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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hira2010

Mysterious update
General forgot his birthday
Here maan too
It's like both the scenes happens together
Make it interesting




There is a reason for that will be revealing soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

past

General went to meet princess and when she got distracted and missed her target he asked her to not waver from the target..
princess geet just wants him to be her friend but he is bound with his duty. to protect the princess and could not take that liberty with her to be a friend
She remembered that it was his birthday and gave him a gift.. She wanted to learn how to use the sword and he accepted it..her father was happy to see his daughter smiling but someone evil is having an eye on her..

present

so in present too it was his birt
hday and she knew about it from her uncle when she was coming there
he accepted the gift of her.. the name of the general and princess were not mentioned in the artifacts
they took a break at some dhaba and there too she tried to ask if anyone knew the name of the princess and general.. Kaise pata hoga..sara suspence khatam ho jaayega na agar pata hota toh😆😆😆

professor and geet-Both do not know about some part of their lives... as if there is some mystery..but both of them are now friends..
nice update it was Khushboo😃






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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Part 3..

Awesome... Superb...

Thanks for update...

Thanks for pm...

Continue soon...

Past ...

Maaneet both remembering their childhood memories...

They had a competition which was a tie...

Geet wished him birthday which he forgot...

Maan warned him not to display her powers openly...

She asked him to teach her sword fighting which he agreed...

Some evil was watching them from a globe ... Oh no what's going to happen...

Present...

Maaneet left for their expedition...

Geet wished him birthday which he forgot as well... What a coincidence...

They came to know that they both don't remember much about their own childhood ...

They talked to a few locals who believed that the princess n general just vanished away... N they might be alive somewhere...




Hehe don't worry I won't write a tragic end ...



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Posted: 8 years ago



Part 4





"We don't meet people by accident, they are meant to cross our path for a reason"







Past





The King was really happy with the progress of his Kingdom. He was really happy to have a General like Maan leading his army just like his father once did, he really missed his knight and friend. They were only cordial in front of the people, behind it they were really good friends. The King always wanted Maan to marry his daughter, but the new boy in front of him was a really loyal General and would not look at his daughter which made her sad and he knew so he appointed him as her protector. He was happy to see them together but he also knew of the tragedies they will have to face. His older Priest once told him that. His daughter would be the most powerful sorceress but will also ensue a tragic fate, the only one who could save her was Maan, but they have to overcome a big ordeal to finally be happy. He knows of his daughter's magical powers which were inherited from his late wife her mother. He came to witness them when she used it to heal Maan in his childhood. Since then he has warned her not to use them but he knew his daughter never paid heed to his words. He just wanted her safe. He was worried for both the kids but he knew they had that power to overcome all obstacles. He just hoped everything will be fine soon.




"Princess, you have become really good with the sword now too", The general remarked looking at her skills. "Will you stop calling me Princess for once", She said annoyed.








"Not in this lifetime, as you are th...", He started but was interrupted by her, "Yes, I know, you don't have to remind me". "Well as your loyal General, it is my duty to remind you so you could become a fine ruler, like your father", He smiled looking at her pouting. "Well, then when I will be crowned the ruler, I would make you stop using titles with me", Geet grinned. "Then, Princess you should practice on your skills more as I would only work under a strong ruler", Maan said. "I don't like this sunny weather", She said before using her magic again to make it cloudy. "As the Priestess, you should not be doing this. You are meddling with the laws of nature", He warned. "Alright, I will turn it back", She sighed. "That is better", The General smiled.





"So ready for another match, I will be able to defeat you this time", The Princess challenged. "As long as it helps in polishing your skills to become a perfect ruler, I'm ready Princess", The General replied. They began their sparring match again. Maan was happy to see her progress, she was actually doing more than great, he just wanted her to be stronger, so nothing can overpower her. She hasn't changed in many aspects and her determination did not change either. He smiled recalling their childhood days.



"Maaan", She squealed. "You are back so let's go by the lake, we can play there", the little princess said. She was just 10 back then. "But Geet, I have to gather some things for my work there", said a 13 year old Maan. "I will help you and then we can play right", Geet said. "Alright, lets go", He said making her jump in joy. They have been friends since a long time now and he was really happy having her around, though the Princess of the kingdom, she was very humble and the people loved her. They gathered the things and then went by the lake to play. They were running around when Maan slipped and he hurt his his arm badly in the process. "Ouch...that hurts", He said. "Wait, don't move", Geet said keeping her hands on his broken arm and closed her eyes. Maan felt a strange energy generated in his body and Geet removed her hands. "Try moving now", She said. He moved it and it was like it was never broken. "How did you do that", He asked. "I..I actually have some magical powers but my father restricts me from using them as he fears bad people will come after me", She said. "Then you should follow his wishes and don't use them just for things like this alright", He said. "But your arm..", She tried. "Geet, please I can not risk your safety for anything so please, don't display your powers so openly", He said and she nodded.



