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Posted: 8 years ago



Part 6(c)
sorry for mistakes


After he left Nandini once again with puppy face crib to her ayiappa: Ayiappa this is just not fair...app na bht ghalat kar rahe ...mujhe na app se baat hi nahi karni...

Then her eyes stopped on her phone and while picking her phone she thought to check the sign and symptoms of love...coz all are teasing and giving her lectures on this topic and she wanted to give them anwer that nothing is between Manan ...

She searches this on google and after reading some stuff make a checklist in her mind...


Spending time together without any reason...

Care and concern...

Physical attraction...

Possessiveness...

Jealousy...

Felling relaxed in each other company...

And after making this list she started analyzing Manik's behavior to comfirm his side...

1st...spending time together...She thought: jab se main dehli ayi hoon zyada time to Manik k sath hi guzra hai...(also complained to her ayiappa) I know ayiappa yeh sub hi app ki planning hai na... but u also know me well ... main bhi aise hi is love k chakr me nahi aon gi... mujhe apni life is love k chakar me par k waste nahi karni...

Then once again she started her analyzing process...

Care and concern... Meri care... (with tense face) yeh bhi sahi hai... Manik ... Care bhi karta hur concern bhi hai... kal hi to dekha mein ne jab wo mujhe doc k pass le k gya... and in whole ride he was so much tensed about me... hai na... is ka matlab yeh point bhi love ki favor me...

(while biting her nail) Nooo agar yeh sub point match ho gaye to...?

After gathering some courage she checked that 3rd point...Physical attraction: yeh bhi true hai... abhi abhi to mujhe wo... wo kiss kar k gya... wo bhi bina baat k... Oh No Nandu...

Yeh bhi sabhi oski favour mein haan ... ab kya ho ga...?

4th Possessiveness: (while making cribbing kiddish face)... yeh bhi sahi hai... kal jab Manik un cheapos ko mar raha tha... kitna ghuse me tha wo... Kaise excuse de k car se gya... k phone bhool gya hoon but wahan un larkon ko marne gya... kyok un ne mujh pe comment pass kiye...

Then Jealousy: uhhh nooo never... main kyo jealous hone lagi huh... os k sath koi bhi ho mujhe kya farq parta hai...mujhe koi farq nahi parta...

She closed her eyes and inhales a deep breath to calm her nerves ... After opening her eyes she blabber: hmmm don't loose hope... nandu... abhi bhi aik point aur baqi hai... remember...

Feeling relaxed in each other company: (she thought for a while) each other... huh... yeh kya baat hoe ... arey main kyo oski company me relax hone lagi... infact ... os k sath to mera temperature double ho jata hai... nahi nahi... Double nahi triple...itnaaa tang karta hai... baat be baat touchy type ho jata hai...hai na... (with a smile) Yesss ... yeh point wrong hai... yipeee wrong...

But once again her mind rings a bell and her face changed its color:But nanduuu wo kehte haan na... majority is authority... baqi sub points to love and manik ki favour me haan na... means majorityyy...(in tension she once again started eating her nails)

With tense face: that means... he love me... except 2 points subhi signs and symptoms right haan...

But again her heart gives her a lame reason to satisfy: thats ok Nandini ... wo tujh se pyaar karta hai na... tu nahi... so problem solve... hai na...

And on this she smiled back with a sigh of relief: ya... you are right... yeh love track one sided hai... I am still not effected by this love shove thank God... thank you ayiappa...

Here Manik thought to check the level of her feelings so he dialed a number..

Mukti: Oye Hi Manik ... kaisa hai tu... bade dino baad meri yaad aye... chal bol kya kam hai...

Manik in surprised voice: tujhe kaise pata k mujhe kuch kam hai...

Mukti: hehehehe... silly question ... ab itna bada business man agar apni friend ko yaad kare ga to is ka matlab yehi hoa na k osey kuch kam hoga...ok ab faltu bakwas band kar aur bata kya kam hai...

Manik without considering his words said: Mukti I need a girl...

Mukti laughed out loudly...and after a good laugh she said: Manik... u... what did u say...

Manik got confused on her reaction...

Mukti while making fun of him: tu aur larki... acha chal bol ... Kis type ki chale gi... jaldi bata...terey liye to waise hi larkiyo ki line lag jae gi...waise baqi ka sub arrangement tu kar le ga na... yaw o bhi mujhe hi karna pare ga... u know what I mean right?

Now it gets in his head what he said and what she understands..

HE shouted at once: Stop... mukti stop thinking on that track... u... u gutter mind... pahle puri baat to sun le...

Mukti who was just teasing him said while laughing: to puri baat bole ga to tab na...

Manik told her the whole story and said that he want to check Nandini's feeling level and for that jealousy formula is best so that's why he asked for a girl...

