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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update tiyu
love it so so so much
sorry for late comment yaar
very well written
countinue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Well written
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
hello guysss here is teaser...


Teaser



arnav: champ agar mera naam arnav nahi hota na to i'll definetly named you as ARNAV...
arsh: really dad? but why?

khushi: because you are our lifes ocean which feels very peace in our lives...

arsh: sach main dad..??

arnav: yess! arsh promise to us that you will never hurt anyone in future?

khushi: yes arsh never try to hurt whom love you and dont ever try to take advantage of innocents soul ... and do respects girls all your life ...arsh kabhi bhi kisi or ki galti ki saza kisi or mat ko mat dena...

arnav: your mom is right champ... and yeah if you love someone then dont let her go away from your life and never lose hope on anything...

arsh listening them very carefully like they are teach him lifes birlliant lesson which will he never forgot in his life...and this lesson will help in future...




hows it??? let me now your coments and press the like buton...


love
tia


Edited by Marinajan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Intriguing teaser. Looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.
Arnav and khushi spent romantic night after five years.
Punchi is a real evil woman. I'm glad that arnav rebuked her for cursing arsh.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the teaser 👏
Eager for the chapter 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: momai14

Junior ASR is awesome

😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello folks! sorry could not update this one from long but i drafted this one from long so just updating now hope you like it...enjoy!



Part 8

punchi: ar..
arsh: ASR do you heard me call my dad ASR and me too,...
arsh came to arnav and he pick him up and left to his room...
punchi angrily went to her room...
after some time khushi went to their room...
khushi: arnav arsh where are you both?
then she heard gigglings from pool side she went there and saw father son in swimming pool arsh set on aarnav's shoulder...
khushi click picturs without arnav's knowladge...
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arnav: what are you doing there khushi come na?
khushi: no way
arsh: come on mom come in to pool...
khushi: no arsh
arnav smirked...
arnav: why khushi what happend? scard?
khushi glare at him...
arsh: scard? but dad why should mom scrad of pool she and me always doing fun in pool together...
arnav: really! then why not she is comming in pool today ask your mom arsh?
(winked at khushi)
khushi: shut up! arnav and you both come out now you will caught cold...
arsh and arnav look at eachother and smiled...
both come near to pool wall
arsh: mom pick me up...
khushi: ok fine...

khushi about to pick arsh but arnav pulled her and she fell in pool and arnav arsh hi5...
khushi: hawww! you both are very bad
arnav just stairing at khushi she is totly wet and her saree cling to her like second skin her body carvs visible to arnav ...
arsh: dad dad
arnav: huh what happend arsh?
arsh: dad i am getting cold come out naaa...
arnav: umm arsh you go to your room and change we will meet at dinner table ok..
arsh: ok dad...

arsh left and khushi about to come out from pool but arnav pulled her and she crushed on his bare chest khushi got carrunt in her body...
khushi: ar..nav what are..you ..doing ?
arnav captured her rosy lips into his...his hands roaming on her back her eyes close...
they heard anjali's voice from their room...
anjali: arnav khushi where you guys?
both come into their sens and arnav groan...
khushi pushed him and come out from pool...
khushi: di i am here...
anjali: arey khushi how you drenchd...?
khushi; ask your brother and nphew..
anjali: what they did?
khushi: both pulled me in pool with them...
anjali smiled...
anjali: our old arnav is back khushi (with tear in her eyes)
khushi: yes di

arnav came into room...
arnav: what di you always spoil our romance...(pouted)
anjali playfully hit on his head...
arnav: what for that?
khushi: for being shameless front of di...
both giggling arnav rolled his eyes and went to washroom ...
arnav: take out my cloths khushi...
anjali: both ready and come down dinner is ready...
khushi nodded and anjali left...

khushi took out blue shirt and black jeans for arnav ...and herself blue saree ...

both changed and went to have dinner...
pooja: arey arnav where is khushi?
arnav saw punchi on table and answerd...
arnav: i think she was having bath...
arsh: but dad why she was having bath we just pulled mom to pool na...
arnav: ask mom why mom had bath...(smirked)
all are start laughing...punchi fumming in anger...

lavanya came ...
lav: hello everyone!
akash: hey lav...you here at this time?
lav: why cant i come to my home hena di...
anjali: yes wese akash lav come to stay here...
akash: whattt? why?
pooja: actually! lav has problem to go office from her flat so i tell her to come here to stay,,,...
arnav: thats great ...hena akash
akash; yess that very very great...
lav glare at him and sit on table to have dinner...
anjali: hp take lav's laguge into her room...
hp: ji didi...

lav look at punchi and rolled her eyes and start having dinner...
lav: where is khushi?
khushi came here i am lav...
all start having their dinner arnav khushi steal glance at eachother that unnotice by punchi...and she left in anger...
aman: isko kya hua?
arnav: i think her stamoch is full...
arsh: dont worry she'll have out ...we should not bother of unwelcomed guest uncle..
aman did not take at heart as arsh is kid...
aman: hmmm
khushi: arshhh
arsh: i am done mom...
arnav: arsh have you done your homework?
arsh: yes dad...
khushi; i am done...come arsh ...

arnav: wait i am also comming gud night everyone...
all say good night and left...

arshi room...
arsh: dad mom today i want to sleep b/w you...
both look at eachother and smiled..
arshi: ofcaurse mera baby...
arnav pick him in his arm and kissed on his cheek ...
arnav: lets go to bed...

khushi make arsh change in night suit arnav too changed into night suit ..
both son and father went to bed and khushi went to change into nighty...
arsh: mom come fast naa..
khushi: agayi agayi shetan...

three layed on bed arsh in between arshi...

arsh: mom dad never leave me ever ok...
arshi's eyes moist...
arshi: never...

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here is part end
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hows it? give your feedbacks guys...and press the like button guys...

love
tia
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Posted: 8 years ago
Somebody better tell punchi that too much anger isn't good for health lol... love this update it was amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update. Punchi is getting too angry. Arsh is asking his parents not to leave him seems like something is going to happen to one of them.

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