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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sushan

Another awesome part of this amazing story!Before I say something about story I want to say something about you . " You are not only an amazing writer but a very sensitive person also. I believe you value all the things in your life be it small or big" Well that is just my opinion .Sushan🤗 That was such a heart warming thing you have said to me...I was so overwhelmed reading that..but yes, I am pretty sensitive for sure...some times, I have pull myself back to get on track😆

Now coming back to Arnav first because this chapter was more about Arnav from his angle his attraction to Khushi is beyond his control even after knowing what "type" of a person she is. So being a hardcore business man his mind came up with a plan which will be beneficial for both of them.But his heart still wanted to believe that Khushi loved him truly and that is why he was disappointed when she said she doesn't love him. You got it right...for sure their attraction is uncontrollable and I think that is because of the deep seated love for each other too...But this experience wouldn't let Khushi to open up to Arnav again and then something more is coming like a storm...this was just the beginning...the eye of the storm is yet to come.
Trust is very fragile thing in new relation which Khushi has lost twice. So I really don't blame Arnav for his thinking about Khushi . Believe it or not I knew (not directly)some one like Arnav who came from a middle class family studied well got settled in usa has his own multi million dollar company very handsome 32 years old but does not want to marry because as per him all the girls he has met they all wants to marry him because of his bank balance.Oh absolutely , it happens for sure in real world and we all know what type of people make other's money as their ticket to a comfort and luxury. Such people don't count for emotions at all. And to think Arnav thinks Khushi in that light is really heart breaking...but he is not happy thinking of her like that...That hurts him immensely too.😕
In this situation where Arnav has himself read a letter from Khushi and heard her convo with her friend it is almost impossible to think from heart where he does not even know Khushi very well as person.
Once you have made an opinion about a person eventhe rights done by that person seems wrong. That is why when she said she loves him he wants it to be true but at the same time his mind reminds him this is all planning by Khushi.
I know my comment might not be liked by many other readers but this is the reality of life.No but I fully understand...because thats what my intentions were for readers to understand. 😊

As for Khushi this whole experience is life changing in just one week first for good and later how to deal with this heart break. She has lost so much not only on physical level but at emotional level too. Yes I agree she is very naive and innocent and she paid the price for being that. She had put her heart and soul to this budding relation with Arnav and the way Arnav was behaving with her she could never imagine this offer will be coming from him. This is just a shock...she has all the time in the world to ponder on it and getting her heart break every moment thereafter is also something very very heart wrenching.
Till now it was Arnav who was not trusting her but it will be hard for Khushi to trust Arnav whenever he will come asking forgiveness. Lot of things would happen in between before that moment comes...and then when it comes...story would have gone real far also.

Although Arnav's behavior is justified given all the facts still my heart goes for Khushi . Poor girl she not only have to stay strong and come out, from this heart break and very insulting indecent but she will have to face her family's accusation also . She will have to arrange the funds to return to Shyam and her mamaji's future treatment . Now that her dreamworld is shattered she needs to stay strong to face real world which is going to be too hard.bitter and ugly for her now.Next part deals with their separation phase and they meet again at the end of the next part.

You penned down every emotion so well ,that I was able to analyse their thoughts so well . I could feel their inner turmoil and the sound of heart break.Thank you so much dear...that is always my concern, if everybody would be able to feel those emotions or not.

Can't wait for the next part. Thanks again for sharing your awesome stories with us :))And thanks for reading them with me.😊🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: star_fan1

Wonderful update loved it

Now this is what I wanted to Khushi come to know the truth and come out of her dream land
Glad that Khushi decided to leave that place to save her dignity after giving him back Oh absolutely, I was waiting for this phase too, so we can move ahead now...Now Khushi is no more in her dream land.
Let's see how and when will they meet again
And this time I hope it will be Arnav who will suffer and look for her He goes to get her for sure...as he would be in agony without her. 😉
Waiting for next update eagerly

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Posted: 8 years ago

Teaser Chapter 17-

Translation courtsey Sri🤗

Ruth Kar Tum Mujhe Bhulane Lage, (You started forgetting me after you were mad at me)
Itne Durr Hue Ke Bahut Yaad Aane Lage, ( We came so far apart that I started remembering you)
Kaise Bhula Dein, Tumhe Ek Pal Mein Hum, ( How can I let your memories leave me in a moment)
Jab Tumhe Paane Mein Zamane Lage ( When it took a lifetime to find you.)
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First week.
He stayed mad and angry at her.

Second week.
He tried to forget all about her.

Third week.
He knew, no matter whatever her faults were, he wanted her back in his life again.

Fourth Week.
He went to claim what was his.
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First week.
She cried every night in pain.

Second week.
Shock of his betrayal finally sunk deep into her making her bitter and angry.

Third week.
He still remained in her thoughts,through out day and night.

Fourth week.
She woke up and decided to forget all about him and that she ever knew him.


Edited by matosarah - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved this teaser.
The transition from being weak to become strong and going to fight the world takes a lot of understanding.

Mental maturity..


Wtg to see kushis strong transition.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very interesting teaser...when you said leap, I thought it would be at least an yr or at least few months.

I feel really bad for Khushi but a part of me also says that Arnav is not really at fault. Anybody in his place would feel what he felt after hearing the phone conversation.

As I requested earlier too...in the first 2 weeks when he is pining for her and trying to forget her, Please don't make Arnav turn to other women and especially, Lavanya. If he does that now after having been with Khushi, I will really hate him.
Edited by saack - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hararnav

thank you so much for ths update,,,,, i have been waiting for this confrontation from the time i read the first part...Awww, this was first of the major one...there is more twists coming soon😉

no words to describe khushis pain...
situations might have made arnav hate her,,,but he is very wrong to judge her without knowing the truth and degrading her...I agree...but he is being driven by his own misunderstood knowledge

wonder how n when will he realise This is going to be the base of his misunderstands and then there would be more...It would take a lot of effort and time to undo the damage.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Well after what he did it is will be better to forget him. How can you be someone and not recognize the bond!
U can atleast try to understand her part of the story
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tinken

Beautiful! Khushi should not forgive easily

Don't worry she wont😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Inquin

Wow, brilliantly written. I read the story for the first time. Please update real soon. And plz knock some sense into the dumb Arnav's head!!!


Oh great, I am glad you have joined the team now😃...Well Arnav would gain his own senses when the right time comes.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting Teaser
Song is from Arnav's POV, his thoughts about Khushi and is missing her badly.
Now waiting for the update.

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