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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! well written! Maan angry! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
😉Solid update👏
Bechari Geet everyone teases her.😆 ab itna cosy hogi maan ke sath then teasing to sun na padegi😆
Thankfully ayesha is ready for the school otherwise geet teaches her crap about school😆 OMG kids are so cuteee
they are too a guru fan 😉
i hope maan will forgave them and listen to geet
grudges only give pain
update soon me waiting😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg u always rocking di.this part our Ayesha baby li more place than my maaneet.super and love it whole part sry I enjoyed so much.everyone teasing Geet and maan accept whose insect bite him.maan said Ayesha admmission tomorrow.bit Geet don't want baby go to school soon.she is mother.she craps Ayesha mind.but this crap not work out to msk.maan clear explained Ayesha.ayesha so cute..she said it is boring daily seeing their faces..omg abi also called wish Ayesha baby.even warned msk daughter.msk ur son in law is very brave..maan angry..everyone laughing seeing him possessive.Ayesha got admission she not got any interview she is msk daughter Geet proved seeing maan achievement in school days.other babies omg it true di.today kids..they r not our level..i have experience in my life.maan got first place compare to prabhas.iam waiting for bahubali 2.even babies also guru.exactly every girls love our guru.sam parents come to km.they want go back bit saranya identified.drag them hall.they r confused.raji also enlighten place.both dadi crying seeing theiir infront of them Sara dadi don't want hurt maan so said them leave that place.sam did wrong but her parent faced problem.everyone feel bad for them Geet talked them like own daughter.they tried touch Ayesha.msk roaring them.geet shut up seeing glare.maan told dadi u want maan or Sam parents.they shattered ...maan angry...
Precap : Geet is missing omg...what happened with her..i think she searching Sam parents
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Posted: 8 years ago
Only Geet can bring maan to his senses and realize they are suffering as much as him...they too are not at fault for their daughters sins...

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THANKU FOR U R LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL..MUAH

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PRIYA DII LOVE U SO MUCH FOR TIS WONDERFUL SUPERB BANNER.. WOW MUAH DII..NO WORDS..









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( THANKU PRIYA DII,LOVE U SO MUCH

FOR TIS BEAUTIFUL AWESOME BANNER)


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Geet saw him standing near te balcony,his back was facing her but she can sense his anger,but tis time he is wrong and she have to make him realize it to him as a soul mate

Geet : Maan

Maan know she will cum but right now he don't want to meet anyone

Maan : pls Geet leave me alone before he completes she turned him to face her,holding his arms

Geet : do u think wat u did is correct haan, He try to turn his face, dare u turn u r face wat u think of urself haan u always correct, u will do wat u feel without bothering abt others

Maan : i don't need to give explanation to anyone

Geet : oh so much attitude

Maan : think wat ever u want

Geet : i never know my Maan will be heartless, i never know my Maan Will be emotionaless, not for them but atleast for they age u could have respect their feelings, don't u feel anything wen she fall on u r feet haan

Maan : she did to wash her sin

Geet : wat sin she did haan did she comple u to marry her daughter, did she ask Sam to cheat u, did she asked to break everything

Maan clenched his fist hearing Sam's name : wat ever but she is her mother

Geet : don't forget she is ur bua too, no mother will ask her daughter to do all tis if she does she is not a mother, cant u see pain in her eyes

Maan : for her daughter's sin she have to pay, with an attitude

Geet : don't forget she is Sarada dadi's daughter so u will punish Sar dadi too haan, why u did't ask her to leave KM

Maan : Geet u r crossing u r limits

Geet : not more than u, wat u think u r a big king and will order everyone if u like some one we all have to talk, if u don't like we have to break up with them but sory to say always it wont happen..if u are correct we all will stand with u but today u r wrong

Maan : u dont need to judge me, wat im doing is right for me,if u think its wrong im not bother

Geet :yes why u will bother abt others feelings, if u dont like we have to follow u haan

Maan : i didt ask u all to stop talking u can talk with her even bring her here but leave me alone, just free me from everything

Geet : free u from wat Maan, from u r duties so tat u could't burden with tis family haan, he didt reply, chi how selfish asking a mother to choose between her two kids haan, do u know how dadi felt seeing her daughter,she is crying in pain

