NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1* - Page 14

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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Anmol awesome update, loved it.

Thanks for the PM dear.


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Really cool yar..
Teddy day..!!
Glad to c d possiveness of nisha 4 her teddy
But sach m its looking more of kirti saurav love story dn NiBir..!!
Ik I hav said a lot mny times now..But Kya kru..in evry story I read I wanna read more n more of dere part only
But other dn dat story z going gr8
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Originally posted by: tani_0209

Really cool yar..

Teddy day..!!
Glad to c d possiveness of nisha 4 her teddy
But sach m its looking more of kirti saurav love story dn NiBir..!!
Ik I hav said a lot mny times now..But Kya kru..in evry story I read I wanna read more n more of dere part only
But other dn dat story z going gr8


Thanks tani 😳😳
@bold u know what I was thinking that I m ignoring them and I introduced this story of four people who's life change in this week. That's why maybe SaKi scene may come more then nibir.
Nibir ka part bhi aayega unke time pe unka 😉
Thanks again tani for pointing out my mistake 😳😳😳
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Thanks tani 😳😳
@bold u know what I was thinking that I m ignoring them and I introduced this story of four people who's life change in this week. That's why maybe SaKi scene may come more then nibir.
Nibir ka part bhi aayega unke time pe unka 😉
Thanks again tani for pointing out my mistake 😳😳😳

Thanks to mat hi bolo yar..mjhe lgra tha I should hav said sorry 4 saying things dat way🥱
But yeah I'll b waiting 4 nibir scenes😊
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Originally posted by: tani_0209

Thanks to mat hi bolo yar..mjhe lgra tha I should hav said sorry 4 saying things dat way🥱
But yeah I'll b waiting 4 nibir scenes😊


No no sorry yaar...
I'm not perfect if I'm lacking then someone should point out my mistake 😊
So m happy you put your point 😊
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Promise Day




1...2...5...and 6 " said Sharon

Kabir it's 6..." Screamed Sharon as kabir missed the lift

Arey yaar/ offo ohh " said the remaining

Sorry sorry..."

What is happening to you kabir !! Why are you forgetting the count..?? This is 6th time" asked sharon being annoyed with him

Pata nhi kya hogaya hai isse asie hi kar raha hai subha se " said tarun

Kya hua kabir ? " asked Sharon softly

Pata nhi aaj mera mann nhi kar raha " he replied irritatedly as he himself don't know what was happening to him

Hmm yaar aaj kal kuch bhi karne ka mann nhi karta " said sneha

Haan na bhout stressed out hogaya hai " said tarun

Yeah...guys hum sab ne kitne dino se sath me masti bhi nhi kiya " said Sharon

Haan yaar last time hum sab sath new year me gaye the" said priya Sharon's one of chamchi

Haan...!! Toh aaj bhi practice nhi hogi kya??" Asked Swayam normally, kabir take it as taunt so he spoke angrily " nhi, hum practice karenge...log late aate hai vo theek hai par mera mood kharab hai toh sab ko problem hai "

Main Asia nhi bol raha " Swayam defended

Let it be...main tujhse baat nhi kar raha hun " showing his hand to him said kabir

Arey yaar koi jang mat chedo yahan... Or tu Swayam ek din dance nhi karega toh marr nhi jayega...or waise bhi competition mein time hai abhi " said sneha

Kabir tum kyun asie waise logon ki baaton se apna mood or kharb kar rahe ho " taunted Sharon which hurt alot Swayam

Chill guys...ye sab chodo or chalo sab movie dekhne chalte hai...waise bhi ab koi class hai bhi nhi hai " said ashu try to change the topic

Haan good idea what say kabir ?" Asked tarun

Hmm jaisa tum log chaho " kabir replied sadly

Tu chalega ke nhi ??" Tarun asked

Swayam chalega toh main nhi jaunga " he said clearly making everyone shocked except Swayam as he used to kabir's hatred for him

Okay no problem aap sab jao " said Swayam and went from there which make Sharon very sad but she said nothing due to her image

Arey Swayam " tarun called but no use he already left

Ye kya hai kabir?? he's part of our group...how can you say this to him " asked sneha furiously

Acha vo Jo mujhe taunt mara uska kya ?" Kabir asked

Vo taunt nhi mara bas vo pucha tha " said ashu

Ashu tu bhul raha hai tu mera best friend hai " kabir shouted

Stop it everyone just stop it...kon sahi tha kon galat ye discuss mat karo or hamara pura group movie dekhne jayega and it's final " said Sharon with her attitude

