RiKara SS - You and I Collide [COMPLETE] pg 63(19/4) - Page 15

Created

Last reply

Replies

485

Views

102.1k

Users

40

Likes

954

Frequent Posters

Sakura24 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: appynehra

Awesome writing!!!

waiting for more!
Pls do pm 😊

Thanks a lot!
Yes I will pm you. I'm glad you liked it!😳
Sakura24 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Hi,

As I said, the plot is thickening, I hope you're not getting bored. Since I'm doing short chapters, we still have a long way to go.

Have fun reading!

Chapter 8

Breaking walls - part one

Ragav Khanna was not an intimidating man by his physical appearance. He was of a medium built, with streaks of gray hair and a pair of cold gray eyes. It was the look in those eyes, and the hard planes of his face, which warned someone of the man's calculative nature. Something about his thin lipped smile was not right - it was too sweet - yet too artificial at the same time. As if the man was modeling for a toothpaste brand. The moment he was greeted with that smile, the man's greedy eyes boring into his own, and his hands grasping his in a hold of a coiling python, Omkara knew this man was one of the vipers in the pit - perhaps the slyest of them all.

Although he hardly associated himself with the world of his father and brother, Omkara was no stranger to the games these people played sheltered by the opulence of their lavish surrounding. He was not naive to the way that world operated, where every man was, nothing but a masked serpent bidding his time to strike. He had heard much about the man in front of him, both from Shivay and Mr. Oberoi. The inner circles called him vulture, for the man was prone to acquiring companies, stripping them to their assets and selling them off, only so that his own enterprise could grow in return. There were many tales associated with the name; most of them talked of how the man took what he wanted. Omkara could smirk at the ignorance of those who boasted of the man's luck. There was no luck associated with the man's fortune. The business Rivani hotels had been originally created by his late friend Gaurav Sharma. Ragav had been his right hand and his best friend then. He had lost his wife; the mother of his son in the same plane crash that had taken Gaurav's life. It was then Ragav Khanna had actively associated himself with the top flowing business, aiding Gaurav's widowed wife Avantika, whom he later got married to. It was inside information. That Ragav knew exactly how to drive a company to its destruction and finally bring it down to his feet. His methods were not always honorable. Some said he had a hand in Avantika's death in the year after their marriage. She had died in an motor traffic accident, along with her oldest daughter. Gauri had been the sole survivor of that original family. He did not believe most of what he heard, but looking at the man now, basking in that greedy look of his gray eyes, Omkara did not doubt the man's reputation.

He tried to return that smile, although his facial muscles felt oddly stretched. The older man was kind of impressed with him as a result of their negotiations prior that week. For the sake of his brother and the deal which was now his responsibility Omkara wanted to maintain that impression. But even with that desperate need, he could not pretend to enjoy the celebrations he had been required to part take in. He was never a fan of parties, although they were as common as rains in the monsoon in his circles. The fake show of compassion and joy sickened him to such an extent that he had started bunking most of those elite gatherings his family had hosted. This was one place he did not wanted to be at, then a part of him pulled him to that very place. Ragav played no role in that attraction.

This was a birthday celebration, of a certain person he both detested and desired. That night Gauri Kumari Sharma turned twenty two.

He could not help his eyes from wandering over the crowd every now and then when the conversation ceased to a pause, seeking those espresso color eyes, among the shifting gazes. Then when his eyes finally sought her out, breath hitched in his throat.

Ri descended the stairs, a vision of elegance in silver. The blue highlights removed from her hair which were gathered to a side, in curls of thick dark brown. Tiny studs of diamond glittered in her dainty earlobes, her eyes shimmering a notch brighter. She was dressed in a saree, the fabric emitting a subtle silver glow, hugging her willowy figure in an enticing manner. Her shoulders were left bare, flaunting the dark ink against her peach complexion, only adding to the charm that had already thickened the atmosphere with her arrival. She floated through the crowd with grace of a butterfly and reached Ragav, who snaked his arm around her waist, without even wasting a glance at her.

"Happy birthday doll," he muttered flashing that empty smile once more and reaching out to kiss her on forehead. Ri stilled the moment his lips made contact with her skin, a mixture of disgust and fear momentarily crossing her features. In the next fraction of the second, her eyes went empty as usual and her lips twisted to their usual haughty curve.

