Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Dear Zoya,

I really liked it...u really express Shravan's sorrow, his loneliness sooo well...
looking forward to next update

Rgds
Anuradha

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orion23

@orion23

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG
Dear Zoya,

I really liked it...u really express Shravan's sorrow, his loneliness sooo well...
looking forward to next update

Rgds
Anuradha

Thank you so much Anuradha!!

I'm glad you liked it...

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold You're quite a brilliant writer yourself!
Really nice of u to say that..!🤗
And thank you😃

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orion23

@orion23

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

@Bold

Take Hugs🤗

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shaggy8

@shaggy8

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Amazing start dr... loved it... ❤️ ...
Beautifully penned...
Both sumo and shravan are missing each other 😔 ... thanks for choosing flash back plot... its different and intresting...
Thanks for pm...

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#116

zoyi awesome update like.always..
rula dia yr... 💔
sumo.and shra's pain..aww..sumo loae her bff and realize damn.late and shra.all.alone..so sad..
diary note was beautiful [ L]
main toh niche dekh rhi thi baki.update kaha gya.. 😆
love.it❤️
thnx for pm.. 🤗

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orion23

@orion23

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: shaggy8
Amazing start dr... loved it... ❤️ ...
Beautifully penned...
Thank you so much!!!😛
Both sumo and shravan are missing each other 😔 ... thanks for choosing flash back plot... its different and intresting...
Shukriya...
Thanks for pm...
You're welcome!

@Bold Thanks Shaggy!

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
zoyi awesome update like.always..
Ranju🤗 Thanks!
rula dia yr... 💔
Awwiee... Sowiieee...
sumo.and shra's pain..aww..sumo loae her bff and realize damn.late and shra.all.alone..so sad..
diary note was beautiful [ L]
Haina!
main toh niche dekh rhi thi baki.update kaha gya.. 😆
WTH! ROFL🤣
Jaise humare show se romance gayab tha waise hi yeh bhi gayab😆
love.it❤️
Glad!
thnx for pm.. 🤗
Always hon!

@Bold Thank you so much Ranju!!!

It's so good to see you here often!😃

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!

Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago

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Reshma Ahmed

@Perpetuity

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#120

Res.

P.S.- Pri 👎🏼

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Unres

Zoyi 🤗

Hum phr se syama prarthi hai itne bilamb k liye

Ab aur jyada bilamb na krte hue aapke update ki baat krte hai

Justajoo ❤️

What a title 👏

The longing for love. The longing to love 😳

The title itself says so much 👏

Wonderful 🤗

Aur finally humare Eric miya ki khi toh entry hui 😆

Good looks and charm ha. Teko sachme Eric bda pasand hai na 🤣

Eric- shravan convo is cute 😳

Sumo ne padhna start kia 😲

Library jaane lgi 😲

Pushkar toh always was a darling until he gifted his brain to Preeti to help her learn Chinese 🤣

At this question, each time Shravan wanted to tell his Father of everything that fell short. His family for instance, his mum, his dad, his nanu and his Sumo were a gaping hole in his life. But he didn't, "Nahi Papa koi kami nahi hai.." He'd lie each time.

Shravu 😭

The diary note ❤️

I'll be guilty for each time I smile while she frowns. I'll be guilty for each time I enjoy while she pushes her self in a corner.

🥺 🥺 🥺

This guy is seriously love❤️

Or like u said, a hopeless selfless idiot.

Nanu is so cute ya!

He know them so well.

Sumo kept the phone ❤️

First time bura lga iske liye 😆

When you're angry with your best friend,

Put aside those egos and hurts,