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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Wowww...waiting for parud scenes...if u add many parud scenes..then.it wil very well okay with d title ecstacy of love
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManiManish

Wowww...waiting for parud scenes...if u add many parud scenes..then.it wil very well okay with d title ecstacy of love

I'll try to PaRud scenes in upcoming chapters..
Thanks for Ur cmt..
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Chapter 9


V.K.Singh comes to the hospital reception and asks about Parvati's discharge. Receptionist says sure sir and gives all the reports of Parvati to V.K.Singh and asks him to sign in some papers. He signed in father's signature column. He thanked her and leaves happily.

At the ward, Geethanjali informs Parvati that she will look for V.K and come back soon and leaves the ward. Parvati saw Aman and calls Aman Bhaiya. Aman smiles and asks what Parvati? Parvati Questioningly says "Rudra?" Aman smiles and says Rudra Sir... Parvati says he is in meeting right Bhaiya? Aman says yes. She says I want to see him, want to talk to him, and want to explain. Before she could complete her sentence, Aman says Parvati, he trusted you, she says but..., Aman says nothing happen Parvati as you like, he explains everything about her rescue mission at that booth bungalow. At the same time, a nurse enters her ward to check her for the last time before discharge. Nurse is also told her, everything happened there, including Rudra cried for Parvati, and not leaving her even for a second and been with her all the time she told everything her. Parvati eyes were filled completely with tears and also she was happy from her heart. Aman also smiled. Nurse says you are very much lucky to have a husband like him. After hearing this, drops of tears run out from Parvati teary eyes. After finished her check up, Nurse leaves the ward room. Parvati started crying hardly and Aman says Parvati, what happened. Why you are crying like this and try to console her. Parvati say to Aman that she wants to see Rudra and pledge him to bring Rudra at that time itself. She folds her hand to him; he holds her hand and shakes his head not to do like this. Aman consoles her and say he will call Rudra and makes a call to Rudra.

At the hospital entrance, V.K called his driver and asks him to come to the entrance. Geethanjali asks, are we moving to our home now itself? V.K. Singh says yes, then what else to do by staying here? Geethanjali says Parvati is willing to meet Major Ranawat. V.K.Singh says Rudra is the sole reason for Parvati's condition, then why should she meet him? Geethanjali says I think she loves him. V.K shouts stop it Geethanjali, first stop your imagination, Parvati is our daughter now, so don't think or talk bad like this, Geethanjali says sorry, he nods.

At haveli, Rudra freshen up himself and changed his wears to common black dress. Maithili knocked Rudra's room door. Rudra says come in. Maithili came there with tea and says Devarsa, tea. Rudra take the tea cup and says thanks. She says I want to talk to you Devarsa. He says yes tell me by sipping the tea as well. She asks him to come with her to Suheri's room. He asks for what, she says you need to know some truth about Parvati. He followed to Suheri's room where she opens the cupboard and take out two golden color dupattas and shows it to Rudra, he took it from her and asks what is this. She says this torn dupatta was worn by Parvati at Mela but this one is not yet torn, Rudra asked what you mean. She says I got this dupatta at our haveli terrace and I got this torn dupatta from Parvati's bag. Rudra says ok, what you are trying to say. She says someone dressed like our Parvati and tried to kill Bhabusa. Rudra is not yet shocked because he trusted Paro. She says I didn't know who done this but me and Suheri wants to say sorry because Suheri without seeing the girl, said that was Parvati. It is her mistake only and also I said Parvati as my sister, though I failed to trust her and behaved bad with her. There is no mistake on Parvati, I will ask sorry on behalf of Suheri Devarsa, Please bring back Parvati, please trust her. Samrat called her from his room. She leaves Rudra alone at Suheri's room. Rudra watches the two clothes and came to his room and put those clothes in his bed and says who? Again it is Mohini or someone else. He felt some oily content in his left hand and quickly picked the dupatta and smells it which smells like ghee and took next dupatta and which smells like rose and sandal which was his Paro's smell.

