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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
I
Am
First.

Haha, I did know that you will be, you crazy kiddo! 🤗

Originally posted by: payal94
Nice update

Thank you so much! 😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#302

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bashful_moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#303

Happy Anniversary writer...May you have many more of such celebration.

Awesome chapter, awesome punch...

"Who needs enemies if one has friends like Dhruv and Alia".. The only irony is Manik still continues to be their provider even amid the chaos of his supposed death..

Nandini is right: Dhruv will fall and fall hard soon.. I will look forward to the day he staggers, stumbles and falls flat on his face with Manik just being a silent spectator...

As for Alya, I feel both angry and sorry for this girl at the same time. Angry for being so callous towards Mamik's death and sorry for thinking that with Manik gone everything will be hunky dory between her and Dhruv... who knows perhaps she will be his next punching bag.

Nandini... Kickass, nothing else.. Dhruv is right, she is the chit size pixie version of Manik...

Nyonika -- If a she-devil is ever personified it will be her... This woman is so intutive... Good that she is having premonitions of some impending doom... May she get her just desserts soon. Who is the person she is thinking about now??? Manik, his dad, other member of Fab 5???

Continue soon writer...

Good luck n God bless..

P.S : Everytime I think I you cannot do better, you surprise me with an unexpected... like Nandini's punch to Dhruv.. And how to you manage to integrate past and present so effortlessly writer?.. If this is how you continue to write, don't blame me for having a girl crush on you soon...#JustNOTkidding

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shreya31

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Posted: 8 years ago

#304

M not first again * wails loudly again*

Res...i will come back for a detailed comment...need to rush now!!

Unres

Allright...m bck after a long time😛sorry for tht...

"...And I am going to enjoy it, every bit of it." She told then as she smirked at tht two of them with a glint of evil in her eyes and an air of supriority in her attitude, she walked away.

THIS GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS👏n i was so bloody proud when i read it, so proud!!! Thts my Nandini!!😈😎 Take that u losers!!

Tht is the girl Manik fell in love with, the girl v all fell in love with...this is the attitude tht i absolutely love and adore!!

*puts a smacker on ur cheek😳*

If i am not wrong, Cabir doesnt know about this?? Correct??

If u give me this fiesty Nandini then i wont even complain abt the delay in the reunion😛...*no anda n tamatar for this plz*

This Nyonika...hmm she is mystery!!! I would like to know more abt wats gng on in her head!! Tht wud b fascinating!! Is she gng to approach Mukti too?? I wud love to know Mukti's reaction also❓

(M replying from my phn n i cnt remove this que mark thing!! Grhhh)

N this daddy malhotra is the biggest player of all!! Wat games man!! Like seriously...wat perfect planning to break all bonds of Manik!!

N he ll lose in front of a tiny petite little girl😈...I am loving it!!!

Eagerly waiting for ur next chapter...

PS: u actually found a quote of Shahid Kapoor!!! Just how?!!

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manepallavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#305

Y aren't u bringing manan back yaar..its been a year now dat ua writing it..still no signs of dem to knw about eachothers existence.just try to proceed the stry.dnt mind it but it was just a feedback I wanted to give u.n happy 1yr anniversary:)

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nita24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#306

First of all Happy anniversary dear

And update is as usual awesome
Totally Loved it
Ur one of the best writer I must say

And that nandus famous punch omg directly land dhruv on floor well he definitely deserve every bit of it
He said well nandu is little devil maniks little devil,maniks little mini-monster

Nandini is right they all are going to fall really hard and Im also going to enjoy it, every bit of it

Aliya also sign this paper only for her own happiness how could she

I really feel very bad for manik for having friends like dhruv and Aliya from his childhood
And his so called mother devil neyonika

Waiting for next update dear
Thanks for the pm
Pls continue soon
Tc keep smiling

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Cooldude101

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Happy anniversary to us! ❤️

I know you write this down, but well this celebrates an year of my fangirling too!

I can't believe the shit Dhruv and Alya do.

I have to say this, even though it hurts to say it, Nyonika is a freaking genius and her husband is the only guy who could actually be married to that piece of shit woman. Their plan if what I'm thinking is correct, is the best I've heard.

Break Manik with his best friends and their betrayal.

I really want to fast forward to the scene where Alya and Dhruv grovel at Manik's feet for forgiveness and Nandu stands there feeling all of her struggles and faith paying off with very heavy returns.

On this very shubh avsar- I would like to say,

Maybe we'll never meet, maybe we do,

Maybe I'll never know you neither will you,

But the relation we share is what will always matter,

You're story's suspense keeps driving me madder.

A writer like you is hard to find,

So don't leave me alone here, blind.

(As you have guessed, I suck at poetry and English, overlook the stupid eords and just try to get the meaning. It sounded better in my mind.)

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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I will reply everyone properly baad main, for now, let me say that I thank each one of you for your wishes. I feel proud to have such amazing readers. Thank you for being you and for loving this story and for giving me your time. And yes, Happy anniversary to you all too...I love ya all...!!! 🤗

@bashful_moon:- Reader, so glad to see you back...🤗 And girl crush? ☺️ You would be the first girl to have a crush on me and I would feel very honored!

@Shreya:- Kid, you are love for the stalker mood of yours. I am really thinking about cheating next time and send you a PM before anyone else...😉 *biased me*

@Manepallavi:- I hear you. I appreciate the frankness, and I am thankful to you for bring that up because believe me when I say I am trying my best to reach there soon, but the fact is there are too many stages I need to write about before reaching that part. I can't pull a Ky2 2nd's season Cvs move and say that he didn't come back to her for FOUR long years because, just because...I need to tell Manik's side of the story. And I happen to believe myself as someone who understands Manik's character. And those Cvs may have thought him as someone who won't contact her but I know Manik Malhotra can't do that. The first thing he would have thought would have been to reach out for Nandini. So the story here is more about what happened with him, to him during the 4 years he was away from her. That's why I posted the prologue from his POV. I can't cheat my readers and my story by not telling them why and how Manik became that man-boy they read about in the prologue. So I ask you, in fact, I ask all my readers to just give me the time to show/write about the Manik who has been away from Nandini, didn't forget about her even for a sec but still was away...All the why-s and because-s are going to be answered only if I tell his side of story. I hope you know that I am trying my best to make MaNan happen sooner because I know you and everyone is waiting for that! 😳 And thank you for whishing me, Happy anniversary to you too...🤗

@Nita:- Happy anniversary to you too, my dear. This is mine as much as it's yours and your fellow readers...🤗

@Coolddude:- This! Happy anniversary to all of us! And, OMG! You wrote a poetry for me? No one has ever done that. Thank you! 🤗I am really close to crying while I smile like an idiot. This is an amazing gift! Dude, what are you taking about? This is gold, and I am going to print it and frame near my desk. For real! ❤️

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Cooldude101

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Posted: 8 years ago

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So basically we have to wait 7 freaking chapters for them to return?😭

This chapter indeed was enlightening. Dr. Shah was the man in the prologue and it seems he is going to have a long way to go.

Today I really really despised what I read about the Malhotras, I mean that was too cruel for me. Like watching two vultures fighting over the carcass.

Manik amazing as always, that inner monologue❤️

Damn man!

Where the heck was our Nandu you season two writers?

This fanfic is too good to be true.

Vaise I read that you like it and you will print it out! that's an honour for me. Thank you for so much respect!

Yeh intezaar kaafi lamba hoga😕

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