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sanum23

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#401

prem ko husband wife k matter main is tarhan nahi ana chahiye jab patchup ho sakta hai maan realized his mistakes

than prem have to leave matter on geet

maan told geet he not afraid of his brother but don't want to spoil yash party

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: deep002
Awesome update dear, pream needs a good lesson, hope this time annie teach him a lesson

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: aparna3011
very nice update
prem can't force geet to stay way from maan , he can clearly warn maan not to behave badly with geet in future
what he is doing with heer is worst than what maan done to geet

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#404

NYC update dear

Loved it!!

Prem was angry and dragged geet with him

Prem was !Is treating geet and was yelling at her

He is really behaving rudely with heer and she is not at fault too

Someone needs to open his eyes

Geet was restless finding maan close to her

Geet is yet again hurt with his words

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: pixelflower620
Awesome part
I can understand Prem's anger but this was no way to take his sister away when shes at a public place
Maan confronted Geet with the same
Hmm...lets see what extreme steps hes talking about
cont soon
thnx fr d pm

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: sanum23
prem ko husband wife k matter main is tarhan nahi ana chahiye jab patchup ho sakta hai maan realized his mistakes
than prem have to leave matter on geet
maan told geet he not afraid of his brother but don't want to spoil yash party

thanks for commenting

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: priyasree

Thanks for PM

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: anu5
NYC update dear
Loved it!!
Prem was angry and dragged geet with him
Prem was !Is treating geet and was yelling at her
He is really behaving rudely with heer and she is not at fault too
Someone needs to open his eyes
Geet was restless finding maan close to her
Geet is yet again hurt with his words
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update

thanks for liking😊

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#409

Part 20

next morning annie enter in geet's bedroom, she is enjoying her beauty sleep,annie's temper got shot she pulled her blanket in jerk.

geet ki bachi utho! abhi tak so rhi ho college nhi jana kya?

annie shakes her

kya hy yaar! soney do na ayush ne bht tang kia hy raat ko

she make face and turned other side

theek hy so, dil bhar k neend puri karo aur aj jo miss patel test lein gi uska jawab kal dena

miss patel...aur test...!

her eyes got wide and awakes properly

arey haan yaar! ma tou bhool hi gyi ma 5 min ma ready ho kr ati hoon.

she hurriedly goes towards washroom

breakfast to kr lo geet!

heer put her breakfast on table, ayush is sitting on rano's lap and eating something

nhi bhabi! wasey hi bht late ho gaya hy, half period to yahin ho gya hy.

she is getting late

koi bht late ho gyi ho to pr tum yeh milk hi pee lo.

rano never leave her hungry

mamma sach ma late ho gaya hy.

ab itni argument ma time waste kr rhi ho pr milk nhi pio gi

okey!

she takes glass and drink in one go

milk lay lia hy to yeh sandwich hath ma lo car ma kha lena

heer forcefully give her sandwich

bhabi..!

she makes a face

chup warna ek lagaon gi.

she glared her while smiling, rano looks her lovingly how her daughter came back to her life or she disappointed from her

ok bye...bye janu!

she gives ayush flying kiss, and came downstairs with annie, rano prayed for her future life

when both came towards gate all cars are gone except one in which she didn't want to sit she plan in heart to not going college and turn and maan come towards them wearing his watch.

chalo bhyee ready ho!

he saw them and goes towards his car

annie ma nhi ja rhi

her mood got spoiled

pagal ho kia hamrey pas iss k ay ilawa aur koi choice nhi hy ek period miss ho gya hy jatey hoay 10 sy 15 min lagen gy third miss patel ka hy.

she understands her refusal but it is better if she quickly do something rather do argument so she hold her hand but geet jerk her. maan saw all scene while opening car's door.

tum jao aj ma nhi ja rhi ma kal khud miss patel sy excuse kr loon gi.

magr geet...!

annie said helplessly

annie tum baito isey ma khud dekhta hoon

maan order her she at once goes to sit maan goes towards geet and in a second he scoops her petite body and make her sit in car.

marey pass itna fuzool time nhi hy kay tumharey nakhrey uthaon, yeh kaam kisi aur waqt k lye rakho.

back seat annie smiled and she burned in anger

ap bht dheet hain ma apko chorun gi nhi.

she turned other side

ok mat chorna, magr yeh to batao mjh kahan ana parey ga tumharey bedroom ma ya tum aj raat marey bedroom ma arhi ho

he whispered his bold words makes her red she tight her fist to control her.

bataya nhi tum ne?

geet glared him with anger but failed because opposite is also like her he is in full form and see her so lovingly.

aye haye jaan ab itney pyar sy dekho gi to ma kuch kr baithon ga aur woh tumhain pasand nhi aye ga

he said naughtily with a wink

ufffhh...

she is not going to say something his bold talks makes her heart beat raised

maan bhai speed taiz karein na apni baatein raat ma kr lyjye ga.

their talk is in whisper because they know annie is also there

tumhari zuban ziada nhi chalti kam bola karo

she wants to scold her but failed

sunn li apni bhai ki daant ap chup chap ho kr baithi raho

he saw annie from back mirror with smile she is also smiling then his gaze shift towards geet she seems bit angry than towards window screen.

lo bhyee agaya tumhara college

he stopped car in front of colg gate and geet is out in seconds

hi geet

maan saw towrds voice a boy forward his hand towards geet and geet grab his hand for hand shake

hi vicky how are you?

ya fine..ma kab sy tumhara hi wait kr rha tha

kyun..?

yaar bhool gyen kuch notes k barey ma discuss krna tha

yeh ajooba kon hy?

maan feel little tinge and got angered when they shake hands how dare someone touch his geet

new admission hy london sy immigration kr k yahan aya hy

annie satred vicky

woh to is k style sy lag raha hy woh yahan ka nhi

white skin golden hairs in pony tail light hair band and tops in his ears silver ring in finger in one wrist black band in other silver steel band and dress looked so weird maan postmartam him in one gaze.

mjh to bht bura lagta hy pr geet sy bht dosti hy

wo to dekh raha hy

ok tum jao baad ma baat krtey hain.

she sensed his anger

geet tumhain zara bhi sharam nhi hy?

she found geet

ma smjhi nhi?

geet forget what she do in front of maan

tumhain pata hy maan bhai ko tumhara vicky sy baat krna aur hath milana bht bura laga

aur mjh tumharey maan bhai bht buray lagtey hain

geet!!

plz mera mood kharab mat karo waisey bhi subha subha kisi ko dekh kr mera mood phele hi kharab ho chuka hy ab maloom ni pora din kaisa guzrey ga aj to miss patel ka test bht bura hoga.

she tapped her foot in anger and leave annie saw her leaving.

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Part 2

Edited by nehaa9 - 8 years ago