Perfect is the word for the update...!!! I seriously enjoyed every bit of it...The reactions, Dialogues, and shifts in Scenes..were simply amazing..you wrote them flawlessly..
With every update..I get a new reason for loving you and your story..; you innovatively justify every character and creatively tether every emotion..!!
Manik's condition was expected...I knew this was coming. Not giving a tinker's damn to his fragile and failing health...he managed to expose Neel...in the most clear and decent way possible..!! He's even ready to go against any prejudiced society for Nandini.. ordeals were no less lakin har baar he had kept ki ego apart and supported his love. HE DESERVES SOME HAPPINESS RIGTH????
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As guessed even by a newborn..Nandini took HIS name...The name which meant the world to her..- Manik..Manik who has been insulted and humiliated to the worst level by her dear granny..!!
Chachi's outburst was much needed. Only Murthy who can see some sense. Instead of grumbling over the vacuum in her life..she delivered all the motherly love to her Nandu..!!
And here comes the upholder of Matriarchal Society- Mrs. Murthy..!! I can't believe that after messing up everything she still has the guts to lie about HIM to HER..!!
I loved the way Nandini rebuked.. enough of this Family card . .Amms has been her guardian and gifted the happiness, God deprived her..That's the reason Nandini respected her..that's the reason she had to dress up a like a bride for that idiot.!! BUT Patience owns Limits too...!!
Amms cannot understand how deep has she stabbed Manik with her words...But Nandini can...she can gauge his pain...!!
Manik is drunk with fatigue, Friends are worried,the car is bumping along the silence of night, Ranbir is tensed, Nandini has no idea what fate has planned for her life.., THE DAY turned our extremely well - All thanks to the kindest of people - Amms And Neel...!
Yes, even Nandini is right...Manik should have turned deaf to Amms...Blind to the world and dumb to her family...What else can she think now...Her life is shattered helter skelter ..and she is completely clueless about the time ..when its gonna be fixed..!!
They found his car...let's see what's next!! Hopefully like ever single time. even now she manages to calm her baby down... :)
Thanks for the update...And thanks a ton for the response...one reply from you...is enough to light my day. And when you say that you're liking my comments...I'm really honoured, about my works - I post some of them on Insta. But for now I'm only waiting for Rohini Karmarkar's work of Literature..You should definitely write on a big scale. Think about it. Presently I know you already have a lot of commitments. But I'll love to read more of you..!! :)
Love from India
Edited by Candlewick - 8 years ago