ISHRA FF JAZBA a strong desire#2 part 70 pg 131 july 20 - Page 3

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Nice but chotu part .
Still its a mystery ,where raman was in these days .
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PART-47




Raman began to tell ishita about the happenings of that day..

Flash back..

At the break time raman was about to go first year section to meet ishita but at the way he received a call from amma.

Raman:hello amma

Amma:hello..raman..kanna ishu kahan hai?

Raman:usike pass ja reha hun. Baath karvavun kya?

Amma:nahi kanna mujhe ishu se nahi tumse baath karni hai

Raman:bolo amma kya baath hai..aap bohoth parishaan leg rehe ho

Amma:who kanna vishwa..

Raman:appa ko kya hua amma?

Amma:vishwa ko police le geya hai..

Raman:kya?kab?

Amma:kuch der pehale..woh log kisi murder ki bare mein baath kar reha tha..mera man bohoth ghabra reha hai raman..patha nahi main vishva ko kaise chudvavun..kehane ko tho bohoth si log hai lekin mujhe nahi patha kiske pass jau kisse milu..please kanna atum yehan aajao nhi tho main yehan akele kuch nahi kar paungi.

Raman:amma don't worry main next flight se hi Chennai pohoch jaunga..aap chintha math karo appa ko kuch nahi hone dunga main.

Amma:teek hai kanna..saying they cuts the call and he quickily booked a ticket to Chennai through online.he wants to meet ishita before going but he doesn't have the time..so went from there hurriedly.seeing him mihir calle raman from behind but he didn't have any time to waste there so he runs from there without listening to mihir.

Chennai

At the evening raman arrived at iyer house.seeing raman there amma feels good.without wasting the time raman arranged a good lawyer for appa and went to police station along with amma.

From the police station raman got to know that appas case was charged by a politician for killing mr.subhramanium.after giving so much explanation about the matter the inspector informed that till now they didn't get the dead body..but some people seed appa at the time of murder.on the basis of eye witness and the politicians reccoment they arrested appa.

The lawyer justified appa saying when they didn't get the dead body,so they have no right to arrest appa.so after so much formalities finaly they got appas bail. After that appa,amma,and raman comes out from the police station while the lawyer stayed there for remaining formalities.at the moment appa comes out he got shoot buy an unknown person.for their luck he got the bullet on his arm.amma was so worried for appa.raman takes appa to near by hospital and consoles amma to keep calm.

Amma:enna nadanthithirukku kanna(whats happening kanna)..vishwa teek tho ho jayenge na

Raman:han amma appa bilkul teek ho jayega..aap ro math..aapki bhi tabiyath kharab ho jayegi..doctor ne kahan hai ki appa ko arma par goli legi hai tho koyi major issues nahi hoga..saying he takes amma to a side hug..

After some time he made amma sat comfortably and said.

"amma mai abi atha hun"

Amma:kahan ja rehe ho?

Raman:mera phone off hogeya hai..jald baasi mein maine ishita se bina bathaye aageya..woh ab tension le rehi hongi..main use appa ke bare mein bathake atha hun..

Amma:nahi kanna..tum ishu se kuch math kehana..bohoth sensitive hai who agar yeh sab patha chala tho bohoth tension legi..kal subhah hi tum wapas chale jana saaamne se bathayenge tho tum honge na uske saath..

Raman:lekin amma.

Amma:please kanna..woh bohoth jaldi panic ho jathi hai

Raman:teek hai amma jaise aap kahe..

"agar main ishita ko phone karunga tho use sab kuch batha hi dunga main..kal milke baath karunga use"

Following ammas words raman didn't inform ishita anything.at the next day appa got discharged from hospital and raman dropped them to iyer house..for appas security raman arranged police protection for appa..after that he returned to Mumbai and straightly comes to meet ishita at the ladies hostel..
Flash back ends


Ishita:ithna sab kuch ho geya aur aapne akele sab kuch..mujhe bathaya kun nahi raman...aur appa..appa teek tho haina ab..bechari amma akele honge wahan..raman mujhe bohoth tension ho rehi hai..please mujhe Chennai leke chalo na..

Raman:(cupping her face) shh..shh..isliye ammane mana kiya tha ki tumse main kuch na bathaun..ithna tension jo le lethi hai..

Ishita:raman..appa teek haina

Raman:han bilkul teek hai tabhi tho wapas ayah un main.

Ishita:appa se baath karvaonge mera?

Raman:ab ithni raath hogeyi haina..kal subhah pakka karvadunga.teek hai..

