RoSid FF; Hello Mr. Gangster Completed FF - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
romantic n lovely updates di...eagerly waiting for next...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi didi ...!! u know how much iam excited to command...because iam ur biggest biggest fan ...i love all ur ffs from first to last...actually i have yet to read f ur ff from god's wish ...as iam in hostel ( i have given my intro in discussion page and wish to post my ff) ...i could not read ur ff update day to day ...but will read once i come home...now iam at home only ...u dont know i was literally fell love with all ur ffs.. till i read from 1st to 85th ff ..i used save it my laptop and used to read again and again all ur ffs in hostel...i love it ...

iam sorry once i read this ff hello mr .gangster i will command related to ur ff...iam really sorry but could not control my excitement... now only reading one by one so that why i cannot command on all ongoing ffs because i am yet to read once i read i will surely command ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb updates dear waiting for nxt
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 21

Siddhant Pov

I wake up and looked at Roli...

After spending moments filled night she was sleeping on my chest hugging me...

I thought of making her happy by getting her back to normal life...

But my devil wanted me alone for her happiness and we are married...

Now what are we going to do...

Police is already searching for her...

I don't know how to make her understand the practical problems of being here...

But its fact she is my life too.. I too cant be without her...

When I was in all thoughts... She gave a tight kiss on my cheeks...

'siddhant... Again worrying about me being here...' she asked...

My devil reads my mind easily...

I kissed on her cheeks...

'roli... You are mistaken me...' i said...

'siddhant I know what is to be done... Don't worry.. Come lets take bath...' she said making me crazy in that early morning...

'take bath... You mean...' i asked widening my eyes...

'what is this surprise expressions after much more happened between us... Don't be silly... Take in your arms...' she pleaded...

What more I want... I took her in my arms and we went to take bath...

After long... We came out wrapping towels around her...

In a while she got ready...

'Come Siddhant... Lets go...'she said...

'where???' i asked...

'to commissioner office...' she said...

'roli... I am gangster... How can I come to police station??? ' i asked...

'siddhant don't be silly... You are not gangster who do crime to get Afraid with police...You are coming with me...' she said pulling me out of the room holding my hands...

Harish was standing in the hall...

He noticed the sindoor on her hairline and looked at me...

'what boss???' he asked in teasing tone...

'we married yesterday night' she said with a blush...

'congrats...' he said...

We started from our house and reached the commissioner office...

'sir I am Roli... Daughter of Jamanlal and meena who were killed ' she said...

'good you are safe we were searching for you...' police said...

'yes I am safe because of him... Mr.Siddhant.. They tried to kill me too but I escaped and he helped me to be safe from them...' she said...

'by the way... Who are you and where is your house???' they asked me...

For this only I was tensed...

'he is son of Rajender Bharatwaj and you know after their death... He left that house and not residing in his house... He is only wandering from city to city... To avoid the bitter memories of his family.. Now he will be staying with me as we just married yesterday sir...' she said leaving me surprise...

She knows about him and may be harish should be the reason behind...

'congrats' police said...

We started from there and came out...

I was still silent with mixture of emotions...

She hold my hand with gesture of support while I got tears...



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Posted: 8 years ago
wow awesome update di...waiting for next...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update can't wait for next
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Posted: 8 years ago

Sid telling that he can't give her a life of pride and roli asking him to marry her and their marriage was nice.roli telling that he doesn't have to fear to come to the police station as he is not a gangster of bad deeds was superb
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rosie.rosid

Hello di...I am new to this forum...I was a silent reader ...I read all ur works di..I was waiting from long time to come on this site but I was nervous 😆...I am ur big fan ..I was ur fan before I become roshni di's fan too ...finally I could tell u that I love ur works di...😊...I just visit this forum to read ur works...anyway keep going di don't stop this ...I will be hurt 😉..seriously di I am big fan of u ...keep going this ...this ff is awesome...sry di I just commented wat I wanted to ...again sry di.❤️ luv u


Thanks Dear... Happy to know you... But sorry for what... I should thank for such cute comment...😊
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Originally posted by: anjana.s

hi didi ...!! u know how much iam excited to command...because iam ur biggest biggest fan ...i love all ur ffs from first to last...actually i have yet to read f ur ff from god's wish ...as iam in hostel ( i have given my intro in discussion page and wish to post my ff) ...i could not read ur ff update day to day ...but will read once i come home...now iam at home only ...u dont know i was literally fell love with all ur ffs.. till i read from 1st to 85th ff ..i used save it my laptop and used to read again and again all ur ffs in hostel...i love it ...

iam sorry once i read this ff hello mr .gangster i will command related to ur ff...iam really sorry but could not control my excitement... now only reading one by one so that why i cannot command on all ongoing ffs because i am yet to read once i read i will surely command ...


Happy to know you dear... I saw you started FF just now.. Will read & comment... but may be little late... sorry about it...

Happy that you love my FFs...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 22

Roli POV:

Myself & Siddhant came out of the Commissioner office...

