Ishra New ss 'Dil De Diya Hai' part 16 pg 114 29/08 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for d new story Anju
superb start
Mr.arora killed raman's family so to take revenge
from him raman became gangster and killed him...
he hasn't come back to his previous lifestyle and
helps d needy people...
y ishita wants herself to be killed by raman!??
waiting to read further...
update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
interesting start
raman is a gangster and ishu has come to him to get herself killed
do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Wonderful n interesting start..
plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Omg😲...
It's superb.
Do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Nice n different concept. Awesome start.. great going anju.. love it stories... Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update anju
raman is a gangster
he killed all who r to b blamed fr hus family death
ishita gave him money to kill herself
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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<font size="5">Dil De Diya Hai</font>



PART 2


Placing the money on the bike he began to took out the photo from the cover. Because he wants to know that who is the person she wants to kill..When face inside the cover get in his eyes it widened with shock. He couldn't believed his eyes seeing the photo..Because it was her only..yes she wants him to kill herself...

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"Bhai kon thi who?" asking mihir comes to raman..

Raman: I don't know..but she wants me to kill her..

Mihir: what? Are you sure bhai..i mean why she want you to kill herself?

Raman: I am also thinking that? Uske shakkal dekhke kuch samajh nahi aya mujhe? (seeing her face I didn't understand anything)

Mihir: bhai you want to do this?

Raman: I don't know mihir..i think mujhe usse phone karna chahiye..

Mihir:number hai aapke pass? (Do you have the number?)

Raman: yah she gave me with her photo..

Mihir: bhai I don't think ki aap ko yeh karna chahiye..

Raman: tu tension math le Raman bhalla kabhi kuch galath nahi hone detha..

Mihir: I trust you bhai..

Raman: I don't know mihir but when I see her na..i felt like there is something which is pulling me to look at her..but don't know what..

Mihir: bhai you ar real na..mathlab mera raman bhai kisi ledki ko dekhe aisa ho saktha hai kya?

Raman: kyun mere aankhon ki jagah tujhe button diktha hai kya?

Mihir: nahi nahi bhai but its so strange na..i didn't see you like this before..

Raman: tu apna dimaag zyada math lega..kahi bhatt jayega..

Mihir: teek hai main na kuch boltha hun na kartha hun..ab aap hi decision lelo ki aap ko uss ledki ko maar na hai ya phir...

Raman: phir kya?

Mihir: phir biwi banana hai..saying mihir runs from there before raman can react..

Raman: mihir ke bacche rukk..saying raman smiled and ruffled his hair..

Entering inside his room raman went to his favorite place where his parents and siblings photo was.. looking at his family lovengily he looked at his mothers photo..

Raman: maa do you know..today I met a girl..i don't know much about her but I think at the first sight I like her..aap logo ke jane ke baath pehali baar hua hai aisa..but maa you know me very well na so you tell me what I do? She wants me too kill her but main tho kisi inzan ki jan bina wajheh kaise le saktha hun? You know na maa I am doing tall this not for money but justice..

It was ramans daily routine have a talk with his family..and it's the time he was feeling like he is not doing anything wrong with anyone..

Confessing his all feelings to his parents he will sleep hugging their photo..No one knows about his this habit even also mihir don't know about it..it was his secret and he don't want anyone to see this side of him

After talking to his family he called on ishita's number..its ringed many time but no one picked the call..and after the ninth call she picked it and said a hello in her weak voice..

Raman: hello are you fine..he asked feeling her week voice..

Ishita: you are ready na..she asked straightly..

Raman: why you want me to kill yourself?

Ishita: you have no right to question me..Do what I said I will pay for you..

Raman: but I can't.Realizing what he said he stopped himself for one second then again said.

" I mean main aise cases nahi letha"

Ishita: why..this is your job na..

Raman: No..killing someone is not my job..i am helping the needed persons for justice..

Ishita: so do justice for me too..kill me

Raman: are you mad..tumhe patha hai tum kya keha rehi ho, giving money to someone for killing herself is foolishness understand..

Ishita: I don't need your lectures..tell me one thing you kill me or nit..

Raman: No

Ishita: ok then I will look someone else other than you..bye mr.bhalla...saying ishita disconnected the call leaving a socked raman..

Raman: oh god what she said...no no I can't let her do that..agar main anhi mana tho who kisi aur se apne aapko marvayegi..i don't know what is her problem and also don't know why I am getting restless hearing her decision..but one thing is clear I will not allow anyone to kill her..


Saying he took her address from his pocket and left to her place..

After driving almost 15 minutes he reached in front of a big bungalow. Which is look like a palace..he was amazed seeing the lonely bungalow like none was lived there..

Raman: is she living here .. he thinks looking at the open gate..

Pushing the gate little more raman entered inside the compound and walked near to the front door..he was about to press the calling bell when a elderly man comes to him..

Man: koun ho? He asked in his shivering voice..hearing the question he turned and from the elderly man who was wearing a lungi and shirt that too with some dirt.

Raman: kakka aap yehan reha the ho?

Kakka: who are you? Kisse milna hai aapko?

Raman: I want to meet miss ishita..

Kakka: yehan koyi nahi hai tum ja sakthe ho? (none was here you can go)

Hearing kakka raman felt something strange but didn't want to argue with him..so he turned to go from there thinking the kakka was saying truth..