Maan got angry with her accusation he hold her shoulder harshly : do u know wat i felt after seeing them, do u know all past flash in front of my eyes , her fake love, her cheat how my Anju left..do u know my baby lost her mother due to her, do u know wat i lost haan

Geet too look at his eyes : only u lost matters to u not others haan, u only lost u sister and love, Maan raised his eyebrows for te word love, why shocked to hear if u don't loved her u would have not hold te feeling of hate, if u hate some one only if u loved them

Maan left her : nothing like tat

Geet : then why u still holding urself, do u know wat dadi lost she lost her husband but she control herself and living for u all, she lost her son and DIL still she living for u all, even after losing her grand daughter she is living for u all, being near she cant even meet her daughter whom she brought as her own haan , ok Savi dadi is urs she can obey u and respect ur feelings but why Sar dadi is controlling becoz she loves u more than her own blood, she don't need a sec to accept them in front of u but they want u r happiness but u r playing with their feelings haan

Maan : Geet i don't want to hear anything, just leave

He moved away,but Geet don't want to leave him today,she want him free from all his grudges so she have to be little bit rude even it hurts him, Geet hold his shirt and pulled him to face her,he look at her hold on his shirt and her

Geet : u have too Mr.Khurana, wat abt Padmini maa and Sameer paa, he glare at her for addressing them like tat, they too lost more than u, they lost they son and DIL being near their family they can't even see their only grandkid which was their son's last symbol, having a big family, they are living like an orphans

Maan : they deserve it

Geet : for wat for still respecting u r feelings and living in guilty..if they could they would demand for Ayesha who is te last resemble of they son, they blood but they did't do like tat, they want only ur happiness so just paying for their deed which they didt do

Maan : u think they can win over MSK before they think i will destroy them, with a smirk

Geet : damn with u r attitude u can't do anything before law

Maan smirks: law no one can challenge MSK i wont let tis case go to court before it goes to court i will deal it in my style.

Geet : oh tat much attitude then sory to say u will lose tis time MSK, Maan look at her, im challenging u im taking my kutty to meet her grandparents if u can then stop me

Maan : Geet u won't do like tat then mujishe bora koi nai hoga

Geet : now also u r too wrong and I don't know a crule side is exist inside u, seeing a mother like woman falling on ur feet but ur standing still

Maan : I didt ask her to fall

Geet : but u didt stop her too, now I have to wash my husband's sin, tat is te duty of every wife so im taking my baby to meet her grandparents

Maan : don't warna

Geet : wat u will do haan stop our wedding and send me out of u r life

Maan roared : Geet, but she was startled seeing his hand raised but he stop in air, his eyes was deep red in furious..

Geet know she crossed her limits but now she cant get her words back she did't meant wat she said, just in flow it came from her mouth, now she realized wat she said she staring at Maan who was glaring at her, he hit a flower vase and turned his face, But he heard some sound he turned and saw Geet too throw a vase, gave a look to him and left te room

Maan sat on te couch thinking wat happen between them for some one they were fighting, he saw his hand which raise to hit her he want to burn his hand, he want to punish it but he know if he does te same pain Geet will give him by hurting herself, but why she is supporting them, she know wat I feel after seeing them but still who ask them to cum here seeing them dadi crying..wat if something happen to dadis, suddenly Geet's words ringed in his ears

Geet : do u know wat they lost..they controlling themselves for u becoz they love u. Wat could u do if Kutty, Anni, Vicky did some mistake u will punish them also

Maan: I didt feel dadis's pain as a mother, did im very harsh to them but i didt stop them but i didt let them too, Wat is they mistake, Geet's words ringing in his head, yes he know they too innocent who have been cheated by their own blood but how can he forgot te things or persons related to them but still..wat ever may be but he was not crule to ask an elder woman to fall on his feet, he was shocked wen she fall, he don't know how to react so just stood still..

How selfish he is only to think abt his pain wat abt dadi..where were his values which dadi insert in him to respect elders even though they are strangers, where were his values wen she fall on his feet. He cursed himself forgetting everything in his ego, is his ego is bigger than his family, is his anger is more imp than his love for his family..

He was just thinking and agruing with himself, te whole KM became very silent..Dadis in their room crying, elders sitting in their room, youngers in one room..It was more than hour everyone are sad..Maan who was arguing atlast thought to seek solace in dadi so came down.. He felt some emptiness in KM, tis is not te KM he know for past few months..

