Shanav-COLLAB SS YEH DOSTI HUM NAHI TODENGE (PART17 pg72)

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani
Fantastic update dear...loved it. At the same tym enjoyed it a lot. Mast bhairvigiri...
Mast MeShru love story ❤️
SAMAR teasing shruti & megha, manav... 😆
but ana Ka kya?? WO to btao man?!

Haawww pritesh the master mind. Recording b kar li ...Ab kya hoga??😲

anna ke liye ittu SA wiat kar needs woh bhi patah chalega

Thanks for update

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Nice update

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anna ke liye ittu SA wiat kar needs woh bhi patah chalega
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Thanks for update

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani

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Haaye ram mere mob ne comment ka update kiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 15 : Alien Friends or Foe

All ghotala's decide to tell truth...to colonywala...

Vasant calls Bhavna aunty...

Bhavna - boliye Vasant bhai kya kaam tha..

Vasant - Bhavna aunty aap sab..matalb aap , Bhadresh Bhairavi aur bache aur baaki saare colonywale hamare ghar aajaye hame kuch bahut important baat karni hain...please aap jaldi aajaye...

Bhavna- thik hain Ghotala bhai aate hain..

Pritesh- kya hua dadi..

Bhavna- pata nahi Pritesh. Woh Vasant bhai ne hum sab ko bulaaya hain haal haal chakudi ..baba..sabko leke chalte hain ..

Pritesh--(in mind) toh mera yeh plan kaam kar gaya Ab Nobel prize mera..

All colonywala enters ghotala house...

Sharad comes down..

Sharad - bhaiya saari packing hogayi hain...

Megha-bhaiya bags kaha rakhni hain..

Bhadresh- kaise packing logical Ghotala...

Sharad- woh Bhadresh bhaiya hum batate hain...

All Ghotala's come down..and they look at each other ...and hold each other hand's...

Varsha- Vasant bata dijiye ...hum sab tyaar hain..

Vasant- Dekhiye hum kuch sach batana chahte hain aap sabko..hum Jo ek baat pichle do saal se chupate aa rahe hai.. woh raaz aap sab ko batana chahte hain

Lajo- kaisa raaz Ghotala bhai...

All Ghotala's hold each other hand's more tightly..

Vasant- yahi ki Lajo aunty ki hum sab aap logo ki tarah insaan nahi hain..hum sab...hum sab..aliens hain...do sar wale aliens wohi Jo aapne market mein dekha tha...Lajo aunty ..

All are unable to believe what Vasant said

Ronnie- aeee Ghotala man tum kya mazzak karta hain . Aise thodi ne koi alien hota hain...areee mazzak mat karo Vasant ghotala..

Varsha- nai Ronnie bhaiya hum sach keh rahe hai...hum sach mein aliens hain do sar wale..aapko vishwas nahi ho raha na hum dikhate hain apne powers...

All Ghotala's look towards each other ..

Vasant- inhe hum apne powers dikhate hain...

Vasant-hame patah hain aap sab hum par yakin nahi karenge issliye hum apne powers dikha rahe hain... Yeh dekhiye hamare powers ... Mein fast spin kar sakta hoon

Vasant shows his powers of spinning super fast..

All colonywala except Manav and children are scared..

Bhadresh- baa baa yeh sab kya hain yeh achank se toofan kaise aagaya..

Liza- Ronnie kaha ho tum man mereko darr lag raha hain...

Vasant stops spinning..

One by one other Ghotala show their powers..

Meanwhile all colonywala are shocked..they are unable to believe what they just saw...

Ohja-(scared) yeh sab kaise kiya aur kon ho tum sab...kaha se aaye ho..

Vasant moves a little forward..

Liza- aage mat aaye ghotala bhai...

Vasant stops ..

Vasant- .Maine kaha na hum aliens hain ..humne yeh insaani roop udhaar liya hain hamare yeh asli roop nahi hain...

Vasant and all ghotala's show their alien roop ...

After coming back in Insaani form..

Vasant- mera naam Vasant nahi 9211 hain... Varsha ka 1721, Sharad 87 sq, Megha 78 sq, Hemant -426, Jacky 1947 aur Shishir 2+2 5 hai...

Pritesh- Ab dekh liye yahi baat mein pichle do saal se prove karna chahta tha ki yeh log aliens hain par kisine meri nahi suni..

Bhavna(scared)- kya..kya lene aaye ho yaha ..kahi tum log hamre prithvi pe kabzaa toh nahi karne aaye...