That's when he noticed ishitas car which she brought when she comes to meet him..realizing the elderly man was lying to him he asked..

Raman: app jhoot kyun bol rehe ho?(why are you lying?)

Kakka: I am not lying..main sach keha reha hunt um jao yehan se..

Raman: dekho I know ki ishita is inside..warna uski car yehan nahi hotha..

Kakka:what you want..iss time baby kisi se nahi milthi tum jao yehan se..

Raman: oh tho woh yehi hai..phir jhoot kyun bola aapne..hatto mujhe usse milna hai..

Kakka: baath samjho mera..jao yehan se baby ji isss waqth kissise nahi milthi..

Raman: teek hai who nahi milthi na lekin main tho miltha hun..let me go inside...saying raman entered inside the bungalow and find it fully silent...

Raman searched throughout the bang low running his eyes but didn't find anything..Thats when he heard some voices from the upstairs...expecting ishita there he takes his steps to upstairs..

He see many rooms there and all were locked but find one room open..He walked to the open room and tried to push the door little to see what is inside..

His eyes widened with shock when he see the blood filled floor..Pushing the door in a jiffy he get inside and searched for ishita..the room was little dark and he see someone was sitting on a big chair leaning back to it..it was moving straight and back continuously with the person..

looking at the shadow he realized it is ishita..he tried to call her but felt like to go near her..thats when he noticed her right hand..it was bleeding very badly..knowing the source of blood he rushed to her and find her looking at nothing but lost somewhere..

Raman: ishita..he called her name in a low voice..but didn't get any replay..

He tried to call her by shrugging her shoulder which made her to look at him with no expressions..

Raman: yeh sab kya hai? Your..your hand is bleeding..

He smiled hearing his words and it was the expression he was seeing her face which is like she was pretending to be smiled..

Ishita: tho aap aa hi geya..

She asked with the same smiling face..

Raman: what do you mean..he asked confusingly..

Ishita: I think you will kill me outside..but you are here..face to face..hai na..asking she gets up from the chair and walked to her bed..

Raman: ishita what are you doing..damit your hand is bleeding..

Ishita: kab maroge mujhe? She again asked giving shock again and again to him

Raman: paagal hai kya? Kya bakwas kiye ja rehi ho..

Ishita: bakwas kahan? Ab thak tho tumhe mujhe maar dalana chahiye the na..

Raman walked to her and said..

Raman: I am not comes here to kill you..but make understand you.

ishita: kya? Kya samjhane aye ho tum mujhe? Yehi ki main pagal hun?

Raman: see you are doing wrong..

Ishita: wrong...saying she takes a deep breath and said..

"yes..i was wrong..i was wrong in everything, every time and my whole life"aur iss baar bhi main wrong tha.."you know I should take help from someone else to kill me" nahi tho main zinda reha jayegi...

"look at this..dekho..saying she showed her bleeding hand to him..

"i tried my best to kill myself but nothing happened to me..see nothing happened...that's why I come to you..but you are also a failure like me..she pointed to herself..

Raman was shocked hearing her each words..

Talking all rubbish she lost her balance and began to fall..but the nick time raman holds her by waist from falling and picked her up in his arms..ishitas eyes were not fully closed..he noticed tears flowing from her eyes..an unknown pain comes to her heart seeing her tears..the one thing was he sure that the girl was in so much pain in her heart because it was clearly visible from her eyes..

Without wasting a second he took her to her car..And luckily the key was there..Settling her inside the car comfortably he drives to the hospital fast as much as he can..


Taking her in his arms he runs inside the hospital..looking for a doctor raman find a nurse saying her to call the doctor immediately he made her to lay on a structure..

After some minutes the doctor comes and began to check her fully..as per the instruction the nurse made ishitas wond stitched after giving her a injection..



Nurse: sir tell me her name so that I can complete the formalities..the nurse asked to raman..

Raman: ji..her name is ishita..

The nurse writes her name and again asked..

Nurse: ishita what sir, mathlab her full name..aap inka pathi ho na..

Raman looked at the nurse hearing her question but at that time he didn't want to rise any questions towards her so he said "yes"

Nurse: sir poora naam bathayiye..

Raman: ishita..ishita raman bhalla..he said taking a deep breath thinking its just for a formality..but the faith was having some more plans with them and it was not for a moment but forever...

After getting the prescriptions from the doctor he went to buy the medicines for her.it was a busy day so he got almost 1 hour to get her medicines..

after buying medicines when he comes back to the room he was again shocked seeing none was there..running to the nurse he asked to her getting panic..

Raman: nurse where..where is ishita..

Nurse: oh aap aaageye..she got discharged..

Raman: what? How..i went to take medicines na tho aap log usse discharge kaise kiya?

Nurse: sir its not our fault..she is adamant to get discharge..

Raman: you have to call me na..aise kaise..

Nurse: sir I tried but she said she will call you..so let her go..

Ramna: are you guys mad..patients ka khayal nahi rekh sakthe hai tho yeh hospital kyun kholthe ho aap log..rubbish..saying raman runsd out to sreach for ishita...

So guys here is the next part..hope you all like it..and hope all will comment on this update..i am waiting for your response..

Ignore typing mistakes..


Edited by Muskan193 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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UPDATED A NEW PART..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Y ishita want to kill herself??

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Posted: 8 years ago
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NICE CHAPPY
REVEAL THE SUSPENSE SOON

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