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Posted: 9 years ago

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Please give us the next part soon

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Nazzz16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Awesome teaser...

Waiting eagerly to read more !

Update soon !!

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#333

anjali explanation... is just beyond ..

arnav anger...

teaser good...

fast update

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Arnav Singh Raizada was angry to say the least. To think that someone who shares the blood running in his veins could go to any extent for their wish fulfillment was beyond a disappointment for him. Undoubtedly, he was a perfectionist and wanted everything perfect, be it at home or at work but it did not mean that he would put someone's life on stake to achieve that perfection. His logic screamed its frustration as it was unable to unravel the mystery of his family's actions.

"Chotte, open the door. We are ready to face your anger but don't give up on your food," said Anjali's voice from the other side of the door. He had shut himself inside, knowing that he would only vent his pent-up frustration if he faces anyone.

"Di, leave me. Please," he requested, burying his head into his palms, trying to ease his headache.

"If you love me, you will open the door, Chotte. Doctor had strictly advised you to not go without eating and to not take too much of stress. Please open the door. For me?" she pleaded with the most loving voice possible.

Arnav knew that he had melted with Anjali's words. Sometimes he wondered how his heart could be so crazy that two minutes of convincing from his family could make him forget everything but not even two days are suffice to convince him on professional front. Love truly was weird, he thought as he sighed and got up to open the door.

"That's like my little brother!" chirped Anjali as she walked into Arnav's room and placed the plate on the table. While ensuring that her brother had his lunch, Anjali was brought to Aranv's door with another motive on her mind. She turned to her brother, standing ever so nonchalantly and waiting for her to initiate the talk. She knew that Arnav was smart enough to realize that she wanted to discuss with him as well.

"I am sorry if our words hurt you, Chotte. I just want you to think through this with our perspective as well. We were only trying to take the best way possible to minimize the risk," she said, her eyes showing her sincere intentions.

Although he was prepared for the discussion, Anjali's justification just riled him further. In a situation where no amount of justification would be enough, it infuriated him that his sister was inflexible about convincing him that they were right.

"This is illogical, Di! If the fact that she is a virgin matters so much, then let me tell you that there are many ways for one to break a hymen, which I am sure Khushi would agree to," Arnav lashed.

"It's not just about that, Chotte. It's about hormones also. During pregnancy, hormones are on an overdrive and the euphoric feeling during that time can be stimulated, at least by a fraction, through love-making. And if the future mother is not exposed to the antigens of the father before birth, there are chances that a rejection reaction takes place and that can be fatal for both the child and the mother. The risk is just heightened by the fact that Khushi is a virgin, because her body never experienced any other antigen other than her own.Try to understand, Chotte," said Anjali, putting her expertise as a genetic engineer into use.

"All this for fulfilling your wish, Di? Don't you realize you are playing with lives here? Of course, wish-fulfillment is most important, right? After all, you both did so much for me, and its my duty to return the favor by doing this. Just basic expectation, ain't it? Go ahead, do it," he spat, making no attempt to hide his fury.

"Chotte," Anjali tried to speak but it was of no avail.

"Di, please! Leave. Me. Alone! You are getting what you wanted right? Now at least let me get the peace I want," lambasted Arnav, turning his face away from her as fury marred his features.

Realizing that staying there would be futile, Anjali silently moved out of his room while closing the door behind her.

"What have I got myself into?" questioned Arnav himself as he ran his fingers into his hair and shut his eyes to compose himself.

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Gupta House,

"Namaste Anjali Ji. How are you?" greeted Shyam, looking around him to see if anyone could hear him speak to Anjali.

"I am fine, thank you. I just called to inform of some changes we had to make after the consultation with the gynecologist, Shyam. I am sure, Khushi must have briefed you about the consultation, didn't she?" asked Anjali, her voice revealing no emotions.

A wave of panic took over Shyam. He had not spoken to Khushi yet as she reported to her office again to compensate for the lost time and wondered if the preliminary examination results were negative.

"I am afraid, I don't know what happened during the consultation, Anjali Ji. Khushi reported to her office and I did not have a chance to speak to her. Did the doctor mention about any complications?" he questioned as thought of the various possible complications.

"Unfortunately, yes. Doctor said that the fact that Khushi is a virgin could lead to complications to both her and the unborn in the future. But the issue can be resolved. The solution is zeroed down to Khushi spending a night with Chotte. Would she be okay with it?" Anjali's voice finally showed her fear of rejection and her nervousness and a streak of guilt which could be heard but not be distinguished.

Shyam was shocked to the say the least. If he knew Khushi at all, it would not be rocket science to realize that she would never accept it.

"Sleep with him? But why?" he demanded. He might love money more than his sister but it did not mean that he did not love her at all. After all, no brother would want his sister to be exploited by someone in a manner described by Anjali.

" The doctor is worried that Khushi's body would not be able to handle pregnancy and being a genetic engineer I know that, if she is not exposed to Chotte's antigens, it could cause a major issue in future. Are you understanding, Shyam?" Anjali was intent on knowing the answer as swiftly as possible and was praying that the answer would be positive.

"I am, Anjali Ji. I am afraid, I cannot give you an answer at this moment. I need to speak to Khushi about it and I am uncertain about her answer. I will try to convince her and get back to you with her answer," he answered, thinking about Khushi and her reaction to the proposition.

"Fine, Shyam. Bye," she said as hung up the call without waiting for his reply and Shyam was in a mood to not care about it.

Just then Khushi walked through the gate, completing her work. Although the manager said that working for the time she went out was not necessary, Khushi insisted that she would compensate for the time she took out.

"Khushi," Shyam uttered as he looked at her walking. Her form stiffened up as her brain started forming retorts to answer her brother.

"Anjali Ji had called. She spoke to the doctor apparently, who said that you might have complications in the future due to the fact of you being a virgin. And," he paused, unable to reveal the proposal of Raizadas.

"And?" she questioned, her intuition giving her the wrong signal. Being a virgin could not lead to serious complications, could it?

Taking a deep breath, Shyam let it all out, "They feel that the only solution to this is that you spend a night with Arnav Singh Raizada."

The words which crashed her world yet again were spoken yet again.

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Its something like a filler update. I just wanted to highlight the fact that both Anjali and Shyam are not evil to the core. Human beings expect a lot and they are being human. I am trying to show the extent to which one can go for wish fulfillment through this story. And about that antigens part, yes, it is biologically true. I did a bit of research and found out that virgin being a surrogate could be really dangerous, unless proper precautions are taken.

And yes! The response to the story has been overwhelming! Keep it coming! Thank you so much!

Edited by ..AgniJyotsna.. - 8 years ago

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nandrajogdivya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#336

Superb good nice like it thanks dear

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sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#337

Nice..
But I hate shy am n anjali..
They are too much..
How can they insult a woman's dignity just coz she agreed to be a surrogate...
Argh..
Disgusting..
Plz update soon

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#338

Nice update...

Hope arnav don't hurt khushi more...

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: sasir
Nice..
But I hate shy am n anjali..
They are too much..
How can they insult a woman's dignity just coz she agreed to be a surrogate...
Argh..
Disgusting..
Plz update soon

Sometimes when we say yes for something, people think they can get away by complicating the same and changing it. They don't realize that they signed up for something which has pre-destined consequences and not consequences set by them. Same is the case with Shyam and Anjali.