Varsha- nahi Bhavna kaki hum yaha kabzaa karne nahi aaye..

Liza- jhoot mat bolo...Ronnie police ko phone karo woh bair agents ko phone karo...

Vasant- please ek baar aap hamari baat suniye hum dangerous nahi hum yaha prithvi pe kabzaa karne nahi aaye

Bhadresh- nai nai in logo ki baato pe vishwas mat karo ..wallah phone kar BAIR walo ko ..Ab Jo kuch kehna BAIR walo kehna...

Jacky - aap hame galat mat samjhye hum yaha kisiko hurt karne nahi aaye ..

Ohja- chup jhallar chup

Sharad- dekhiye please hum sach keh rahe hum yaha , prithvi pe kabzaa Ya hamla karne nahi aaye ..

Ohja- areee Ab aur jyada bhole mat banao mujeh patah tum sab hamari prithvi ko khatam karne aaye ho. Ha phir hamari information apne grah bhej rahe ho..

Manav- dekhiye sab shaant hojaaye ..aap ek baar unki baat suniye koi bhi natije pe mat aaye...

Ohja- bawaara hogaya hai ke chore areee yeh log aliens hain aliens tu kya unki vakilgiri kya kar raha hain

Bhairavi- (emotional) aap sab please ek baar inko bolne ka mauka dijiye ...yeh log bure nahi hain..

Bhavna- chakudi , yeh aliens hain aliens dangerous tu kya inse hamdardi jata rahi hain...

Bhadresh-aeee Bhairavi yeh apni chikni chupdi baato mein laake saari baat uglva ke yeh prithvi pe hamla karenge..

Jacky- Bhadresh bhaiya...hum yaha koi hamla nahi karne aaye hum yaha..

Bhadresh-aree koi ristha mat jodo hum sab se ..hum log insaan hain tumhari tarah alien nahi

Hemant-( crying) Bhadresh uncle aap aissa kyu bol rahe hain hum yaha hamare bade bhaiya ko ...

Ronnie-chup ek dum chup raho Ab Jo kuch bolna bair agency ke saamne bolna

All starts accusing ghotala's ..Meanwhile

Mitesh- dekha Pritesh Aaj teri wajah se ghotala family ko sab kitna taane maar rahe hain...woh log bhale hi alien hain par mera dil kehta hain woh bure nahi hain ..

Pritesh(emotional)- sahi kaha Mitesh bhaiya mujeh meri galti ka ehsaas ho raha hain.. ghotalas family ne kabhi hame hurt nahi pauchgaya par hamesha hum se darte aaye hain ...nahi Mitesh bhaiya mein apni galti sudharna mein ghotala family ko kuch nahi hone doonga..

Mitesh and Padmavati Devi- hum bhi kuch nahi hone denge..

Manav- bas kijiye aap log...mein maanta hoon inhone apni alien wali baat chupaayi par unki bhi koi majboori hogi .aap ek baar unki baat sun lijiye..

Bhadresh-areee kuch sunna nahi hain aisa khatarnaak powers wale aliens tujeh bhole kaise lag sakte hain

Megha- Bbhadresh bhaiya hamara yakin kijiye hamne kabhi bhi powers ka galat isstemaal nahi kiya.

Shishir- aur humne kabhi bhi apne powers aapko hurt karne ke liye use nahi kiya aap sabki help karne ke liya use kiya hain..

Manav, bhairu and kids were emotional and sad on seeing ghotala family helplessness...

Ohja- aeee Bhadresh dekh kya raha hain in sabki baato mein mat aa phone lagaa bair walo..

Manav- yeh kya keh rahe hain aap papa ..ghotala family ne kabhi bhi apne power ka galat isstemaal hum par nahi kiya phir kyu aap sab Inhe dangerous maan rahe hain haan ...

Bhadresh is going to call agents bit Bhairavi snatches the moblie..

Bhairavi- nai Mitesh Pritesh ke pappa mein aapko phone nahi karne doongi aur naahi kisi aur ko phone karne doongi ..Mitesh Pritesh beta jaao jaldi se Sab ke moblie le lo...Mein mere bhai aur uske parivaar ko kisike hawale nahi hone doongi..mein jaanti hoon yeh log bure nahi...yeh log ache hain

Bhairavi comes and stands between colonywala and ghotala s(towards ghotala's family)

Bhairavi- aap chinta mat kariye vasant bhai..mein aap sab ko kuch nahi hone doongi bhale hi kisiko vishwas na ho aap sab par mujeh vishwas hain aap sab par..mein aap sab ki rakhsha karoongi..aap chinta mat kariye.m mein kahi nahi jaane doonga aap sab ko..