Mukti: O acha... like that ...

Manik mocked: ya like that...

Mukti: done... ho jae ga... Kal ... wo larki terey farm house pe ho gi...

Manik: ok but ose bol dena acting karni hai... so be in her limits... Ok...

Mukti with laugh ok...

On breakfast table Cabir told Manik: Manik u know that M-series music company... un ka phone aya tha... and they want your interview... and best part pata hai kya hai is interview ka...

Others: what...

Cabir: k wo interview aik mall me arrange kar rahe haan... so after breakfast... hum sub ko wahan k liye nikalna pare ga...

Manik: but cabir kisi mall me kyo... yahan kyo nahi...

Cabir: arey yaar live audience ... wo hooting... Wo Manik we love you... vo sub bhi to chaheye hoga na unhe...

Manik: but Cabir... Live audience ... you know na out of control ho jae to kitni problem ho jati hai... and baqi media me se koi wahan a gya... u know what I mean right...?

Cabir reluctantly: arey wo sub tackle karna un ka kam hai... so don't worry...

After breakfast they all moved towards their desired place... At that place Cavya according to their plan separated from them on the pretext of shopping...

Manan was together... coz Navya already told Nandini that she wants to spend sometime with cabir...

Navya asked Manik to take Nandini with him... and Manik happily agreed on it...

On turning a corner on that mall Cabir dialed a number and only said : Done...and then ended his call...

Manik along with Nandini were moving towards that place where that music company arranged his interview...

But suddenly they saw the hustle and bustle around them ...

Manik with squinted eyes in worry looked around to judge the situation...when they heard one person that robbers enter in this mall...

In worry and concern Manik holds Nandini's hand and tried to ran outside... but due to the huge crowd there he was unsuccessful...

Then his eyes scanned a lone and safe hiding place there... So by dragging her along him he ran towards that corner...

Nandini was also worried on seeing the change in situation there...she also holds his arm tightly in tension... and her tight hold told him how scared she is at this time...

On reaching at that corner Manik and Nandini hides under the table for the time being...

Cavya according to their plan were in CCTV room... Cabir gave a bundle of money to the owner of that mall and with a smile said thanks for this help...

After this Cavya left from there but before leaving he also instructed that owner that after vacating the place kindly lock this for sometime...

Cabir before leaving that mall did his last naughty act...(he played the voice of gun shot in the loudspeaker so that manan heard it...and kept that device on same place after setting the time of replay .)... and then with a grin he left from there with navya...

Here Manan thought that those robbers fired in the air... Nandini on hearing this voice hide her face in Manik's chest like a baby...

And Manik also holds her in his arms tightly...

After few mints there was a complete silence there... and they thought all people hides in different places in fear... in reality... That mall was empty at that time on Cabir and Mr Malhotra's instructions.

Manik tried to move out to see the situation but on same moment he once again heard the gun fire...Nandini pulled him back in tension and while shooking her head in no said: No manik... mat jao...plzzz...

Manik: main kahein nahi ja raha but atleast mujhe dekhne to do...

Nandini: No plzzz... Manik they have guns ... tum ne firing ki awaz suni na... plzzz ...No main tumhe nahi jane doon gi...

Manik liked her care and concern for himself...he saw her different sheds of mood but this one ... the care and extreme concern which were reflecting from her eyes at this moment... It took his heart away... And in this tight situation (which seems to be like serious) Manik's mood changed at once to the light and teasing one...

Manik placed his head on her shoulder and asked:So you are worrying about me...?

Nandini : Hmmm

Manik: Why?

Nandini: Why matlab ... Manik... gun na kisi ki Fan nahi hoti aur na hi Robbers... jo tumhe dekh k chor dein gey... Ok... aur I don't want any harm for you...


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Edited by cute-aly - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
😃 😃
nandu ka much nei ho sakta yaar..
manik bohot papad bwlne pare GA uski confession karane main..
waiting for that..
keep writing..
take care
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Posted: 8 years ago
Haha nandini was seriously checking symptoms of love
Maniks jealousy plan and cabirs plan will surely work ...
Will wait for updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Nandu bhi na island much nahi hosakta testing symptoms of love woww it's super
Hope this plan watever our cabir has planned will work
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update...
nandini check google to know love...great...
cabir planned is superb...
loved d update..
hey dear concentrate on ur project...if u get time u write down update...we will wait for update...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww
Nandu's height of cuteness
Falling in love with her confusion over love
heehhehe
Cavya and their plans are adorable
Superbbb update
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
Maniks care...
Nandu confused.cavya mysterious..
Luvd it.
Thnkz 4 d pm..
Take ur tymm...dnt spoil ur project..
Il wait 4 ur update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update pls update soon our all stories mind blowing i read all storie

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