New FF: Har Sanson mein tum hi ho; PART 19 UPDATED PG 28 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb story..
plz pm me when you update..
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Nice post 😊 well done... and continue with ur posts
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanx a lot ...Now I"ll update the next part very soon ...I will try it by today...
Thanx again..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello! Frnds thanx for your lovely comments. I have written the next part in a hurry may it can have some mistakes ,plss forgive for that.
Here I'm updating the part 2 of my story..

Part 2:-

The first part concluded with Rishi being unconcious seeing Tanuja's accident.

Now, we start with The Bedi Mansion where Rishi lay unconscoius. The passers by on the road stopped him from jumping into the huge stream nd at that time Manpreet called Rishi as he was nowhere to be seen in the house. Those people who helped Rishi answered the call and informed Manpreet about Rishi and he rushes to the spot for his bhai's rescue along with Yuvi and Raj. All of them reached there and also heard about Tanuja's accident and Rishi's condition.

Now present day, slowly Rishi was gaining consciouness and shouted "Tanuja" after gaining senses, then:

MP: Bhai aap shant ho jao plss, aapki tabiat kharap ho jayega

Rishi: Chote! Oh Tanuja ! Tanuja, mujhe use dhoondna hai, Use kuch nahi hone dunga mein, kuch nahin.

Rishi grew restless and so the doctor gave him some injections so that he could sleep for a while.

Doc: Meine abhi inj de diya, Rishi abhi soyega kuch der. Khayal rakhna hoga aap sabko ki Who jyada excited na ho jaye kiuki use shock attack hua hai so be careful.

Everyone in the Bedi house was very much worried for Rishi as they know that when he would come to senses he would not be able to tolerate the shocking ultimate fate of Tanuja.

Yuvi: Pata nahin ab Rishi ko kaise control kiya jaye?

Raj: Ek bar mere puttar ne apne pyaar ko ankhon ke samnei dam torte hua dekha aur iss bar bhi aisa I kuch hua hai, kiuki jaha se Tanuja giri ...

MP: Papaji, subh subh boliye, aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki Tanuja pilkul thik ho use kuch hua I na ho, kiuki agar Tanuja ko kuch ho gya na to bhai ko samhalna bahat mushkil ho jayega .

Biiji: Pata nahi Rishi ke sath I kiu barbar aisa hota hai, peechli bar mere bacche ka jo halat hua tha Tanu ki jaane ki bad wo soch kei to mera rom rom kanp uthta hai.

Rano to andar hi andar khush ho rahi thi , who soch rahi thi ki: Chalo accha I hua ki Tanuja aisei e mere bete ki zindagi se nikal gyi ab mein koi acchi si ladki dhoond ke Rishi ka shadi kar dugi. Tanu aur Tanuja ye dono ki saya bhi mere bete ki zindagi pe aur kabhi padna nahi chaiye.

On the other hand Rishi was dreaming about his lovely moments with Tanu, their marriage in the temple and then her death. Suddenly after that he sees Tanuja, coming coming close to him and Rishi was again engrossed in Tanuja's thoughts. He sees his nok jhok moments with Tanuja , their close , beautiful romantic moments, his frustation and his misbehaviour towards her. Finally he sees that Tanuja is going far away from him and he is running behind her. Tanuja slowly moving away and away and finally disappearing with the wind.

Rishi shouts, Tanuja! Mat jao mujhe chodke...

His dreams break and he gets up calling Tanuja ,

Rishi: Tanuja kiu ja rahi ho tum mujhe chodke, kahi nahi ja sakti ho tum. Tanu ki tarah tum bhi mujhe chodke mat jao...


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Suddenly a roar can be heard from the river side. Mr Manav Saxena was inspecting his work at the site when some of the workers near the river began to shout and creates a pandemonium seeing something floating in the water. Something was coming closer and closer to the shore with the flowing tides. Manav also rushed to the spot and saw a huge croud surrounding something.

Edited by Lornab - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update..
hope nothing will happen to tanuja..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm. Plzz update d next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
fantastic update year
can't wait of how rishi Tanja meet again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Another amazing update! Loved it! Feeling bad for Rishi!
Waiting for Tanuja's part unfold and TanShi to meet again! Hope you'll update next part soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice post 😊 and continue posts😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanx a lot for all of ur comments. I'll be updating soon...
Edited by Lornab - 9 years ago

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