Sneha tell Swayam to join us and it's my order and everyone go change fast... Quick I want everyone at entrance of college in 15 minutes...get that ?" asked Sharon to which everyone nodded and left to change

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Ruk na nisha..." Stopped Swayam to nisha then continue "main mana kar dunga phir ghar chalte hai"

Abey nhi tu jaa na apne friends ke sath main city bus se chali jaati hun ghar " said nisha

Nhi na nisha mujhe nhi jana...main ghar chalunga " said Swayam

Kyun tera vo dance group hai...tum log aisa karoge toh utna hi acha bonding hoga" said nisha

Par mujhe nhi jana na " he cried

Kyun nhi jana hai bey tujhe ??" Asked nisha as Swayam hadn't told nisha anything about his and kabir's argument

Mann nhi hai mera " he lied

Kyun nhi hai mann ??" She asked crossing her hands across her chest

Kyunki iska or kabir ka fight hogaya hai " said sneha coming to them

Fight ??" Asked nisha being all confused while Swayam bite his tongue as he don't want share this incident with nisha and he know that nisha will got to know that she'll be hell angry

Sneha told her whole matter which make nisha hell angry not at kabir but at Swayam because he never defense for himself. She looked at Swayam angrily and slapped him. This scene was witness by whole Swayam's dance group including a happy kabir and an angry Sharon.

Mujhe samjh nhi ata hai tu kyun khud ke liye kuch nhi bolta ?" She asked furiously

Main kya bolta use ? " he asked

Kuch bhi bolta use, bolta Oye kutte tu bhouk na band kar " kabir could hear to heavy chuckle from behind as tarun and ashu was about laugh but kabir was just infront of them. Kabir turned and glare them and they control their laugh

Acha tu bol de kabir ko " Swayam said chuckling on her words

Main kyun bolun ?" She asked

Toh mujhe kyun bol rahi hai bolne ko? "

Kyunki vo tujhe kuch bhi bolta hai mujhe nhi ek din mere samne muh toh chalaye...muh Tod ke hath me nhi de diya toh mera naam bhi Nisha Gangwal nhi " she said

Acha ??" Swayam asked with naughty glint which no one can sense it expect nisha, she understood what he said and smiled and said nodding her head "acha!!" Which hurt kabir alot.

Chal jhooti !!" Swayam mouthed

Chup kar..." She said

Hiii nishu..." Tarun greeted, try to stop NiYam's conversation, kabir was shocked on word nishu

Hii tarun " nisha said with smile as she saw TaKaShu together

Hii nishu " said ashu too which slides earth from kabir's foot

Hii ashu " she said with warm smile

What happened to you kabir ?? Why are you looking at ashu and tarun like this ??" Asked priya seeing kabir expression, where as Swayam was too shocked only nisha's close one call her nishu but he was not shocked like kabir was.

Tarun and ashu turned their head to look at kabir and try hard to not to laugh at his expression as kabir mouth was opened to the kilometers and eyes were big as balloon.

Acha guys chalo city mall chalte hai whan dekh lenge kya karna hai " said Sharon try to be normal as that slap scene was never leaving her eyes increasing her hate for nisha more

Hmm...chalo bye guys " nisha said and was about leave tarun said "nisha why don't you join us ?"

No what I will do with you guys ??" She said

Arey tu toh aise bol rahi hai jaise kisi ko janti nhi...movie dekhenge masti karenge or kya?" Asked sneha

Nhi yaar...tum log jao main ghar hi jati hun" she replied

Arey nisha join us na...kabir tu hi bol na ise " said ashu

Haan nisha join us na " said kabir

Swayam ko bhi pucho toh main chalungi " she said

Swayam toh chal hi raha hai isme puchna kya " kabir replied

Par..." Nisha start when Sharon said " guys Maine bola tha hum 15 minutes me chalenge ye kya time pass ho raha hai yaha ?" She asked getting irritated

Okk final sab chal rahe hai city mall come nisha tu humare sath chal " said tarun and pulled nisha with him

Kabir and Swayam looked at him shocked while other also went to their car or scooty.

Chal na kabir drive kon karega ? Aaja Swayam humare sath" Asked tarun screaming at kabir and Swayam

Main gadi laya hun...main akele kaise jaunga ?" Swayam asked

Arey koi nhi ashu tu Swayam ke sath aa...kabir aa na " said tarun

Kabir come and settled at driver seat beside him tarun was sitting and at back seat nisha was adjusted. Kabir was about to start car when ashu come and said " tarun tu bhi chal mere sath "

Kya bey main teri biwi hun kya jo tere se chipka hi rahunga ?" Asked tarun on which nisha laughed in his irritated tone

Nhi bey chal na tu " said ashu almost pulling him out as he had opened the door

Arey yaar...kabir main jaa raha Swayam ke sath " tarun said and left nibir alone now kabir understood tarun's master plan behind pulling nisha with him.

