New FF: Har Sanson mein tum hi ho; PART 19 UPDATED PG 28 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ya for sure I will try to update today but if not then tomorrow pakka.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear please don't discontinue this šŸ˜•! I love your story telling.. feeling like reading a novel imagining TanShi 😳 Plus, the way you have established the emotional connection was superb! šŸ‘šŸ‘ And sorry for commenting late, coz I had been hardly active on here. Hope to be active as much as I can..

PS : Do continue with the next part :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please continue this story i read it from the beginning its interestingšŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey waiting for your next update please update soon keep rocking šŸ‘ with your story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Hey waiting for your next update please update soon keep rocking šŸ‘ with your story

Sorry for not updating as I am now very busy with a new project and its a mega serial and important part is going on. As a result I being an editor getting no time to rest but I will update soon. I will try my best to update within this week.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lornab


Sorry for not updating as I am now very busy with a new project and its a mega serial and important part is going on. As a result I being an editor getting no time to rest but I will update soon. I will try my best to update within this week.

don't worry 😃 jab time hoga tab update daina because work come first till then we are waiting and best of luck for your work šŸ‘šŸ¼ keep rocking šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
very emotional chapter
finally tanshi came face to face but the situation was horrible šŸ’”
as tanuja was in trouble & rishi came to saved her
but now rishi got badly hurt while saving tanuja 😭
poor tanuja hell sacred for rishi 😭
on the other hand poor pari couldn't understand what happing
thank god police came on time & they took rishi in hospital with tanuja
oh god rishi saw tanuja but still he was feeling like having dream 😭
hope rishi will recover soon & plz tanuja shouldn't listen that katyani bai that's really irritating
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update after ur for get finsh . Hope that finsh soon šŸ˜‰ .All the best for ur project.Waitng for Update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 9


In Mumbai no one knows about this incident. Everyone was tensed in the Bedi mansion as Rishi's phone was not reachable and the weather is also not good.

Sonia was roaming here and there in the hall and trying to contact Rishi. She was really scared. Manpreet was also trying to call rishi but of no use.

Rano: What is the matter? Why Rishi's phone is unreachable? Raj ji mera beta thik hai na?

Raj: Rano plss do not panick. Rishi would be fine. He is not a kid and may be due to bad weather we r not getting signals. Do not worry Rano.

Sonia: But uncle I have called the hotel where Rishi's meeting was held and they informed that Rishi had left in the noon only so oviously I'm feeling worried.

Sonia thinks to herself that she had heard about Rishi's passionate and crazy love for Tanu and Tanuja so she was more scared thinking if was upset about something and driving the car then what would happen?

Rano came to Sonia,

Rano: Sonia beta, do not worry, I know what you feel for Rishi so u are worried but Raj ji is ri8 may be signal problems are causing these problems.

Birji was also in tension and was standing in the corner.

Suddenly due to a heavy breeze Rishi's photoframe feel from the table in the hall and it got cracks.

All of them were very scared to see this

Birji: Oh God! Ye to apshagun hai!( means bad omen)

Rano started crying: Oh no! Please God save my son. Nothing should happen to him.

On the other hand in the hospital the doctor came and Rishi was being taken to the ICU. The ward boys came to take him in but he was still holding Tanuja's hand. Even in this unconsious stae he has not left her hand. They tried to pull him in but no way , Rishi cannot be taken in. Tanuja was crying vigorously seeing Rishi in this state and also was not able to take her hand away.

Just imagine that Tere Liye song from Veer Zara movie is playing in the background.

Suddenly the nurse came and called Tanuja, she came back to her senses.

Nurse: Mam plss leave his hand, we have to take him in otherwise the treatment process would not start.

Tanuja left Rishi's hand slowly and while shaking off gave a gentle kiss on his forhead.

Tanuja: Plss sister start the treatment nd make sure that nothing happens to him.

The doctor also came.

Doctor: We will try our best Mam, but his condition is really serious as so much of blood has been lost and moreover the injury is on head.

Tanuja couldn't control her tears and she replied that no matter whatever the case may be Rishi should be fine.

Doctor: Ok, Mam but first of all U plss go and fill the form in the reception. It's a formality.

Rishi was taken in side the ICU, the door was closed. Tanuja kept on staring through the small glass window outside the ICU.

Suddenly she remembered that , the Bedis are not aware of this . They should know about Rishi and come immediately. She thought of calling them and as she turned to go the reception she saw Pari standing behind crying. She was in trauma seeing all this. Tanuja at first gave her comfort and made her sit in the lounge.

Tanuja: Pari beta, don't be scared, all is ok. Now drink some water beta.

Pari: Aunty, I am really scared. What if something bad happens with that uncle?

Tanuja shouted: No! Pari what r u saying, nothing would happen.

Tanuja then told Pari to sit in the lounge for a while as she has to finish some work and will be back within 10 mins.

Tanuja went to the reception to make a call to the Bedis.

After the photoframe fell down all the Bedis were scared to death.

Biiji: I wish that everything is fine, mera pota thik hai ( my grandson is fine).

Suddenly the landphone rings in the Bedi House. Everyone waere alarmed and were scared to pick up the phone. The phone kept on ringing. Finally Manpreet picked up the phone.

Manpreet: Hello!

Tanuja was on the other side of the call but she remained quiet as she couldn't control her tears . She was not able to tell about Rishi's critical condition.

Manpreet: Hello! Who is there?

Finally Tanuja spoke up>

Tanuja in a sore and choked voice : Hello, I am speaking from City hospital near Pune,

Actually Rishi, mera matlab Mr Rishi Singh Bedi is admitted here in the hospital. I got the contact from his personal belongings. U all come to the hospital as soon as possible.

Saying this Tanuja couldn't talk more and she cut the call.

Tears were rolling down her eyes, all the moments she spent with Rishi came fore to her mind. She really wanted to see Rishi now and hug him tightly but she then remembers that , she has to go away from him otherwise Rishi would always be in danger.

Tanuja then controlled herself and went to fill the form. She filled all the required fields and wrote her name as Ms Tania.

On the other hand Manpreet informed everyone about the sudeen news.

Sonia: I was sensing something bad from the evening.

Rano and Biiji were shocked very much.

Divya and Ahana consoled them and all of them rushed immediately for Pune City Hospital.


I am sorry for the late update as I really busy with my offce project. i got some time so thought of making this update.

I wote in a hurry so plss overlook the mistakes and I will be waiting for ur comments.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's ok jab time tab update dy diya kro and again awesome update and emotional 😭 hope so rishi soon fine ho jaye and waiting for next part when you got time šŸ‘šŸ¼ and thanks for pm 😳
Edited by ManazzaShahid12 - 9 years ago

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