ArSh FF Badmaash Dill #6 Chap 60 Page 132 (28 NOV18)

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LONDON

Shilpa was on top of the world as the cab moved ahead towards their hotel.. The whether around was cold but really very amazing and white.. London in winters surely was turning her into ice but looked like heaven to her..
It was warm inside the car, Armaan was busy over his phone and she looking around smiling at every snow covered building she witness.. "App kya atay he phone pe lag gaye hain?" She complaint making a face..
"Tumhari admiration ko disturb karne ka koi shawk nahi rakhta! Isliye app wohi kijye jo app abhi tak kar rahi thi and let me do my work!" He turned to her for a second and then again looked down at his phone...
"Uhhh.." She made a face and once again turn to admire it all.. He looked at her in between and smiled.. She for sure having fun!!

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"Ek mere liye bhi.." Aliya jumped up with the sudden voice.. She was in the kitchen in the middle of the night in order to prepare some hot chocolate for her which she was feeling a craving of and this voice echoed suddenly..
"App yahan kya kar rahe hain iss waqt?" She asked without turning...
"Paani peene aya tha!! Lekin tumhe dekh k khayal aya k uss manhoos prince ne humara saara routine barbaad kar diya hai!! Koi ek jo khurafati harkat ki ho humne pichle kuch hafton mein.." He shook his head making a face and that made Aliya laugh..
"Hehe.. appko neend nahi arahi?" She couldn't stop but laugh and ask..
"Tumhe lagta hai sirf tumhari pareshaani hai??" He arched his eyebrows.. "Main duniya k kisi bhi kone mein hota aur mujhe yeh baat pata chalti to meri neend urr jaani thi!!" He pressed his lips together making her close her eyes and take a deep breath.. "App sab ko bohat pareshaan kiya hua haina maine?" She asked in a low voice..
"The vivacious Aliya Sharma had turned dukhi aatma!! pareshaani to hogi.." He chuckled and sat down stretching a chair beside the counter slab of the kitchen..
"Hmmm..." She took the mugs of hot chocolate, kept on the slab and closed her eyes.. "I am tired of all!!" She shook her head..
"Hehh.. chalo bahar ek walk kar k atay hain!" He smiled lightly and said..

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"Hmmm... ye to problem hai!!" Vikas sipped the hot chocolate and said while walking down the lonely street along with Aliya.. She told him how she blasted at Rohail the other night in the park because they all made her go so frustrated and now she was feeling a bit awkward in front of Rohail..
"Wo kya soch raha hoga... main kitne complexes ka shikaar hoon!!" She looked down and said.. "Ya kya main waqai hoti ja rahi hoon??" She bit her lower lip nervously..
"Tum pagal hoti ja raho ho aur kuch nahi..." Vikas shook his head..
"App.." She frowned at him.. he once again was not understanding her..
"Bachpan se dekhta aya hai wo tumhe!! Tumse larta jhagarta aya hai! Aur ab tumhe apni life mein shamil karne wala hai!! You seriously think wo tumhare baare mein ulta seedha sochega?" Vikas cutted her off and asked.. "Kya hota ja raha hai tumhe Aliya??" He stood still and lightly tucked the strand of her hairs behind her ear..
"Aur jis duniya ki tum baat kar rahi ho.. wo bhala hum mein se kisi k kabhi kaam ayi hai??" He questioned out.. "Duniya, society aur logon k naam pe hum sab suffer kar rahe hain!!" He tried to explain her..
"To main kya karun???" Irritated, she asked..
"Fight for it!!!" He said as easy as it was.. "Jo hona hai! wo ho kar rahega right?? To phir darne ka faida??" He asked.. "Can't you see we all are with you?"
"Armaan Shilpa ko le k ghoome ja raha hai, God knows for whatever purpose lekin... wo usse yahan nahi la raha!! Rohail sab se jhoot bol k yahan sirf tumhare liye ruka hai!! Main?? I've always been with you.. Sid door rehta tha! hum padose padose mein!! Crime partners!!" He smiled..
"We have backed up eachother all the time.. Tumhe kyun lagta hai baat yahan se leak karegi?? Kyun tum sochti ho k yeh baat jaante hue bhi k tumhe aur Shilpa ko ek he ghar mein rehna hai aur wo bhi aise khatarnaak ek mayaan mein do talwaar k jese rishte ki tarah! Aurr iss par Armaan ye bewaqoofi karega k wo Shilpa k saamne aisa kuch tumhara raaz khol de jisse le k tum comfortable nahi ho?" He asked about the two major things..
"Apne dill se yeh faaltu k daar nikaalo aur ye socho k Rohail ko le kar tumhare saare darr ghalat sabit hogaye hain!! Kya ussne tumhe ilzaam diya?" He inquired..
"Nahi..." She looked down and slightly shook her head in a no..
"To jab wo tumhare saath hai! Hum sab saath hain! To tum ek kadam agay barh kar uss gadhe ko rok nahi sakti? Like... Tum nahi rok sakti??" He arched his brows.. "Tum!! Jo jisse chahe ungliyun pe nachae.. wo aise haar maan k beth jayegi?" He tried to boost up her courage...
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"Armaan!! meri kulfi jum jayegi yahan!! nahi hain mere paas uss hisaab se kapre.." Shilpa stormed at Armaan as soon as he came out of the bathroom.. Their bags and zippers were all over the bed and Shilpa had unzipped all of it to find something surviveable for her.. "App ko batane mein kya ja raha tha?? Itna extreme mausam!!" She huffed.. The enjoyment was all gone as soon as she relaised she won't be able to live if she would continue to wear what she has brought..
"Haan to abhi jaenge naa hum shopping k liye.." He first stood still dumbstuck over this hitler wifey avatar of her and then said.. Technically it was his mistake!
"Aur yeh sab kya hai?? kab liya app ne?? Aur kis k liye??" One by one she pointed at few things and asked like a dominator.. she was so irritated at the moment that she could fire anyone be it husband or anyone..
"Chilla kyun rahi ho??" It just clicked him that she is shouting at him.. "Abhi to sab garam garam hai!!" He frowned.. The hotel was quite warm thanks to centralized heaters..
"Isiliye!! kyunki appka yehi plan hai... app khud ko office k kaam se bahar nikal janege aur main yahan bethi rahoongi kyunki bahar nikalne k liye mere pass pehnne ko kuch hai nahi!!" She gritted her teeth..
"Chup!!!" He narrowed his eyes on her making her stop... "Jab keh raha hun k shopping was on plan to phirrr??? Mumbai, Dubai mein nahi milta kuch sahi yahan k hisaab se.." He raised his voice to shut her down..
She narrowed her eyes and arched her brow at him giving him a look "like really??"
"Main ghooma hua hoon na zyaada!! Mujhe pata hai!!" He understood her look and said.. "Ab ye jacket pehno! aur tayyar ho jao!!" He took out a jacket of him from the zipper and kept in her hands..
"Tayyar??" Her mouth hung up over his order.. She looked top to bottom at herself trying to understand what he meant by get ready.. she was already ready!!
"Mera matlab hai jacket pehno aur chalo.." He made a face and said.. "Ladkiyaan naa.. urghh!!" He mumbled shaking his head.. He had witnessed married male friends around him turning deaf and now he was understanding why!

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"Issko pehn k main astronote lagoon gii!!" Shilpa refused to buy what he pointed at... "Baby!! fashion nahi dekhna!! warmth dekhni hai.." He gritted his teeth and told her sweetly biting his tongue..
"Nahi!!" She at once shooed him and walked forward to look around.. She was hell choosy and in just few minutes made him feel really sorry for all the titles he has given to women he has shopped with till date! They all were turning nothing in comparision with her..
"Yeah! pack this for me.." He let her do her window shopping and concentrated on his own... "Apko black se itni kya mohabbat hai!! Ghar pe, Vikas bhaiya k ghar pe.. majority apke black jackets thai!" She pointed out making his eyes pop out..
"Tumne itne se dinow mein sab notice kar liya?" He asked arching his brow.. "Ermmm... main kapre bohat notice karti hun!!" She told her habit biting her lower lip.. "wardrobe set karte waqt.. i had it all!!" She smiled explaining herself..
"Ahan!!" He can sense moons and stars appearing above his head..
"App wo color kyun nahi try karte??" She pointed at a yellow and black combo jacket..
"Kyunki mujhe paindoo banne ka koi shawk nahi hai!!" He glared at him and handed over the jacket and jeans to the sales man..
His 1 hour shopping turned to a good 5 hour shopping thanks to the newly wedded wife of him who atlast was satisfied and happy because he let her enjoy a good budget and buy all those English series amaizing winter looks, she could only wished to try in Mumbai..