On the other nisha was hell shocked what happened in just few minutes, she was left alone with kabir, she was scared being alone with kabir, she like him because of his look, talent and nature which was good with other expect Swayam, but she can never trust him as a gentleman as he was famous for two things first he's dancing talent and second because Playboy's nature. From the time he had join college he change his girlfriend quarterly. That's why nisha hate love seeing him using girls just like tissue paper she decide she'll never express her love to him and maintain a good distance with him as seeing him with new girl her heart pained but being with him will be more painful and she don't want to be his next tissue paper. First time when nisha was left alone with him at chat stall she wasn't scared as this time she was scared because last she was in public place but this time she was in his car and he can do anything with her.

Main bhi jaati hun Swayam ke sath " nisha said sweating hard and left his car while kabir get disappointed with this but today luck was with him, nisha went out but she was late and Swayam already left with tarun and ashu as Swayam too want that nibir come close to each other.

Kabir start his car and stopped near nisha and asked her to come inside. Nisha had no option as Swayam would kill her for going home back. So she sit at passenger seat. Kabir was super happy he want freeze the time and go long drive with nisha.

Nisha tumne mujhe kutta bola tha " he start conversation playfully

Toh tumne bhi toh mere best friend se rudely baat ki "

Par taunt toh pehle wahi mara tha na "

Vo taunt nhi mara tha vo bas puch raha tha ki kya karna hai "

Tum nhi samjhti ho nisha... Swayam utna acha nhi hai jitna vo dikhata hai "

Excuse me..."

Yeah nisha he's not so good guy...you should stay away from him " kabir said as he don't know that Swayam and nisha being best friend from childhood as NiYam never told anyone about this and Sharon also think the same as kabir and Sharon saw NiYam being together in college so they thought that nisha and Swayam become friends in college only

Please mujhe kiske sath rehna kiske sath nhi ye tum mat batao mujhe it's non of your business " she said

I'm just warning you...tum Swayam ko nhi janti ho "

Main Swayam ko ache se nhi janti ?? main ? Are you out of your mind ?" Nisha asked

Main bol raha hun na nisha...Swayam acha nhi hai tum use durr raho " he said sternly being annoyed with nisha as he was very stubborn, he want that things should go according to him only

Okk thanks for your warning " said nisha as she was in no mood to fight with him seeing his voice turning bossy then they both didn't talk.


They reached in few minutes, kabir parked his car as soon as he done nisha move out as she saw Swayam talking with ashu and tarun as only they had come other were on the way.

When she was going kabir stopped her by saying " I hope nisha tum meri baat samjho or Swayam se durr raho " nisha give him a annoying look and went to Swayam which make kabir angry.

Swayam..." She screamed

Nisha " he too screamed in same tone

Wah kushi toh dekho abhi kuch derr pehle aana nhi tha " she taunt him

Kya karun toh main dukhi ho jaun?"

Sauk se " she replied

Hahaha" he faked laughed while tarun and ashu joined kabir who was standing alone with his car looking at nisha.

Toh bhai maza aaya nisha bhabhi ke sath "asked ashu

Meri baat nhi sunti hai vo...main uske bhale ke liye hi bol raha tha " said kabir his voice reflected hurt by being ignored by nisha

Ohh God kabir...please don't tell me ki tu nisha se bol diya ki Swayam se duur rahe ?" Asked tarun being irritated

Main kuch galat thodi bola he's not a good guy " said kabir

Kabir Swayam nisha ka best friend hai iss baat ko accept kar or tujhe nisha ki life me Swayam ki place nhi leni hai, apni ek place banani hai " said tarun

Mujhe abhi kuch nhi karna hai, abhi main bas nisha or Swayam ko sath nhi dekhna chahta " he said being stubborn looking at tarun only when he finished his line they heard nisha and Swayam laughing uncontrollably. This sight hurt more kabir

Swayam and nisha were laughing like there is no tomorrow as nisha told Swayam what kabir said and that was enough for Swayam to laugh like lunatic. Soon they control their laugh as everyone join them including kabir and his friends.

So let's go guys..." Said Sharon

Yeah let's go... Lo lift bhi aagai " sneha said and everyone went inside the lift except SwaRon as it was full of they come in it will become overloaded.