"Thank you uncle." Her tone was sugary yet dipping with venom. Ragav's grip tightened on her elbow, applying a force that was enough to water her eyes. Ri blinked and her eyes shifted to Omkara's. "Hi Omkara..." she took his name slowly, letting each syllable roll over her tongue, and smiled, seductive as a siren.

The tension from the night he left her at the gate, returned instantly, as she moved closer, eyes still holding his. Omkara said nothing, as he watched her kohl lined eyes, tracing his features greedily. That expression made his heart race with excitement and soul coil with disgust at the same time. This girl, would never learn her lesson. But he was not sure if he cared, anymore.

"Aren't you bored among the old fellows yet?" she asked then, still that smile in place. "Come, let's dance, I really love this song." Her hands swathed around his, a gentle pressure pulling him to follow her. Omkara slid her hands from her grasp, taking a brisk step back.

"I don't fancy dancing," he said simply.

"He likes breaking hearts of pretty women better," a voice said behind them. Something, dark and bitter crossed Omkara's face, his eyes went stony and jaw rigid as he fixed his eyes upon someone over her shoulder. Ri turned slowly to find a stunningly stylish woman in her late thirties, standing there in a ruby red curve hugging saree, caramel pools of her eyes simmering with something malicious, and lusty at the same time. The moment their eyes met and the woman's lips curved in to a leer, Ri knew who this could be. "Or else why would someone stay away from their fiancee for so long?" like a snake she glided to him with those words and wrapped an arm around his elbow, muttering the rest of the words to his ear, but in a voice that clearly carried them over to Ri. "I missed you darling!"

The look of disgust in his face, directed at his own self, should have satisfied her. But all Ri could feel was the burn of anger, that slowly rose from the pits of her stomach. Trying to mask the absolute murderous thoughts, she smiled, or rather displayed her teeth.

"Well have fun, you two...!" With that she turned, before some unwanted words left her traitorous mouth and ruined her entire reputation.

"But you don't refuse the birthday girl," he called after her, and against her better judgement Ri stopped. Her traitor of a heart skipping a beat as he approached her and took her hand in his, his dark gaze locking with hers for one meaningful moment. Under normal circumstances Ri would have told him to get lost, told him that she was not to be used to escape someone, or make someone jealous - Gauri Kumari Sharma did not play the trump card for someone else. But she let him lead her away, his fingers curled around her elbow, their bodies drawn close together as they stepped towards the dance floor.

She threw her head back and looked at Svetlana, who was still standing at her original position, her eyes narrowed and mouth pressed into a tight line.

"Let me borrow you fiance for a moment Svetlana," she could not help but utter. "But have fun, meanwhile!"

Something, almost a sense of triumph sized her heart, as they stood facing each other in the center of the dance floor, gazes locked once more. He took her hand in his, lacing his fingers through his with a delicate movement and pulled her closer. She could hardly feel his other hand on her waist.

"So," she said trying to sound casual, but failing to. "Fiancee and all huh?"

"You already knew," he said, as their synced steps traced the beat. She crooked an eyebrow, and he tilted his head. "I never said she was Svetlana." Ri said nothing, as he twirled her around and pulled her back into his arms. She would pay for this slip of tongue she knew, but she could hardly afford to betray Sumo's secret. Omkara should never know how she found out his life story.

She tried to do what she always did, when she was nervous.

"I was surprised you know," her tone was haughty once more. "That the man who preached me about walking into pits of hell was getting married to a hell hound himself."

"Jealous?" He chuckled, but his eyes only darkened a tone. A vein started to throb at his temple and Ri knew she had touched upon a dangerous topic. But this was the only way she knew how to handle Omkara, argue, frustrate and get a rise out of him.

"How is it fair that I am not supposed to destroy myself and you're free to do the same thing, albeit a different method?"

"You're too young to understand," he was still calm, but his hold on her hand tightened a little.

"Oh please, you're no old man either, and I'm not a kid, stop making excuses Omkara."

"I'm doing it for my family." His tone was bitter and reply short.

"And that makes you noble? Well I'm doing all for myself and that makes me a witch, yeah right!"