"I thought you would never ask!!" The Prince smiled at Aliya who invited him over the breakfast at this small out of the site restuarant..
"Yeah Right!!" Aliya bit her tongue controlling her temper.. She was cursing Vikas right now for bringing the storm inside her to end this game and do right by Rohail and her family but now seeing him, all her confidence was fading away..
He settled down and then said "But.. why this?? We could have it..."
"Somewhere grand and lavish??" Holding a grip over herself, Aliya interrupted..
"Yeah!!" He smiled at her..
"Hmmm..." She took a deep breath before deciding to speak clear cut.. "What makes you think Grand and Lavish is my thing??" She asked..
"Uhmm.. Who doesn't like grand and lavish??" He shook his head at her and asked..
"Me!!!" She looked in his eyes and said.. "Infact, i am clueless what made you think you could marry me??" She asked..
"Uhhh what??" He was suddenly taken back by her tone and question.. He was not expecting that..
"Tell me one thing about me which made you and your family think that i could fit in??" She kept on asking..
"Well..." He looked here and there to give it a thought.. "Who doesn't wana be a princess and future queen??" He passed her a stupid smile and ask...
"Urghhh..." Aliya wanted to punch him right on his face over this stupid answer... "Look.. Ail!!" He held her hand in his lovingly..
"Thudd..." Out of the most expected, Mr prince received a tight slap over his hand and an immediately pull of Aliya's hand from there.. "Who the hell gave you the right to hold my hand??" She became so angry.. "Gadha!!" She said in hindi..
"Ohh sorry!!" He apologized cutely and showed his hand to the guards who came near them when their prince got hit by a lady.. "But i really love you!! In my entire life, no one has amaized me the way you did!!" He started with his heart felt confession.. "You made me laugh, made me see outside the burden of responsibilities and work that life is actually really beautiful!! Ail!! You are this beautiful amaizing woman i just cannot take my eyes off you!!" He said it in a soulful manner making Aliya's heart beat stop..
"After the death of my father, i hardly had any time to feel free and happy!! And you.. You entered in my life like fresh wind which makes me feel alive and happy again!! The second i laid my eyes on you that way, i knew only you and you will be my future!! I wana spend my life with you!!" Aliya's mouth went dry after hearing out this so heart felt confession of this mand sitting right in front of her.. "I get it that we come from different backgrounds but that doesn't change the fact that i have fallen for you and wana spend rest of my life with you.. And i will do anything for you!"
silence...
"You don't know me Henry!! I am engaged!!" She said slowly after a long silence..
"Hehh just like you were married!!" He scoffed..
"You still don't know me!!" Aliya whispered out ignoring the fact that Henry just made fun of the news they tried to fake out bringing her and Vikas's name together.. Vikas because he was the only one available ther..
"Then i am willing to know!!" He passed her an assuaring smile..

silence...

Aliya closed her eyes to think how to fix it... By now she understood that this situation can only be handled with tender and care.. "Ab kadam barhaya hai to poori takat lagane mein kya jaata hai?" She told herself and then looked up at him..
"Fine!! Let me show you my world!!" She spoke out gently to which he smiled that atleast she is giving in slowly.. "But..." She raised her finger.. "Just you and me!! Non of those.." She pointed at the guards..

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"Pagal to nahi hogayi tum??" Vikas was fuming with anger after Aliya called him to do anything but kick out Piya and Rohail from the Mad House.. She wants the place empty for couple of hours.. "What on earth makes you think i will leave you alone with that idiot in am empty house??" He gritted his teeth..
"App kehna chah rahe hai app mujhpe trust nahi karte?" Aliya played the emo game..
"I don't trust him!!" He went speechless for and second and then said..
"Well.. he is a prince and as far as i know they need to maintain their dignity!!" She rolled her eyes..
"Rohail will kill me.." Vikas wanted to kill Aliya..
"Acha!! kal app he mujhe bhashan de rahe thai! if you can't do this for yourself, then do this for him!!" She gritted her teeth..
"Urghhh... Fine!!" He took a deep breath and ended the call... Piya and Rohail both had no ideas about the events that took place last night and now in the morning.. It was too early to realise the Aliya is not in her room sleeping as she sleeps till late these days..

"Kahan gayab ho?" Rohail clicked his fingers infront of Vikas who just got down after getting ready for the training..
"Kuch nahi.. tum batao!! Any progress.." Vikas said for the sake of just saying.. He had no idea what he talked..
"Kal poora din bukhar free... i think that is a progress.." He taunted..
"Do u trust her??" Vikas asked taking a chair..
"Yeh kis kism ka wahiyaat sawal hai??" Piya asked in a stern voice.. she was just coming in with the plates and forks when she heard them talking..
"Haan??" Rohail added his question mark aswell in the question..
"Mera matlab hai! She can handle it??" Vikas cleared the air..
"Yeah! she can handle with she will come back in her senses!! Lekin wo itne saare complexes paal k bethi hui hai k meri khud ki akal jawab de gayi hai k kab kese aur kis moment ko choose kar k baat ki jaye!" Rohail made a face..
"Time do usse yaar!! peeche parr gaye ho donow!!" Piya said putting things on the table..
"Lo.. time he to de raha hun!! Uss din k baad se koi bhi baat nahi ki maine usse uss baare mein.." Rohail tried to defend himself..
"Ok then! i have a news to break!!" Vikas took a dep breath and said..
"Huh??" Both Rohail and Piya looked at him with arched brows..
"She is out with the prince to knock some sense into him and now she wants us to clear this place for few hours!!" He freed the bomb in the air..
"Dimagh to nahi chal gaya uska??" Rohail stood up from his chair in anger..
"Vikas!!!" Piya looked at him in disbelieve..
"Mujhe bhi gussa aya tha lekin..." Vikas tried to calm down Rohail.. "Hum yehi to chahte thai na k wo step le himmat kar k aur khatam kare.. Ab jab ussne liye hain to.. let her deal!!"
"Alone!!!" Rohail narrowed his eyes..
"Wo usske saamne bhi nahi jana chahti thi!! ab aisa kuch keh rahi hai to kuch soch samajh k he keh raho hogi naa??" Vikas tried to reason which worked..

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Making a quick and easy and spicy like hell dish, Aliya served Henry and herself and sat down.. "Thats the kind of a breakfast i love.." She said..
Smiling and her, Henry took a bite and coughed hard.. It was too spicy for him!! "Ohh.. too spicy for you??" Aliya quickly handed him the glass filled with sprite knowing this will only agreevate the spice and now Prince Henry was jumping all over the floor..
"Hehh.." There was no way Rohail was leaving this maniac psycho fiance of his all alone with this prince plus he has his curiosity issues so he came back after giving Vikas Piya the look of leaving for Training.. Now he was up and quiet watching the show Aliya was putting on..
"That was disgusting!!" Finally after intaking the water, Henry commented looking at Aliya.. "But i love it!!" She made a face taking another bite only to pop Henry's eyes out.. The girl practically eats chillies and enjoys instead of crying..
"Its bad for health!!" He frowned at her..
"Excuse me!! I've been eating this all my life and you expect me leave that???" She looked at him angrily..
"I get it!! You are doing this to prove how different we are.." Henry narrowed his eyes at her..
"No!! I am just eating my usual thing and telling you that i am not gona change myself or leave anything for anyones sake!!" She rolled her eyes and said.. "And now lets talk about the fact that i am engaged and i love my fiance and why on earth will i leave him for you??" She asked..
With guards gone and Mad House as Aliya's very own territory, She was feeling like a lioness who can put down this Prince all by her own..
"But you said.." Henry forwned..
"I said nothing... you assumed!!" Aliya cutted him off.. "You thought that with guards and guns all around you, you can have anything you want!! You might be a prince of some country but this is my place!!" She became serious and said..
"Whats the catch Ail?? You invited me for this??" He asked straight.. She was kind of humiliating him..
"No!!" She spoke out softly.. "I am here to tell you my side of the story!!" She had the softness in her voice which made Henry stop from doing or calling anything.. "I am a very private person and if this conversation is gona happen, then its going to happen only between us!! Not infront of your guards and the world!!" She made him quiet..
"Fine.. i am here!!" He was willing to listen to her..

"Henry!! I don't wana know what perception you have about my family or why you fell for me.." She sat down and looked at him.. He was still standing.. "My birth parents died when i was 1." She started and Rohail closed his eyes.. As per him, she was not suppose to tell such things to this idiot!
"My uncle Aunty, as i my father's brother and his wife adopted me.. They gave me the life, people out there pray and wish to get!!" A little moistness appeared in her eyes.. "All they have done whole of their life is to love me, raise me and takecare of me! What on earth makes you think they forced me into my engagement??" She raised one point which was the foundation of this dominant type of Love of Henry..
"I just.. " This came as a shock to the man.. He tried to say something..
"You read some random bad cultural articles and you assumed i am one of them just because you wanted an excuse to proceed??" She asked..
"This man!!" She pointed at a picture on the side.. It was Rohail Aliya's engagement picture.. "I have known him all my life.. Practically have grown up with him!!" Tears came in her eyes as she valued the relationship she had with Rohail.. "I Love Him!! And there is nothing you can change about it.." She looked in Henry's eyes and said..
"You said nothing before.." He was hurt..
"You never asked!! You only implied.. Do you realise you only make me scare??" She questioned out.. "Did you realised i am kind of a free bird and coming into your world means entering a cage!!" She slammed a fact.. "You say you love me.. and then you want this for me??"
"Henry!! You can't have me without destroying me!! And if this is it.. then do your thing!!" She emotionally targeted him now..
"Agar itni asaani se handle hone wala tha ye.. to pehle he kar leyti!!" Rohail gave it a thought.. "Beemar ho ke.. Khud ki jaan bakshi na humari!!" He shook his head..
Henry argued and All Aliya Sharma did was to target him emotionally... Under normal circumstances if she would have praised Rohail so much and had told him how much she loves him, he probably would have died.. But he get it! A little drama was there.
"You will madly fall in love with someone some day!! Its just.. i am not that girl!" The meeting was coming to an end.. She was now hammering the final nail in the coffin..
"Ab to mere bhi sar mein dard hogaya hai!! Abay jaa naa!!" Rohail was now sitting on the floor upstairs near the slide opening... This Henry was taking hell lot of convincing and if this was not enough, he was now pouring out his heart as well which was very boring as no one there was interested in it.. His traumas were nothing compared to what they all go through every day!
"Issko kisi rishta aunty k hawale kar dena chahiye!! Akal thikaane ajayegi!! Itna stupid prince kese ho sakta hai yaar?? aur Business man bhi??" Rohail felt like pulling his hairs..
"Have a great life Ail!!" Henry smiled at Aliya.. he was finally coming into terms that she cannot be his ever.. "Just remember!! i'll always be there when you need me!!" He lightly smiled at her.. Well, he did actually loved her! Don't know for what? But he loved her..

