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Posted: 8 years ago
[QUOTE=tehreemsajid]OMG that's so beautifully written[/QUOTE
Thank you so much...]
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Awww😳shabbb u know I read it thrice😳

Ty so much 4 adding wt I want in d stry😊
U ve written it so beautifully
Romantic story writter shab😉😃
I love dis Sherni n seductress Roshni😳hawww ur sid is so rude😡itna Bav kyu😲poor my Roshni is trying so hard nd here he is njyng😲
I thought it will be under d bed,bathroom or cupboard 🤣
Waiting for the next part
U both are making us hooked to dis FF
Cheju u r so sweet na...hw about 2 chps 2day also😆😉prove me dat ur sweet🤪

Your welcome appu and will try to fit in all your ideas that you have suggested
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalu7

What a romantic update. 😳 I really loved the seductive side of Roshni 😛 also loved the gussa game of sid 😆 keep updating I just want to read more n more 😃

So sweet and thank you everyone for all the feedback. It really means a lot.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shab u r fabulous writer no doubt👏
I loved all the lines 😛 seductive roshni was amazing yaar 😆 why sid acting so rude (though its really cute)😳 very cute update👏

But

*(even if it's the

last thing I do...) Why Roshni say dis,What does it means 😕, suspense?? Update soon dear😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anaya12

Shab u r fabulous writer no doubt👏

I loved all the lines 😛 seductive roshni was amazing yaar 😆 why sid acting so rude (though its really cute)😳 very cute update👏

But

*(even if it's the

last thing I do...) Why Roshni say dis,What does it means 😕, suspense?? Update soon dear😃

Not sure about fabulous but trying my best. ..and thank you so much for your feedback. It's just motivate me and cheju do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shab01


Not sure about fabulous but trying my best. ..and thank you so much for your feedback. It's just motivate me and cheju do write more

glad I cud motivate u guys 😊 guys u r fabulous 😉 but I didn't get my answers what does those lines means
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 47: (Written by Shabs)


In the sky, the moon provided a natural disco ball, to the open air Reception party.

Dainty fairly lights added to the romantic feel of the evening.

A sweet melody drifted through the atmosphere.

A collection of violinist and pianist were placed at the far end of the hall.

The reception party was in full swing.

Sidharth mingled with the guests, totally ignoring Roshni, even though he couldn't resist glancing at her every now and then.

Roshni was no doubt the most beautiful girl at the Reception Party..In fact she was the most beautiful girl in the whole wide world, and Sidharth was finding it hard to keep his eyes away from her.

As Sidharth mingled amongst the guests, he noticed a girl checking him out, her eyes lingering at him constantly.

He decided to have some fun, and tease Roshni.

He grinned mischievously.

"I know I should ignore it but...resist nahin hoga" he thought.

"Excuse me" said Sidharth.

Roshni eyes narrowed as she watched her husband look at another girl.

Sidharth could feel her gaze on him and continued to flirt.

"You didn't tell me your name" Sidharth asked as he approached her.

"You didn't ask" replied the girl seductively.

Roshni bit her lip, as her anger began to grow.

"Anyway I'm Aishwarya. ..but pyar se log mujhe Ash kehte hai"

"Well Ash, I must say the night just got

hotter" as he looked her up and down.

"Oooh that was a very cheesy pick up line. .." replied Ash raising her eyebrow

"Yes it was...but tum bhi kya cheese Ho Babe" he said looking Ash up and down.

"Not bad. ..."giggled Ash

Sidharth and Ash chatted, breaking out in laughter every now and then.

Roshni held her pullu tight in her hand. She had almost murdered it.

She closed her eyes, trying very hard to compose herself.

Sidharth glanced over to look at her and could see the rage of jealousy in her eyes.

Roshni looked at Ash. Her body was so Sexy. She seemed like some specimen for the most sexiest Girl in this world.

She looked down at herself, and thought

"Damn"

Roshni hated her for no reason.

She turned and walked away as she could not tolerate it any longer. Her heart pounded with jealousy.

Sidharth turned and watched Roshni walk away

"Aaah who's that girl, you keep looking at" questioned Ash

"That's my wife..."

"Huh. ...wife!!!" Squeaked Ash in disbelief

"Yesss!!!!...isn't she the most beautiful girl in the world".

"But...But..."

Sidharth cut her sentence

"If you would excuse me...aaahhh whatever your name was" and walked away.

Ash stood there shocked at what had just happened.

Rahul made his way to Sidharth

"What was all that about Bro"

"What?" asked Sid scanning the party looking for Roshni

"You flirting with that girl"

Sidharth looked back at Rahul.

"Did you see how jealous Roshni was" he said excitedly

Rahul shook his head.

"Dude your digging your own grave"

Sidharth simply smiled.

"Arre, it's just a little fun. I'll make it up to her when I get home"

"Make what up JeejuSa" asked Soniya as she approached them

Sid chuckled and narrated the events of last night to Rohinya

Both stood there shocked

"She did What?" Soniya almost screamed

Rahul suddenly burst out laughing

"Your kidding right!"

Sidharth shook his head side to side

"Do I look like I'm kidding"

"OMG...you under the bed and Nani... That's hilarious...I wish I could have been there to see it"

Soniya tugged at Rahuls arm, and made him stop. She looked back at Sid

"Well I suppose JeejuSa...Roshni deserve this. I mean that was no way to treat her husband who climbed twenty floors especially to meet her...I'll talk to her"

Sidharth stopped her

"It's okay SaaliSahiba. I'm not angry with her. Nor can I ever be...I'm just having some fun."