Maan was bought back from his thoughts when he heard her, "That is no fair, you were not even concentrating and still I'm defeated". "Well Princess you should not complain or make excuses as the future ruler, you should not go easy on your enemies, consider me as your rival and then fight with your true strength then may be you could defeat me", He said. "Alright then, lets try again", She said and they continued their practice match.





The evil wizard was watching all this and was plotting, "Princess, you should really not meddle with the laws of nature. You don't know what I have in store for you. I managed to break through the force shield guarding your castle, now just a little more time and this Kingdom would be mine". He looked into something and smirked. "The King will be trapped and so would you my dear Princess".





Present






Maan joined Geet for the breakfast. "I will take you to the smaller site today, tomorrow we will head towards the main site", He informed. "Did you discover anything", Geet asked. "Nothing much, though we are trying to find out more", He said. "Alright, let's go", She said. They went to the nearest excavation site. "Wow this is really beautiful," She said. The area was vast and she really admired it. "Ah, this heat, I hate sunny days, wish it was cloudy", She whined. "Haha, I understand but the laws of nature could not be meddled with by anyone", He said.









"Yeah, but just imagine, if you were bestowed with such powers, wouldn't it be fun", She smiled. "Even if I was bestowed with such things, I don't think it is a good thing to meddle with something like this", He said. They walked a little distance and found the working bringing something out.




"What is that", Geet asked curiously. "Looks like another bunch of her belongings, we are getting only that and nothing else", Maan sighed. "Still lets see, may be we would find something which we have been ignoring", She said. They looked through the relics and found a tube sort of instrument. "What is this for", Geet asked. "I don't know, wait there is something written on this", He said. "Something like ...the never ending cycle...I need time to decode it", He said. "Okay, tell me when you get done", She said. "Geet, you said you don't remember most of the parts in your life too. Has it always been like this", He asked. "Yes, for as long as I can remember it, there are many things which seem strange in my life, like something very important to me has been lost and I'm looking for it", She said.



"Hmm...I get the same feeling too, and I get the feeling that I have been places before ...which I know I haven't", He said. "Like Deja vu you mean", She asked. "No, how can I tell you its different from that, like this particular place, I feel I have been here before too, even before I started this excavation", He said. Geet looked at him and he smiled, "You must be thinking I'm mad right".









"No...I don't but we do have many similarities don't you think", She said. "Well yes we do", He conceded.




"Let's go back, we need to find out more on this glass tube you found", He said. "I wonder what is it for", She said holding it and suddenly she felt something. "A never ending loop, a circle without end...", She said. "You can read it", He said. "No, I just like ...I don't know how to explain but something ...", She tried finding words to explain but nothing came to her mind as she was herself surprised as to how she read all that without having any knowledge. "Ah, leave it, let's go back , you must be tired", He said heading back . They went back but he looked back at the excavation site and thought he saw someone else there watching them but then brushed it off thinking he is imagining things now, not knowing that he was right.





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Edited by pixelflower620 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update princess hated when general uses title to call her princess dad always wanted maan to marry her but now things have changed and geets fate is she will die a tragic death and only maan can save her maan was lost in thought how once geet had cure him and he came across her powers both are lost in their world not knowing a danger had already entered in their world in present maan and geet looking at the sight where got a clue though geet unknowingly read it but she herself don't know how both have no idea of their past life and this is the reason they have no memory of their childhood as they are general and princess
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part
d king wants maan nd geet 2 be tgr bt he also knws dat dey hv 2 face many things
otherside maan is trainng geet nd she is learnng quickly
At present bth maan nd geet r strugglng wit their thoughts bt dey r suprtng each other
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Geet is reading her past life story
But they didnt know about it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loving this story dearie:):):) The past & present. How destiny has brought them together in their present live...to discover their past life connection...to complete their love for each other which has transcended eons of time...into present century...today was one discovery where Geet felt something holding the tube and read what was written...she herself had no knowledge how she did it...Is there really someone in the site? Someone from the past as well? I hope its a nice well meaning soul & not the evil wizard. Very intriguing story my dear. I love it:):):)
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am Surprised knowing king also wanted geet to marry general. Then what went wrong. General and geet were practicing sword skill. Geet was not liking the sunny weather so she was about to use her magical power but general. Stopped her saying she should not play with the nature. Maan recalled the day when geet used her magical power for curing his wound. Who is that person who is looking at geet and planning to trap them.
In present maneet realized how similar they are... Man@y aspects of their lives are same. They both have forgotten some part of their their respective life. Like princess, geet also hates sunny weather and maan's prospective also matches with the general. Maan felt like someone is watching them. waiting for next dear.

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