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"Rohail!!!" Aliya shouted out loud after finally getting rid of the prince..
"What the hell???" His jaw dropped down.. How come she knew that he was there..
"Mujhe pata hai tum oppar ho!! Neeche ajao ab!!" She once again shouted out loud..
"Hmmm..." Taking a deep breath, he walked down the stairs and stood infront of her.. "Bura laga??" He asked.. He thought she might start with her saga that he stayed when she asked everyone to leave! Doesn't he trust her and all..
"Nahi!!" Instead of shouting, she looked in his eyes with her moist eyes and shook her head in a no softly and rested her head over his chest wrapping her arms around him..
"Pagal!!" He shook his head smiling and took her in his embrace.. "Pehle he ye stunt pull kar leyti!! Itne drame ki kya zaroorat thi??" He asked..
"Shut Up!!" She hit him on his chest..
"Tumhe pata tha main yahan hun!" He asked, still hugging her..
"Mujhe to yeh bhi pata hai k agar Vikas bhai ko zara bhi lagta k tumne yahan nahi hona hai! To wo tumhari jagah chupe hue hote.. " She smiled coming out of the hug.. "I enjoy this kind of care!!" She winked at him..
"Oho!!" He narrowed his eyes at her.. "Aur mujhe to pata he nahi tha!! Tum itni deewani ho mere peeche?? wo bhi bachpan se??" He teased her..
"Huh!! You wish!!" She rolled her eyes throwing attitude at him.. "Wo to Mama Papa ko pasand agaye warna ghaas bhi nahi daalti tumhe.." She added..
"Ghaans gadhe khate hain jo abhi darwaze se bahar gaye hain!!" He commented cracking her up and laugh out loud.. It feels like an era, since she laughed like that..

"Inka kya karun??" Shilpa looked at Armaan as he threw the gift wraps and some tape over the bed.. "Packing!!" He pressed his lips together..
"Kis ki packing???" She asked with a confused face.. He was back from work and she was all ready so that he can take her out...
"Yeh.." he pulled out all the stuff she was asking him yesterday about but then their conversation went in different direction.. "Humay do ghar niptane hain! aur yeh gifts wahan le k jaane hain!!" He explained..
"Ummm..." she arched her brows..
"One!! Mere mamo yahan rehte hain!!" He exploded a news on her..
"Ma... mamo?? Like.. mom k bhai??" She asked with widen eyes, she has never ever heard of it before..
"Yup!! Mom aur Maasi k ek laute bhai!!" He sat down on the bed..
"Wo kahan se agaye??" She asked as simple as it was... "i mean.. pehle suna nahi maine!! Humare kisi function mein nahi thai! Aliya ki sagai par bhi nahi thai.." She supported her quiry..
"Haaan!! Ye story to tumhe kisi ne batai he nahi hogi!!" He chuckled and his smile told her another crazy freaking story is on its way..
"tO..." He was about to start but then said.. "Packing start karo.. batata hun!!" He gave her the wrapping sheets in her hands and himself also took one box to help her wrap quick..
"Humare eklaute mamo gaye thai office ki taraf se Korea!!" A grin appeared over his face and she laughed expecting something.. "Wahan agaya unka.. Korean Beauty pe dill!!" He opened his arms as if doing a grand openeing.. "Angela Kim!!"
"Wow!!" Shilpa commented..
"Arre wow sirf Kim ji ki side se karo.. " He interrupted.. "God knows mamoo mein kya dekha ussne.. unke liye tooti phooti hindi bhi seekhi aur hindu bhi hogayi!" He told her more..
"What??" This was actually a news and it made Shilpa's jaw fall down.. "Exactly!! Nano Nani ka aisa he reaction tha!!" He pointed at Shilpa's expressions and said..
"Wo.. shaadi k liye maan gaye??" Shilpa asked with excitement..
"Nahi maante naa.. Lekin unki phooti kismat, mamoo aur Dad ki bohat banti hai!! Chalae jugaar idhar ushar se.. emotional blackmail kiya unko!! Aur uss dinnn ufff!!" He shook his head remembering it.. "Maasi especially Dehli se ayi humare ghar aur Mom aur maasi ne jo Dad ki class li hai mil ke... Mujhe ajj bhi yaad hai! Main to hass hass k girr gaya tha!!" He laughed making her laugh too..
"Phir???" She wanted to know more..
"Phir Miss Kim kaafi sudhri hui aur achi nikli.. Khud ki family unki pehle he oppar thi aur she actually wanted to blend in so... They all accepted and they happily got married!!" He ended the story...
"Wow!!" Shilpa clapped..
"Nanu nani ki death k baad mamu yahan shift hogaye.. teen betiyaan hain unki! Wo yahin rehte hain ab!" He told her more..
"To shaadi mein kyun nahi aye??" She asked since everything seems okay!!
"Chutti ka masla tha kuch aur phir unki betiyun k papers wagera bhi thai.. so whatever!! Hum yahan aye hain! Hum chote hain to humara farz banta hai k hum jaen, hello hi kare aur wapas ajaen!!" He explained to which she smiled..
"Isliye gifts!!" She asking done packing one..
"Yup!!" He nodded...
"Lekin yeh sab young ladkiyun ka samaan hai.. Mamoo mami k liye kuch nahi liya?" She inquired looking at the stuff again.. "Aur app to keh rahe thai k ladkiyun k liye samajh nahi ata appko.." She added a taunt..
"Ab main tumhe life k kaun kaun se poll khol k sunaoon??" He took a sigh dramatically.. "Buss samajh lo k.. Tum logon se thodi opposite hain to ladkiyaan.. To.. yeh sab jo tum log reject karo ge, they will accept!" He put forward his weird logic..
"Urghhh.. mujhe nahi samajhni apki logic!! Lekin mamo mami k liye bhi gift leyna chahiye tha.." She kept her verdict..
"Oho!! Itni mohabbat jaag rahi hai to yeh jo dukaan tumne khareedi hai iss mein se tikka do kuch.. baad mein dobara khareed leyna!" He kind of challanged her in his own terms..
"Appne pehli baar dilaya hai mujhe itna sab kuch.. Apki dilayi cheezein kese e sakti hun kisi ko??" She gave him a puppy look and played wicket..
"Haan haan!! badi pati vrata patni to tum!!!" He said while taking a step towards her and she ran laughing..

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"Armaan main kya pehnu??" A confused Shilpa asked him as soon as he came out of the bathroom after taking a bath.. "Kya matlab kya pehnu? tum ready nahi thi??" He said ruffling his hairs with the towel..
"Thi... par hum kisi se milne nahi ja rahe thai tab!" She was confused because she was about to visit an unseen sasurali of hers..
"Just be simple!!" He raised his shoulders in the air and again went inside the bathroom to get something.. "Ermmm..." She looked at herself in the mirror and then decided to stay with the same she was wearing and just wear her wedding chain as an addition.
"Sahi hai?" She asked as he came back in the room..
"Perfect!" He glanced at her for a moment and then smiled..
They ordered some hot coffee and sandwiches in the room and ate them while waiting for the cab to arrive which will drop them to their destination...
"App thuk nahi gaye?" She asked him as he closed his eyes resting back at the chair.. Thanks to the jet lag, she has slept all day but he went to office and didn't rested for even a second after getting back...
"Hmmm.." He nodded in a yes.. "Lekin ajj he niptana hai!!" He sighed..
"Kyun?? kal bhaga ja raha hai?" He asked softly..
"Hum yahan sirf teen din hain!" He revealed..
"Huh??" Her jaw dropped down.. "Armaan yeh kya hai? Kab? kahan? kitne din? mujhe ek dum adhere mein rakha hua hai app ne.. And i actually thought we were heading from Mumbai to Mauritius!" She huffed..
"My Life!" He opened his eyes and gave a puppy look..
"Clearly corrupted with virus!!" She commented making him laugh... "Hehe!! Actually yahan london mein head office hai! Yahan ak emujhe pata chala k.. kaam thoda lumba aur tedha hai!" He pressed his lips together..
"So??" She didn't get if the work is long when why would they leave early..
"So... jis branch mein actually dealing ho rahi hai.. wahan jana padega! Jo yahan se kaafi door hai aur sirf jaane mein he ,mujhe adha din lag jayega.. So we'll stay near to it!" He explained..
"Oh!!" She nodded.. "No wonder app sahi thai!! I just cannot work... agar apka schedule aise he chalta hai to.." She said after a while..
"Ohh you have seen nothing!" He shook his head looking at her..
"I.." Shilpa just opened her mouth to say something but the phone interrupted it.. It was the call from reception to let them know that their cab is waiting outside..

...

"Its weird!!" Shilpa mumbled as the cab stopped and they went out.. Unlike their last ride towards the hotel, Armaan was not busy over his phone and pointing out and showing her places from the car's window.. He told her not to sulk as they will roam around and have their share of fun after getting done with the formality of meeting relatives..
"Oye.. khana ignore!!" He said before ringing the bell..
"Mujhe nahi phasaiye app.. jo kehna hai khud kahiye gaa.. main bus haan mein haan milaoongii!!" She gave him a fair warning.. She didn't show but wonder what is so unique about this mamo and instead of spending a good time, Armaan Mallik was on his urge to run out..
"Armaaan Bhaii!!!" A girl opened the good and instantly a huge smile lighted up on her face..
"Hello!!!" He too smiled at her and said giving her a side hug.. This girl was not even near their age.. She was a kid! Probably of 15.. "See!! I was telling Eisha its you!! I can sense it!!" She proudly announced as if she has won a trophy by guessing it right!
"Ahan.. and i am guessing Eisha feels like sleeping!!" Armaan passed a suspicious look to the girl who started giggling.. "Shilpa!!" He turned his back putting his hand behind Shilpa to make her come forward.. Shilpa was holding Gift bags in her hands.. "Yeh Maaya hai!" He introduced.. "Sab se choti aur sab se tezz!!" He shot a teasy look to Maaya who frowned but then got attentive looking at Shilpa.. "Yeh Shilpa bhabhi hain??" She pointed and came forward to shake hands with Shilpa.. "Hello Maaya!!" Shilpa bent a little and shook hands with her.. She seems cute..
"You are so pretty!!" Maya commented over Shilpa's face making her smile..
"Yes! And you want her to turn cold ice right??" Armaan tanuted making Maya realise that they are doing all this on the gate.. "Ohh Sorry!!!" She apologized cutely and let them in..
"Thank God!!" Shilpa held Armaan's arm and sighed as soon as Maya shut the door behind them and the warmness touched them.. It was all warm inside thanks to heaters.. "Jum gayi thi main!!" She breathed cold to which Armaan giggled..