Arey yaar..." Said Sharon

Chalo koi baat nhi whan ek or lift hai chalo use chalte hai... " said Swayam pointing toward an another lift at opposite side which was not used commonly by public.

Okk chalo " she said

They both went, only they were in the lift and they have to go 3rd floor of the building as theatre was at 3rd floor. It was their good luck or bad luck it's depend on Swayam and Sharon only, that lift stopped.

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Jaa tarun koi bhi abhi ke show 13 tickets book kar " said kabir

Haan koi bhi par jaldi " nisha said

Koi toh nhi aana chah raha tha...?? Ab jaldi karo " Tarun teased nibir

Arey " nibir said in unison then looked at each other and smile at each other forgetting what happened few minutes ago.

Tarun went ticket counter while nibir ask everyone to give their bag they will go and to submit their bags at bag counter, kabir try to initiate the conversation with her.

Ummm nisha gussa ho ??" He asked

Why would I ??"

Vo Swayam wali baat pe..."

Look you give me warning and I heard you clearly...now stop talking about him"

But nisha I'm your friend that's why... "

Dosti vo kab hui ??"

Toh hum dost nhi hai ??"

Nahh... Or na ho sakte hai... You're only my seat partner nothing else " she said directly looking in his eyes, her words stabbed him in his heart. He was hurt completely hurt but nisha was okay because of her feeling she can never be kabir's friend. So she said it clearly but kabir was too dumb to understand this.

All of them enter into PVR cinema to buy popcorn and other things while tarun asides kabir and ask the reason of being sad.

Nisha mujhe apna dost tak nhi manti...or boli hum kabhi dost ho bhi nhi sakte " he said almost verge of crying

Abey gadhe ye toh acha hi hai na...dekh nisha bhabhi teri friend nhi girlfriend banegi phir fiance phir...?" Tarun asked

Wife...!!"

Correct...toh tu uska lover banega friend nhi...smjha ?"

Haan " said kabir by advertising Colgate paste, showing his 32 teeth perfectly

Good..!! ab chal abhi dekh sab andar bhi chale gaye " tarun said, drag kabir with him

They enter in their audi. And saw everyone was settled and ashu was sitting beside nisha and to his left side he kept seat for kabir and tarun.

As soon as kabir reach to their seat ashu left his seat and sit down to next seat so kabir can sit with nisha.

Swayam or sharon nhi aaye ??" She asked

Haan vo aajaenge maine security ko bol diya hai or Sharon ko bhi msg kar diya hai aaye toh mujhe call kare main lene chala jaunga " tarun said

Okay " she replied. With that she started enjoying her movie and kabir his movie the face of nisha. He adore her every expression, sometime smiling, serious, shocked, amused looking at her every action of her face, how her eyes were changing color, dance of her eyebrows.

Kabir's monologue "kiti sundar hai ye... Sirf face se nhi heart se bhi...nisha I want you...nisha I need you...want to be part of your life...want to get special place in your...haayye smile karte waqt or bhi beautiful lagti hai... Aaj promise day hai na nisha...I promise you that I'll always make you laugh... Or try to make you laugh" and he kept adoring her even at interval

The movie was so exciting that everyone forget about SwaRon, kabir didn't see movie, his hole attention was on nisha only. And seeing nisha he forget everything--every time.

Movie come to end make their viewers very much excited. Everyone who was leaving the hall praising the actors work except kabir as he hadn't saw a single scene of movie. Coming out everyone realize that SwaRon hadn't come yet. Nisha went to bag counter takes everyone's bag. As soon as she got her bag she took out her phone to dial Swayam's number but was shocked to 12 miss call and 5 msg from Swayam.

Ohh shit..." Said nisha

What happen ??" Asked priya

Swayam and Sharon were stuck in lift " nisha said and went to security guard for help.

Security guard informed everyone, they call electrician to check everything and bring out Sharon and Swayam safely from lift. Soon lift was opened only to bring a hell shocked Swayam who was sitting on floor at corner facing the wall and Sharon was looking at Swayam but she face the door of lift.

Swayam..." Nisha shouted which bring Sharon to earth, she stood up seeing everyone and looked at Swayam for last time then went from there to face everyone's questions bank. But Swayam didn't move an inch.

Everyone behind Sharon bombarding her many questions while nisha and rohan (one of member of dance group and Swayam's good friend) stood there. Nisha enter into the lift, try to make Swayam face her. When Swayam turned nisha and rohan chuckled as Swayam was hell shocked, his mouth was wide open and eyes were big as football.

