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Posted: 7 years ago
so this time I'm back on time with a new chapter...and here it goes...

Chapter 9

it is Sunday...so everyone is present at home...

raghav is sitting at his room while naina is at dadi's giving her medicines...raghav feels very happy about naina's consciousness regarding dadi's health...sometimes he feels she loves dadi even more than him...

naina enters the room in a fast speed...looking a bit tensed...

"raghav ...woh dadi ke medicine khatam ho gaye...doctor ne bola tha unhe time pe dawai dene ko...but...",naina tells raghav in a sad tone...

"it's okay naina...mai abhi le ata hu...",raghav reassures her...

"meri hi galti hai...mujhe kal hi tumhe batana chahiye tha...mai bhi na...kuch bhi yaad nahi rakh pati hu..",naina repents...

"koi baat nahi kuch hi der mein le aunga...aur ha isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai...tumhare aney se pehle toh dadi koi bhi dawa time se nahi leti thi..."

raghav puts on a coat and is about to leave for buying the medicine...when Pam stops him at the door of his room...

"raghav maine tumhe bola tha na aj meri ek friend ki beti ki wedding hai...shadi me balraj yeh sherwani pehen raha hai...toh isse iron kar do..",Pam orders...

"chachi... Daniel kaha hai?wahi toh kapde iron karta hai...",raghav replies...

"woh aj chutti pe hai isiliye tumhe bol raha hu..."

"lekin chachi mujhe dadi ke liye dawai laney jana hoga...mai wapas aake kar dunga...",raghav says in a hurry..

"ek din dawai nahi lengi toh mar nahi jayegi budiya",Pam mutters to herself in a low tone...

"apney kuch kaha chachi?"raghav asks..

"dawai thodi der baad le ana...but mujhe aur ballu ko jaldi nikalna padega...so yeh kaam pehle kardo..."

Pam hands him the sherwani and goes back to her room...

naina comes to raghav who is standing in a dilemma...

"ek kaam karo tum dawai lene jao...mai sherwani iron kar dungi...",naina says with a smile...

"thank you...thanks a lot...yeh lo sherwani...aur mai chala dawai lene...",raghav becomes happy...

"ok...bye...jaldi wapas ana..."

"mai uun gaya aur uun aya..."

raghav leaves and naina smiles thinking of him..'bilkul baccha hai...'naina thinks to herself...

naina is pressing the sherwani...when she smells something burning and gets afraid...

"offo...stove me toh dudh rakha hai...he bhagwan ...naina tera kuch nahi ho sakta...",she speaks to herself as she runs to the kitchen...and turns of the stove...

"arrey dudh toh kharab hogaya...koi baat nahi...raghav dawai leke aney ke baad dadi ke liye phir se dudh garam kar dungi...but pehle iron toh karlu..."

but naina does not know...not only the milk but also something else has burnt...something much more expensive...

naina lets out a little scream seeing the sherwani which is now of no use...as it is burnt..

"maine toh iron dress ke upar hi rakh ke chali gayi...oh no...ab kya hoga???"naina becomes very tensed..

naina sits on the bed with tears in her eyes waiting for raghav to return...

raghav returns within a hour and sees naina with a tensed face...

"kya hua?aise bhoot ke tarah kyu baithi ho?sab thik toh hai na?"raghav asks anxiously...

naina does not speak but shows him the sherwani...

seeing it...raghav's mouth becomes wide open...

"n...nai...naina...yeh kaise hua?"raghav finally manages to speak...

"woh...mai...dudh...bandh...but...yeh...",naina is so worried that she does not even know what she is speaking...

raghav gets hurt to see her in this condition and calms her...

"it's okay naina...ek sherwani hi toh hai...",raghav tries to calm her...

"but yeh toh bahut mehenga hai na...",naina utters...

"suno...kisi ko nahi pata ke tumne iron kiya hai...aur pata chalna bhi nahi chahiye..."

"matla?"naina asks confused...

"matlab maine hi yeh kapda jalaya hai..tumne kuch nahi kiya..."

"but raghav...",naina tries to protest..

but raghav does not listen to her and leaves with the burnt sherwani...

raghav finds everyone in the hall room...

"arrey raghav mai tumharey paas hi arahi thi...press kardi tumne sherwani?"pam asks him..

"i hope thik se kiya hoga...designer sherwani hai...aur maine usse ek baar hi pehena hai...",balraj says..

"woh chachu...woh...",raghav hesitates...

"yeh woh woh kya laga rakha hai?thik se batao kya hua?"

"woh mai iron kar raha tha toh galti se thoda jal gaya...",raghav manages to say...

balraj snatches the sherwani from his hands and sees the burnt area...he fumes with anger...not only he...Pam also becomes very angry...

"isse tum thoda kehtey ho...puri ki puri sherwani kharab kar di...",Pam says...in a loud voice...

"nahi Pam...isse sirf dant ne se kuch nahi hoga...sabak toh sikhani padegi...",balraj says...

balraj opens his belt and comes forward to raghav...

"sorry...sorry chachu...,"raghav begs for pardon...