Next Armaan made her meet everyone else, the other two sisters Eisha and Sanaya and the Mamo and Korean Mami!! "Wow!!" She whispered near Armaan's ear on getting the chance.. "Shut Up!!" He whispered back plastering the smile on his face..
This house was warm and cosy but all white.. Like really White!! Little colors it had were all light and blending so much in white that hardly comes in notice.. "Thank God we have colors and we love them!!" Shilpa guessed how pale life will be like if she has to live in this house.. What she wasn't getting was why the hell is it so white??
Mamoo seems like the half of what she will find in Mallik house.. "Dad!! I love you!!" Shilpa sent her love and regards for Billy after meeting the mamo and sitting quietly looking at him and Armaan.. Billy was way more fun and interesting and comfy!!
"Aur ek baat batao.. Ghar mein paglon ki koi wese he kami thi jo ek mahaan addition?? Aliya!!" Mamoo showed his shock over Rohail Aliya engagement..
"Uhhh... You missed it!!" Armaan laughed.. "Appko sagai attend karni chahiye thi... you would have crashed!!" He added making Shilpa laugh too.. And just before Armaan would start to narrate the craziness and fun mamoo has missed, Maya came to Shilpa and asked her to come with her so she can show her the house..

...

"So its all cool out there??" Angela asked smiling at Shilpa as Maya brought her to show the kitchen.. Angela did have sat a bit with them in the hall but then she came inside the kitchen..
"Its good!! Fun!!" Shilpa replied smiling.. She so wanted to hear that tooti phooti hindi Armaan told her about but then what can she do if they were speaking in English.. "Maya!! Don't disturb her.." Angela scolded her little daughter..
"No its okay! She is cute!!" Shilpa smiled and then gave Angela one of the gift bags she was holding.. "We brought this for you!!" She handed over with smile..
"Aww.. Thank you!! But there was no need!!" Angela smiled and thanked... "I should be gifting you something!! You are visiting us for the first time.." Angela said..
"So do i!!" Shilpa tried to blend in.. "I hope you like it..."

Next Maya took her upstairs where Shilpa finally handed over the gifts to the three sisters and the reaction she saw when they opened it was worth watching!! Armaan was so right about the choice for them and she too when she decided to buy something for mamo and mami on the way..
"I looked out for this every where!! I didn't even find it online!!" Eisha jumped up and said.. It was a usual set of traditional shoulder bags with some indian work over it that Shilpa or any other girl in mumbai would have used at some point of her life and then trashed after branded bags came int pictures.. "Aurr yeh!! OMG!!" Eisha jumped up even more on finding some special meenakri jumka varieties inside it and Shilpa heard her using Hindi for once..
"Bohat Acha hai ye.. Thank you!!" Sanaya thanked her on receiving hers gently unlike Eisha she was not jumping but Shilpa could see it on her face how happy she was.. Sanaya was kind of a nerdy.. She had only and only books all around her room and Shilpa wondered if she is Armaan's real sister considering the amount of books he read as per Rahul and Rohail.. For Sanaya stuff was kind of a studious one but unique and a bit colorful in its own one.. More like with some traditional touch..
"Do you like yours??" Shilpa asked Maya who was the chirpy of all.. Eisha and Sanaya seems a bit sober and quiet than Maya..
"Ohh i love it!! And i know who must have choosen this for me!! Armaan bhai cannot do this!! And you don't know me.." She spoke out so innocently that made Shilpa smile..
"And... who must have?" Shilpa asked softly..
"Aliya Di!! I have seen her wearing this in several pictures!! i commented aswell.." Maya was so sure about it..
"Welll.. yeah maybe!" Shilpa giggled..
"You know!! I love her style and she is so sweet!! Unlike them!!" She made a face pointing at her two sisters..
"Maya!!" Eisha gritted her teeth and Maya ran away instantly.. "Ruko..." Eisha's language changed suddenly and she ran after..
"Sorry about them!!" Sanaya apologized..
"Koi baat nahi!!" Just came out of Shilpa's mouth.. "So... you love to study?" Shilpa just started a random conversation..
"Haan!! Mujhe parhna acha lagta hai!!" Sanaya started talking in hindi.. She was good!! The two got engaged into some conversation and later the room witnessed the sounds of giggles and chirps.. The 3 sisters and their bhabhi got along really well..

...

'Yeh neeche kyun nahi arahi hai?? Khana nahi khana yahan!!' Armaan was looking at the stairs again and again and gritting his teeth.. Mamoo just couldn't stop but wanted to hear it all he missed and mami time to time was paying visit since she had not much to talk about.. Armaan knew she was preparing food and that is why he so wanted to get out of there but now it seems impossible..
"Neeche ajao!! warna phir mujhe oppar pohchane k baare mein socho gii!!" Armaan once again looked at the stairs and then at the hall way where Mami just came in from the kitchen wiping her hands with the paper towel.. "Lo.. marwa diya ajj!!" He felt like banging his head somewhere now.. There was officially no way out..
"Ermmm..." Shilpa looked at Armaan as the dinner got served to which he passed a 'khao ab' look 'marwa to diya hai'.. Shilpa saw him looking at her with narrow eyes, he was eyeing her to come and stand beside him so that they would sit together.. His plan was to warn her when she is close.. "App mere saath bethen!!" Maya took Shilpa's hand and dragged her away.. "Urghhh.." Armaan shook his head and sat down.. How he was sitting opposite to Shilpa..
He kept chatting along with everyone and took very little in his plate faking a little cough to grab Shilpa's attention.. She looked at him with a frown only to see him looking down at his plate which made her think maybe he was clearing his throat..
He looked at her taking food as per her apetite and kicked her under the table.. "What??" Shilpa gave him a look without saying anything loudly to which he eyed at her plate trying to tell her to stop taking food.. He once again looked at his plate to show that he has taken small.. You should also but she didn't understood a thing.. 'Aur phir biwiyun ko shikayatein hoti hai k app meri nazrein nahi samajhte.. Yahan dorect direct hint diye ja raha hun samajh nahi arahi!! Ab bhugtE!! Bada meri haan mein haan milane wali thi!!" He shook his face and turned his face to listen what mamo was saying...
"Yeh itna thoda sa kyun liya hai tumne??" Mamo frowned..
"kyunki office se ake kha liya tha maine!! abhi itni bhook nahi hai..!!" Armaan reasoned.. "Oppar se abhi Ravi ki taraf bhi jaana hai!!" He said and Shilpa looked at him with widen eyes.. "Now who the hell was he?" she had no idea..
"Ahan.." Mamo and all nodded in a yes.. Shilpa took a bit of the food and it just remained there in her mouth.. Her eyes went straight up at Armaan who gave her a glaring look as if saying 'Ab samajh ayi??' "Ahmm.." He coughed lightly passing a smile which was all for Shilpa.. She got the reason why on earth was he scared of food here..
It was some Korean dish, mami's speciality for guests which was pathetic to their taste buds but the family was used to it and so they find it good!! It was one of those dishes which takes tym to develop its taste.. You will never like it in one go..
"hOW IS vIKAS pIYA?? and Aadi??" Mami asked making Shilpa stop drinking her water.. Well she was just gulping down the food anyhow.. Like it was a punishment for her..
"They are good!! Aadi bohat shararti hogaya hai!!! Poora ghar sar pe uthaye rakhta hai!!" Armaan giggled making other giggle and Shilpa confuse.. Like seriously?? they also know Vikas Piya?
"He is very cute!! Last i saw him he was of 2 weeks!!" Eisha made a face sending more shocks to Shilpa.. How on earth they went to see Aadi??
"And Vikas bhai even let me hold him!!!" Maya told excitedly..
"Yes Maya!! He trusted his son's life with you!!" Sanaya taunted making Maya frown.. "Main girati nahi ussko.."
"Acha ab laroo nahi.." Mamoo stopped the three.. "Aur tum log kab tak ho yahan?? kuch plan karte hain!!" he added looking at ArSh..
"Do din aur.." Armaan crashed the plans..
"Kyun???" The three sisters yelled together.. He was runing their plan.. It gets some time to connect in with long unseen relative hough from Malliks side Armaan was the only one visited frequently over his trips in London.. Anyways.. connection was just coming back and he is saying that its a bye bye!!
"Kyunki... i am on an office trip.." He tried to explain..
"Bhae yeh kya baat hoti hai??" Eisha frowned..
"Come on Armaan!!" Mamo too took his daughter's side..
"Bhae North Side pe kaam aur stay hai!! Ek add dafa beech mein chakkar laga sakta hun.. isse zyaada not in my hands!" He showed up his hands..
"Tum aur tumhare advanture... baraf se dhaka hua hoga wahan!!" He shook his head.. "Lekin khatam hone k baad to kuch din ruk sakte ho!!" He said..
"Haha!! Vikas will kill me! Aliya aur Piya donow usske bechare k sar pe akele!!" He laughed..
"Yeh valid point hai!! Bechara!!" Mamoo nodded at this and Shilpa was still in her delimma.. She was like.. "Bus bahar niklein yahan se.. i am gona extract each and evry info!"

