Ishra ss-aye humnava mujhe apna banaa#2,pt 11 on pg 127 updt on Mar 31

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: nafnaf
Part 7

Raksha I really love this story!!
So beautiful and Rama's POV was amazing!!!
Love the say he started communicating with her"!!!
Both of them are so happy with each other""""!!!!!

She has confessed and now he is wondering if he will be able to reciprocate her love!!
Love the way she is so comfortable with him"!!!

Looking forward to the next update soon please and also thank you so much for the pm!!

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: gunita_ishra
Awesome update Dii
Raman became OK
All came to know that he is raman Kumar bhalla
Amma is to greedy .
After knowing that he is rich
She got ready to make them marry
Ishra mrrige done
Continue soon dii

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: sukanksha
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Raman sachi bola pyar nahi pagalpan hai without knowing anything about him she fell in love with him
But chalo he improved thak gayi thi main motionless raman ki ST padh padh k lol

Yes he got improved

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: sukanksha
I was more worried about who are his timdas were hoping not his kids. N is relieved to know they are his siblings...
Now i wanna meet his tindas too lol

Yes tindas r his siblings

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm So sorry for not Commenting on Last Parts and Late Comment,I am Busy in Exams.😭
It was Awesome Part.😊
The Teaser was so Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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PART 10

Pandit ji announced Ishra as husband and wife. Ishra went to appa and touch his feet, he blessed them. Then they went to amma, she too blessed them.

Raman-ishita, I want a chair.i can't stand so long.

Ishita nodded and ask for a chair. Raman was getting restless as his legs start paining due to sitting for so long. Ishita saw his condition and hold his hand, she kept his hand on her shoulder and said-jab tak chair nahi aati, I am here to support u. She said smiling.

Raman too smiled hearing her words .

Raman -thank u.

Ishita-thank u toh mujhe kehna chahiye, that u gave me place in ur life. Thank u Raman, I so love u. She said looking at his eyes, they shared an eyelock. Which get broken by the boy who said-here is the chairs.

Ishita make Raman sit and put his legs on another chair.

Raman -u too sit ishita.

Ishita-i am good, aap baithiye. U need to rest. Waise bhi I have troubled u much.

Raman -ab toh main achcha rahunga hi, doctor se joh shaadi ki hai. He said tucking her hair behind her ear making her blush.

Soon Ishra were took inside for the remaining rituals. Ishita insisted to cut short the rituals as raman need proper rest.

All agreed and finished everything in short. After that they served food to Ishra and told them to eat in same plate .

Raman made a face seeing south Indian food.

Raman -sorry ishita, but I don't wanna eat all this. I just want water to drink.

Ishita realised he don't like that food, so she asked her aunty to bring something light for Raman.

After some time, they serve raman dal makhni with rice and poories.at first he denied but when ishita said to have a little, they had it. He felt so good having proper food after ages. He was enjoying the food but his fingers were still shivering.

Seeing him unable to eat properly ishita start feeding Raman.

He looked at her, she said-ur fingers r shivering due to medicine. Soon it will be fine.

Raman smiled thinking how nicely she understands his every unspoken words.

After having the food, raman was sitting with ishita ,she was looking too happy ,finally having him as her husband.raman smiled seeing the content smile on her face.ishita saw him looking at her smiling.

Ishita look at him and asked with her eyes -what happened.

Raman nodded mouthing nothing.

Raman-can I have ur phone.i have to call someone.

Ishita gave him her phone and after recalling much,he dialled a number.after many rings,the person picked the phone and said-hello.

Raman-mihir.

Mihir got stunned hearing his voice and said-bhai,aap mere raman Bhai ho naa.he said with much happiness and excitement.

Raman smiled hearing this from mihir and said-pehchaan liya tune.

Mihir started crying hearing this and said-kahan ho aap Bhai.itne din ho gaye, u didn't come back. we thought we thought.he couldn't complete.

Raman -i will come soon asap,and don't worry about me i am good , because of someone special.he said looking at ishita making her smile.

Mihir-Kaun special .

Raman-will tell u,u tell wahan sab kaisa hai.

