Ishra SS 'Hona Tha Pyar' part 13 pg 60 june 23 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Fabulous update di...
Raman speech was superb...
Ishita welcome song...
Ishra nok joke and masti started...
Loved it...
Update soon...waiting eagerly...
Sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Lovely update
so ishra ki tashan start ho gyi
raman was lost in her
n d last remark of raman was funny
continue soon
thnxxx 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53




PART 3


At second year pg class

Raman was sitting middle of many girls because of that he was unable to concentrate on his class..the girls are drooling over him and someone winking at him with naughty looks..he was feeling a little awaked too..suddenly his pen got fell from his hand and he bend down to take it but his eyes got widened when he see a girls back through the desk hole..he quickly comes up and shook his head thinking "oh god"

After some time a girl called him from behind and gives a packet on his hand and said

"raman pass it.."

Raman takes the packet and about to pass it to another girl but the nick time teacher found him with the packet and asked him to stand up..

Teacher:raman ,what's that?

Raman:i..i don't know maam..(checking the packet..) bread jaisa kuch hai..

Teacher: bread?

Confusingly he opened the packet, at the next second he gets embarrassed seeing a whisper packet in his own hands...

Seeing his expressions all laughed at him while the teacher said someone to take it from his hand...

After the class raman felt like he wants to use washroom but he didn't know where to go..so he started to search for the washroom but everywhere he find one or two girls standing..at last he decides to do it on any lonely side of college but he heard someone calling him from behind..cursing his faith he turned to the source and find shagun with a smile..

Shagum:raman..wahan kya kar rehe ho..chalo koffi pilatha hun tumhe..

Raman:no thanks..i am ok..ms..

Shagun:shagun..shagun arora..

Raman:oh..saying he turned to go from there but again stoped and called shaguns name..

Raman:shagun..

Shagun:han..

Raman:kyat um batha sakthe ho..where is the washroom?

Shagun:mujhe lga tha kit um kuch doont rehe the...whashroom is that's way..she showed the way to raman

Raman:thanks..saying he quickly runs to washroom..

When he reached there she find many girls there too..he was in so hurry so he didn't mind them and about to go inside..suddenly muhika and vandu stoped his way saying..

"oh hello.,kahan ja rehe ho?yeh ladies washroom hai?

Raman:han tho main male washroom keliye railway station jaun kya?



Vandu:kahi bhi jao..tum yeh washroom nahi use kar sakthe

Raman:bhaad mein jaye girls..saying he again tried to get inside when mihika said

"washroom ke andar girls hai"tum yehi wait karlo..

Raman:wahi tho nahi kar sakthe..tum jaldi andar jake sabko bahar lao nahi tho main abhi ke abhi andar chala jaunga..

Seeing ramans desperation they started to laugh..

Raman:ab khade khade daanth kya dikha rehe ho..jaldi karo..main dus thak ginunga..

Saying he started to count..one..two..three..four..nine...with in 10 seconds mihika and other girls comes outside and raman runs to inside...

After some time at the campus compound..

Mihika and vandu shared about raman to ishita making her to laugh non-stop..


Ishita:ha ha ha..oh go pehale din main hi hero ka hawa nikal geya..

Mihika:waise ishu..pehele din hi who hero bhi bangeya..

Ihsita:kya? Kya bola tumne?

Mihika:sono..abhi se haskke pakkada tho who hamare haath ayega nahi tho who shagun usse uski side pe karlungi..

Ishita:chee miku..ek ledke ki paou college mein padthe hi tum logo ne usse team mein add karne keliye soch liys..you know what tumhara papa na bilkul sahi kar reha hai tere saath..tujhe na kisi bhi ledke kea as paas bhi nahi bhejni chahiye..

Vandu:who kya hai na ishu..kuch bhi kahe hum dono tho ledkiyan hai na..

Ishiu:very funny..

They were talking like that when mihikas phone ringed..seeing the caller id she gets irritate and said

"oh god..aaj pachas baar call kar chukke hai yeh.."

Ishita:kaun? Who romio?

Mihika:aur kaun hoga..saying she abegan to cut the call when ishita said..

Ishita:phone kaatna math ..mujhe dedo..aaj na isske akkal tikkane lgathi hun..

Ishiat:hello

Man:hello..tho kya socha aapne mere proposal ke bare mein..?

Ishita:(like mihika she started to talk) maine bohoth socha aapke proposal ke bare main..lekin decision main khud aapse milke kahungi..kya aaj hum mil sakthe hai..

Man:offcorse..evening mere office aajana..main address abhi sent kartha hun

Ishita:teek haiu bye...

After getting the address ishita went to there taking mihika and vandu with her..with in 15 minutes they reached at the address ..coming inside they see a man wearing saree and blouse which made by folding his shirt walking like a model..actually he was showing how to wear a saree and how to walk on a ramp to his models..

Showing the cat walk he said to the models..

"aise ..aise chalthe hai ramp pe..tum log tho aise chal rehe hai jaise ki market ja rehi ho.."