"you bloody naukar!tujhe uss sherwani ki kimat bhi pata hai kya?tere ek saal ke pocket money se bhi bahut jyada hai...",balraj says blind with anger...

"galti hogayi...chachu..",raghav pleads...

"galti kiya hai toh saza toh milegi hi na.."

balraj hits raghav's back with belt hard..

"aaahhh...",raghav cries in pain..

balraj hits again..

and again..

and again...

he is going to hit the fifth time when someone gets hold of the belt...

it's naina...

"how dare you?"balraj yells..

"how dare you balraj mehra?apko koi right nahi hai raghav ko aise marne ka...aur waise bhi raghav ki koi galti nahi hai...sherwani maine jalayi thi..."

everyone becomes shocked...

"pata hai kitne ka tha woh?tum jaise naukrani yeh kimat bolne ki bhi aukadh nahi rakhtey...",Pam insults naina...

"yeh lijiye chachi...isme 50 thousand hai...mujhe pata hai price aur bhi zyada hai...woh mai baad me de dungi...",naina gives the money...

"chalo raghav..",naina takes raghav to their room..

"bada sokh hai tumhe mahan banney ka...kya zarurat thi inzam apney sar lene ka...",naina scolds him...

"woh tumhe bhala bura kehtey toh mujhe accha nahi lagta..."

"par mujhe toh bahut accha laga tumhe mar khatey dekh...",naina says angrily...

"auuchh...",raghav screams in pain holding his back..

"kya hua?bahut dard ho raha hai?"naina worries...

"nahi nahi thodi si lagi hai...thik ho jayegi..."

"chalo dikhao mujhe kaha laga hai..."

"par uske liye toh shirt utar ni padegi..."

"tum kisi padosi ke samney shirt nahi utar rahe ho...mai tumhari biwi hu..."

"lekin...,"raghav still hesitates...

naina does not listen to him...and starts unbuttoning his shirt and opens it...all the time raghav keeps staring at her...

"he bhagwan...tumhe toh bahut zyada lagi hai...",naina says seeing red marks on his
back..."tum yahi ruko mai medicine leke ati hu..."

naina comes with a tube and starts applying it on his back...

raghav looks back at her and their eyes meet...


Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena
Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda je


naina keeps applying the paste while looking at him...

"aaahhh...",raghav cries in pain...

"bas thodi der...phir sab dard chala jayega...",naina assures him...




Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne
Tere dil diyaan raahan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta
Turpe meriyaan saah
Jeena mera.. hoye
Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawan kee
Na tere bina lagda jee


raghav sees naina's hair coming in her face...she cannot remove them...as her hands are applying medicine on his back...

so he removes her hairs...


naina shivers with his touch and closes her eyes..

they move closer to each other...




Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Dil mera tod ke
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Naal tere jod ke
Tenu chadd ke kitthe jawan
Tu mera parchhanvaa
Tere mukhde vich hi main taan
Rab nu apne pawaan
Meri duaa.. haaye
Sajda tera kardi sadaa
Tu sun iqraar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tainu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee


this time their lips meet...soo after meeting both the lips become active on each other...within a few m9ments the kiss turns from passionate in5o a wild one...

this would go further but naina's phone rings...

naina pushes raghav breaking the kiss and runs away.





Edited by lamia1210 - 7 years ago
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Heart touching updateEdited by Sakkiyah - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing as usual.. πŸ˜ƒ
Ehhh.. I so hate the mehras.. πŸ˜²
How dare that ballu hit poor Raghav😑 and Raghav will never change.. Glad Naina came to his rescue.. 
The scene where she says kisi padosi ke samne nahi ho was very cute and sweet.. πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
And the end was ahem ahem.. ; )πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
Update soon
And thanks for the pm 
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Posted: 7 years ago
sorry guys...I forgot to write any thing at the end of the chappy...
this chapter was very enjoyable to write...but was it enjoyable to read too??plzzz don't forget to like and commentπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nyc update with lovely ending!!
Liked it!!
Naina was keyed up vowing to dadi's medicine
Raghav stretched his hands to help Naina and asked her not to get panic
Raghav gave top priority to dadi's medicine over ironing ballu's sherwani
Naina in her mystify and baffled state burnt ballu's cloth and was on tenterhook and edgy regarding the outcome
Raghav took entire censure on him and got thrashing from Ballu too
Raghav is really earnest and solemn
Naina came for Raghav's aid and accepted her fault
Nyc song
Raina moments and their kiss!!πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰
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Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update
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Lovely & heart touching update
Thanks dear
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nice update
poor raghav
koi nhi maar ki wajah se inka first kiss hogya πŸ˜‰
I hope wapas awkward na feel kare yeh dono
Awesome raina scene
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Posted: 7 years ago
lovely update
that man beat raghav so hate him
good that naina gave some money.. they are so cruel...
raghav should give back to them
thnx for pm
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Nice chapter dear...
Loved her concern for dadi and the way Raghav helps her every time...nice to see how he tries to save her when sherwani got burnt bcoz of her...and when she saves her when he was being beaten up...the last part of your update was too goodπŸ‘