Colonywala are stilled shocked at bhairavi statement And on seeing opportunity all trio, (kids) immediately snatches the moblie phone from everyone.

Colonywala and ghotala are shocked at this move...

Ronnie- bas Ab mein jaa raha hain khud jayega aur bair walo ko batayega..

Bhadresh- mein bhi aa raha hoon ..

All colonywala are leaving but kids and Manav blocks there way ..

Manav closes the door..

Bhavna - yeh kya kar raha hain Manav tu saamne se hat jaa..aur Priteshiya tu inn aliens ki side le raha hain jabki tu hi inke piche padha tha in ka sach bahaar laaane mein toh Aaj hamari madd kyu nahi kar raha..hain..

Pritesh(crying)- kyuki maine Galti ki hain dadi.. (going towards ghotala's family and holding ears) Vasant uncle..mein aap sab se maafi maangna chahta hoon mujeh meri galti ka ehsaas hogaya hain.. please mujeh maaf kar dijiye

Vasant takes pritesh in his arms..

Vasant- nahi Pritesh tumhari galti nahi hain..hum ne sach chupaya hain sabse jhut bola hain...humne..

Pritesh- lekin vasant uncle aapne majboori mein baat chupaai hain...meri wajah se Aaj aap log yeh situation mein hain..mein kabhi aapko hurt karna nahi chahta tha mein bas yeh prove karna chahta ki aliens hote hain par mujeh yeh patah nahi tha ki yeh baat jab sab ko patah chalegi toh sab log aap se nafrat karenge .. mein aap ke saath hoon vasant uncle mein aap sabko kahi nahi jaane doonga...

Mitesh & Padmavati Devi - hum aapke saath hain hum aapko kisike hawale nahi hone denge...

With this pritesh mitesh and padmavati Devi stands with bhairavi ...

Manav- (emotional)aap log kyu inhe dangerous ke rahe kya yeh logo ne aapka kabhi nuksaan kiya hain...?aapko kis baat ki taklif hai haan .kis baat shikayat hai...yahi ki yeh log hum se thode alag hain yahi ki yeh log dusre grah se aaye .ya phir yeh ke aap logo ne jaisa socha tha waise nahi hain yeh..ya phir yeh ki in logo ne apni asliyat chupaya..

. areee yeh log bhale hi aliens hain par hum insaan se zyada ache aur sache hai yeh log kabhi bhi kisika bura nahi bata socha in logo ne..

Ohja- ke ke ke bol raha hain jhallar dekha ..lajo dekha in logo hamare bte ko hum se chinn liya ..yeh bawaara unki vakil kare hain. (Towards ghotala's) tum logo ne maareh bete ko maareh se chinn liya hain bolo konse powers se isse apne side kiya hain..konsa jaadu tona isstemaal kiya hain...

Manav- yeh aap kya ke rahe hain papa .mein apne hosh mein Hi hoon in logo ne kuch nahi kiya

Ohja-areee jhallar in logo ne sachai chupaya hain dhokhaa diya hain ..yeh log dharti pe kabzaa..tu kyu unki side le raha hai

Ronnie- ooo ohja and sons tum kya unki side le raha hain tumhara akal thikane hai...tum fauji hoke unki side kaise le sakta hain tum hain hamara aide lena chahiye..madd karni chahiye hamari aur naahi yeh aliens ki ..

Manav cuts in..

Manav- yeh kya bol rahe hain aap. Koi dhokha nahi kiya yeh log yaha apne khoye hue bade bte 2015 ko dhoondh ne aaye ..hain aur sach yeh bhi hain ki mujeh patah tha ki yeh log aliens hain..aap sab se pehle..

All are shocked

Lajo- ke bol raha Manav tu.. agar tujeh patah tha toh kyu nahi bola pehle

Manav- Ma mein sach keh raha hoon.. aur rahi baat unki side lene ki to mein unki side issliye le raha hoon kyuki agar Aaj mein zinda hoon toh sirf aur sirf unke bade bte 2015 aur ghotala family ki wajah se zinda hoon .. aur rahi baat mere farz nibha ne ki toh ronnie bhaiya mein apne fauji hoon aur mein apna farz jaanta hoon Jung mein ladne ke saath saath dosti nibha bhi jaanta hoon.. Aur hum fauji madad karte waqt yeh nahi dekhte ki saamne wala insaan hamari jaati ya prajati ka hain ya nahi hum apna farz nibha te hain.. aur mein bhi wohi kar raha hoon ...