Aman come out of the ward because of low signal and called Rudra who didn't pick the call. Aman says Sir Pick up the phone. He tried so many times but Rudra didn't pick. Parvati came out of the ward and stood behind Aman and call Aman Bhaiya. Aman turn back and see her, Parvati eyes asks about Rudra, Aman didn't answer her and just shake his head to convey that Rudra didn't picked up the call. Parvati holds the door of her ward and cries. Aman says he'll come soon; don't cry My sister. He put his hand on her head and says don't cry.

Rudra brings Paro's dupatta and keep it in his cupboard. After that he comes to the room which got fired and observes everything without touching the things there. Then he comes near the Window and feels something like oil had stuck in his kurta. Rudra touch and see the window wood and feels the same oily content in all the things over there. Everything there was oily and so Rudra's doubt falls over fully on Mohini but there is no proof, his anger elevate higher but he couldn't do anything without proof, Without knowing what to do he comes out of the room. At that time Mohini came there and said to herself, what this oont (Camel) doing here?

Geethanjali came there and saw Parvati is crying and ask what happen, Parvati who wipes her tears and says nothing maasa. Geethanjali says you don't need to tell the reason, but if you cry means my daughter will become sad. So you should not cry Parvati. Aman & Parvati didn't understand anything. Parvati says your daughter? Geethanjali says yes my daughter, who are you, my daughter only right? So if you cry then my daughter will be in sad isn't it and smiles? Parvati smiles a little. Geethanjali wipes her tears and says be happy.

Rudra opens the cupboard and take the doll from it, then he says to it that today is not a good day for me, but now I m going to meet My Paro, She will be awake now and definitely search for me. He smile and says already it's been late and so I will talk to you later. He byte bye to his doll and put it in his cupboard and took his uniform.

At the entrance, Geethanjali take Parvati along with her to the car, V.K.Singh opens the car door. Aman came behind them and stand next to Parvati. Geethanjali walks opposite side of the car. Parvati came near to car and turn behind where Aman is standing and nods. Parvati gets into the car and say bye to Aman through the window; her eyes were filled with tears.

Few hours later, Rudra come to hospital and saw Aman at entrance, and ask him why you left Paro and came here. I asked you to be with Paro only right, why you left her and came, without waiting for Aman's response Rudra rushed to Paro's ward. On the way, he bumps with Dr.Varsha and without saying sorry, he rushed from there. Dr.Varsha angrily says herself "without saying sorry" and makes her face and says I'll stop you Mr X. She runs opposite side and came in front of Rudra, Rudra was stopped. She ask him to say sorry, he was confused and says what?? She says, so while coming don't you bumped me Mr... She saw his name badge and stopped and saw him. Rudra says Sorry and leaves, Dr.Varsha didn't listen anything after saw his name she is stunned, Aman came to her and ask what happen? But she didn't reply, he shakes her. She says he., he is., major ... She talked quite questioningly and Aman without waiting for her reply he started following Rudra.

At V.K.Singh home, Parvati came out of the car and saw a big and beautiful haveli. Some worker brought aarthi plate and Geethanjali take it from her and says she is my daughter so I'll do it. She does aarthi for Parvati and welcomes her inside the home. Parvati enters their home and saw a big entrance hall, so many worker are working here and there. She noticed some workers removing a big portrait and fixing a medium portrait of a couple. V.K.Singh goes to the BSD office. Before Parvati seeing whose portrait was fixed in the entrance hall, she hears a baby crying inside. She saw that direction. Geethanjali rushed to the room where baby is crying, Parvati followed her and saw a very little baby, Geethanjali try to feed milk to her grandchild. But baby refused to drink milk, Parvati thinks the baby is too little, may be bachcha was born only few days before. Parvati goes near the baby and touch its head, Parvati get the baby in her hands and put in her shoulder and sang "Heli sunle Ram ji". Baby stops crying and sleeps in her shoulder, she pats baby's back. Geethanjali smile seeing them.


Precap: Rudra was shocked to see empty ward. Dr.Varsha and Rudra's second meeting.