Mihir-bahut bura hai Bhai,shagun bhabhi ne,

Raman-ek minute,yeh shagun bhabhi kaise ban gayi.did she got married.

Mihir-what u r telling Bhai,she is ur wife.he said making raman shocked.

Raman got up at once and said-kya bakwaas hai, Shagun aur meri biwi. We r not married.

Mihir-bhai, Kahin aapko memory loss toh nahi hua hai naa.

Raman -shut up mihir, I remember well, I never got married to Shagun. She is not my wife.

Mihir-oh, then bhai u should come asap. She has taken over all ur property claiming herself as ur wife. Aur usne romi aur simmi ka bhi bahut bura haal kar rakha hai. Even I am not allowed to interfere. Only Shagun and ur legal advisor ashok r doing everything.

Raman's blood boils hearing this and he said-mihir, listen to me very carefully. Arrange two tickets asap from India. I wanna reach there asap. And one thing more don't let Shagun know anything about this. OK.

Mihir-ok bhai. Saying so he hung the call.

Raman too hung the call and look around only to see everyone looking at him with questioning eyes.

Amma-tum shaadi shuda hai. Then how dare to marry my daughter.

An old woman -how could u do this with this innocent girl. Getting married to ishita even after being married.

Raman ignored their rubbish and look at ishita, who was standing there all silent.

Raman -i don't give a damn what other think of me. I just want u to trust me. U trust me naa ishita. I swear I am not married, u r my only wife. Woh Shagun jhooth bol rahi hai. She did all this to overtake my property. Mere bhai aur behen ke saath bahut bura kar rahi hai woh. I need to go there and fight. But I can't do this without u. I need u ishita to fight against them. Tum samajh rahi ho naa. U trust me naa.

Amma-stop acting Raman, now I understand u were acting just to take ishu along. Bolo kyun kiya aisa meri ishu ke saath. Now u have to give her divorce and half of ur property. I won't let u play with my daughter's emotion. Jhoothe Kahin ke. She was saying while Raman was just looking at ishita.

But ishita was just listening while amma was go on accusing Raman. She was about to push raman when ishita hold raman and said-bas kijiye amma, bas kar dijiye. I knew u let me marry Raman, just for money. Par ab toh Aap hadh se jyada gir rahi ho amma. Just for money ,u r ready to humiliate my husband and even asking for divorce. Yeh toh socho amma, I got married today. Aaj hi mere divorce ki baat kar rahe ho. Kuch toh sharam karo, I got married today. She said with moist eyes.

Amma-dont say like this kanna, I am just concerned about u. Samjho ishu, he is betraying u.

Ishita-he don't have a reason amma. I trust him, I trust my husband amma. She said looking at Raman.

Ishita went to her appa and said-appa, please let me go with raman. Mujhe bharosha hai unn par. And he needs me.

Appa just hugged ishita and nodded saying OK. Amma tried to intervene but he started the arrangements to send them.

Within hours, Ishra were in Chennai airport, all set to go to San Francisco. They had very less luggage coz they were going in a jiffy.

Ishita hugged her appa and cried. While he just blessed her to have a good life.

Ishita-aap milne aaoge naa mujhse.

Appa-i will try, but If I couldn't, just think my blessings r always with u. Then he look at raman and said-i am going my life to u, take care of her.

Raman nodded and took Appa's blessings.

Soon Ishra was in flight going to San Francisco. Ishita was sleeping while Raman was just looking at her.

Raman -(st) kya ladki hai, mere liye apna Sab kuch chod diya. I will never let u regret it decision. Will keep u happy always. Thinking so he tucked a strand of hair behind her ear which was disturbing his view.

After few hours, they reached San Francisco. Ishra came out and saw mihir waiting for them. He came running seeing raman and hugged him tightly.

Mihir-bhai, kitni der lagaa di aane mein. He said crying.

Raman just consoled him and said-now I am back naa Sab kuch thik ho jayega.