Ishita nodded her head positively and hugged him resting her head on his chest.after sitting some time like that raman made ishita sat straightly and planted a soft kiss on her forehead..

Raman:ab tum so jao ..main chaltha hun

Ishita:kuch der aur rukkona yehan

Raman:nahi jaan..dekho mihika bahar wait kar rehi hai..aur raath bhi bahoth ho chukka hai kal college main milenge na hum..

Ishita:hmm

Raman got up from the bed and turned to go but ishita stoped him holding his hand and said

"thank you" hearing her he leaned and again kissed her "thank you kyun?"

Ishita:mere appa amma ki dhyan rekhne keliye.

Raman:who mera bhi appa amma hai.tho main dhyan nahi rekhunga tho aur kaun rekhega..aur yeh sorry worry nahi chalega hamare beech main samjhi..

She nodded her head and kissed on his cheek..

Ishita:subhah mandhir leke jaonge mujhe?

raman:kyun?

ishita:oh ho buddu..bhagvan se thank you bolna hai mujhe..

Raman:thank you kisliye?

Ishita:unhone world ke best pathi jo diya hai mujhe..

Raman:lekin thank you bhagvan se kyun..mujhse bolo na who bhi meri thareeke se..saying he leaned to kiss on her lips..

Ishita:(closing his mouth with her palm) besharam mihika khadi hai bahar..jao ab..

Raman:accha jab mujhe kiss kar rehi thi thab mihika bahar nahi thi kya?

Saying he pressed his lips on her and kissed passionately..after about 10 minutes they braked the kiss for breath.then raman turned to go but again she called him form behind..

Ishita:raman..subhah avonge na..

Raman:smiling..aajaunga

Saying he went out from the room and ishita slowly drifted in to sleep..

Next morning

Ishita was waiting for ramans arrival to go mandhir but he didn't comes yet.

Ishita:yeh raman abi tak aye kyun nahi...utte nahi honge janab..abi call karthi hun..

Bhalla house

Raman was sleeping at the bed on his front when his phones buzzing sound braked his sound sleep.making a face he takes the phone and lifted it without seeing the caller id.before he can say a hello she began to scold him..

Ishita:yeh kya hai raman..abi tak nahi utta aapne..maine kahan thana kal ki subhah aapko mujhe mandhi le chalna hai..kumbhakarnan ki tharah ithna kyun sona hai aapko..han

Raman:sorry sorry jan..bas 5 minute main yuhi pohoch jaunga please..

Ishita:teek hai sirf paanch minute..phir phi aap nahi aaya tho main baath nahi karungi aapse...saying she cuts the call

Raman(st):chal beta jaldi thaiyyar ho ja nahi tho madrasan ki kaali roop dekhna padega tujhe...he quickly got up from the bed and went to bathroom.after taking baath he weny to pick ishita..but for his bad luck he didn't find his car at the parking area.

"ab yeh car kaun laker geya?chal bike se jatha hun..saying he went to take his bike but find it puncher.

"yaar yeh kya ho reha hai mere saath..legtha hai aaj madrasan ki hathonse pittayi hogi.."saying he began to change the tier..same time ishita was hell angry on raman being late.

Ishita:abo tak nahi aya yeh raavan kumar..aane do use chodunga nahi main..waise main kyun intzaar karu unka jo mujhe khud ithna wait karva rehe hai..saying she takes a auto and went to temple cursing raman..

After about 15 munutes raman reached at ishitas place but he didn't find her there..he called on her phone but she cuts his call..

"legtha hai madrasan bohoth gussa hai..hmm..chalo beta raman ab biwi ko manane ki thareeka sochlo"

Saying he too drive towards mandhir..

At the temple

Ishita did some pooja for raman and his and her family..completing all the pooja perfectly she went to tie a band on the mannath tree..at the way she see a aged lady sitting there breathing heavily..she quickly runs to her and sat beside.

Ishitacaressing her back) aunty ji kya hua aapko?aap teek tho haina..

Thoshiji:kuch nahi puthar..woh ithna doop haina tho dhoda thak geyi thi..

Ishita:main abi paani lathi hun..saying she went and takes some water for thoshiji.

"lo aunti ji yeh peelo aapko accha lege ga" she made her drink the water and slowly pressed her head giving massage to get her relax.

Ishita:aunti ji aap chalke aye the kya?

Thoshiji:nahi puthar meri ghaadi neeche hai

Ishita:accha chalo main aapko gaadi tak chod dethi hun.

