ff - memories Part 5 @ P-19 DEC 24 / 2016 - Page 8

hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Well written! Savitha gets 2 knw abt Geet! she is angry at Maan n Arjun! she tells them she is ashamed of them! she tells them 2 apologize! update soon

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here savita talks to maans ex pa ...
She is upset with maan n arjun..

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Forgiving is easy forgetting is not

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Part 4

Savita cried cursing herself. She felt she was the one who couldnt bring up them with a good culture. Savita felt a hand in her shoulder. She looked it was Maan. It was her mistake that she depended on Arjun to find about geet but today all truth was in front of her. She cant blame Arjun fully but situation is very tense. she need to do make Maan and Arjun realise what a women is.

her thoughts broke as she heard Maan.

Mom I..

I told you first ask geet's forgiveness and...

Mom I'll do but first plz listen to me once. Maan cried.

Savita closed her eyes to control her anger. Maan sat kneeling down. he kept his head on Savita's lap.

You know mama.. when we were small we used to do many pranks. did many pranks that even led to big problems. but you were on our side. You forgave us and also made us feel guilty..but today you..

Your pranks never hurted someone's soul Maan but today you two have done it. why maan why.. Savita was pained and angery at same time.

From school days girls only came to us either for expensive gifts or popularity. It never changed maa. It increased with time but never changed,

Did all girls come, I bet only few did like that rest never came.

Maan bowed his head.

Mom I swear I or Arjun never hurted anyone knowingly. Savita gave a sarcastic smile.

Mama.. I swear we have spend nights but never crossed our limits maa. We went with those girls who needed money and fame by being with us and we needed a chillout times. It was mutual. Savita looked disgustingly. Believe me mama its not in the way you think. It was just spending sometime in pub. Plz believe...

Savita got up and said Maan plz leave this room.. I want to be alone.

Mom..

get out Maan.

Maan was shocked. he didnt say a word and left.

Same time at geet's house.

geet had cried like hell in last months. her tears had not stopped.. still her heart cried every night looking at the pictures. It was Maan's photos. there were some intimate moments of maaneet. she hated those moments now. Riya entered in geet's room to check her. she found her weeping as always.

Cant you leave past behind??? ...baby it was a bad phase..

di why he did this? geet cried hugging Riya.

Riya embraced her... felt helpless...

After some time geet wiped her face and looked at Riya. Di I want to give my 100% for my project and for it these photos will help me.

Riya was puzzled..

di I still look at it every night to make myself remind about this real world. It will remind me never trust anyone.

Riya left kissing geet's forehead and cursed Maan in her mind to make geet like this.

@ Maan's house..

Maan tried his best to recollect his memories. he hated his fate... Arjun who came to see Maan understood his restlessness. Maan dont stress your brain. Its no use. It will only create more problems.

how Arjun..I dont know what I had did.. but only one thing is clear I broke someone's heart whom I loved..Maan paused and looked at Arjun. No..not loved ... I love her..thats why I can still feel her pain when I dont even remember her. Maan stood up and brushed his hairs with his hands. Arjun sighed. dont you want to know about her?

Maan looked back at Arjun.

her name is geet..geet handa. has a step sister Riya and a brother in law in name of family. her actual mother is an American who married and settled with a wealthy man the very next month of geet's father's death. thats where I made mistake. I took geet to be same like her mother. Arjun sighed. A naive... sweet... girl next door types. Met you first time on new year's eve.

Maan took a deep breath. I want to meet her. do you have her address?

Nope they shifted to some other place few months back and...

And??? Maan asked.

It was your ilfe. find yourself what all you did... dont depend on us. Savita said. It was a warning to Arjun. Arjun couldnt face Savita yet and silently tried to leave from there when Savita stopped him.

you both did whatever you felt to do.. no one can change it but now at least try to rectify your mistakes. Arjun was silent. there would be some geet in your life too.

Arjun went numb. he left the room as soon as possible. Maan knew what was going in his mind. Maan sighed. Savita was confused with Arjun's reaction. Each revelation about their life made her know ho ignorant she was about Maan and Arjun. She looked at Maan. You two changed so much in these years that I dont know anything about your lives. Maan didnt look into her eyes. Savita sighed.

Next day morning...

Maan stood near house. It was a small one. he was still puzzled why he bought this house just an year back. Maan was buzy in his thoughts when a boy around 13 years hit ball on him. Maan looked at him.

hey you here..where's my girlfriend?

Maan was puzzled. I am sorry I think you misunderstood me for someonelse... I dont..

Are you not geet's boyfriend?

geet word was enough for Maan. You know me and geet? Maan asked.

of course .. you are my first love's boyfriend. And I hate you for that. where is my geet? did you ditch like my brother does? I swear I will kill you if you make her cry,

boy's last words made Maan remember geet's tearful eyes.

I..I dont remember her now. Maan said bowing his head.

Boy looked confused. I lost my 3 years memory in an accident.Maan continued.

but people lose hands and legs in accidents not memories.

some unfortunate do.. I am one of them.

hmm.. but didnt she tell you?

Maan closed his eyes. that moment their confrontation was in front of his eyes.

I...I didnt believe her and she left me. tears brimmed his eyes.

Boy felt bad for him. Can I help you in anyway?

Can you tell me about geet? all that you know about me and her?

The boy agreed. Both sat on a bench near by while the boy started.

OK first of all my name is David. you can call me Dave. geet is a cutie pie. Loved you a lot and I hate you for that. Maan rolled his eyes. You were very possessive about her. You never spoke to me because I love her. You were very possesive about her. Even once you broke my brother's left eye because he stared at her. I still owe you for it. you just did right. there was smirk on David's face.

I need something that would give me a clue to find her.

hmmm.. I met her first time when she came to drop Ria Mam in my old school. its when it clicked him. hey her sister Riya was my teacher. you can get her address from my previous school. Maan smiled. Maan side hugged Dave. thank you so much Dave. I am grateful to your smartness.

thanks for the compliment but make sure once you find her..keep her always happy. DONT EVER MAKE HER CRY.

Maan smiled and nodded for a yes.

And you will allow me to be with her anytime .

Maan stood up and didnt say a word. A pinch of possessiveness acted upon. he didnt like even 13 yearl old Dave meeting geet.

Dave frowned first but next moment laughed loudly. Can you see that girl there... she is my girlfriend. Dave said pointing to a girl.

Maan gave a blissful smile. Both took a leave.

SORRY FOR LATE AND SMALL UPDATES... FOR SOMETIME I AM BUSY IN MY STUDIES THAT I HARDLY GET TIME TO TYPE.. REALLY SORRY..PLZ BEAR WITH ME..

BE IT LATE BUT I WOULD NEVER LEAVE MY WORK HALF DONE...

SOON MY FIRST FF FROM DEAL TO LOVE WILL COME TO AN END(ONLY EPILOGUE IS LEFT).

THEN i CAN GIVE MORE TIME TO MY ONGOING TWO FFs.

SORRY ONCE AGAIN.

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Maan and arjun r feeling guilty...
Geet immersed herself in work...
Waiting dear

Awesome update. Maan's mother is too much angry on Maan and Arjun for their treatment with Geet. She wants Maan to rectify his mistake. Geet is crying with a pic of Maan in her hand.. Maan reached Geet's past address where he met a boy named David. He gave him some clue about Geet's sister Riya.