"Ab ye Ravi kaun hai?? Aur ye bhaiya bhabhi se itne close kese hain?? Aur app mujhe batate kyun nahi hai kahin le jaane se pehle?? I feel like stupid! sitting and listening.." She blasted at him in the cab.. "Aur kab se khana khana kiya ja rahe thai?? poori baat nahi bata sakte thai pehle?? Khana pada mujhe wo sab.." She yelled more..
"Hum kal raat baat kar rahe thai! Tum beech mein so gayi or else you would have known!!" He defended himself.. "Phir subha bhi tum soti rahi.. Baad mein i missed out.."
"Haan!! yeh acha explanation hai!!" She gritted her teeth..
"Anyways.. Hummm ice cream kha sakte hain! Tumhara taste behtar ho jayega!" He tried to manofy her..
"Mujhe nahi khaani!!" She huffed..
"Acha Ravi is our last stop!!" He said..
"Lekin yeh hai kaun?? aur wo itne close kese hogaye bhaiya bhabhi se??" She wasn't kust getting it..
"Bhae... Ravi Piya ka bhai hai!!" He replied..
"Huh??" Her jaw dropped down..
"Yup!! Wo Piya ka bhai hai.. aur unski mom bhi uske saath rehti hain! So technically we will be visiting your bhabhi's maayka!!" He pressed his lips together..
"And don't tell me you guys are also... close fndz!!" She surely felt like fainting..
"Ermmm... unki shaadi mein mulaqat hui thi!! Phir equation kuch aise paalti k.. un donow mein se koi call na uthae to mere pass call ata hai!! aurrr.. Mujhe taane maarne bhi kabhi ajata hai!! Jab Piya Ravi ko jealous karne ki koshish karti hai wo sab kaam mere naam daal k jo main pagal hone k baad bhi uske liye na karun!!" He made a face and said..
"Haaan???" Shilpa felt like her head spinning.. She had her complexes about how Piya's family will react towards her because of the past fiasco.. "Main nahi jaoongii!!" She refused..
"Ahmmm.." He saw that coming..
silence...
"Armaan!! main sach mein keh rahi hoon main nahi jaoongii!!" She warned again if he is not taking her seriously...

...

They were now sitting in a coffee shop having hot green tea where he was trying to give her sometime and explain.. "Abb... Pardes mein koi bhi apna mil jaye to zyaada khushi hoti hai.. so, thats how they are close!! Plus.. Mamoo Vikas ko jaante thai coz wo ghar ata tha aur unki shaadi k tym bht masti ki hai hum logon ne.." He explained her the connection...
"So... they celebrate festives together??" She gave it a thought and say...
"Yup!! Aurr.. Shilpa! Tumhe kyun lagta hai k tumhara unke pangon se kuch bhi leyna deyna tha.. Tum logon k beech jo bhi ghalat sahi tha that was between u and vikas!! Piya ki family ka isse kuch leyna deyna nahi hai.." He tried to convince her..
"Phir bhi.." She was a bit shaky about it..
"Yaar!! Tum meri biwi hone ki hesiyaat se wahan ja rahi ho!! And i would have dodged it if i could!! Lekin in sab se inter connected hoon.. Mamo se milun ar unse na milun.. nahi ho sakta!" He explained..
"Main comfortable nahi hoon!" She made a face..
"Acha! Phir hum room mein lock ho k bethte hain! Kyunki agar hum sight seeing k liye gaye aur kahin koi takra gaya to phir tum bhaag jana wahan se.." He was right on his part..
"Shilpa!!!" He kept his hand over her.. "Biwi ho tum meri! What makes you think k main jaan boojh k tumhe aisi kisi bhi situation mein daalun gaa jahan tum khud ko inferior mehsoos karo??" He asked gently..
"App khud kehte hain k shuru mein appne bhi mujhe relate karne ki koshish ki thi uss sab scene se.. to phir wo kyun nahi karenge?? Unki beti k saath zyaadti ho hui thi naa!!" She spoke up..
"Haan ki thi!! Lekin tab na main tumhe dhung se jaanta tha na tum meri kuch thi!! Aur main uss baat k liye tumse nmaafi maang chuka hun!" He answered her.. "Aur wese bhi.. Main apne kisi janne wale k ghar apni biwi ko le k ja raha hun!! Piya ki nand ko nahi.." He was determined with his words and she couldn't do anything about it but to agree to go...

...

"Uhhh..." Shilpa's jaw dropped down the way she was welcomed... It was kind of surprising since she expected few weirdo looks but it turned out a complete opposite! She was welcomed with open arm Anddd... She was even provided with Gifts there because she visited for the first time and those people were not there at their wedding..
He was so right! Not even for a second she felt like they were connecting her with Piya Vikas any moment.. She was just Armaan's wife.
"Arrreee... kal pata hai kya hua??" Ravi told Armaan excitedly..
"Ulta he hua hoga!!" Armaan narrowed his eyes at him..
"Aadi k haath mein shayad Piya k phone tha ussne dabaya kuch idhar udhar, whatsapp pe call mil gaya mujhe.." Ravi revealed and Armaan's heart came in his throat.. "Rohail na ajaye beech mein.." He bit his lower lip..
"To kaat dete... kya pata kesi baatein chal rahi hon??" Armaan composed himself quickly and said... "Huh!! kaat he deta!!" Ravi made a face.. "Lekin aisi entertaining conversations hon to kese chor dun??" A wicked smile appared over his face..
"Rehne do... Mujhe maaf karo.." Armaan held his hands infront of him.. "Dobara unhi sab se paala parna hai!!" He made a face..
"Tch!! value nahi hai tumhe.." Ravi snored..
"Let me guess!! Vikas victom tha!! Kuch tym baad main jaoonga main ho jaoonga!!! To tujhe he ye entertainment mubarak ho!!" Armaan shook his head..
"Hahahaha!!!" Ravi laughed out..

"Acha ab khana kha k jana tum log.." Piya's mother said..
"Please!! Abhi saza bhugat k aye hain!!" Armaan held his hands together crying..
"Hehe Korean speciality!!" Ravi cracked up..
"Sab ko pata hai??" Shilpa asked slowly.. It just came out of her mouth..
"Bohat batameez ho tum log!!" Piya mom shook her head and scolded the two boys.. "Kitne pyaar aur mehnat se banati hai wo.."
"Unke pyaar ko dekhte hue he ajj tak kisi ne nahi bataya unhe k humay zara bhi pasand nahi wo dishes.." Ravi defended himself.. "Aur roz ka khana acha banati hain wo.. Indian he banta hai unke yahan bhi lekin.. kuch special ho to phir koi na koi korean dish uth k ajati hai!!" He did parised her aswell..
"Aur wo bhi white he hoti hai!!" Armaan commented and this practically made everyone sitting there crack up into fits of laughter..

...

"Bade gifts batoor liye!!" He said after coming out of the bathroom all ready to go to sleep.. She was sitting on the bed in her night dress with Gifts she received today all around her, opening them one by one..
"Yeh kitna pyaara hai na??" She showed him the bedcover set Mami gifted her..
"Ohh!! Colors hai iss mein actually!!" Armaan made fun of the white house making Shilpa giggle.. "Hehehe... Nice people!!" She commented..
"Yeah! Very Nice.. " He lied down on the bed flat and said.. "Aur?? tumhare saare darr nikal gaye doosri side se??" He asked..
"Hmmm... i guess main bohat apprehensive thi!!" She accepted.. "Maza aya mujhe.. lekin" She pressed her lips together.. "Kuch.." She gave it was thought what felt missing..
"Bhae normal families thi!! Ab humare jese fankaar to hote nahi sab!!" He commented...
"Haaan!! Drame missing thai naa!!" She laughed...
"Hehh tumhe ghar ki adat hogayi hai!! Isiliye.." It was kind of a happy moment for him..
"True!!" She said putting all the stuff away.. "Kuch he din hue hain lekin.. i think main sab se zyaada Rahul aur Rohail ki commentary miss kar rahi hoon!!" She admitted..
"Don't worry!! Pagal khane he jaana hai end mein.. Kuch din karlo bardaasht!!" He passed her a pity look making her wonder what is so crazy about this mad house?? She had seen Aliya, Vikas and Piya before but then they seems normal, Vikas she had known since childhood.. So what is so crazy about this??
"Hehh..." She lied down next to him closing the lights.. "Thuk gaye?" She asked looking at him.. He had his eyes closed..
"Hmmm..." He nodded in a yes..
"To... yeh mamoo wagera ka India chakkar nahi lagta?" She asked..
"Nahi.. " He took the side pillow and turned on his side to get a better confy position... "Reasons honge unke kuch personal, main keh nahi sakta.." He should his low knowledge on this.. "Mom aur Maasi lagate rehte hain chakkar kabhi mauqa lagay to.." He added..
"Betiyaan achi hain unki.. Mujhe laga nahi tha k hum logon jesi hongi!!" She shared about her presumptions..
"To kya laga tha tumhe?? Alien hongi??" He opened his eyes for a moment and looked at her arching his brow..
"Uh.." She made a face.. "I thought yahan k logon ki tarah hongi.. maybe a korean mix by appearence.." She said..
"Haan! wese itefaaq hai k ek bhi mami pe nahi gayi... Lekin upbringing achi hai!!" He also commented on that.. "Mera he ana jana zyaada hota hai London to mujhse free hain thoda.." he added..
"Lekin Aliya ki to fan dikh rahi thi!!" She chuckled..
"Uhhh... jab se bechari ki sagai hui hai Rohail se... jese celebrity samajh liya hai sab ne usse!! Zindagii azaab banai hui hai bechari ki.." He sighed taking Aliya's side..
"Kya matlab hai?? main to ache way mein keh rahi thi.." She tried to clear out..
"Yaar.. technically dekho.. to wo maasi ki bhaanji hai!! Unki apni he hai har lihaaz hai.. Ab adoption k baan pe bechari ki shuru se he sab ne zindagii azaab banai hui hai.. Duniya k saare bache ulte seedhe kaam karen wo theek!! Lekin Aliya se zara sa kuch ho jaye bus..." He took a deep breath..
"Society k pange.. we can't do anything about it!!" Shilpa too rolled her eyes.. It was not like she had never faced that scrutiny..
"Aliya jo haina wese... sirf apne ghar k andar he thi jo thi!! Mauritius ja k bhi jo ussko free hand mila hai wo bhi wahan he tak tha!! Ye to Rohail se engagement k baad hua hai k wo ab social media aur idhar udhar bhi free chal rahi hai!!" He explained..
"Haan!! sagai k baad ek fiance ka thappa bhi lag jaata hai!! Usske hisaab se jiyo zindagii!!" She gritted her teeth..
"Maine kaunse restrictions lagaye thai tumpe jo gussa ho rahi ho??" He opened his eyes and frowned..
"Nahi lagaye thai naa!! App to maze se bahar bethe thai!! Yahan a ke dekhte.. kitne pareshaan thai sab iss baat se!!" She made him laugh... "Hahahaha!! So jao!!" He said and drifted off to sleep..