He was busy in scolding his models when he see ishita,mihika and vanditha there..getting embarrassed with his dress he quickly unwrapped the saree and went to them..


Man:mujhe patha tha ki aap maan jaonge..akhir ithne acche acche opportunities hamesha tho nahi miltha haina..

Ishita:oh hello kisne kahan yeh maan geyi hai..

Man:tho phir yehan aya kyun..

Ishita:tujhe na teri aukkath dikhane keliye..

Man:(to mihika)tumhari iss friend ko na jelousy ho rehi hai..maine usse offer nahi diya na iss liye..but you don't worry main tumhe hi select karunga..

Mihika:kithni baar keha chukka hun main..nahi ban na mujhe teri model..

Ishita:waise naam kya hai tumhara

Man:mihir arora..

Ishita:accha hai..lekin tere iss harkath ke bare main mihika ki papa ko patha chal geya na tho beta tera mihir aur arora dono ke dono kabhi ek nahi reha payenge..mind it..

Saying they weny from their leaving a sad mihir behind..

Mihir(st):yeh matha rani ..ab iss ledki ko kaise manaun main..

At night

Raman was sitting with his friends having some drinks.a light smile on his face made them to question him about the day..

Bala:kya baath hai yaar..coolege ke pehele din ke baath face pe yeh amile..not bad..

Romi:han bhai..aisa kya hua college main jisse aap ithna muskura rehe ho..

Raman:hona kyat ha..bas pdhayi hua aur class khatham hogeya

Bala:tum aue padhayi..very funny..ab bol bhi do yaar kya hua college main..

Romi:han bhai bolo na..ledkiyan mili kya..

Raman:duffer girls onl college main ledkiyan nahi tho ledke milange kya..

Romi:mera mathlab..koyi khass mili kya..

Raman:(remembering ishitas naughty comments and welcome song) han kuch khaas tho hai usmein..

Bala:mathlab koyi hai

Raman:patha hai tum logon ko..saare ledkiya mujhe h goorthe rehthe the like main koyi alien hun..lekin sirf wahi ek thi jisse dekhar mujhe lega ki "boss yeh teri takkar ka hai"

Romi:accha..aur..

Raman:aur mere liye ek welcome songe gaya usne..patha hai koun sa wala..jo funerals main log gathe hai na woh wala song.."..firstily I was like shocked but then I enjoyed her antics a lot..

Romi:aapka mathlab Jhansi ki rani wakla type..

Raman:exactly...

Bala:han tho pehale hi din mein hamare raman ko uske takkar wali milne keliye ho jay ek ek drink..

Raman/romi:chers...

So friends here is the 3rd part of hona tha pyaar...hit likes and do comments..enjoy...




Edited by Muskan193 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
rres
Unreess
lovely update
raman ki to band baja di larkiyon ne
he couldn't use d washroom too
poor guy
He likes ishita
mihir ka kya.angle h??
continue soon
thnx 4.pm
Edited by akriti154 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
yippe me first
after a long time
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
raman was embarrasing in the class
he wanted to go to the washroom
but he was not able to find it
shagun stopped him and asked for coffee
he dined

nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm dear
Edited by divanfanS.Asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Loved d story concept
Taking ishra in it
I hv seen chocolate movie
loved that movie
Waiting to read ishra in same format
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: swathin

Loved d story concept
Taking ishra in it
I hv seen chocolate movie
loved that movie
Waiting to read ishra in same format




thank you dear..i too loved to write ishra in this format. Because I love the movie a lot..bu but but..yeh story ithni aasani se end nahi hoga..kyun ki mera wala thadkka tho main daalunga hi...
so till then enjoy it dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
superb update
poor raman he was feeling uncomfortable all girls was drooling over him
one girl asked raman to pass something he was passing but caught by professor when he opened the packet that was sanitary pad 😆 he wanted to go washroom but was not able to find it shagun stopped him and asked for coffee he dined he asked her where is the washroom she told him mihika and vandu blocked his way he gave them 10 seconds to bring the girls out otherwise he will go inside in 10 seconds all the girl were out he ran inside mihika and vandu told this to ishita she was laughing mihika told ishita to include raman in their team so mihir is behind ishita poor he got embarrassed because he was showing models how to walk ishita warned him
raman was similing his freinds asked what is the reason he told them he got his takkarwali
pls continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: divz9769

superb update

poor raman he was feeling uncomfortable all girls was drooling over him
one girl asked raman to pass something he was passing but caught by professor when he opened the packet that was sanitary pad 😆he wanted to go washroom but was not able to find it shagun stopped him and asked for coffee he dined he asked her where is the washroom she told him mihika and vandu blocked his way he gave them 10 seconds to bring the girls out otherwise he will go inside in 10 seconds all the girl were out he ran inside mihika and vandu told this to ishita she was laughing mihika told ishita to include raman in their team so mihir is behind ishita poor he got embarrassed because he was showing models how to walk ishita warned him
raman was similing his freinds asked what is the reason he told them he got his takkarwali
pls continue soon




thank you so much dear..but mihir is not behind ishita..its mihika...

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