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Ritz 🤗
Hope you remember me.
I read the chapter the same day you uploaded it, liked it, but didn't leave a comment. I didn't reserve it either, cuz I didn't know when I would find time to un-res it and I feel as a writer one feels too frustrated to have res comments on the thread never unreserved.
So now, (after the above pravachan) I have found the legit time to leave my comment on the last update.
Well, I am really at a loss of words.
First of all, a big THANK YOU to you for writing it so amazingly, so beautifully, that it simply tugged my heart to read it with the mindset and feelings it was supposed to be read.
You conveyed the emotions, the palpable situations, the desire, the lust, the love, the naivety, the domination, so well. I am awestruck.
I would say about Khushi first.
Don't get me wrong, but her character seems way too gullible, something we don't really find these days, and rarely and rightly so, she is extremely, extremely naive, to not think through well before doing what she is doing.
And this naivety is intensified only when it comes to Arnav. Pretty much defines the logic that we lose our rationale and also tend to lose our sanity when we fall in love, and so she did.
With Shyam or anyone else for that matter, she is courageous, puts her brains to use, but with Arnav, downright NO.
I am afraid that the blow she got at last, from the love of her life, deeming her as his object of satisfaction in exchange of all luxuries of life, where is it going to leave her?
And it is given that I am more than excited to know how you are going to unfurl Khushi, because I am sure after whatever happened, she won't be the same woman anymore. Not with Arnav, not with herself.
Coming to Arnav.
This man amazes me, amuses me, irks me, and all at once.
It is far too obvious that he doesn't realise how deep his feelings for Khushi really are, and when he does realize it, ALONG with Khushi's real stance, her purity and innocence, he is bound to go on a brain freeze, wherein no redemption is going to restore his sanity.
He is a sure shot, one way brain-thinker, wherein little murmurs from his heart deliberately go unheard as his undivided attention is totally occupied by his brain and of course, his desire for Khushi, the noise of it is too loud right now, that it makes his real feelings for her become mere background noise.
All in all, both of them will undergo a massive change in the coming updates and I am sure of that.
And I am simply way too excited and in anticipation of the next update, Ritz.
Hope you update soonish.
Best,
Simi ❤️
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