Next day was kind of more fun because Armaan had his office car and he was driving... He did have international and other required liscenses because it keeps travelling and it was his need now..

"Meusiums pasand hai tumhe??" This came as a surprise to him..
"As long as they are interesting!!" She looked at him with the corner of her eyes and once again inserted the straw in her mouth..

He had planned a trip of few malls and tourism spots which were easy considering winters.. Everything seems so white and snowy and beautiful.. "Adha din to apka office mein lag gaya.." She said looking at him as he mentally calculated where and for how much time..
"Uhmmm.. chup to raho ek minute.." He shut her down and stopped the car after a while.. "If i am not wrong, back jana tha!!" He said..
"Very good!! raasta bhi bhool gaye!!" She shook her head at him..

"Naah!!" He looked at his phone and denied.. "I think yahan koi exhibition lagi hai.. aur peeche meuseum hai.." He pointed at front.. They both got out of the car and as they walked forward and a bit inside, Shilpa after reading the exhibition name insisted to go in and see.. It was a "Wedding Exhibition"..

They went inside, hung their jackets aside and there it was... It was everything and all about wedding at one place.. dresses, decorations, books, cake, food, rings and everything you need for the cathelic wedding, name it and it was there..

"Wow!!" Came out of her mouth.. "Just to remind you.. we are already married!!" He felt like saying so.. She turned her face to him narrowing her eyes.. "Pata hai mujhe!"

"Tips and Tricks for a Successful Marriage", "Soul of the marriage", "Foundation of Marriage" As they roamed around, he came across several books which made him shake his head.. "Chalo ji.. Bohat jald schools mein ye bhi ek subject hoga!!" He said making her giggle..

Then there was cake and other food items tasting.. "Yeh sab free!!" She tasted a bite of something and said because it felt delicious and they were having it for free.. "Aur enterence pe jo ticket k paise diye hain wo??" He asked and she ignored.. Yes it was a stupid question..

Floral decorations just took her heart and he was like.. "How on earth and average earner afford this much??"
"Are you thinking of getting married??" The lady in her early 40's asked.. She was showing the bridal gowns..
"Already married!!! In a BIG FAT wedding!!" Armaan quickly said as if he will not, the lady will make him bankrupt and once again make marry his very own wife..

They saw the whole exhibition and were way on heading out when the same lady at bridal gown counter came running towards them... It turns out that the there was suppose to be a small ramp walk taking place for the bridal gowns showcase with the perfect jewelry and all..
The model who was supposed to do it just fell at the back and now was unable to walk.. It was a last minute disaster and no one was available with the right body to put that dress on.. And that dress was the higlight of all so can't be ignored.. Other models were not professional but different size ladies to tell that you don't have to be slim and curvy to put on a bridal gown and look good..

Shilpa had a fair complexion, she had a face and features which kind of blend in with both.. Asian and Western!! Even there between all those white london women, she was not looking odd or much of an outsider...

"Uhh No!!" Shilpa instantly refused whereas Armaan started having fun now.. The lady was trying to convince her and Shilpa was looking at Armaan that he would say something but Mr Husband was doing nothing except for smiling and looking around...
"It will look just perfect on you!!" The lady pleaded again and when she pleaded so much Armaan finally decided to step in.. "Could you just give her a few minutes.." He tried to excuse..
"I don't have time.. just 25 minutes! Mam please help me!! Sir please!!" She again pleaded.. It was about her reputation.. If the dress will not go on a perfect body, everything will be ruined..
"App kya hasse ja rahe hain uss waqt se???" She glared at him as the lady with hopeful eyes gave them some space..
"What?? You loved the dress!! Aur tum try karna chahti ho!" He said as a matter of fact.. He did saw how she adored all those gowns..
"Trial Rooms hote hain usske liye.." She mocked at him..
"I am not saying anything.. Lekin yahan log bus itne he hain!!" He pointed around... It was not a peak hour and very less people were around.. "Koi tumhe nahi jaanta!! Mauqa tumhe phir aisa milne nahi wala.." He raised his shoulder in the air..
"To app kehna chah rahe hain k main ramp walk karun ja ke??" She looked at him with the eyes as if something bad has happened to him..
"Nah!! i am just saying.. mauqa hai! no one is judging!! Dobara yahan kisi se milna nahi and maybe if i like that dress on you i might buy it!" He teased her at the end..
"Haan!! Kahin bhi nahi pehne k liye.." She made a face knowing he is making fun of her..
"Your choice..." He chuckled.. "I like that drink!" He pointed at the corner and walked forwad to have it leaving it all alone to take her decision.. "What the hell??" She was shocked looking at him going away to grab that drink.. "No one does that!!" Came out of her mouth.. He surely was prooving himself to be a different kind of husband.

...

She looked at herself in the mirror and thought.. What is not new about that whole look? Everything was new.. Her makeup which was more of simple, natural and at the same time probably one of those looks she will surely like to wear every day. The white gown with a little silver was just out of this world.. The way her hairs were done!! Everything was so so just beautiful.. He was right!! She will never get a chance to try anything like that ever..
"Can't do this.." She gulped down the lump under her throat.. Ramp walk! okay maybe it was a small one but it needs different kind of confidence she doesn't have.. She asked herself if she was nervous about going out there or she was nervous about going out infront of Armaan..
She kept on thinking and shivering and just like that the time came and without her preparation or knowledge she was dragged on the floor where she has to walk..

He was standing with his back resting against a pillar of the books counter with one of those books in his hands to see what rubbish is written inside.. The claps and hawl hade him look up and get ready as the gown show started.. "Like seriously??" He shook his head.. In all shapes and sizes, the ladies walked in different bridal gowns and then there was his lady!!
What should be the word?? Smitten? Mesmerized? Or any other?? He could say what would be correct to describe the effect she was having over him right now.. A smile graced his lips and next thing he knew was that he was capturing her once in a life time sight in his phone..
She saw him smiling at her and then that wink of his along with the sign of perfect with the help of his hand.. She tried to hide her smile and blush and looked away.. It was time to turn, go back and get the hell out of there..

...

"Ohh thank you so much dear!! that was just lovely!" The lady thanked Shilpa for saving her day and reputation and offered her a glass filled with some red drink which Shilpa presumed was Alcohlic..
"No i..." Shilpa opened her mouth to refuse when someone called the lady and she almost ran.. Big deal!! Everyone was just running around here and there for work in this exhibition.. She saw here and there if she could find a table to put that glass on but this hall way was all empty..
She took her steps to walk outside, put the drink away and got to Armaan.. To her surprise, she found her near the door only talking to some man in hindi.. "Ab yeh kaun mil gaya inko??" She shook her head and took a step only to put it back and stood still on her spot.. A sense of fear/shiver touched her inside..

...

"Submission date is after a week on 10th! Aur bahar notice board pe allocated teams k naam lagay hain! All the best!" The collage Professor made the announcement in the class and walked out..
This was about the assignment for the mid terms.. The class was divided into four groups, each one allocated with a different topic, each group had teams and each team has two students in it.. It wasn't just the assigmnet submission but also the viva thats gona be conducted afterwards from it.
"Urghh.. Ab ye Swam Shah kaun hai? Never heard of him!!" Shilpa made a face.. She was already very much in stress regarding this assignment because the topic she has gotten, she hates it to core and now this stranger as a partner to work over it..
"Shilpa Malhotra???" Someone called out her name loudly at the canteen area making her look up and frown..
"Wow!! He is hawt!" Khushi teased Shilpa.. She was her collage bestie..
"Psycho!!" Shilpa rolled her eyes and stood up before he makes her famous by calling her name loud again and again..
"Ohh!! I guess..." He smiled looking at Shilpa who was passing him deadly looks.. "Your team mate!" Shilpa introduced herself..
They two talked around for few minutes and Shilpa Malhotra instintly hated him because whatever she proposes, he just shuts her out saying its not unique and old fashioned making her feel like dumb and good for nothing..
Anyways, they decided to research on their own and after 3 days will have a long meeting in which both will share their research and will work on the assignment..

...