He went to dadi's room and saw Savi dadi sitting in chair and her face expressed her pain, he sat on te floor and kept his head on her lap..Savi was startled seeing him..

Dadi : Maan

Maan : im sory dadi u could never expect u r Maan would have behaved like tis, im selfish dadi, dadi cried hearing his words, her tear drop fall on his cheek,im selfish why u didt slap me wen i forget my values, why u didt stop me, why u didt correct me

Sar: becoz u r not wrong

Maan look at te entrance saw Sar dadi cuming inside, she sat beside Savi..Maan hold her hand which was on her lap still resting his head on savitri's lap

Sar: our Maan is always correct

Maan : no dadi im not, im a selfish person who only think abt his own pain but forgot wat u all going thru, im selfish asking a mother to choose any one among her kids, im selfish forgot wat u both want im sory

Both closed his mouth and hugged like he hugging both of them burying his face on their lap

Maan : im sory

Savi : no Maan u r not, u r te best son any mother could get u have sacrified everything for us

Savi : some one in u r place could have left us long back, wat else u didt do for us haan, u did all duties correctly being a son or brother, u r prefect in everything even though u destroying u r life but gave us everything

Sar: if a son didt do his duties correctly we can punish him or stop him but u did more than any one can do then how can we punish u, more over im wrong, Maan look at her, im te one who first want Sam for u..i thought she will prefect partner for u and look after our family but i didt expect she

Maan hold her hand : pls dadi we will forget everything and live our life, pls

Both kissed him and node their heads, she kissed both their hands..he laid on her lap, dadis caress his hair like soothing him

All youngers were sitting in their big room, Ayesha was sleeping in Rajji's lap, All know abt Maan's anger except Madurai who were shock after seeing Maan's anger.. Maan enter te room and sat on te bed he was forming words to explain them becoz he know they were shocked seeing him like tis for first time

Maan : wo

Rajji : maama i never know u will roar like lion

Swetha: tat too real lion, showing her eyes like she is scared

Maan stare at them who giggling at his reaction then it clicked they were making te situation ease for him,he gave small smile

Maan : i thought u took me wrong

Anand: why maama we can understand u r anger

Karthi: we are family, only in front of our family we can show our real self

Rahul : but tis much

Maan glare at him he zipped his mouth

Rahul : wat kind of people u r i thought u all will get scare and don't talk with Maan bhai but here utta

Anni : they are not scared kitten like u

Maan look here and there

Shivya: wat bhai

Rahul : he is looking for his lioness, Maan pout

Rajji : she will be in dadis's room

Maan: no im cuming from there

Dadis came : wat happen

Vicky: where is dii, all came out Rahul went to see te entrace and searched in garden

Raghav sense te turmoil : sir baby went out

Maan was confused : out but where

Raghav : don't know sir

Maan got angry : wat u meant by don't know

Raghav : sir obeying our boss and his family is our duty i asked baby but she deny and ask us not to follow

Maan sighed, all got worry

Maan : search her i want abt her details within half an hour

Raghav node and left, Maan was pushing his hair behind, he cursed himself for fighting with her, now don't know where she went..all were worried they know abt Geet but just want her safety..

Saranya: u all forgot, All look at her in confusing. ada kaduvulae ( omg) i too forgot, u know naa wat she will do wen she get upset or angry..Then it clicked for Madurai people and started to giggle others gave a confused look

Anand: maama she have a wired habit,to Maan who look at him

Rahul : wat habit

Karthi: if she get angry or upset she will leave home and travel in bus untill she gets cool she wont cum

Anni : travel in bus ?

Rajji : yes she will catch a bus and travel in same bus

Karthi : once she travel for whole day

Anni : oh tats why she came in bus from simla

Rajji : yes Anni

Maan remembered after tat night party in simla, she got upset and left in bus

Karthi : i think today also she could, before he complete Raghav came

Raghav : sir 5b bus now its travelling towards xy place, Raghav have heard they words and at once got te information

Rahul : omg tis much fast tats why bhai trusting u all

Raghav gave a smile

Maan : thanks Raghav

Raghav : tats my work sir

Maan : and sory too, Raghav shocked to hear sory, for shouting i know u did u r duty but im just

Raghav : its ok sir,

Raghav was touched with his concern till now even if he is not wrong Maan could have blasted him but his boss said sory omg its all becoz of Geet baby who did so much magical but today he pray for his boss who is going to face his sherni, Maan was abt to leave but Rahul stop him, he just kept fake thilak in his forehead like rubbing his thumb on his forehead,

Rahul : all te best

Maan : im not going to war

Vicky: its not less than tat so all te best

All wished him and gave a sad face to Maan even puppies, Maan pout and left..

