Ishra SS-Tum mere aasma mere zameen ban Gaye- Teaser on pg 124 on 11/3 - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mayraa

New story...yehhh...

Damn interesting prologue di
Update soon


Thankyou somuch dolly
Will updt asap
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

many many congrats for ur achievements di 👏👏

keep rocking like this...

sad prologue
ishita is a bit healthy nd not dat smart so every boy
rejects her...her family accuses her for this reason!
mihika is blaming ishita! but what's ishita's fault in it??
raman is already married nd is being shot by goons...
interesting!
cont it soon di...


Thankyou somuch rufana for your comment .
Glad you liked the concept .
Yeah ishita is a bit plum that's why all boy choose Mihika instead of her .
Will updt soom
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Blakey

WAITING FOR FIRST PART PLEASEEE UPDATE SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mayasun

Hi Pooja,

Interesting prologue.

Please continue soon


Thanks a lot maya .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ishmanbabies

Raksha I gave you your 160th like

Ab jaldi se update kardo, haan? 😳


Thanks umeha .
Now will updt asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello friends today I m here with part one of this story ,yeah many of you wanted its update so here I m with 1st part ,before that a quick recap .

Recap - Ishita is a plum not so smart girl and all the boys choose her sister Mihika over her for marriage while Mihika wanted to marry romi ,she told her parents that if she will not get married to romi she will commit suicide,ishita was broken listening to this and she herself went to attempt suicide but she found Raman on the cliff where she went to suicide, he pleaded her to save him as he was shot by some goons .

Part 1

Ishita was still very much frightened, she was standing like a statue staring at him without blinking her eyes .She was trying to figure out that the scene in front of her is actual or her illusion as its really late in night and nobody else is there except her ,then from where this person has come ,moreover if he was shot in daytime or evening, how come he alive till now .She was lost in her thoughts when she felt the pull again ,her trance broked and she look down ,only to find Raman pleading her .

R- I m dying please save me .

I( stammering )- but but how come you are here at this hour ,I mean when you were shot .

R- I came here for sight scene with my wife and we were admiring the sunset when suddenly I noticed that my wife is not there ,I started searching for her .And in this process I come here ,only to find some men's . I asked them whether they had seen any girl ,instead of answering me ,they tried to snatch my valuables and wallet ,I denied and had fight with them .In between the fight one of the man tried to threaten me with gun,then also I didn't stopped thinking that they are mere pickpockets but that man shot me . And after that they ran away leaving me behind to die .As it was evening soon this place got lone and cannot do anything instead of waiting for my death but matarani had send you to help me .please save my life .

After telling his story raman winced in pain ,holding his wound .Ishita thought
" waise bhi I have to die ,to kyun na iski help karke maroon .mera ghar to basega nahi why not help him so that he can live his life with his wife ."

Thinking so she ,helped him to get up ,he got up with great difficulty . Though his body was giving up but his will power to live was to strong that he was not giving up .Ishita encircled his left hand around her shoulder and held his waist with her right hand and tried to walk from there .He also didn't gave up and walked with her with trembling steps ,after walking for around 10 min they reach in the main road .

They stood there for almost half and hour ,waiting for some vehicle which can help them but non arrived .Raman's body was giving up ,he was loosing his consciousness ishita was trying hard to hold him but at last his feet gave up and he fell on ground .Ishita got more scared and adding to her problem non of them ,neither ishita nor Raman non of them have any money or phone because she has come for suicide and he was already looted .

She was standing there horrified , glancing to his dying figure with teary eyes .She can't do anything as she was helpless ,she sat beside raman and said shooking him " Raman suno ,I m going to bring some help ,you don't die till then .just believe me ,I m coming in sometimes ."

He didn't responded then she shocked him again ,this time little more vigorously and asked " Raman you will wait for me na ".

Seems her voice reaches his ears ,he couldn't answer her but just hummed . She asked again to confirm " Raman you are listening me ".

R- humm.

After assuring him , she started walking in the road to reach to some help.She has just walked some steps and to her good luck she saw a truck coming towards them .At first she was happy to see it and thought to ask for help then she got scared thinking that what if the truck driver will be a bad person and will try to take advantage of her , thinking so she backed off .Then she thought again " mujhe to waise bhi marna hi hai ,then why I m thinking all this ,I just have to focus that I have to save him .I don't have anyone waiting for me but his wife must be waiting for him .i will feel good if I can make some one happy in his life by my effort ".

