My baby, you killed me with this! 😭
I had tears in my eyes while reading it and even after it, you know how emotional I am. 😆 😳
First of all, congrats for you new story, my love ❤️ 🤗 You know if you ever have any idea regarding a new story, you can always find me saying "Yes" to it even before knowing its plot... because it is written by you 😆 and every single thing your sMexy and fabulous mind processes turns into GOLD ❤️ 😉 To be honest, I hardly read any FFs here and there, when I'm getting bored but if you come up with a new story, I'm the most interested in it 😳 Again, I instantly noticed how impactful the title is! Totally eye-catching ❤️ You created - in a second - a complete new world and new dimensions regarding this story. I just simply love how a single word can totally sum up the whole story, like being its essence and stuff Simple and very modern, totally fit for your story as we can see so far ❤️
And seriously?!? Do you want me to run after you (of course you want that! 😉) and punish you (ahaan, that too!! ☺️ 😆) for saying such things about the update? 😡 🤗 Stop underestimating it, I 200000% think this update is a gem ❤️ You put your thoughts in such a beautiful and expressive way... I can't stop falling... in... ❤️ Listen to me as I'm being very honest, this is one of the best things I've ever read jaan! 😳 No one can stop those feelings - the ones I have reading how you managed to convey each character's feelings individually And you know I'm always here for you and ILYSM ❤️
Coming to the long-awaited update (I can clearly see why ❤️), I have to tell you it completely managed to win my heart since its first line Oh, how I love this kind of intros to the stories! Being a very artist-like person, your words perfectly depicted the life of your characters 😳 YES, the words give LIFE! And you are the writer, so even more special Yup, during our lifetime we go through different stages of our life: sometimes we lose something, sometimes we find something, sometimes we even recreate ourselves, trying to get up and keep fighting cause damn, this battle is here to stay! Before going through all these, any person can go over and over again with how simple life is... but when reality strikes you, when your dreams get shattered and you are nothing else than a shadow trying to find or rediscover your own way on earth - oh it hurts so bad! Just love how you show Maan's progress in a logical and also very catchy way - by being the one who first suffered and then came to a conclusion. 😳 What else can I say about the different shades you add into your characters? Maan is a broken soul... and I can lose myself in expressing my thoughts about this story given the fact that such subjects are one of my favorites 😆 Maan was, once upon a time, a very different man. He truly loved his Desi girl but his world collapsed after she left him for another man. The warmth his heart felt once upon a time is now a cold place - but not a stone, because the memories of her keep haunting him over and over again I'm wondering what is Maan going to do when he meets Geet again...
He is a well-known businessman, a respected person who got his place there due to hard work, but as we all know... such things are not the only things we live up on earth... we need love, support, care, we need feelings, we need the presence of others in our lives and without all these money can buy happiness for a while but not forever. When you're waking up being old and alone with no one by your side, all the money in the world can do anything but bring you back those real feelings! Aww, I adore the parallel you made here, baby 🤗 by explaining the boy he was before and after she left him... " Everyone knew it takes ages to reach the height which he was currently in, but all the credits goes to his hard work and dedication" - completely in love with this!!! ❤️
Thanks for adding the flashbacks always, as I know it helps a lot in the story 🤗 but also because I simply love how you describe the past The whole story of Maan and his Desi Girl's childhood is out of this world, so adorable and cute and also so sad knowing how everything disappeared with time passing by 😳
They knew they belong to each other ☺️ ❤️ This got me like... Everything in this story is so magical, I feel like re-reading the lines again and again ❤️ They seemed the perfect couple and everyone realised that 😳 You know naa when you say "lovey dovey" and "stolen kisses" I just can't help myself, I simply adore it hayeee and awww 😆 ❤️
So one day everything changes for them... The acceptance letter must have been so important to him as it was the key to his dreams but he is also overwhelmed with the awful feelings of letting her alone here, knowing she won't accept going with him there. It is so heartbreaking... 😔 His love for her is just so amazing and love how he calls her "his Desi Girl", I mean when someone says "You're mine" it is just out of this world ❤️ He even refused to go there to stay here with her, to be with her, to feel her every single moment, to embrace every event or obstacle in their life as long as they are together ❤️ Damnn, you made me cry with that confession 😭 It just felt so real, my baby Like I was there acknowledging it, a silent witness of their love...