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Author Note - Special Thanks to Devi & Mani

Edited by -BhavyaEsther- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Why did Geetanjali take Paro without telling Rudra? :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RitikaGarg8

Why did Geetanjali take Paro without telling Rudra? :(

May be 11th chapter wil reveal all truth abt Geethanjali behaviour,.
Edited by -BhavyaEsther- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrsStephenAmell

Beautifull update love it

Thank U😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Why is Geethanjali ma'am taking Paro away?
Why is the general blaming Rudra, he is the one who said he has to take of his witness.
Whose baby is in their house?
Who is Varsha and why isn't she bumping into Aman?
Oh god bhavya love your writing and your edits but I have so many questions. And please reunite Parud soon. Atleast letter, phone call, something
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Originally posted by: -Disenchanted-

Why is Geethanjali ma'am taking Paro away?
Why is the general blaming Rudra, he is the one who said he has to take of his witness.
Whose baby is in their house?
Who is Varsha and why isn't she bumping into Aman?
Oh god bhavya love your writing and your edits but I have so many questions. And please reunite Parud soon. Atleast letter, phone call, something

Coming up chapters will Ans u Sis...
If it is telecast in Tv u hav to wait nxt 24 hrs same like tat u hav to wait sis..
definitely PaRud Reunite happen soon bt u hav to wait sis..
Thank u sis ur d one who praise my writing & edit ...
Thank u so Much😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 10 Update 👍🏼
Happy Reading😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 10

Rudra rushes towards Paro's room and opens the door very faster. He was shocked to see the empty bed and found Paro is missing there. He searched fully over the room and shouts "Parooo". All the nurses and ward boys come there on hearing Rudra's voice. Rudra eye's got filled with tears, because a fear surrounded him like again he missed his Paro. At that moment Aman came there and says "Sir". Rudra holds his shirt collar and ask him with extreme anger, "where is Paro?"

Suheri comes to home from college. Maithili gives her evening snacks and Suheri happily eats the samosa. Maithili tells her that, she told the truth about dupatta to Rudra. Suheri signs Maithili to talk silently; else somebody will hear their conversation. Maithili ask her, this is our home and who else will be our enemy here like that. For that Suheri replied her with mouth full of Samosa that, No bhabhisa, somebody is there. That's why they dressed same like Paro bhabhisa's marriage dress and tried to kill thayajisa, and also tried to make us to doubt on Paro bhabhisa. Maithili thinks and took the tray in her hands; keep on thinking about what Suheri said. She keeps on recalling her words "Somebody is there", "Same dress like Paro bhabhisa". Maithili keep on thinking about that and come to hall, there by mistakenly bump over Mohini. The tray in her hands has fall down. Maithili says sorry Majisa. Mohini scold her and ask, whether she has eyes or not, in front of the workers. Maithili again ask sorry and take back the tray and leave the place.

Rudra with his extreme anger holds Aman's shirt collar and asks where is Paro? Aman says Sir. Rudra without leaving his collar hold him against the wall tighter and again ask where is Paro. Aman says "Parvati Went". Rudra got confused and ask him to say everything clearly. For that Aman, reply him Parvati went to her home sir. Rudra slowly released his shirt collar. Aman slightly coughed because Rudra had held his collar that much tightly. Rudra ask him, did Paro go with her Mamisa. Aman was unable to speak clearly, though he says to Rudra, that no sir she went along with her mother. Rudra entirely got confused and ask Aman to said properly. For that Aman says, Geethanjali & V.K.Singh sir came and said Parvati as their daughter and discharged her from the hospital. Rudra fully shocked on hearing this and ask Aman finally one question "Did Paro go along with them willingly". Aman didn't say anything and remained silently; Rudra again raised his voice with anger and asked. Aman says yes sir, but.. Rudra signs him to stop and point him towards door and leave the room.

A car was parked near the old godown, some persons were getting down from the car and they bring two unconscious women along with them. They lock those women together in an old room. After that they came out and call his boss and inform him that the work has over, and then disconnected the call. The head of the gang orders his men of three to take care of them well and safely. They nods and the head leaves the place in the car. Three men stay in the place for security.