Mihir-chalo bhai, Shagun ne sab kharab karke rakha hai. U know even I am not allowed in ur property. Bechare romi aur simmi ko servants ki tarah treat karti hai. Ab toh mujhe lag raha hai, it's her and ashok's planning. Jaldi chalo bhai.

Raman nodded and hold ishita's hand tightly saying -chalo ishita.

Mihir look at ishita and asked-bhai, yeh kaun.

Raman smiled and said-teri bhabhi, my wife, Dr ishita raman Kumar bhalla. She is the one who bring back life in me. I owe my life to her.

Mihir smiled fully hearing this and said-welcome bhabhi, u don't know how happy I am. Bhai wapas aa gaye aur aap bhi. Let's go home.

Ishita nodded and soon all were in mihir's car going to bhalla mansion.ishita was just looking around.

Soon they reached the mansion, the guard was saying that mihir is not allowed inside but he opens the door seeing raman. Raman instructed him not to call and inform inside. He nodded saying OK.

Soon Ishra reached on the threshold of the house. They saw Shagun sitting in the couch and eating fruits. Raman's blood boil seeing her. He was about to go inside when simmi and romi both came to her. Raman cries seeing their condition. They were looking more like servants with old clothes.

Romi-bhabhi.

Shagun look at them and said-kya chahiye.

Romi-fees, we want money to submit fees. Or else they will remove our names from college.

Shagun-fees, paise. Kuch nahi milega. Just go from here.

Simmi-please bhabhi, de do. Warna hamara pura saal kharab ho jayega. She pleaded.

Shagun-ok go and give statement that ur brother is dead, so that I can get the whole property transferred on my name. And I will give u money to submit fees.

Romi and simmi started crying.

Simmi-dont say like this, bhai jarur aayenge.

Shagun got up in fury and said-kaha naa Raman nahi aayega. Saying so she was about to slap simmi when someone hold her hand in mid.

Shagun got angry and turn to see. She was all stunned to see Raman holding her hands tight while his eyes was red with anger.

Shagun-raman tum.

Raman-haan main, how dare u touch my babies. He said shrugging Shagun's hand while romi and simmi hugged Raman tight crying.

That's all for now. Enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it .

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Edited by cutieruhi - 8 years ago

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Suma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#497

Omg mai tho dar gayi thi... Raman not married...

Dara dhiya mihir ne...

Beautiful Update di...

Ishra got married...

Ishu is so supportive...

Raman called mihir...

Mihir told Everything about shagun...

Ye amma bhi na so disgusting... Money minded...

But ishu trust raman...

Raman wants to take ishita along with him...

Ishu immediately accepted...

Ishra took the blessings from appa...

Ishra left to sanfransisco...

Mihir came to pick raman..Came to know that raman got married to ishu...

He was so happy seeing ishu...

Ishra went to their home...

Cruel shagun...

Torturing simmi and romi...

Made them like servents...

Shagun going to slap simmi... But raman stopped her...

Shagun shocked seeing raman...

Interesting di...

Update next part soon...

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#498

abour previous patts

awesome as always
finally,ishra are married
amma is too much

its not a traser but a shocker
please reveal the mystery soon

thanks for pm
please update soon

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nafnaf

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Posted: 8 years ago

#499

Part 8

Aaawww what an emotional update!!
Ishita has fallen for Raman totally!!
Raman is feeling very sad that he cannot return her love!!
What future can he give her!
He cannot console her or even wipe her tears!!!

Her Amma gets her engaged and also sets the date for her wedding!!
Ishita runs away from her wedding!!
She takes Raman and tells him that they should elope!!!
But her parents come and stop her!!
They are taking her back when Raman gets the strength to pull her to him and also manages to talk saying that Ishita is not going anywhere!!!

Looking forward to the next update soon please!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!!

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Dilpreet kaur

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awesome update 😊 😛
Ishita's love is beyond words...even raman is amazed to see that ishita loves him so much 😊 😳 👏
Ishita gave a good answer to her amma...she is so money minded 😡 😡
Poor simmi and romi...they are begging for their fees 😭 😭 😭
Shagun... 👏
Lets see what raman will do with shagun 👏
Do continue soon...thanx 4 d pm 😊 😛