Ishra SS-Tum mere aasma mere zameen ban Gaye- Teaser on pg 124 on 11/3 - Page 24

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadianvi

Nice starting. Raman injured and after a lot of thinking Ishita decide to help him. Truck driver also helps her. Ishita stays in hospital. Cont soon


Thankyou somuch nisha for your comment .
Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Good start

Ishu wanted to die but though I ofsaving a life before that
Raman us married
Ishu somehow brought him to hospital

Waiting for next


Thankyou somuch lalita .
But its a chotu comment .

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: gunita_ishra

Lovely updte dii
ishita came to suicide & saw raman hanging
she thought to help him before dying
raman told her all story how he got there
she lift him up
and took help of a truck driver & admitted him to hospital
both ishita & truck driver filed FIR
she managed money too
& waiting for him to gain concious
nice one
continue soon dii
thnkq 4 pm


Thankyou somuch gunita for your lovely comment..
Ishita and truck driver helped Raman and saved his life .
Will cont asap
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kpkaru93

Lovely update sis,,,, v knw ishra r leads but here first part tht truck driver play huge role,,, whoever help other persons difficult times will becme hero,,,, and hats off to u the way u sketch ishitha charter


Thsnks a lot mahesh for your lovely comment .
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyag28

lovely. ishita want to die. raman want to live. ishu take raman to hospital. update soon


Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: divya17.8

You have already crossed 150 likes. Now update next part soon.

Waiting for next update.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello friends atlast I m back with next part of this story .Here's the next part .

Part 2

Soon the treatment of Raman started while police started their investigation. Ishita atlast gave her ring to the truck driver ,he deposited money which he had and left the hospital. Atfirst Ishita also thought to leave but then thought may be Raman will need some more help ,so she thought to wait till he gain his consciousness.

Now it was morning ,ishita was sleeping in sitting position resting her head on the wall.She opened her eyes listening to the choes .She composed herself went to washroom and freshened herself.She then went to the nurses and asked her about Ramans condition, the nursed informed that his operation has been done and he is now shifted to ICU as he is still under observation. Ishita looked at herself ,she was sitting in a hospital with a patient ,but she don't have a single penny in her hand .Actually as it was morning time she wanted to have a cup of hot tea or coffee to start her day but she can't do anything as she don't have any money .Ishita just sat in the bench and started waiting for Raman to gain his senses so that she can go leaving him .

At the same time she saw an ambulance entering the hospital premises with it's ever know horn .She saw the attendant running towards it with stretcher .They reached to the ambulance and took a person out from it in stretchers ,a lady got down behind them .The person was severely injured but in senses and the lady was crying ,soon they too the man for treatment .

Ishita was observing this scene very carefully ,like this she saw some more people coming for treatment ,most of them were accident cases as the hospital was near highway but the most important thing she noticed that all had their family member with them .Looking to this she felt bad for raman and herself .For Raman as he is fighting for his life but his family members are not with him and for her thinking about the happenings of last night . Looking to the patients a thought clicked in her mind that these all people are badly injured but we're brought to hospital to save their lives but she want to kill herself though she is healthy and independent but next moment she thought again that all of them had their family with themselves but she don't have any ,no family ,no partner and almost no friends .No one will be sad if she will die.Then she thought that why she would end her life ,she is an educated smart girl ,why she will end her life unnecessarily instead she should leave the people who have problem with her and live her own life .

Ishita looked at the big clock which was hanging there and thought again " its 8.00 did appa and Amma came to know that I m not in home ,will they will concerned about me ,will they will take any step to search me ,her eyes become moist thinking all this .She wiped her unshed tears and started looking around randomly .At the same time ,a nurse came to her and told passing her a piece of paper " go and bring these medicines ."

Ishita looked at her and thought now what to do as she doesn't have any money ,after much thinking she spoke
" will you give this medicine now itself or after sometimes ."

N- yeah we have to give this to him now itself .

Ishita thought for sometimes and went to the medical shop which was in hospital itself ,she passed the slip to the chemist and asked for medicine . He gave the medicine and asked for money ,she told that her patient is still in hospital ,he can add it to her bill ,she will clear it after sometimes ,the chemist did same ,added the money to her hospital bill .

She again settled in bench and started waiting for Raman to gain any senses and at the same time she thought how to arrange money for Ramans further treatment till his family members come.She thought to sell all her jeweleries and arrange money .Then she thought something and came out of the hospital telling nurse to look after Raman till she come back .