After Aman closed the room door and silently waited outside, Rudra started recalling his state when Paro was in hospital bed. That time how he was feeling for her, holding her hands without leaving, cried for her to the Doctor, kissed her forehead and finally Paro blabbers Rudra's name in her unconscious state. Rudra holds his hands towards his ears, closed his eyes and says "enough, enough Paro", when he opened his eyes, he found Paro was standing near him, Rudra says everything is a false and dream, finally you too went by leaving me alone Paro. Do you know why I came here? I came here to take you along with me Paro. But you left me alone and went. Why Paro, why? Finally you too proved my trust for you is wrong, when you are here in this hospital bed I said to you, please don't leave me alone as my mother did. But today you left me and went along with your new relations, why Paro? And tried to touch her, but Paro disappeared. After few minutes, Rudra's feeling for Paro vanished away and his anger replaced his feelings. Again Jallad Rudra says in anger and biting his teeth that, I can live without you Paro, how I lived without my mother for 15 years same way I can be without you also. Paro illusion appeared in front of him and surrounded him and smiles.

At evening Geethanjali, comes to the room where baby was and ask Parvati to come for having food after freshen up. Parvati says ok and step towards bathroom, but she knows there is no change of dress for her. Geethanjali tells the direction of bathroom to Paro and she nods. Geethanjali keeps a new yellow color saree for Parvati and leaves by closing the room. After 3 hours Parvati comes out of the bathroom, wearing the old dress which is partially dry. She sees the new saree which was kept in the bed and touch that saree. Then she takes the saree in her hands and look at that yellow color. She closed her eyes and thinks of her haldi function with Rudra. The one and only Haldi function for Paro was with Rudra.

First vision which she remembered was Rudra shirt got struck in the curtain and she helped him to release that and both of their eyes met everything recalled in her vision. Then Rudra washed the haldi in her hands, then in her face and then in her back, all these make her feelings for Rudra gets increased a lot. She felt like Rudra is standing behind her and rubbing her back with his rough hands and she closed her eyes very tightly. Now she feels his breath over her back neck and his rough hand rubbing her on her back and she felt his hands heat get transmitted from his hand to her body. She felt motionless because her thoughts were fully over Rudra. After hearing Geethanjali door knock Parvati comes out of her imagination world. Geethanjali tells to Parvati, that the lunch is ready and asks her to come to the dining room, Parvati tells her that she will come within 5 minutes. Geetha says ok & leaves, Parvati keep on touching the yellow saree and smiles seeing that.

After an hour, Rudra comes out of that ward, Aman waits for him outside. Aman says Sir, we have to go for the headquarters now, but Rudra says I want to see the doctor. At Chief Doctor's cabin, Rudra & Aman waits, chief doctor comes in and both the soldiers wish them. Doctor asks them what the matter is. Rudra says I need a doctor to take care of my Bhabusa from 9 to 5. Doctor laughs and says you are asking a doctor for a full working hour and laugh again. Meanwhile, Dr.Varsha enters the chief doctor's cabin and smiles at Aman. She was about to talk to Rudra, but he says to doctors that many problems are surrounding my father. Somebody is trying to kill him. Even a nurse can't handle this present situation, so that I am asking for a care taking doctor. Doctor tells him that no doctor will agree for this I think. For taking care of only one patient who will agree Major. Dr.Varsha hears all this conversations. She interrupt their talk and submit her report to chief Doctor and asks, doctor shall I do this job? Rudra turns and see her for the first time and she smile at him but Rudra didn't smile. Aman asks Varsha, Are you ready to do this job? For that Varsha asks, why? Can't I do this? Aman says you can, but now only you came to BSD hospital. Varsha reply him, so what soon Major's father will get cured because of my treatment and again I am going to come back here, right? So be cool Bhai. Rudra was confused and looks at Aman. Realizing that, Aman tells Rudra, that she is my cousin. Rudra slightly felt relief from his father's security matter. Chief Doctor says if Dr.Varsha is ok with this means, I don't have any issues like that. She interrupted her chief's talk and says, but I have a problem. Rudra & Aman are confused. Varsha asks still my salary package was not discussed? Rudra tried to talk, but Varsha interrupted him and said by laughing, I need Rajasthani food. By eating in hotel for a longtime, I started hating my foods, so as my salary I only need Rajasthani foods everyday and ask Rudra is it ok for him. Rudra nods.

Precap: Paro gets shocked on seeing the couple's photo on the wall. Rudra without sleep thinks about Paro and feels that she left him alone and went.

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That's it friends...

Like it or Loved it or hate it..

Pls Share your opinion friends...

Author Note - Special Thanks to Devi Sis

Edited by -BhavyaEsther- - 8 years ago

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