Nisha and rohan bring Swayam out from lift. Nisha can sense something fishy. So she ask rohan to join other so she could have talk with Swayam.

Swayam kya hua ?" She asked only to get no response

Swayam..." Nisha said and shake him badly to which he said "I love you too"

Hain ?? Kya ??" Asked nisha being shocked

Sharon kahan hai ??" Swayam asked being in more shock

Vo toh gayi...par hua kya ??"

She proposed me " he said ever so softly, nisha heard it but couldn't believe her ears so she said "what ??? say it clearly "

Flashback

SwaRon enter into the lift, in few minutes lift's lights were started flickering. Then lift also shaking both feel like lift is going to fall. And it's very dangerous if lift fall they may die in this accident.

Sharon was hell scared, she was suffocating while Swayam was too scared but he was guilty also.

Sharon look...I'm sorry..." Swayam start but stopped in middle because Sharon hugged him all of sudden.

Swayam ek baat hai...aaj agar kuch hogaya use phele main tumse kuch kehna chahti hun...I love you... I love you Swayam" She said hugging him tightly and shivering also
Swayam was not able to believe what he heard just now. He never expected that Sharon will reciprocate his feeling. He was happy, shocked, confuse, nervous and what not. Due to shocked he fainted right there in her arm

Flashback end

Hahahaha you fainted there I know aisa hi kuch hoga " said nisha laughing uncontrollably

Phir Sharon tujhe hosh me laai or tune bhi confess kar liya right ?" Nisha asked with hope

No...Sharon mujhe kabhi hosh me laa hi nhi payi main toh bas ankhe khola hua tha..." He said with teary eyes

Gayi bhes pani me... Abey gadhe ye kya kiya chal abhi jaa or Sharon ko ilu bol " she shouted

Main Sharon ko rokti hun..." She said and went to the dance group who was standing there at little distance. They were shocked as Sharon hadn't reply any questions instead she went from there cryingly.

Sharon ??" Nisha come to find Sharon but she already left

Nhi hai vo yahan Swayam ne kya kiya Sharon ke sath Jo vo rote hue yahan se gayi ??" Asked tarun this time

Kuch nhi kiya iss liye ro rahi thi vo...mera bevakof friend ka kuch nhi ho sakta " she said to tarun making everyone gasp at her answer

Swayam vo gayi tu gadi nikal..." Nisha said Swayam

Nisha tum Swayam ke sath mat jao he's not safe, dekha na abhi Sharon ke sath kya kiya usne " kabir said

Nhi dekha kyunki main movie dekh rahi thi" she said Swayam bring his car stopped near nisha entered and both left behind hell angry gang.

Guys chalo Sharon ke pass chalte hai...pata nhi kya hua lift" said sneha

Okay..."

Swayam aaj yehi time hai apni driving skill dikhane ka...chal jaldi Sharon ki gadi ko cover kar " motivated nisha with that Swayam flied the car soon they spotted sharon's car.

Swayam drive fast so he could overtake her then stop his car infront of her's

What the hell... " Sharon Screamed coming out from car as she applied sudden break if not then a good accident going to take place

Go for it Swayam all the very best " bosted nisha

Swayam come our of car, Sharon who was screaming at him, her facial expressions turned clam.

Swayam sat on his knees and forward a ring box infront of her.

I know I'm the one who should say this first but I'm not like other guys who are good in talking about this stuffs. I'm very simple guy Sharon very simple who had simple dream of making proud his parents at him that's it. That was my life until I saw you at inter school dance competition. I was at 9th when I saw you at first and my lost heart at you in that single moment. I got interest in dance because of you. Because of you I have join this college. I kept this ring with me, long back always think to propose you but couldn't as I always thought I don't worth you...Sharon when you confess I just couldn't believe my star that's why I wasn't able to reply that I love you more more than you imagine... I love you too Sharon...and I promise that I'll love you more more and more " Swayam said looking at a girl who was crying in happiness. She don't waste more time went on her knees and hugged Swayam tightly.

But their moment was soon broken by traffic behind them and nisha who too was crying in happiness as she screamed loud in happiness.

Swayam broke the hug and made her wear the ring. He stood up and help Sharon to do same. Both parked car aside so traffic can be released.

Nisha and Swayam started dancing like mad person on footpath while Sharon laughed seeing them. Nisha stand on bonnet of car started dancing. Nisha was supper happy because she was sure Swayam is going to give treat. Yeah she was happy for SwaRon too but for her more important is food.


To be continued...

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Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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awesme udpate👏👏
well done dear 😃

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