#2..Manan Love Stories ..Teri aadat hai updated@pg60 27th jan - Page 28

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Loved cavya
Finally there is some progress in manan relation
Now they r friends wow
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
this part was awesome
so Manik got Nandini ke friendship now soon make Nandu that she loves Manik make them together
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sooo cuteee
Manik is love


Love how Nandini cares about Manik

Awesome
Cabir and his tricks are too funny

Loved it
Superb update


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
Manan friendship..
Naughty manik..
Manbir tak..
Luvd it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow...
manik is such a tease..
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manan moment was mind blowing..
dosti hogaye..
perfect..
cavya went to date..
aab manan ka kya???
waiting for the next..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
Finally manan are friends
Eagerly waiting to see them as a couple
Loved cabir's teasing😆
Came to a little bit about manik
Loved the way how nandini consoled Manik
And thanks for the pm
And continue soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pls update next part i am waiting and your story is awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago



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Sorry in advance for mistakes

Part 4(e)


Nandini saw him with hope but his cute sad face tells her the whole story...

She takes a deep sigh and then by putting a pillow in her lap rested her face on her palms...

Manik saw her cute sitting style and adored her with a smile then he walked towards his cupboard and after opening it he started searching something... after a mint when he pulled out his hand Nandini saw a chocolate bar in his hand...

Her eyes started shinning like that kid whose parents gave him his fav candy...Manik gazed her face and found that excitement on it...

So with his smiling face he came near her and sat with her on his own bed with folded legs...

Nandini also sat straight and looked at that chocolate bar with hungry eyes...

Manik: U want it na...?

Nandini nodded puppily...

Manik fwd his hand towards her but when she was about to take that bar from him he pulled back his hand...

Nandini humped in irritation: Manikkk.

Manik: Huh what... dekho chocolate 1 hai and hum 2 so yeh tumhe merey sath share karna hoga... he said it while unwrapping that bar...

Nandini: Ok...

Manik with a grin takes the 1st bite while eyeing her expression...

She makes kiddish face with extended lips...

Manik controlled his smile and once again put that bar in his mouth and then offered her to take that bar by broking the chocolate but for the 1st time in all their cozy moments Nandini thought it

otherwise...

Her eyes became wide on his offer...

She turned her face and mumbled which was audible for Manik: yeh phir se start ho gya... abhi to dosti hoe and phir se yeh sub... Ayiappa kya karon main...

Manik heard her sweet crib and danced in his heart...

Then after a moment he controlled his smile and then pat on her shoulder...

Nandini turned back towards him and saw his face ... That bar was still in his mouth and then he eat some chocolate and gave the remaining bar to Nandini...

While saying: itna kya sochne baith gayi tum ... chocolate khani hai ya nahi...

Nandini in lil angry tone: khani hai but aise nahi jaise tum kah rahe ho...

Manik said like the most innocent soul of the world: what main ne kya kaha... I only said to break it with your hands... kya pahle kabhi kisi ko aise chocolate break kartey nahi dekha...

Now it hit in her mind what was he saying and on her silly thoughts she closed her eyes in shy...

Manik also holds his laugh and said : What u thought ... and why this red color came on your face huh?

Nandini checked her cheeks in consciousness: Red color where...?

Manik : 1st tell me tum ne kya socha huh? (then with fake shocked face) O God ... like seriously... You think that... And he started laughing...

Nandini saw him in embarrassment but then thought: what is my fault in this... last kitney time se is ki harkatein hi aisi haan to koi bhi aisa hi sochta na...

She saw him still laughing and then with her angry face she patted his shoulder to gain his attention...

Manik while laughing: hmmm

Nandini: stop right now Mr Manik... nahi to...

Manik again in his laugh: Nahi to kya Nandini...

Nandini makes a punch and she was about to hit him but Manik holds her hand in time...

With a cute eyelock Manik asked: U want to hit me...

Nandini like kid complain: Tum hans kyo rahe ho... tell me what is my fault huh... ajj se pahle har time tum chipakne aur kiss karne ki try me rahe ho to ab koi bhi aisa hi soche ga na...

Manik heard her lame explinition and again while controlling his smile said: so it means u were waiting for a kiss...

Nandini with wide open eyes: Huhhh Nooo

Manik with teasing grin: If u want then tell me I don't mind...and waise bhi friends aik dosrey ki help k liye hi hote haan na... (at this point he pulled her to himself with a jerk and her head landed on his chest)

Nandini felt that their(Manan) heart beats with the same fast pace at that time and that was the strange thing for her...

She at once moved back and gave an angry look to Manik...

Manik noticed her angry state and then he raised his hands up in the air in defeat while saying: Ok baba sorry... aise ghuse se nahi dekho... I was just teasing you... but I think kuch zyada ho gya... So isi liye ... main ne decide kiya hai k kal hum dono friends shopping pe chalein gay...

Nandini again got a shock on his announcement and then she said: Mujhe kisi shopping pe nahi jana ... merey pass bht se kapre haan...