All colonywala are shocked with what manav said

Manav further reveals how 2015 saved his life and how ghotala's saved angel and pritesh life...

Lajo- Ye ke keh rha hai tu Manav..Tune ye mhare ko pehle kyu ni btaya

Manav- Kaise btata maa..aapko btata ke aapka beta bss marne wala tha..to kya aap jee pati..aapko dhukhi nhi krna chahta tha bss isi liye nhi btaya..

(walks upto Vasant)

Manav- Maa..inke bete ka itna bada ehsan h mujh par...ab karz utarne ki bari ayi to kya mai peeche hatt jaun!? Na aise koi fauji krta hai..na hi aise aapke sanskar kehte hai krne ko..aap btayiye..mai kya krun!?

Ronnie(emotional)- Manav...bass...aur mat rula..wo ba wo ba...

Liza(emotional)-Mai iss waqt tumhari madad nahi krungi Ronnie..jo bhi bolna hai English mein bol dalo..

Ronnie(crying)OK..Manav..you have a beautiful soul...and ghotalas...pehle bolte...hm kuch ni kahnge aapko..aapka jab tak mann hai yaha rahiye...

Lajo- Haan Ghotala bhai...aapke bete ki wajah se mera beta aj zinda hai..mai ye ehsan kaise chukaun..

Ojha- Bolo ghotala..bolo..ke kar skte hain hm tumhare liye...bolo

Bhawna- Ab to hm sab maan gaye hn Ghotala bhai..boliye...kya krein aapke liye..

Vasant(crying)- Ek hi kaam kr skte hain..hme hmare bete se milwa dijiye..(folds hands and drops on the floor) please hme hmare bete se milwa dijiye..

Watching his state, Ojha, Lajo, Bhairavi, Ronnnie, Liza all are crying uncontrollably..

Seeing the opportunity, Bhadresh takes out his phone from his pocket(Mitesh Pritesh didn't take his phone) and is about to call the agents..Ronnie sees this and acts instinctively..

Ronnie(angrily)- Bhadresh...tum pagal ho gya hai man..suna nahi tumne...wo bechara apne bete ko khojne yaha prithvi pe aya hai...usne kisi ko nuksan nahi pohnchaya aj tak aur na pohnchayega

Bhawna- haan baba..ye log chahte to hm me se kisi ko bhi kidnap krk apne sath apne greh le jate..par nahi...inhone aisa nhi kia...aur tu aisa kr rha hai inke sath..!!

Bhadresh- par baa..ye log hn to par greh wasi...inhone hmare sath chal kia hai..dhoka dia hai hme..

Vasant- hmara aap sbko thes pohnchane ka koi irada nhi tha..hmara yakeen maniye...jaise hi hme hmara 2015 mil jayega hm prithvi se chup chap nikal jaynge bina kisi ko pareshan kiye...lekin jb tk wo nhi hai please kisi ko kuch mat btaiye...aap logo ko taklif na ho islye hm ghar b chod rhe hn...hm colony chod ke chle jaynge kahi aur reh lenge...par please...hmse nafrat mat kijiye...

Bhawna- Aap log kahi nahi ja rhe..yhi rahnge isi ghar me...jab tak aapko aapka beta nahi mil jata..ye baba ki chinta mat kijiye ise mai sambhal lungi...

Ghotala family is happy...everyone is rejoicing..

Anna- Baki sbko to mana lia aapne..muje bhul gaye!!

Shanav look towards Anna tensed...

Anna- Really Sharad...tum to kehte the tum mujse pyar krte ho..ye sila dia tumne mere pyar ka..!! Itna bada dhoka...itni badi baat chupai tumne..!!

Aur tum Manav..tum to mere Best Friend ho..Best Friends ek dusre se itna bada raaz chupate hn!!

Manav- Anna meri baat suno...mai tumse ye baat chupana nahi chahta tha..

Sharad- haan Anna..mai tumhe dhoka nahi dena chahta tha..par wo muje darr tha..ke tumhe sach pta lgega to tum kaise react krogi..

Anna- Bss...muje aur kuch nahi sunna..i m hurt...mere do friends jinpe mai khud se zyada believe krti thi unhone muje itna hurt kia hai...