"Ab iss ghatiya topic se pehle uss Swam Shah pe research karni padegi!!" Shilpa gritted her teeth telling Muskaan all about it over the phone.. Muskaan's grandfather was on death bed and so, she and her mother were out of Mumbai..
"Uhhh karo jo tumhe karna hai! I am just glad k mera topic bhi asaan hai aur meri partner Shaina hai! Ab yahan se kaam karna easy ho jayega mere liye aur hopefully Viva aur midterm tak wapas ajaoongi aur koi masla nahi hoga!!" Muskaan was thanking on her own for what she has got..
"Haan yaar!! Shaina sweet hai! Aur usse tumhari achi banti bhi hai... lekin yeh Swam Shah itna attitude mein hai k meri har baat reject kar raha hai!!" She complaint..
"Hmm.. Acha mujhe mama bula rahi hain! main chalti hoon!!" Saying so, Muskaan hung up and Shilpa sat down to think for her first move..
It turned out that Swam Shah had a rich background and he was very much involved in real office work from the beginning with his father which makes him have all the practical experience and that studies are not much difficult for him.. He was a focused guy and so whatever he has chosen to study is because he is performing it all out there in the real world..
Shilpa noticed in the class.. He sits at the very back and listens to professors very non seriously as if saying Dude! i know it all, tell me something that i don't know.

"Na na na!! yeh aise nahi hoga.." He shook his head at Shilpa when the two of them sat down for the assignment after those 3 days.. "Dekho! Main batata hun!!" He started explaining things to Shilpa which she just have to bite her tongue and digest.. She hated the fact that this man knows hell alot than needed and is so correct that she just cannot compete him..

...

"Tumhe hasna nahi ata??" Shilpa pointed out between the work they were doing since morning...
"Abhi hassa to baad mein rone ko mile ga.. And i do wana top!!" He rolled his tongue inside and said..
"Mere papa kehte hain! Creativity comes from vision!! Aur yahan... subha se..." She looked around at that ceiling and walls and books.. "I am sorry!! Depression asakta hai khali!" She made a face and that actually made him laugh.. "Hahaha!! Tum bore ho rahi ho??" He asked..
"Ofcorse!! Project to solely appka hai!! Main to show piece ki tarah bethi hoon!!" She taunted slamming the fact that she is not liking it..
"Okay then... Miss Creater!! Create the enviornment!!" He smiled at her and challanged..
"I will.." Shilpa shot him a look and getting up went outside the room.. It was a rainy day out of blue and so very less students were around. Luckily thet helped the two and let them have an entire class room free to work in..

She came back with some Mc Donald meal in her hands and keeping it down, started openeing up the windows.. "Arre ye kya kar rahi ho??" Swam frowned..
"Bahar baarish ho rahi hai! Hawa bilkul nahi chal rahi hai.. Kuch nahi urree gaa itni akal mujh mein bhi hai.." She rolled her eyes and said.. She was tired of sitting in this class room with him since morning with windows and fans closed..
"Have some!! 5 minute mein kuch nahi ho jayega!!" She taunted putting the bag in between..
"Hehh.." He lightly smiled shaking his head at her and same forward to eat.. "You know.. meri pehli rai tumhare baare mein bohat he ghalat thi!!" Swam commented..
"Lekin meri sahi thi!!" She retorted back..
"You are actually not that bad!!" He continued with his..
"But you are over smart!!" She continued her own...
"I am not!! Mera buss goal hai!! Junoon hai... i wana acheive!!" He for once was talking to her apart from the project..
"Acha.. aur baaki sab velle hain!!" She spoke out sarcastically..
"Nahi.. bus unki life mein abhi goal nahi hai.. kitnow ko to pata he nahi hai k unhe kya karna hai!! Ladke masti mein magan hain aur ladkiyaan apni shaadi k sapne sajane mein.." He looked outside the window and said..
"Aur tumhari life mein bohat bada goal hai!!" Shilpa shook her head at him..
"Dekha!! Tum meri baat ko seriously nahi sunn rahi ho!!! You think.. mera dimagh kharab hai! aur main apne app ko over smart samajhta hoon isliye bohat badi badi phek raha hoon.." He looked at her and said..
"Fine.. To..Mr Swam Shah!! kya goal hai apki life ka??" She asked taking a bite of her burger..
"I wan provide peace!!" He smiled and said..
"To world??" She stretched her lips together to form a fake smile..
"Whatever!! My bill and get back to work.." He kept the money down and taking another bite of the burger, walked forward towards the books..
"O hello.." Shilpa frowned seeing him pay the money like that..
"I love that meal and mujhe price ka achi tarah pata hai! Aur paise ek dum exact half hain!! Check kar lo.." He cleared out even before she will start..
"Lekin iski zaroorat nahi thi.." Shilpa said..
"Main ehsaan nahi rakhta kisi ka!" He said while throwing the wrapper in the dustbin leaving Shilpa speech less and stare at him for a moment.. Till now she hasn't met anyone like him yet.. He was not just different but interesting..

Sameera😉

Edited by sameera_12 - 8 years ago

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princess08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#715

hey... i m commenting for the first tym but had been wanting to do it since a month or so but was not getting the time

i am loving this story...its unique...n one of those which have kept me thinking about it and imagine the upcoming scenarios

starting from last update

it was good...everything looked so natural...but plz dont show some past between shilpa and swam...not from shilpa's side...i mean not let the persons in the precap be shilpa and swam

i love the bonding u show in ur story specially the mallik's, the brothers, and the mad house

but i am confused related many things

1. the thing which i think everyone have asked u till now i.e. armaan and nidhi...i know u have cleared many things related to them...

but as armaan said they are not betraying someone but they are...they loved each other, they mean the world to each other n all is ryt when seen their history but they have no right to involve shilpa and sid in their complicated life and still not move on...they said that they will love each other forever which is not correct...u cant love two people at the same time...do u realize how shilpa or sid will feel when they come to know of everything...they trust their friendship and what they both are doing? their trust will be gone..n moreover for sometime nidhi just focussed on sid but armaan never did that...and they still are comparing their wife/husband with each other...they need to understand that everyone is different and they have to adjust to it...they need to make decision and let go atleast one love of them

2. armaan to choose between shilpa and nidhi- i know u said there will be no such situation now that armaan married shilpa but u said that he will without any thought choose nidhi over anyone so what if a situation arises when he has to choose between them...not totally like for life...but what if both are in danger or both want to spend the exact day with him...will he still choose nidhi...why they both are not ready to accept the change

3. equation of armaan and shilpa- i am completely confused over their equation...sometimes armaan is like he loves shilpa but the next movement is like he has done everything till now because he was forced to do so...but nidhi was right...he was never forced...he just chose shilpa because she was the first one who he could look to after nidhi...is it fair...does he really love her...because his love for shilpa and nidhi are completely different...he could not stand a tear in nidhi eye...he is over possessive and over protective...which he is not with shilpa

4. mad house- everyone in the mad house compares shilpa with nidhi even vikas...how can they do that after even knowing the conditions in which she has been bought up...they need to understand that so much of her teachings is not going to change over night...she likes privacy and does not understand adjustment because she was never taught otherwise...whatever is happening with muskan is not because of her..it is because of dadi but even muskan is blaming her...she toh knows her from childhood know...everyone blamed her when she gave more importance to her career but that was fair enough...they knew their partners before making choice...shilpa did not...how would she know about armaan or his family...and considering what she had seen in her family since childhood she was correct and any girl in today's world will have similar fears...moreover she is very easy to be manipulated but that is how she is...u told know that armaan was same...not adjusting not sharing kind of guy but then things changed because of that incident but shilpa has not faced anything such...n whatever she feels or express is related to her upbringing and her views from childhood...n armaan is like i will change her but he should understand her too na...n do u think after all these things they will accept shilpa without comparing her with nidhi...n after their comparison...shilpa will be comfortable between them..also nidhi has started blaming her for their ruined lives for what her grandfather did but she had no hands in it right

5. first when u expressed the story it was something else but when u revealed all the under points, it became shocking because all armaan gestures then appeared as mere forced ones...not loving and caring which it looked like before...so was it really like what he told in his pov or how it was shown earlier...n then malliks also consider what society says right after how armaan revealed everything so atleast he should understand her...i am not saying that he does not every time but still many times he does not

i am sorry if u felt bad but i just wanted to know these things...there are many n many confusions...just show once a situation in which armaan supports shilpa and not nidhi...

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@Zasika_khan12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#716

Originally posted by: princess08
hey... i m commenting for the first tym but had been wanting to do it since a month or so but was not getting the time
i am loving this story...its unique...n one of those which have kept me thinking about it and imagine the upcoming scenarios
starting from last update
it was good...everything looked so natural...but plz dont show some past between shilpa and swam...not from shilpa's side...i mean not let the persons in the precap be shilpa and swam
i love the bonding u show in ur story specially the mallik's, the brothers, and the mad house
but i am confused related many things
1. the thing which i think everyone have asked u till now i.e. armaan and nidhi...i know u have cleared many things related to them...
but as armaan said they are not betraying someone but they are...they loved each other, they mean the world to each other n all is ryt when seen their history but they have no right to involve shilpa and sid in their complicated life and still not move on...they said that they will love each other forever which is not correct...u cant love two people at the same time...do u realize how shilpa or sid will feel when they come to know of everything...they trust their friendship and what they both are doing? their trust will be gone..n moreover for sometime nidhi just focussed on sid but armaan never did that...and they still are comparing their wife/husband with each other...they need to understand that everyone is different and they have to adjust to it...they need to make decision and let go atleast one love of them
2. armaan to choose between shilpa and nidhi- i know u said there will be no such situation now that armaan married shilpa but u said that he will without any thought choose nidhi over anyone so what if a situation arises when he has to choose between them...not totally like for life...but what if both are in danger or both want to spend the exact day with him...will he still choose nidhi...why they both are not ready to accept the change
3. equation of armaan and shilpa- i am completely confused over their equation...sometimes armaan is like he loves shilpa but the next movement is like he has done everything till now because he was forced to do so...but nidhi was right...he was never forced...he just chose shilpa because she was the first one who he could look to after nidhi...is it fair...does he really love her...because his love for shilpa and nidhi are completely different...he could not stand a tear in nidhi eye...he is over possessive and over protective...which he is not with shilpa
4. mad house- everyone in the mad house compares shilpa with nidhi even vikas...how can they do that after even knowing the conditions in which she has been bought up...they need to understand that so much of her teachings is not going to change over night...she likes privacy and does not understand adjustment because she was never taught otherwise...whatever is happening with muskan is not because of her..it is because of dadi but even muskan is blaming her...she toh knows her from childhood know...everyone blamed her when she gave more importance to her career but that was fair enough...they knew their partners before making choice...shilpa did not...how would she know about armaan or his family...and considering what she had seen in her family since childhood she was correct and any girl in today's world will have similar fears...moreover she is very easy to be manipulated but that is how she is...u told know that armaan was same...not adjusting not sharing kind of guy but then things changed because of that incident but shilpa has not faced anything such...n whatever she feels or express is related to her upbringing and her views from childhood...n armaan is like i will change her but he should understand her too na...n do u think after all these things they will accept shilpa without comparing her with nidhi...n after their comparison...shilpa will be comfortable between them..also nidhi has started blaming her for their ruined lives for what her grandfather did but she had no hands in it right
5. first when u expressed the story it was something else but when u revealed all the under points, it became shocking because all armaan gestures then appeared as mere forced ones...not loving and caring which it looked like before...so was it really like what he told in his pov or how it was shown earlier...n then malliks also consider what society says right after how armaan revealed everything so atleast he should understand her...i am not saying that he does not every time but still many times he does not