He held his burning gaze, with an unwavering one of his own. That frustration burning within her, attracted him. She looked ablaze, power radiating from her. Unconsciously, he grew her closer, heat of their bodies mingling together.

"How does destruction aid your cause?"

Ri shrugged.

"I destroy what is mine, before anyone else could. It's my life, my right to destroy it."

"And you're not a kid - irony, irony!" His tone dripped with sarcasm.

"Look around yourself," Ri said darkly. "What does this look like? A party? This is an auction. You heard him right? He calls me doll. A doll he is going to dress up, exhibit and pack away to the highest bidder!" he said nothing, and she blinked furiously, not wanting to let that too sharp gaze notice her vulnerable expression.

"Is he worth it?" He asked finally.

"I'm not going to let him take control of me," she had no idea what made her go on, spill all those unsaid words worth years. "I'll ruin myself, before he gets his deal sealed."

He twirled her around, pulling her back and caging her in his arms. It was no longer a dance position, but an embrace, his breath fanned her face.

That moment was a long one, in which she stared at him, wondering what he was going to do, or say. His eyes were too bottomless pits of dark swirls, she found herself drowning in them, forgetting where she stood and the people around them.

"Precious," he muttered slowly, the word almost a whisper against her ear. A chill ran down her spine and tickled her toes, as the tip of his thumb brushed against the corner of her eye. He brushed off a tear that hung there unknown to her and let his fingers trace a line down her cheek. "Don't waste yourself."

It was only later that night, when her racing heart had finally calmed down, did Ri realize that he had called her "precious." Omkara Singh Oberoi had called her precious.

The world was ending.

**

Waiting to hear your take, please take a moment to give me some feedback.

Sorry if you're disappointed.

Thanks for reading!

Love,

Sakura


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Nan_ArHi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the chapter and Rikara moments, love the way story is shaping, thank you for the chapter :)
coolove thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
This was such a great chapter
I loved the moments they shared
We got so much insight into the characters
I think that will help us understand them more
As always lots of love and respect
Please keep writing
....Anabella... thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Reswa.. Will read soon😃
Edited by ....Anabella... - 9 years ago
Sakura24 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Reswa.. Will read soon😃

Take Your time dear 😳
....Anabella... thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Unreswa... So a new character... Raghav khannna... The villain ... Sari fasat ki jad argh😡... Am already hating him... But loved the way you've described him... Perfect words.. And you also pointed out his character in one statement one of the vipers in the pit.🤢..loved the way you've portrayed the dark side of business.. Yet another string between Rikara daddy's friendship... I love the way the story is proceeding... Oops complications come up I hate Raghav more... How could he marry his besties wife???😲 So most probably he had a hand in Avantika's murder... But my gut feeling says he's guilty.. Will have to wait for it... So here you gave another reason why Rikara have issues with each other... The past which haunts them.. Plus it's similarity too... I really love the way you connect Rikara... So that's how Om ended up in Ri's b'day bash... Svetalana ...argh... 🤢Yahan par bhi it's OK.. Unless you make her a weirdo like the show.. Loved the line RI was the same person he desired and detested... So ironic... So RI Ne apna jadu shuru krdiya... .. So it's seducing omkara plan B... But it seems that Om pehle round mein all out ho gaya.. Seeing a different Ri... Om ke liye mere paas ek line hai - ladki beautiful kr gayi chul...🤣.. This Racoon khanna to argh' I swear if I could I would have entered your story I would have murdered him.. He makes my blood boil.. And I've already murdered him a million times in my mind... Hate him to the core... And he get more disgusting?? Probably.. Thank God Om noticed it.. You not only activated Om's guttermind but mine also...😆 I love Om's inner turmoil the way you've described it... A part of him wants her but a part of him doesn't want her...hayee.. Such a complicated love story... But thats what I love about this story... Their collision.. 😃Perfect description for snakelana like a snake she glided to him... RI was jealous yay!!! But then Om bhi kaise kr sakta hai inkarr... So they dance... Lol!! RI borrowed snakelana's finance..bechari... Snakelana ko malum nahi that she has borrowed him to make him hers... But I really liked the direct RI.. she zipped snakelana's mouth... And I am so happy kahin PR uska muh band hua.. Oh so this is what Sumo spilled... Loved this line.. The man who was preached me about walking into the pits of hell is marrying the hell hound itslef ... 👏... Perfect.. So here also we have a sacrificialkara... Marrying snakelana for his family.. Loved their deep and intense conversation... Om somehow touched Ri's raw nerve and she opened up... You showed Ri's pain beautifully.. So one of the reasons RI wants to destroy herself is because she feels that Racoon won't destory her then... Rikara's first hug hayee... itna itense romance mein mar Javan...loved the way he comforted her... Om I love him.. Om called RI precious... Omg.. His precious... I've lost it... I just feel in love deeper with this story... Loved the whole chappy...it was perfect balance of postivity and negativity... Can't wait for the next chappy... Thanks ton for the pm... PS when they were dancing the song dark side by Kelly clarkson played in my mind you should hear it... Here are the lyrics- it's suits Rikara perfectly according to me- Oh oh oh, there's a place that I know
It's not pretty there and few have ever gone
If I show it to you now
Will it make you run away?