Anna is angry and hurt and runs away from there..Shanav look helplessly at each other..

Bhadresh- Sirf Anna ko nahi tum logo ne hm sbko hurt kia hai..mai nahi sunne wala kisi ki

Bhawna- Ae baba..chup kar..chakudi, Mitesh Pritesh..le ke chalo isko ghar..zra apne tareeke se samjhate hain ise..

Bhawna, Bhairu and Mitesh Pritesh drag Bhadresh to their home..

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Anna is standing in the lawn looking towards the sky..shes thinking something and there is a strange calm on her face..

Sharad comes finding her and when he sees her , he gathers courage to talk to her...

Sharad- Anna...

Anna(startled by his voice turns around..looks at his face and then turns back)- Sharad..please...jao yaha se..please..muje tumse koi baat nahi krni...

Sharad- Ek baar sunogi bhi nahi!?

Anna- Sunne ke liye bacha kya hai Sharad...sab kuch clear ho gya..tumhe bass dhoka dena ata hai...chalo maan lia tum alien ho..par dhoka to dia na tumne...yaha prithvi pe aye to Megha ko doha dia mujse pyar ka natak krk..aur muje dhoka dia itna bada sach chupa ke...really Sharad..you hurt me..mai tumhe bhola samajhti thi..buddhu..par tum to shatir nikle..itna bada plan..scheme...muje fasane ka..!?

Sharad- Anna!! Maine koi scheme koi plan nahi bnaya..!! Meri baat sunn lo sab clear ho jayega tumhe..!!

Anna- Really..abhi bhi kehna hai tumhe kuch?

Sharad- Abhi to kehna hai Anna..abhi nahi kahunga to kabhi nahi keh paunga...

Anna- Okay go ahead..mai bhi sunu tumhari explanations...

Sharad starts to tell her the whole truth..how Naani manipulated 2015..then played withMeghas feelings to make her against the ghotalas...Then went ahead to tell about his fight with her and then told her how he decided to come to earth to find 2015...

Sharad- Anna jab mai yaha aya..to mai Megha se sare rishte nate tod ke aya tha...na use mujse koi umeed thi na maine socha tha ke hmara koi future hai...tumhe pehli baar pool ke paas dekha to bss..wahi tumse pyar ho gya...pehli baar insani ladki dekhi thi...aur mai jaise bhaiya kehte hain baniyan..tumhe dekha aur lehrana shuru..na kuch hosh tha na khabar...bss tumse milne ki baat krne ki chahat thi..aur tum jaise pyar se budhu kehti thi muje..aur cheezein explain krti thi..uspe dil aa gya tha mera...isi wajah se wo sab...I am sorry Anna...bhaiya ne kai baar tumhari aur meri prajati alag honeki baat uthai..par maine kabi unki baat nahi suni..ansuna kar deta tha..ye soch ke ki aisa kuch hai hi nahi..

Par Anna jaise hi muje ehsas hua ke mere chup rehne se tumhare aur Manav ke beech duriyan ho rhi hain..mai peeche hat gya..mai tumhe dhoka nahi dena chahta tha..isi liye doori bana li...agar tumhe meri kisi b baat se thes pohnchi hai to I am sorry...mera irada tumhe hurt krne ka nahi tha..mai bss bhaiya Bhabhi ki madad krna chahta tha isi liye yaha aya tha..tum kaho to mai agli spaceship me baith ke wapis chla jaun...bt please...mera gussa Manav pe mat nikalo..uski koi galti nahi hai..please use maaf kr do..

Anna- Bol lia? Good..now u can go..

Sharad- lekin Anna..!!

Anna- I said Go!! I don't want to talk to u..

Sharad hurt by her tone goes away...

Anna is about to leave when a pair of hands stops her

Voice- Aise kaise ja rhi ho bina kuch bole..

Anna(turns angrily but calms down seeing the face)- Manav..please mera hath chodo

Manav- na..aise nahi..pehle btao..kya hua..

Anna- Tum puch rhe ho kya hua..really!! you have hurt me Manav...itni badi baat tumhe pta thi bt u didn't care to tell me...kya gunah hai mera jo u r treating me this way...itne din se ignore kr rhe ho..baat krne ati hu seedhe tarike so baat nahi krte...y Manav...y...