Manik again offered her chocolate which came in his hand when he held hers...and said: Arey Miss Murty app se kis ne kah diya k hum kapron ki shopping pe chalein gey...

Nandini with confused face: Toh?

Manik: Arey yaar I know k u like gadget bht pasand haan... So unhi ki shopping kare gey na... I saw a telescope in your room back there...

Nandini: Acha wooo ya... I like gadgets... and my fav binocular is not with me ne so ajjkal telescope se hi kam chala rahe hoon...

Manik: your fav binocular...?

Nandini: Hmmm my appa gifted me that one...

Manik: then its done kal hum bhi aik binocular purchase karen gey...

Nandini: No manik o ski koi zarorat nahi hai...

Mnaik: Arey aise kaise zarorat nahi hai...tell me os telescope ko bhi tum use kar rahe ho na...

And that remind her of that kharoos boss again and she said in hard tone: Ya kiya tha aik kharoos boss ko os k hi office ki kuch secret batane k liye...

Manik: u mean wo samne wali industry ... kya naam tha ya Malhotra industry...

Nandini: Ya wohi Malhotra industry... don't know os kharoos ne meri baat pe kuch dehan bhi diya k nahi... wapis ja k wo bhi dekhna pare ga...

Manik said without thinking: wo os ki tum tension nahi lo wo problem to tumhare jane tak solve bhi ho gya hoga...

Nandini in astonishment: how do u know...?

Manik fumble...wo ... wo ya... ab tum ne un ki itni help ki like u told in our 1st meeting to un ne bhi koi action liya hi hoga...

Manik: ok leave it tum yeh chocolate khao na... ab tumhe bhook nahi lag rahe... And after that Nandini started relishing that chocolate like a kid...

She didn't bother to offer him as well... She ate it by herself while enjoying it ...

And here Manik was only niharofying her in that whole time...

Nandini's hands became dirty with chocolate and while making a face she thought to clean them with water but before she go ... Manik holds her hand and once again teased her senses by licking her fingers which was full of chocolate...

Nandini felt butterflies in her stomach on feeling the warmth of his mouth on her skin...the flipflop feeling was teasing her whole body...but in all this the strange thing was she didn't stop him from licking her fingers... infact she liked that feeling inwardly...

On the other side Manik was also enjoying his time... he didn't knew that A chocolate feels this much yummm before this... he takes his own time by licking and nibbling that chocolate from her fingers...

After relising that chocolate from her fingers he said: Hmmm so yummy ... Hai na Nandini...

Nandini in that trace hmmm in yes...

And Manik with a proud look gazed her startled state and a grin appears on his lips for this successful teasing session... he knew how much his actions affected that cute soul but she was still unaware of that fact...

Nandini saw her handa and then at once moved towards washroom to wash her hands... In washroom she saw her image in mirror and found a red blush on her cheecks...

She checked her cheeks by touching them and found them a lil hot than usual...

In confusion she asked to herself: Am I not well...? Temperature ...?... Then she placed her hand on her forehead but that seems to be normal... she told herself: No... temperature to nahi hai... phir merey cheeks hot kyo... and this red color... am I blusing...? huh...? No why would i?

In all her confusion questions her heart told her: May be due to Manik's act... May be he and his touch started affecting you...?

Nandini: Nooo... shutup aisa kuch nahi hai... I know he is a lil chipku type... but... why would I effected by him...?aisa koi reason bhi nahi... we are friends wo bhi abhi kuch time pahle bane... to... yeh effect and all kahan se a gya... then she splash some water on her face and said: Leave it Nandini... lagta hai Manik ki company k side effects haan... Tu kuch bhi sochey ja rahe hai...

Outside Manik self talk

Wooo her skin so soft and warm and it felt so good in my mouth... hai na... but yeh larki... itna kuch ho raha hai hamare bech... God hint pe hint diye ja rahey haan... But yeh... yeh to abhi basic abc pe hi nahi aye...kaise samjahon is pagal ko... K hamari chemistry made for each other wali hai...

Nandini came out and in silence sat on the bed... whereas Manik picked his laptop to play some game...

After about 5 mints Nandini with puppy face asked: Hamein abhi aur kitni dair aise yahan rehna hai... yeh Navya aur cabir haan kahan...

Manik while smirking: Date pe gaye haan ... and date se itni jaldi thore hi wapis aein gey...

Nandini who was feeling tired coz of lack of energy said: Mujhe bhook lag rahe hai and now I am feeling low due to this...

Manik also with puppy face told her: Sorry but merey pass wo aik chocolate hi tha...

Nandini rested her head on headboard with lack of energy...

Mnaik when saw her state he once again dialed Cabir's number...

Cabir: Haan hello... kya hoa Romeo... teri Juliet ne kuch kiya kya?

Manik heard his bakwas and in anger he threatened him: Agar tu apni zindagi chahta hai na... with in 10 mints tu yahan farm house pohanch warna...

Cabir knew that he will be in danger if he didn't listen him...



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Edited by cute-aly - 7 years ago

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