Even the natural elements, the environment are so well described by you... ❤️ Am I wrong? -> Is the sudden yet natural reaction of the nature in total contrast to the storm ready to settle down in Maan's heart? 😳 Cause I simply love it What was Maan going through is hard to imagine... his lover and his friend disappointing him, ruining his word in just few moments If only we human beings could be immune to pain Or is it that way, like a well known quote says - "Pain demands to be felt" 😳
Like the story says, "both of them meant the world to him" 😭 So emotional and so powerful, just brilliant... He couldn't imagine such awful things, he still had trust in them, he still tried to control his emotions... Maan got some reasons to start getting doubtful and he tried to ignore the painful yet so close obvious answer he is gonna get Geet answering to him saying she got her own reasons... well, I'm trying to understand Geet too, when you are not happy enough you get over it, you move on, but she could have told him that at least - that she's not happy, that she wants freedom, not cheating on him like that I am sure Maan's wounds became scars which will never disappear no matter what... Not a very sensible approach from Geet in this case, men are men but they got feelings too... 😡 😆 Just loved this part, my love ❤️ Got me so hooked...
At this point, Maan's soul is like a mirror and Geet just tread underfoot it... crushing it... breaking it in million pieces with just few words ... You gave life to this scene, my precious heart The emotions conveyed through Maan's words are so powerful and rich in their meaning... And why am I feeling this is not all about Geet? Something is hidden... hmmm. I mean, judging her reaction she seemed to absolutely dismiss his acusation for a moment 😆 Maybe you'll explain it to me somehow... :P <3
It gets even more and more sad at the end of the flashback, when they totally stop getting some info about each other... Their childhood connection got lost too in this awful disappointment... what a full package of feelings this is, baby ❤️
Maan's monologue was so touching... Damn, those vibes The built up is amazing, my love!!! And seriously the way he calls her "love"... I mean, you know 😳 ❤️ ... it takes my breath away 😳 It's like so possessive and so adorable and beautiful at the same time ☺️ 😳 Maybe she's away from him, she hurted him, she disappointed him, but he is still thinking about well-being. He is still hoping she got her inner peace and happiness, the best for her as she herself told him 😳 This is a clear sight of the fact that he stills loves her endlessly...
The sudden ring of the intercom part I feel it was so needed, it just connected me even more to the story... just love finding out some details 😆 I already told you how much I admire and love this about your stories the way you play with details and their importance in every character's personality... ❤️ This is what makes each one of them different. Take a bow, baby! And a cookie... 😳 😆 And all my love which is already yours ❤️ ❤️
Can't thank you enough for driving me crazy into new dimensions with your stories and everything you do... 😳 😳 I use to lose myself in them so so much I forget about everything else... 😆
Aww and knowing that he hates the fact that he has those FBs... he can't forget her no matter what I just looove your twists, jaan Karan and Maan's meeting is so different... I mean... didn't expect them to keep being polite to each other after all these... but you gave such a sensible approach to this story, just perfect! Maan knows about the self control, he even hugged him and all... I mean if this was a TV show or something everything would have been the same including the hatred btw men and stuff... 😆 Your story proves again to be something unique ❤️ In a way, they are trying to understand each other.. I can clearly sense Maan's pain and Karan's hesitation... Maan trying to change the topic was such a natural reaction... 😳 And about this upcoming part, I mean the box part... I knew it!! I knew he's gonna give him the wedding invitation card!! 😆 I already know your mind very well, my baby... 😳 ❤️
So it wasn't enough for Maan that he lost her and she's new finding her haven in someone else's arms who happens to be his friend, now he is getting a wedding invitation... he is again invited to watch his own heart breaking into pieces again 😭 Yeah, Karan... he may consider your friendship but what about his relationship with her? 😆 He should join for you, but forget that that lady is the love of his life... hmm, kinda complicated and painful Maan still remembers her favorite sweets and everything about her... Baby,
come here ❤️ 🤗 You made me cry with this brilliant part, now you have to calm me down too... 😭 😳
The end of the update is heartbreaking and just makes you wanna read more and more and more... Hope you're planning to update soon, very soon 😳 Yes, I know when you wanna update it stil writing it... 😆 because I want it
And... if "disappointed" was the last word on earth to use for this update, I wouldn't be using it even then 🤣 Your storytelling ability is out of this world... it take me on an emotional roller coaster ride... 😳 ❤️ You know, the world has many people who are ready to scribble down their own ideas, but to bring those ideas to life, to make them take up residence in people's minds, to make the stories connect with your readers, creating this variety of emotions... you need special skills and you are TRULY talented, my baby 😳 ❤️
Once again, congrats for this new beautiful journey, my love 🤗 Remember how special you are to me. Thanks for everything... 😳
Love you endlessly ❤️
Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago
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