A song began to play in the background

"If you don't mind Rahul, may I have one dance with your beautiful bride"

Rahul smiled

"Of course Bro"

Sidharth led Soniya to the dance floor and began to dance with her

Roshni watched from afar, with a small tear in her eye.

"He didn't even ask me for a dance"

"Hey Behna may I have the pleasure of this dance"

Roshni quickly wiped away that lone tear and turned to Rahul

"Of course"

Although Roshni was dancing with Rahul her eyes remained on Sidharth, who pretended he hadn't noticed her.

Rahul gradually danced his way to Sidharth

"Ahhem. ... Bro if you don't mind I would like to continue this dance with my beautiful bride. But no worries you can have your wife back:

Rahul took hold of Soniya waist and began to dance with her.

Sidharth and Roshni stood on the dance floor looking at each other.

"Would you like to dance with me" asked Roshni

Sidharth did not answer.

She took his silence as a "No" and was about to walk away, when Sidharth grabbed her hand.

"Let's not make a scene here shall we" Sidharth said.

He held her close, her body tight against his.

Placing her hand on his shoulder, he held her waist with the other.

The touch of her bare skin on her waste burnt into his skin.

Roshni heart raced. She felt dizzy from his touch.

He danced silently. Not uttering a word.

Nothing but short gasps of breaths could be heard.

Roshni wanted to say something, but each time she opened her mouth, he looked away.

Slowly she moved her hands to his neck and rested her head against his chest. She could hear the beats of his heart.

Sidharth closed his eyes. He pulled her in even closer.

She looked up at him, slowly pushing her hair behind her ears, and smiled mouthing another

"Sorry"

Her face glistened in the moonlight.

Sidharth looked at her. She was so beautiful, and she was his... only his.

Roshni looked into his eyes, trying to understand what they were saying to her.

Slowly, Sidharth moved Roshni away,. She looked up confused. She didn't understand, as the music played...

"Mujko barsaat bana lo

Ek lumbhi raat bana lo

Apne jaazbat bana lo jaana

Within a second he twirled her around and pushed his front into her back, still moving side to side with the rhythm.

Mujhe alfaaz bana lo

Dil ki awaaz bana lo

Gehra sa raaz bana lo

Nasha hoon mein behakne de

Mere qaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do

His cheek was next to hers. She smelt so good. Like always. He could feel the softness of her skin. It was driving him insane.

Mujhe apne sirhaane pe

Thodi se jaaga de do

Mujhe neend nah aane ki

Koi toh waaja de do

He wanted to turn her around and hold her tight in his arms. He gripped her more firmly, which sent a shudder through his veins

Hawa hoon mein; lipaatne do

Mere qaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh de do

Mujhko barsaat bana lo

Ek lambhi Raat Bana lo

Apne jaazbat bana lo jaana. ...

Roshni closed her eyes.

Sidharth buried his face in her thick long hair

The scent of her body engulfed him, taking charge of his senses.

In that moment he yearned for her so much.

They danced sensually to the music,. as if they were One Body One Soul. They fitted each other perfectly.

Tere sang guzar jaaye gi

Yeh umar jo bakhi hai

Haans do nah zara

Kaahe ki udaasi hai

Their bodies moulded together.

He twirled her back so that she was facing him again.

Sidharth could feel the beat of her heart, the soft breath on his neck.

Her softness was all over him.

Roshni no longer had control on her mind and body.

Their passion grew with each sway and touch.

Their love was visable and their passion was explosive.

There was no doubt, they were made for each other.

They continued to dance, oblivious to their surroundings. Lost in each have other.

Mujhko barsaat bana lo

Ek lambhi raat bana lo

Apne jaazbat bana lo Jaana. ...

Staring at the beauty before him, his breathing became shallow, and his heart felt heavy inside his chest.

He twirled her round, dipping her, and leaned in closer to her.

Both were quiet. Not a word was spoken. Both lost in each others eyes.

The sudden applause bought them out of their trance.

Sidharth straightened her and Roshni stepped away feeling shy.

"Sidharth. ...Sidharth" Roshni looked at him

He shook his head and looked back at her.

"Ahh..Roshni. ..Please excuse me" his voice dropped, as he walked away..

Her heart flinched.

"He doesn't understand me. He won't accept my apology. ...does he love me. Or was that all a lie. Is he cranky pants again"

Roshni turned, trying to keep her emotions in tact. Slowly she made her way towards the entrance

Sidharth looked back and saw Roshni leaving, wiping away her tears.

His heart missed a beat.

In a moment she was out of sight.

He kept staring at the spot where she had just been only moments before.

It suddenly hit him.

"Oh God. What did I do. I made her cry...I made my Roshni cry..."

His heart sank.

"It's all my fault. What's the Hell is wrong with me. I hurt my Roshni..." tears welled up in his eyes.

His heart pounded at a thousand miles an hour.

"I'll never forgive for my selfish behaviour".

Sidharth closed his eyes cursing himself.

"I've got to talk to her...I've got to.talk to her. .." as he ran after her...

Edited by ChejuuSidNi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update 👏 now it's time to stop gussa game n start romance 😳 loved d jealously scene hats off to u guys update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update Shabs 👏
siddharth teasing Roshni...
Their dance..
The way Roshni was saying sorry...
Everything is written very well 👍🏼
Can't wait for the next update...!!!
PLZZZ UPDATE SOON 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Gosh my heart is thumping to know what's next!!! I can smell romance brewing. Great update!!

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