I know as i reminded him about his family.. he is emotional...

We went to car...

'Siddhant.. i will drive now...' i said and occupied the driving seat...

He got tears...

'Siddhant... Come to me...' i said while he lean on my shoulder crying like a kid...

Is he the gangster... OMG.. he is just a small kid... i thought...

I touch his cheeks and pat lightly and turned my face & kissed on his forehead...

In few minutes of drive.. we reached the bungalow...

I parked the car and went inside with him...

I gave him some water to cool him down...

'What happened Siddhant.. why are you looking disturbed???' harish asked in all concern...

'Nothing.. we will come in a while...' i said & took him inside our room & locked the door...

I hug him tightly...

I caress his back...

' Siddhant.. relax Siddhant.. am i not here as your living example.. i lost my parents too.. that too few days back... am i not here consoling myself.. just because of you.. like that.. you too console yourself.. atleast for me darling.. ' i said...

He calm down a little...

I slightly moved and cup his face...

I moved towards his lips...

As soon as i let him kiss my lips... he let his expression turning wild...

I let him as much as he want...

its now very clear... his past & its suppressed expressions are the reason for his wildness...

After long.. he moved apart...

'Sorry Roli.. i hurt you again...' he said caressing my lips...

'Its ok... anything for you Siddhant.. are you feeling ok now... ' i asked looking into his eyes...

He nodded and peck my lips gently...

'Come.. Harish is worried seeing you.. lets go back to him...' i said and took Siddhant outside...

'What happened Roli... Where you went & why he returned this much disturbed...' Harish asked again...

'Nothing Harish.. we went to commissioner office to tell them that i am alive.. when they asked about him i told about his parents & past.. so he remembered the bitter past and got disturbed...' i explained...

'Oh.. is he ok now...' Harish asked...

'Ask your friend.. What are you doing Siddhant.. making your friend afraid... answer him...' i told hitting his shoulder gently with mine...

'Yes Harish.. i am ok now...' Siddhant replied with a smile...

'Good.. now friends... i wish to tell something...' i told and we sat on the sofa...

'What it is Roli???' Siddhant asked...

'Look... with whatever i know about you all.. i can understand... you all joined hands after getting hurt in your personal life to the extent i am today... am i right...' Roli asked as if scanned our life...

We nodded as acceptance...

'Then for what the hell you all naming yourself as gangster as if you are behind spoiling someone life... not needed at all..' i said...

'But Roli... we cant lead a normal life... we may get caught if we do that...' Siddhant replied...

'No Siddhant... instead of hiding your team here in same place.. you all can go back to your places... continue your normal life and can try to do the same which you are doing now whenever required joining hands in a place.. may be can come to this place itself.. but there is no need to live here like this as if nothing is left for you in this life.. even i am affected & didn't you all want me to go back to life and lead a normal one.. can i feel the same for you guys...' i asked...

'But all cant go to our places Roli.. we are having very bitter experiences...' Siddhant said...

'Life itself is bitter Siddhant.. may be you will feel bad when going to your house one day.. one week.. one month.. then everything will change... may be i need to bear your aggressiveness till that... ' i said with a wink while Siddhant smiled...

Harish somehow managed to understand seeing us what the talk is about... he too smiled...

'Lets mingle with people instead of secluding yourself like a criminal or terrorist.. after all you are only trying to do good yaar...' i clarified...

'It will be difficult to run the missions Roli..' Siddhant said...

'Siddhant.. we are having advanced technologies... we can have code words to come here & meet... when required you can come here and do whatever you are doing now... i am not against you doing that good thing which you are doing now...' i said...

'Roli is right Siddhant... we can do that...' Harish supported...

''You both joined hands.. then what can i say...' Siddhant said...

But there was still some worry on Siddhant face...

'What is bothering you Siddhant...' i asked holding his hand...

'Roli.. what about the villians who will try to hurt our team members when they return to their places...;' Siddhant asked...

'Come on Siddhant... like how you made my Uncle caught in the police.. we can trap those villians and do that... they are criminals who are roaming around while we are good people & why to hide ourself...' i said...

'We can do that Siddhant... may be it takes some time.. but like how we took Roli parents investigation as mission..we will take the mission for every member & do that...' Harish said...

Siddhant finally agreed...

All the members were called & discussions happened...

All agreed...

Few confirmed they can go back as their villian is already dead or punished or cant come their way anymore for various reasons...

Whoever remind details were taken by Siddhant...

For every person mission was designed...

We started our mission of getting every team member life back to normal while we decided to continue our works of saving the innocent even in future as and when required...

One by one all started going back to normal life...

Now only Harish, Siddhnat & Myself was there in the bungalow...

'Harish too lost his family by some means...

We sorted his too...

Now we.. Roli & Siddhant decided to go back to our house...

'Roli.. are we going to your house...' Siddhant asked...

'Siddhant.. i am married & i wish to go to my in laws house.. Bharatwaj house...' i said while Siddhant was looking at me widening his eyes...



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