Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Zoya,

I really liked it...u really express Shravan's sorrow, his loneliness sooo well...
looking forward to next update

Rgds
Anuradha
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

Dear Zoya,

I really liked it...u really express Shravan's sorrow, his loneliness sooo well...
looking forward to next update

Rgds
Anuradha

Thank you so much Anuradha!!
I'm glad you liked it...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold You're quite a brilliant writer yourself!
Really nice of u to say that..!🤗
And thank you😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing start dr... loved it... ❤️ ...
Beautifully penned...
Both sumo and shravan are missing each other 😔 ... thanks for choosing flash back plot... its different and intresting...
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
zoyi awesome update like.always..
rula dia yr... 💔
sumo.and shra's pain..aww..sumo loae her bff and realize damn.late and shra.all.alone..so sad..
diary note was beautiful [ L]
main toh niche dekh rhi thi baki.update kaha gya.. 😆
love.it❤️
thnx for pm.. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Amazing start dr... loved it... ❤️ ...
Beautifully penned...

Thank you so much!!!😛
Both sumo and shravan are missing each other 😔 ... thanks for choosing flash back plot... its different and intresting...
Shukriya...
Thanks for pm...
You're welcome!

@Bold Thanks Shaggy!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

zoyi awesome update like.always..

Ranju🤗 Thanks!
rula dia yr... 💔
Awwiee... Sowiieee...
sumo.and shra's pain..aww..sumo loae her bff and realize damn.late and shra.all.alone..so sad..
diary note was beautiful [ L]
Haina!
main toh niche dekh rhi thi baki.update kaha gya.. 😆
WTH! ROFL🤣
Jaise humare show se romance gayab tha waise hi yeh bhi gayab😆
love.it❤️
Glad!
thnx for pm.. 🤗
Always hon!

@Bold Thank you so much Ranju!!!
It's so good to see you here often!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res.
P.S.- Pri 👎🏼
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Unres

Zoyi 🤗
Hum phr se syama prarthi hai itne bilamb k liye
Ab aur jyada bilamb na krte hue aapke update ki baat krte hai
Justajoo ❤️
What a title 👏
The longing for love. The longing to love 😳
The title itself says so much 👏
Wonderful 🤗

Aur finally humare Eric miya ki khi toh entry hui 😆
Good looks and charm ha. Teko sachme Eric bda pasand hai na 🤣

Eric- shravan convo is cute 😳

Sumo ne padhna start kia 😲
Library jaane lgi 😲

Pushkar toh always was a darling until he gifted his brain to Preeti to help her learn Chinese 🤣


At this question, each time Shravan wanted to tell his Father of everything that fell short. His family for instance, his mum, his dad, his nanu and his Sumo were a gaping hole in his life. But he didn't, "Nahi Papa koi kami nahi hai.." He'd lie each time.

Shravu 😭

The diary note ❤️

I'll be guilty for each time I smile while she frowns. I'll be guilty for each time I enjoy while she pushes her self in a corner.
🥺 🥺 🥺
This guy is seriously love❤️
Or like u said, a hopeless selfless idiot.
Nanu is so cute ya!
He know them so well.

Sumo kept the phone ❤️

First time bura lga iske liye 😆

When you're angry with your best friend,

Put aside those egos and hurts,

Just call them and say,

"I need you Idiot, at least to fight with me..."


This is so damn true. Friends complete ur likrde


Waise iska ek aur version hai. Sunau?

Suna hi deti hu 😆

Best frnds agr ruth jaaye toh unhe jaldi mna lena chahiye. Kyunki kameene aapke saare raaz jaante hai. Kya pta kab telecast krde 🤣


I loooved it 🤗
And love u 🤗
Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago

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