New FF: Har Sanson mein tum hi ho; PART 19 UPDATED PG 28 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
woh...👏
omg...what an FF...👏
i was so lost in ur story...i can clearly imagine those scenes...
thanks for writing dear...and also for informing me through PM otherwise i would have missed it...😆
plzz do continue...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shatika

woh...👏
omg...what an FF...👏
i was so lost in ur story...i can clearly imagine those scenes...
thanks for writing dear...and also for informing me through PM otherwise i would have missed it...😆
plzz do continue...😉

You are always welcome Shatika.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3:

The second part ended with Rishi's dream and his shattered mental condition after losing Tanuja.

Now, here the story goes to a totally different scene. The scene shifts to a village called Khed in Pune, where some constrution work was going on beside a river side.

The very suave and handsome aspiring business tycoon Manav Saxena was inspecting the work of the labourers for his future project at this place. Mr Saxena has a dream to start off a hospital in this village with some special facilities for the under priviledged people. While the work was going on in full progress suddenly a roar can be heard from the river side. Some of the workers near the river began to shout and creates a pandemonium seeing something floating in the water. Something was coming closer and closer to the shore with the flowing tides. Manav was quite irritated with this noise.

Manav: Kya hua? Tum sab itna shor kiu kar rahe ho, thik se kaam karo , hume deadline pe kam khatam karna hai.

A worker: Sabji, ye nadi me kuch hai, aap bhi aake dekhiye na . Abhi abhi hum mein se ek pani lane gye the nadi mein usne hi dekha ki..

Manav: oof ho kya dekha? Pata nahi kya prob hai in sab gaon wale ki.. Lagta hai mujhei jaake dekhna padega.

Manav comes forward to the spot from where the noise could be heard . As he came to the spot he saw a huge crowd near him. He went in the crowd and saw that a body of a woman was approaching slowly with the tides.

A worker: Sir, dekhiye na koi ladki hai , pata nahi zinda hai ya nahi. Sahed pani mein kund gyi thi.

In the meantime the body hits the shore and all of them present there surrounded her and started their humming and their discussions. Manav grew quite angry seeing this.

Manav: Are sab log hato iha se, mujhe pehle dekhne do ki ye ladki zinda hai ya nahi. Itna shor mat karo aur thora sa hawa lagne do unhe aise ghero mat.

The lady is none other than TANUJA who came floating down the stream from Mumbai , from that spot where the truck had hit her infront of Rishi.

Manav checked her pulses and found that she is still alive but the pulse beat is very slow.

Manav: Are ye zinda hai, jaldi karo inhe hospital le jana padega.

A worker: Par saabji is gaon pe to koi haspatal nahi hai.

Manav: Hmm janta hu , Mein unhe Pune le jata hu, chalo madat karo unhe gadi tak le jane ke liye. Hume jaldi karna hai, sas abhi tak chal raha hai par halat bahat hi nazuk lag raha hai.

Manav with the help of his workers took Tanuja in the car . He baegan to drive as fast as he can to reach Pune shortly.

After almost 2 hours of driving Manav reached Pune and rushed off to the City Hospital.

Manav: Dr; inka condition bahat I kharap hai, jaldi inhe admit ki jye

DR: Are Mr: Saxena aap tension ma lijiye sab hojayega, waise ye hai kaun?

Manav: Mujhe nahi pata Dr actually mere site pe mili ye , sahed koi accident hua huoga aur nadi pe gir gyi thi, Waise mein jaanta hoon ki kisi anjan patient ko aap log admit nahi karte par I think aap kuch kar sakte hai.

Dr: Are are ye aap kya keh rahe Mr: Saxena , baki sab ke sath j kiya jata wo aapke sath to nahi Kar sakte na. Aapka itna contribution hai is hospital ke liye, Don't worry abhi inka treatment chaalu karte hai.

Tanuja is taken to ICU with most of the important doctors rushing there for her treatment.

Manav has quite a big hold in this hospital.

Hours pass by , but the doctors are still checking Tanuja and no information has come to Manav. Suddenly Dr; Bakshi comes out and informs Manav about Tanuja's condition.

Dr: Mr. Manav, wo aapki patient ki halat bahat hi gambhir hai, pilkul respond nahi kar rahi hai, zinda to hai par koi harkat nahi hai unme.

Manav: Matlab kya hua hai unhe?

DR: Actually , pani ki force mein bahat der tak rahne ki waja se unka pura sarir bahat kamzor par gya hai aur waist se le kar pao tak pura paralytic ho gya hai.

Unhe thik hone mein pata nahi thik hogi bhi ya nahi par agar thik hui bhi to bahat time lagega.

Manav: Unka treatment chalu rakhiye, jitna ho sakta hai kijiye.

Here Tanuja's treatment is going on in full force and she was recovering slowly. Months are passing by. Almost 6 months have passed.

Rishi is still in dilemna of losing Tanuja, but he has a strong belief that Tanuja is alive, she can't leave him like this. The police department has also stopped any further investigation regarding Tanuja's case as they all are sure that she is no more. The Bedi family has slowly come out of this shock but they can't see Rishi in this condtion. On the other hand Rano is full to in her mood of searching a good bride for Rishi.

Rishi has again gone to that serious mode as he was in the last 20 years after losing Tanu. He hardly talks with anyone and remains engrossed in his office work.

Edited by Lornab - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update..
tanuja was saved by manav...
glad nothing happend to tanuja...
can you plz write dialogues in english..
becoz its tough to understand the language..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wao what a update kash kasam ki story bhi tum hi log handle krty kyu k humarry forum pr zyada ache writers hai. I am imagine clearly jo kuch bhi tumne likha hai superb excited for next update.
Edited by ManazzaShahid12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: aishu007

Nice update..

tanuja was saved by manav...
glad nothing happend to tanuja...
can you plz write dialogues in english..
becoz its tough to understand the language..

Thanx for liking and ya from next time onwards I'll make it in English. Writing Hindi dialogues is also a bit tedious to me as I personally am not very good in hindi. I being a BENGALEE its easier to write in English than Hindi.
Thanx for letting me to know your problem.
Edited by Lornab - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Interesting update
Uff i didn't like even in show that rishi tried to find guy for tanuja
On the other hand tanuja was hell bent on leaving rishi
The director & writer sucks the show & the show now out of top 20
But u write little different as Tanuja met with accident
Rishi is in shocked can't believe tanuja left him & now he has became same angry guy like he was after tanu's dead
Thank god manav saved tanuja
Hope tanuja will recover soon
I hate rano to the core she is so disgusting as mother as human being
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
loving it
can't wait for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AniSweety

loving it

can't wait for next

I'll update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanx for liking the story. From next time onwards the dialogues would be in English so that everyone can understand. Anyways, the forum seems to be so silent nowadays.
No new topics or disscussions even the comments on this new ff is also very view. I need ur reviews guys, I' m not an expert writer so little bit of reviews help me to further progress in my writing.
Anyways thanx to all.
Edited by Lornab - 9 years ago

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