Manav-Anna..hmara tumhe hurt krne ka blkul irada nahi tha...sorry..but Anna samjho na...tumhe ye baat btate to phir puri colony walo ko batana padta...n tum hi samjho...koi bhi iss baat ko accept krne ke liye ready nahi tha ke ghotala family alien hai

to aj se pehle unhe kaisa treatment milta tum socho..kya sab log unki madad krne ke liye ready hote?? Nahi anna infact unki baat since bina unhe bair ke hawale kar dete

Aj ghotala family ko ache se jante hain...unhe pta hai k ghotala family unhe hurt nahi kregi isi liye aj wo iss baat ko asani se accept kr paye..sab

Anna- Wo sab mai nahi janti Manav...u ppl didn't even think about me...my feelings..

Manav(angry)- Bass Anna bass...bass kro tum..kaise feelings..kaise treatement..anna .jaisa tum sab ne ghotala family k sath kia uske baad b tum soch rhi ho wo tumhe apna mane?!

Anna- Matlb..kehna kya chahte ho?

Manav- tumne lgaya tha na chori ka ilzam unpe...jab tum unpe itni choti baat pr trust nahi kr skti to how can u think k wo tumhe apni life ke itne bade secret ka part bnanynge!? Good they didn't tell u...coz u don't deserve it...pehle khud ko dekho Anna phr bakiyo pe ungli uthao..

Manav turns and walks away angrily leaving Anna to ponder over her actions...

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@Bhatt House

Bhawna, bhairavi, Mitesh, Pritesh drag Bhadresh inside the house..

Bhawna- Ae baba...baat sunn meri..

Bhadresh- Na Baa..ab mai aapki ek bhi baat nahi sununga...mai bair walo ko phone kr rha hu..

Mitesh Pritesh rush inside and bring a rope...

Bhawna bhairavi drag Bhadresh to a chair and the kids tie him up

Bhadresh- Ae ye kya kr rhe ho..

Bhawna- tuje sabak sikhha rhe hn babhuchak

Bhadresh- par baa..maine kya kia...mai to sirf sach ka sath de rha hu..

Bhawna- tu sachai ka nahi darr ka sath de rha hai...agar sachai ka sath dena hai to ghotala ke sath reh..

Bhairavi- haan Mitesh Pritesh ke pappa...mana unhone itna bada raaz chupa ke galat kia...par unki majburi bhi samjhiye na...

Pritesh- haan papa...pehle mai bhi unke khilaf tha..par papa wo galat nahi hain...ek baar unke bare mein sochiye agar wo bair walo ke hath lag gaye to wo kabi apne bete se mil nahi paynge...

Mitesh - haan papa aisa sochiye...ke ek din mai ya Pritesh gum ho jate hain aur aap hume phr kabi mil nahi pate...hm kaha hai aapko koi khabar nahi hai..btaiye..aapko kaisa lgega..

Bhavna - baba woh log bure nahi ..woh sirf hum se thode se alag hain ...ek baar soch kuch karne se pehle khud ko unki jagah rakh ke dekh..unke Nazariye se ek baar soch baba...

Bhadresh is lost in his thoughts..

Bhadresh is still thinking and is about to say something when the door opens with a bang...

Precape- all waits for bhadresh decision...shruti doubt on sharad to be alien... colonywala helps ghotala's to behave like humans What will happen when a new guy enters colony..?

Edited by Krish58 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#426

Superb Update
well done both of u

ghotalas finally decide to reveal d truth
i dint like this revealing part
i was so emotional
all blaming & accusing ghotalas
i cried buckets😭😭

anna is seriously hopeless

manav finally told d truth as colonypeople wont listen to wat ghotalas said
nice one bhairu stood up for her bro & family
pritesh realises his folly
loved kids took away phones from all
& stopped bhadresh & ronnie to go out

seriously all tied up bhadresh as he wasnt listening
he shud be given a tight slap for it

continue soon
thnks 4 d pm

Edited by coolhi1988 - 8 years ago

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Krish58

@Krish58

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Posted: 8 years ago

#427

Thanks mein ne toh dekha hi nahi

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.anjali.

@.anjali.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#428

hellooo everyone...long time no see

sorry for the delays in updating..mai super busy thi...i got a part time job and meko waqt hi ni milta sans lene ka...n phr papa was visiting me and handling papa and job and uni is one hell of a job really..band baj gai meri😆

now am back to my routine...but mere exams aa rhe hn so phir se m gayab shayab like a bhoot..hope mai november me free ho jaun...😕

Thanx krishuu for helping out...and hope everyone enjoys the part...apologies for everything😔

Anjali❤️