i am sorry if u felt bad but i just wanted to know these things...there are many n many confusions...just show once a situation in which armaan supports shilpa and not nidhi...

I agree with her...

Armaan was shown to have different pov in initial chapters like

"Armaan k bache tu bohat bara bhund kar chuka hai aj... aj campus mein issi k saath jhagra kiya aur to aur jaate jaate yeh bhi poocha k have we met before??? mujhe lagta hai meine apko kahin dekha hai??? My Foot!!! Gaaliyaan de rahi hogi wo iss waqt mujhe... Usse laga hoga meine na sirf usse tight wala ignore mara hai bal k insult bhi kiya hai..." Armaan hit his head against his palm...

If he wanted to insult her why would he have thoughts like this..instead "Maza aaya" something kuch aisa hota...

Different and New Feelings were not only developing in Shilpa' Heart but in Armaan Mallik's Heart too... For him, it was like as if he is exploring a totally new and different side of himself... Never Ever in His Past Life he dreamed of something happening like this with him... He was sure, it wasn't just attraction... No matter how much he fought with his family for arranging this Roka ceremony so sudden without even asking him but he can't deny the fact that he liked everything... So what if was not ready for it... Feeling of Accepting someone who is a total stranger to you was totally different and kind of a ticklish... But That was His Stranger Only! His Special Stranger!!

Shilpa did succeed in developing a brand new place in his heart which will be totally Hers...

This was always contradicting...there are many more in the initial chapters.

I think after the revelation...the story turned into a different version ..may be like a spin off with a different version...with the same background. ..

But the unique and enjoyable parts of ur ffs are light moments whether it's between brothers, couples, family members...I think Rahul and Rohail's bickerings are too much fun...

And regarding Armaan-Nidhi...they are cheating on their spouses...no second thoughts on that. ...and here Sameera also agrees. But this can't be excused in the name of mistake...cheating is never a mistake...a mistake is not something which u are aware of and then too you are hell bent on continuing it. Nidhi felt broken when in jungle Armaan was trying to escape...any person would have done the same time in that situation. ...but then too Nidhi's trust was broken ..and armaan was guilty...What about their spouses..the moment they will get to know they will be shattered...u know when a betrayal comes from a very closed one...specially ur life partner...u just shatter!!!! It happens that you don't get everything what u desire...Armaan wanted Nidhi..but life had other plans...to Shilpa ki zindagi kyu barbad kar raha hai...I do not sympathise with him at all...he could have married Nidhi easily...(I don't get his choosing funda...) but he married Shilpa...I think he wanted to have both...

There are people like that ...but here the wife walks out after knowing the truth...and She should ...dont show Shilpa staying with him even after knowing the truth!!!

I think comparisons shouldn't be done..but practically it happens...it's very natural but apna past dekh kar bolen thoda. .Piya also didn't use to like Armaan initially. ...BONDING comes with time..it doesn't happen in minutes.

Nidhi always playing the victim card doesn't go down well..one minute crying for Sid and another moment for Armaan...She was blaming Armaan for that..tumhe itna pyaar tha to bolna tha na...even after the kiss ..no confrontations..nothing.

Armaan-Shilpa are better friends that being a couple like this.

Armaan has always an excuse for doings..no ounce of guilt for destroying someone's life...lost control Shilpa provoked him...poor soul doesn't even know about his khurafati brain...

Mr.Control Freak's control flys away in the air by just one look of hers..NOW THIS IS COMPLICATED!!!!

Edited by Zasika_khan12 - 8 years ago

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princess08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: Zasika_khan12
I agree with her...
Armaan was shown to have different pov in initial chapters like
"Armaan k bache tu bohat bara bhund kar chuka hai aj... aj campus mein issi k saath jhagra kiya aur to aur jaate jaate yeh bhi poocha k have we met before??? mujhe lagta hai meine apko kahin dekha hai??? My Foot!!! Gaaliyaan de rahi hogi wo iss waqt mujhe... Usse laga hoga meine na sirf usse tight wala ignore mara hai bal k insult bhi kiya hai..." Armaan hit his head against his palm...
If he wanted to insult her why would he have thoughts like this..instead "Maza aaya" something kuch aisa hota...
Different and New Feelings were not only developing in Shilpa' Heart but in Armaan Mallik's Heart too... For him, it was like as if he is exploring a totally new and different side of himself... Never Ever in His Past Life he dreamed of something happening like this with him... He was sure, it wasn't just attraction... No matter how much he fought with his family for arranging this Roka ceremony so sudden without even asking him but he can't deny the fact that he liked everything... So what if was not ready for it... Feeling of Accepting someone who is a total stranger to you was totally different and kind of a ticklish... But That was His Stranger Only! His Special Stranger!!
Shilpa did succeed in developing a brand new place in his heart which will be totally Hers...
This was always contradicting...there are many more in the initial chapters.
I think after the revelation...the story turned into a different version ..may be like a spin off with a different version...with the same background. ..
But the unique and enjoyable parts of ur ffs are light moments whether it's between brothers, couples, family members...I think Rahul and Rohail's bickerings are too much fun...
And regarding Armaan-Nidhi...they are cheating on their spouses...no second thoughts on that. ...and here Sameera also agrees. But this can't be excused in the name of mistake...cheating is never a mistake...a mistake is not something which u are aware of and then too you are hell bent on continuing it. Nidhi felt broken when in jungle Armaan was trying to escape...any person would have done the same time in that situation. ...but then too Nidhi's trust was broken ..and armaan was guilty...What about their spouses..the moment they will get to know they will be shattered...u know when a betrayal comes from a very closed one...specially ur life partner...u just shatter!!!! It happens that you don't get everything what u desire...Armaan wanted Nidhi..but life had other plans...to Shilpa ki zindagi kyu barbad kar raha hai...I do not sympathise with him at all...he could have married Nidhi easily...(I don't get his choosing funda...) but he married Shilpa...I think he wanted to have both...
There are people like that ...but here the wife walks out after knowing the truth...and She should ...dont show Shilpa staying with him even after knowing the truth!!!
I think comparisons shouldn't be done..but practically it happens...it's very natural but apna past dekh kar bolen thoda. .Piya also didn't use to like Armaan initially. ...BONDING comes with time..it doesn't happen in minutes.
Nidhi always playing the victim card doesn't go down well..one minute crying for Sid and another moment for Armaan...She was blaming Armaan for that..tumhe itna pyaar tha to bolna tha na...even after the kiss ..no confrontations..nothing.
Armaan-Shilpa are better friends that being a couple like this.
Armaan has always an excuse for doings..no ounce of guilt for destroying someone's life...lost control Shilpa provoked him...poor soul doesn't even know about his khurafati brain...
Mr.Control Freak's control flys away in the air by just one look of hers..NOW THIS IS COMPLICATED!!!!

That is what is always confusing me while reading the story...i mean i understand their views but everyone just blame everything on shilpa and armaan & nidhi always have excuses for their actions...i know they faced alot but that does not mean na ki they will remain victim for their life...everyone is like armaan is always right n nidhi is always the victim...

n initial chapters should not have any pov of armaan if later it was to be shown that what he felt was completely opposite

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Zashna Khan

@Zasika_khan12

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: princess08

That is what is always confusing me while reading the story...i mean i understand their views but everyone just blame everything on shilpa and armaan & nidhi always have excuses for their actions...i know they faced alot but that does not mean na ki they will remain victim for their life...everyone is like armaan is always right n nidhi is always the victim...
n initial chapters should not have any pov of armaan if later it was to be shown that what he felt was completely opposite

That's what I am saying..two different stories with the same background. ...

That's why 2-2 love ka confusion ho gaya may be...

But the writer is brilliant in the humour and fun quotient. .kudos to her for that..that's what makes this story different from other stories.

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princess08

@princess08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: Zasika_khan12
That's what I am saying..two different stories with the same background. ...
That's why 2-2 love ka confusion ho gaya may be...
But the writer is brilliant in the humour and fun quotient. .kudos to her for that..that's what makes this story different from other stories.

ya that surely is true...the whole humour quotient and also the bonding of family members and friends is very nice...n also the story is completely different...i seriously have not thought about any other story like i think about it for soo much time