got married... Happy to know... If sir & madam was alive then how happy they will become... ' he showed his concern...

'you were working here???' i asked voluntary as my hubby was yet to.come out of the state he was...

'yes... Even after his parents death... I was looking after... But as babu too went missing... I was unable to go inside bungalow or do anything... ' he explained...

'uncle... Now we will be here only.. Can you bring person to help you and clean the house for us...' i request...

'sure... We will get it ready in few hours...' he rushed out like a small boy...

I took Siddhant to the garden bench and we sat in that...

I can see him disturbed...

I made him to lay down on the bench keeping his head on my lap...

As I caress his hair gently... He closed his eyes and relaxed himself...

Old Man bring few more persons and started cleaning work...

I gave him key which Siddhant bring and told to clean inside as well...

All the bungalow inside & outside was cleaned...

Dry leaves from garden was cleared...

Water in the swimming pool was changed...

By evening it took back its look...

I paid everyone and told Oldman to continue to work with us...

I looked at Siddhant who was sleeping on my lap...

'siddhant...wake up dear... Lets go inside...' i wake him up and we went inside...

He looked around surprised seeing everything cleaned and return like earlier...

He looked at me in surprise...

'lets get in Siddhant ' i told him and took him inside house...

He looked at the photos of his parents in the hall and went near that...

I went behind him and hold his hand as support...

He hug me tightly...

'roli... I lost them Roli... I was unable to do anything to save them...' he cried on my shoulder...

'relax siddhant... I know as you were unable to save them & lost, you started saving others who are in such trouble including me... Your parents might have felt happy about you Siddhant that you are helping so many... So just relax... ' i console him...

It took more time for him to come back to normal and I helped him consoling till he did it...
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Held up with personal work friends which will be till tomorrow...
Yes I got my computer back.. But unable to sit with it...

Thats why gave a quick update from mobile itself...

Couple of updates left in this ff which I will give tomorrow...

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Awesome update didi waiting for next update soon..
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roli advising Sid to have a normal life...mingling with people without secluding himself from others was nice.roli realising that his suppressed emotions made him like this from the kiss was nice.good that roli took him back to bharadwaj house and consoling him that though he couldn't save his parents he saved others and his parents will be proud was lovely

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