Thinking so she went in the middle of road and asked for help ,shaking her both arms in air .Though it was a full moon night but it was pitch dark in road as it was fully covered with rows of trees in its both side .The truck was coming with great speed ,she was scared a bit thinking that may be dhs can be hit if the driver will not notice but she was firm in her decision. She closed her eyes due to fear thinking the worst .To her good luck the truck stopped near her ,she didn't know it as her eyes were closed .But after sometime when she realized that she is OK ,she opened her one eye to check the happening and then she opened another one too ,after getting confirmed that she is OK and the truck has stopped .

Till she figure out everything the driver got down from the truck and started scolding her " tujhe marne ke liye meri hi gaadi mili ,go and die somewhere else ".

I- ( stammering)- no actually ,marna to hai mujhe but abhi nahi ,I want your help that's why I did this .

TD- Who are you and why should I help you .

I( pleading )- please itna time nahi hai ,pahle meri help kariye ,someone's life is in danger ,I will tell you everything on the way .

Saying so she ran to Raman without waiting for the drivers response .She shook raman and spoke trying to woke him " Raman ramsn utho ,dekho I got someone to help us ".

TD- what happened to him ,who are you .suno ladki ,I m mere a truck driver ,I don't have anything so don't try to cheat me moreover I m not a very good person so if you are lying beware of me .

I( with teary eyes )- no I m not trying to cheat you but asking help from you ,please help us nahi to ye mar jaayenge .

TD- who is he your husband .

I- no .

TD - friend or relative .

I- no .

TD- then .

I- I don't know .

TD(angrily)- are you fooling me ,if he is non to you then why are you somuch worried about him .

I- just because of humanity ,now please help me .

Her answer make the driver speechless , he held raman from other side and make him comfortable in truvk ,then he helped ishita to got in the truck and drove towards the near by hospital .On the way ishita told everything skipping her suicide story ,she just told that she was upset and wanted to be alone so she came here and find Raman.The driver was pleased with her ,soon they reach the hospital but it was outside pune ( Ishita live in pune and raman in Delhi ,he has come for honeymoon .They have halted in pune and had decided to visit nearby places one by one ).

They got down from the truck and managed to take raman out helping each other .They entered the hospital and admitted raman in emergency. Ishita was in deep thought as she knows that soon they will ask for money for treatment and medicines , she thought for sometimes then looked at herself ,she realized that she is still wearing the jeweleries which her mother wore her at the time when the boy and his family was coming to meet her .Her eyes again got teary recalling the happenings of her house and Mihika words .ishita thought again " these jeweleries are not of my use ,as I have to die ,I should get raman treated with these and then can die ."

Thinking so she pulled a ring from her finger and went to the driver .She pleaded him giving the ring to him " Thankyou somuch for helping me but I want some more help from you . I don't have any money and they will demand money now ,so please take this and give me some money ."

D- no sister you keep this with yourself , I m depositing the money .

I- no bhaiya ,you have already helped me somuch ,now I can't take your money like this ,you please take this and deposit the fee here for his treatment for now ,I will arrange money in morning .

D- no ,I can't take your jewelry.

Before they can talk much ,a nurse come out from the room and spoke
" he is shot so its a police case ,you ho and file a fir then we will proceed for treatment. "

I- you start the treatment till then we will complete all the formalities .

The nurse left and ishita along with truck driver went to file a complain that they found Raman in the middle of road and they took him here .The police ask some more thing but to avoid their involvement the driver told that they just got him in road ,they don't know any thing more than that .ishita was about to tell something but he signed her to be silent ,she obeyed him .

Soon the treatment started while police started their investigation .ishita atlast gave her ring to the truck driver ,he deposited money which he had and left the hospital. Atfirst Ishita also thought to leave but then thought may be Raman will need some more help ,so she thought to wait till he gain his consciousness.

That's all for now friends ,hope you like the update .Enjoy reading and do comment .

PS - 150+ likes and lovely comments for further updates .


Edited by Divanru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
me too ressy
Unreess
superb update di
ishita thought to help him before dying
he told her his story
she took lift n managed to admit him in hospital
t td filed a police complain
she's waiting 4 him to gain conscious
continue soon
thnxxx 4 pm
Edited by akriti154 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi friends updated part one ,have a look
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Posted: 8 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE DEAR..
ISHITA BROUGHT RAMAN TO HOSPITAL..
WHO IS HIS WIFE??
UPDATE SOON DEAR...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
Raman got shot
He is married
Ishita is helping him
Truck driver helped them
Hope Raman theek ho jye jaldi
Update soon

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