Or will you stay
Even if it hurts
Even if I try to push you out
Will you return?
And remind me who I really am
Please remind me who I really am

Everybody's got a dark side
Do you love me?
Can you love mine?
Nobody's a picture perfect
But we're worth it
You know that we're worth it
Will you love me?
Even with my dark side?

Like a diamond
From black dust
It's hard to know
What can become
If you give up
So don't give up on me
Please remind me who I really am

Everybody's got a dark side
Do you love me?
Can you love mine?
Nobody's a picture perfect
But we're worth it
You know that we're worth it
Will you love me?
Even with my dark side?

Don't run away
Don't run away
Just tell me that you will stay
Promise me you will stay
Don't run away
Don't run away
Just promise me you will stay
Promise me you will stay

Will you love me? ohh

Everybody's got a dark side
Do you love me?
Can you love mine?
Nobody's a picture perfect
But we're worth it
You know that we're worth it
Will you love me?
Even with my dark side?

Don't run away
Don't run away

Don't run away
Promise you'll stay
Lol my cmnt is probably longer than your chappy,, love Ana...😳 I hope you'll not run reading this cmnt🤣
Edited by ....Anabella... - 9 years ago
appynehra thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I love they way they talk!!! Sharp!!
Awesome!! Continue soonish!
WhiteNoise thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Res.

Unress
Sakura ,you're on roll...back to back updates!!
Raghav is a very sly old man,the way you portrayed him.kind of reminds me of Voldmort's character though no one can be as demonic and inhumane as Voldy...
Raghav's description completely fills the villain criteria still I'm not able to hate him,I'd like to think he has different dimensions too
There is the clash of egos and exchange of sharp words I was looking for...O and Ri are just perfectly flawed characters ,I'm on love with them
"Precious" !!! He called her precious, the world is surely about to end ,bro😆
Re-read worthy chapter.
Update soon

Love
Anshi

Edited by Animagus_Sirius - 9 years ago
NetFreak_Me thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Sakura... thanks so much for this alternate take on RiKara story.. this one blew my mind away.. it's that amazing.. right from the mainstays to the battle that's on.. it's all top notch..

It's a clash of egos.. two flawed souls,, tortured n hurt,, involved in this game of upmanship make one beautifully poignant read.. both are affected by the mere presence of each other yet they refuse to budge.. m so loving it.. haha..

Omkara here is the one I totally love.. one layered personality yet the most simple person ever.. his circumstances make him the man he is right now.. all cacooned n judgemental.. n giving him company is Gauri.. life hasn't been kind to her either but love the way she faces all the challenges thrown at her.. one bad ass girl.. I love her spunk n her crazy antics too.. it was hilarious the way she went about attracting Omkara n ended up getting drawn to him.. n Omkara being Omkara is gonna be a tough nut to crack .. though this last chapter is such a surprise.. the way they complement each other is picture perfect.. n those few words exchanged were so insightful.. love the way they rile each other up so effortlessly.. hehe n the world definitely ended with those 'precious' words.. wow.

Sumo.. very happy to have her around n love her n Ri's bond.. svetlana glides in here too.. haha..

Read all the chapters in one go.. loved the flow.. n your detailing.. in-depth descriptions display the clarity of your ideas n in turn help the reader envisage the events right in front of their eyes..

Can't wait for this story to unfold..

Thanks for now..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".