Thoshiji:thank you puthar..

Ihita made thoshiji to reach at the car..

Ishita:auntiji aap akele chale jaonge na?main chalu kya aapke saath..

Ishita:nahi puthar main bilkul teek hun..aur driver bhi hai mere saath..tum jake apni pooja pura karo..

Ishita:ji auntiji..dhyan rekhna..

Ishita:bohoth pyaari bacchi hai tu..naam kya hai tumhara

Ishita:ji ishita

Thoshiji:bohoth sundar naam hai..aur matharani tumhe hamesha khush rekhe saying she placed her palm on her head giving her blessings

Ishita:thank you auntiji..saying she touched thoshijis feet for taking blessings..

Ishita:ab main chalthi hun

Thoshiji:han puthar chalo..aur tum chinta math karna main bilkul teek hun..

Ishita:bye auntiji

After that she went inside the mandhir while thoshiji stood there watching her retreating figure.

Thoshiji(st):bohoth pyaari bacchi hai..aisi ek ledki chahiye mujhe mare raman keliye...thinking hse sat inside the car and went from there.

When raman reached at the mandhir he see ishita coming down from mandhir with thoshiji.he wondered thinking how they met with each other so he hide himself behind a tree to listen their talk..and after hearing their talks he got very happy...




After getting too happy he went inside to meet ishita and he find her near the mannath tree..she was praying closing her eyes..raman slowly comes near her and stood close and started to admire her beauty without blinking his eyes.she was looking gorgeous in her simple blue salwar suit.her hair was open and the hairstrands were flying at the wind.he slowl leaned towards her ear and huskily whispered.

"kya maang rehi hai bhagvaan se?
"

Hearing him she opened her eyes and looked at him.he flashed his million doller smile to her but she turned her face and again closed her eyes and asked to him

"main kuch bhi maangu aapko kya hai?"

Raman:gussa math hona madrasan..i am sorry

Without seeing towards him she turned and began to walk from there..he too walked behind her continuously saying sorry..but she was shewing anger towards him..at last he started to sing

I wanna make it up to you pretty baby

Make it up to you

I wanna see you smile

Make it up to you

O meri jaan na lele ke meri jaan
Teri ada

Jaan jala na tujhpe deewana
Main hun fida

Gustaki maaf karde

Ab tho insaaf karde

Apna dil saaf karde

Kehana tho maan le

Jaane bhi de job hi hua jaane bhi de

He forwarded a rose to her..she takes it smilingly..aut at the next moment she throw it in anger..

Gussa tera jhoota

Jhoothi moothi berukhi hai

Jaanu main to jaanu

Teri naa main haan chupi hai

Aye sanaam na kar sitam

Tujhko khuda ka vasta
Hey

Gustaki maaf karde abb to insaaf karde

Apna dil saaf karde

Kehana tho maan le

Jaane bhi de job hi hua jaane bhi de...

At last he bend on his knees holding his both ears and said..

"I am really very sorry jaan..maaf kardo mujhe"

She made hi stand on his feet and said

"mujhe ek kulfi khilao tab maanungi main"

Raman:(smilingily) ek kya poora ka poora stall khilaunga main tujhe chalo..

He takes her to near by a kulfi stall and buy a kulfi for her..she started to enjoy her kulfi without mminding anyone.raman was admiring her cute antics..ishita forwarede the kufi to him saying take one bite but he nodded his head negatively..she started to eat it again when he noticed some kulfi on her lips corner..make sure that no one is watching them he pulled her close and sucked her lips corner to taste the kulti...

Ishita:raman yeh aapne kya kiya..koyi dekhlega..chodo mujhe

Raman:dekhne do..saying he again sucked her lips taking the remaing kulfi..

Ishita:besharam..chodo sab dekh rehe hai..

Ramna:dekhne do..saying he again tried to suck her lips but due to shyness she hided her face in his chest making him smile...


So friends here is the next part of jazba...this time I want more likes and comments.. otherwise update will get late...



Edited by Muskan193 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb..
Lovely update...
Awesome..
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Mind blowing update...
Loved it...
Ishra r really cute...
Raman saved Mr.iyer and Ishita saved Mrs.bhalla...
Update soon...waiting eagerly
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Originally posted by: Niveditha.giri

Mind blowing update...
Loved it...
Ishra r really cute...
Raman saved Mr.iyer and Ishita saved Mrs.bhalla...
Update soon...waiting eagerly



thank you dear
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Awesome update I think that now toshji will accept ishita