Ishita came out of the hospital and started walking on the road ,she was walking slowly as she was totally confused and was in deep thinking .She was walking in the middle of road all lost when a speedy car came from behind ,the driver applied break in jiffy and his car stopped almost hitting ishita ,he peeped outside and shouted
" Arey marna hai kya Jo beech raaste mein chal rahi hai ."

Ishita said sorry and moved aside ,she came back in senses and noticed that she has come very far from her house ,they live in proper pune but its outskirts of pune city ,she was in delimma what to do as she was in need of money to save Raman but she don't have any money .She decided something and take cab to her house .It was about 9.30 am in morning when ishita rangs the bell of her house.Mihika opened the door and shouted from there itself " Appa here's your daughter for whom you are worried from morning ".

Though ishita never expected any word of concern from her but her bitter word broke all her patience ,she didn't spoke a word and entered the house ,she went to her room freshened up ,changed her cloths, took her cheques book ,ATM card, some cloths ,money and only picture of her mother ( yes ishitas real mother is dead,Amma is her step mother and mihika is her step sister ) .After packing her things she came out from her room and went to Amma ,she returned all the jeweleries to her and spoke " Amma I m going ".

A( angrily )- where .

I- Amma I m going far from you all .

A- what rubbish are you talking .viswa she what your daughter is saying ,at first she was not in house for whole night and now saying that she is leaving.

Appa- ishu what happened why are uoh behaving like this.

Ishita took a deep breath and spoke " appa Amma ,I m the problem of all your misery ,I m going out from your life .

Appa - what are you saying ,where you will go .

I- if I will not be there no one will ask Amma that why my marraige is not happening ,mihika ki shaadi bhi ho jaayegi .

Amma- viswa this girl has gone mad ,what we will say to the society people .

I- don't worry Amma ,I already had left my suicide letter ,just show it to everyone ,and say that I died .

Appa - what are you even saying ishu ,suicide why what problem ,kya dukh hai tumhe yahan .

I( crying )- appa just place yourself in my place and feel how it feels when people mock you are curse you for every problem in their life ,how it feels when a boy choose your Lil sister over you and instead of consoling you are been blamed for because of you her marraige is not happening .Just think how you feel in a house where ,your appa never listen to you but always too side of your step mother and sister .

Ishita started crying saying this, Amma and mihika glared her while appa gave a helpless look .Amma made a dirty face and spoke " let him go viswa ,kuch din bahar rahegi to family ki importance pata chalegi ".

I- living alone or dying will be a better option than living with you people .

Appa was about to say something when mihika and Amma stopped him ,Ishita didn't spoke anything else came out from the house ,she took a cab to her bank , withdrew money from her bank and then went to the hospital .Ishita went to the cash counter and deposited the rest money ,she then paid the medical bill also .

Nurse informed that her patient that is Raman has gained conscious but he is sleeping under the effect of medicine , she also informed that he has been shifted to ward .Ishita asked that if she can see him ,nurse nodded .She entered the ward and saw it was too crowded ,she talked to the nurse to shift in a cabin as she also don't have any place to stay and she can't leave him till he became healthy or any of his family member arrives .

Raman was shifted in the cabin ,she also went to the cabin ,settled herself beside him and spoke " you know Raman if you were not there I would have ended my life till now ,yeah I have gone there to commit suicide as I got fed up with my life but seeing your strength and will to live and noticing all the people who are coming here fighting with life I had changed my decision ,now I want to start a new life in new city .aap jaldi se theek ho jaao so that I can move forward to a new life ".

Ishita was talking to him when he opened his eyes and smiled looking to her .Ishita too smiled and asked " how are you Raman ."

He held her hand and spoke with great difficulty " thankyou somuch for saving my life ,can you please do me one more favour ".

I- haan boliye .

R- please inform my wife about my state .

I- OK tell me her number ,I will call her .

Raman tried to remember his wife's number but cannot, he then told I didn't remember her number but told the name of hotel where they are staying .Ishita searched the number of hotel and called ,she told the receptionist to connect to ramans room .The receptionist informed that couple who were staying in the room has left the the room yesterday night .
Ishita informed same to Raman ,who was surprised to know that his wife left the hotel without searching him .

That's all for now friends ,hope you like it .Enjoy reading and do comment .

Edited by Divanru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start
Raman is married. .. ???? Shagun se hi hogi
But where is she... yh usi ka planned murder toh nahi tha
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shagun isme bhi kamini hogi 90% chance toh hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello friends updated new part ,have a look

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