Geet was sitting in te bus and travelling for past three hours,driver and conductor gave a wired look seeing her sitting in same place and travelling and she was talking to herself but she gave a glare which made them to zip and continue they work..

She was very upset with Maan, te way he behaved, she never expect tis from him, its not like tat she didt see his anger but today its more than tat.. She know his pain,for tat wat they did even they living in same pain, now she calm little bit but still thinking abt him..

She cant disgest wat Maan did she have brought with values where even to respect enemies..she know Maan is not a person who forget his values wat ever situation but his ego damn with it..

Suddenly te bus stop with a jerk,all got panick..Geet try to see thru te window to check wat happen..she did't get a proper view but she thought its traffic and back also all vehicles standing..

Geet frown : tis bus also showing attitude

Why not wen MRS ATTITIDE is travelling in tis bus

Geet was startled and hold her heart with sudden voice but she don't need to see who it was none other than te great MSK who don't need hours to search her

Geet stare at him like why he came, Maan just relaxed on his seat folding his hands on his chest with smirk on his lips..Geet turn her face and sat dido like him folding her hands..Geet wonder why te bus is still not moving and try to check whether any traffic ..

Driver and conductor came to their seats : sir they were shivering than standing in front of great MSK is not so easy..

Con: sir, Maan gave a look he moved back, pls sir key

Then Geet notice key in Maan's hands

Maan : untill mam wont get down from te bus, I won't give

Dr and con gave a pleading sad face to Geet who shruggle

Geet : i won't get scared for all tis

Maan thought scare did tat word exist in her..he sighed

Geet : its not movie where hero will threaten herione and she will follow him like puppy, i don't care if te bus won't move or abt traffic jam or abt u r jobs

Driver :pls Mam, Geet glare at them

Con : sir, he glare at them,

Both don't know wat to do, Maan relaxed himself on te seat,driver and con look at each other

Both at Geet thought to try for last time : pls mam its abt our job

Geet : I wont mend for his attitude so soon

Maan know abt his sherni: im also not some stupid hero who wait for his herione to get cool, Geet gave a look like wat he meant..

Maan stood up : i will take my herione in my style before Geet realize Maan scoop Geet in his hands to carry her..

All giggled some even whistle seeing them

Maan : wat naa my wife is angry on me so manoflying her and gave te key to te driver

All chuckled and some wifves even got jealous seeing a lovely hubby and gave a deathy glare to their husbands..Maan carried her to te car ,Geet saw his face and eyes she just turned her gaze and Maan started te car, both sat silently..Maan was trying to form words to start te conversation,Geet was feeling bang in her heart seeing Maan and his worry in his eyes,

Maan was startled and put sudden break to stop te car becoz Geet hugged him suddenly..Due to sudden break Geet lost te balance but Maan hold her and pulled her towards him before she throw in front..Maan got panick but he balanced her in right time

Geet too got shocked and panick and clenched Maan's shirt and hide her face in his neck sitting on his lap hugging him tightly..Maan too hold her, both try to calm they erotic heart beat which echoing te car...

PRECAP : THINK THINK WAT WILL HAPPEN.. MAAN'S NEW NAME LSK

NEXT PART : 216, PG - 118


Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago
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Loved it part 215
can't wait for part 216

can you updated part 216 today please
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awesome update
as always rocking update no words to describe
waiting for next
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Omggg superbbb update ... I m with Geet ... really yarr maan has so nuch big ego .. but maan KI Geet is maan KI Geet .. she realized his mistak to mAan. Maan apologize bith daddies ... that's lovely ... but how can maan raised his hand to his Geet his mishti. Geet has very weried habit when she ll get upsate ... wow precap ll very interesting ..finally we ll get some magical maneet monments ... eagerly waiting for next update ...plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon ... cane wait anymore ...

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