Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 - Chapter 123 & note - Page 42

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello dear...

Hope you doing good...:):).. Late reply by me again I know.. Apologies!! :(

Do I need to say how excellent writer u are?? I mean WOW is such an understatement !! But nevertheless very very very good work.. Keep it up ! I'm soo addicted to your writing!!!

Anyways keep up the excellent work!! Love you loads!!

P.S. Please kill that Neel! Skin him alive!!! 😈

Waiting for the next update 😉

Love,
Doyel 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyyy!!!!
Read the last few updates and they were mind blowing!!!!!:))
Manik and nandini's late night convo was <3<3 so cute and adorable...
Hmmm..cotton bcoz it is soft to touch and softer to press...hmm i see... XD LOL
And manik and chachi toh have always been my fav...just love them both...catty chachi and sona munda manik...
The way manik was sweating and was nervous but was keeping himself calm saying that this is ur chole wali chachi...XD
LOVED THE UPDATES!!!

But my dear...HOW???
Like seriously how ???
How do u manage to update so frequently...its like ek ke baad ek update...not that i am complaining...HELL NO!!!
But kya hai tumhare is talent ka raaz????? Boost, complan ya bournvita????
XD LOL
I am so lame!!!! XD

Anyways just wanted to inform...maybe i won't be able to comment or maybe even for that matter read the next upcoming updates...my exams are starting and they are gonna burden me for a whole month...at least till 27th of september...SAD :(((
But yeah as soon as they get over of i get time...i will definitely read and comment ...

Nevertheless love ur story!!!!:))<3
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Posted: 8 years ago
"They had a whole culinary history to them" 🤣.So chachi is in Team Manik 👏.Come Neel, your end is waiting for you 😆. Please don't let that Amms 😡 create too much trouble and shaadi (between Nandini and that m**********r) 🤢 ki taiyaari bhi nahi honi chahiye, please.Let Monster Manik finish him before that 😃. Update soon.Take care. ❤️
Edited by ac2000 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg! I am so happy with this update di😃.that neel is already in trouble .this thing made me happy&he didn't get any advantageby tracking nandu's phone also🤣.except for the previous night's msg conversation of manan.now he is burning in jealousy .let him suffer for sometime.😉

Coming to our manan they finally spoke to chachi& how could chachi not trust her manik again.this can never happen😊 .So nandu opened up to chachi& chachi like a good mother got assurance from manik about him being with nandu always. Bechari nandini is really worried & didn't shop instead watching manik&chachi's convo.chachi&manik convo was good&I liked the way she asked him assurance&made him comfortable. So chachi is back with her sonamunda.👍🏼 In the end chachi's answer to neel's rant that was awesome .now we can see our cheerful chachi.
That part where manik said to nandu that he would come after 40 min first&then when he come to know it's to meet chachi he immediately replied he would be there within 10😛& he reached within 9min 45sec.this really cracked meitna nervous to meet his bride's mom😉.story is going more interesting & I am eagerly waiting for further updates.this time I am not afraid of that jerk neel's threatening of going to amms rather I am laughing seeing his anger may be because of the way chachi talked to him or because manik is there& he will handle him.
Ok di I wrote too much in excitement it seems 😳so now I'll end my rant.take care&be happy di😊😃 .byeee!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update dear .so chachi is with her sona munda.she trust manik.and manik he loves his chachi a lot.Their conversation was pure.amazing update .Thank u and take care.
Edited by vaanii078 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

sorryyy


but not my fault

i tried readi ng it here


it was showing error


😊


my favrt part





Manik can you come right now to Infiniti


'Abhi? Like abhi? Why are your plans be so last minute, Nandini

. Kal raat ko nahi bata sakti thi ki 1 baje milna hai...do one thing, you do some shopping, I will freshen up and come in 40 minutes.'

40 minutes😆

point to be noted


no time for chitchat. CHACHI is here, wnts to talk to u

, cm ASAP!!!!! URGENT!!!!!!'


'Be there in 10.

9 minutes, 45 seconds and there he was,

... gasping for breath and bathed in sweat. His hair was a mess, he had somehow managed to put a white jacket over a pair of jeans and

his shoes..well, he was still in his house slippers.


There is something about meeting the mother of your bride, that can turn dudes into duds within seconds.
, Manik looked nervous and perplexed, his usual charisma gone for a toss.

"Hi Chachi! How r u? " Manik grinned like an idiot, completely ignoring Nandini's presence.

😃

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mind blowing ...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 91

Lounging on a couch with a drink, Manik was waiting for the door bell to ring. The meeting with chachi in the afternoon had been such a huge relief.

He was glad that life, was slowly crawling back into his grip. It had been a scary roller coaster ride, these past few days, being bombed with one scary revelation after another. There were so many things to deal with, so much had happened behind his back that at one point he almost felt washed away. And these were things, so fundamental that he couldn't have shared with anyone, not even Nandini. Since childhood, he had been a Go-Getter, an achiever, a leader. He liked to lead from the front, to have control over his life and steer it in any direction he wanted to. Which is why, it had been so difficult to suddenly wake up directionless one day and find himself tossed away in unchartered waters at the mercy of his errant fate.

But life had also taught him to be a fighter, to not give in or give up, no matter how adverse the circumstances were.

He knew he would slowly find his footing, despite the shaky ground and make his way back to where he belonged. The process in fact had already began earlier today. Nandini's behaviour towards her family had been bothering him more than he cared to accept and he was beyond glad when the girl had finally returned home with a happy face.

Manik wasn't too worried about Neel Dixit, for he knew exactly how to deal with such scumbugs. Infact, this time he clearly had an advantage over him. While he was well versed with Neel's black mind and was fully aware of the levels, that he could stoop to, the Manik malhotra, Neel had met and known, had been the most gentlemanly version of him. Neel hadn't yet had the good fortune of meeting his ruthless monstrous side.

The bell rang, breaking his chain of thoughts and in walked Ranbir, without his usual contagious smile.

"Whats up bro?" he said, as he gently slapped on Manik's back and pulled him in a loose hug.

"Going great bro. It' just that ki Mumbai ane ke baad I didn't get a chance to meet everyone. I miss our usual hangouts, wo bhi kya din the yaar.. So I thought, lets just call everyone and relive those times."

Ranbir was visibly tensed. After the last two interactions with Dhruv and Alya, he wasn't quite sure what to expect this time. And the fact that this time the drama would happen right infront of Manik, made him more nervous. "Manik, is it a good idea, for me to be here. I mean basically to I am not a part of FAB 5, wouldn't it look like I am gatecrashing at your party?"

"Kya baat kar raha hai yaar, ab dosti mein bhi boundaries lagayega? Get yourself a drink and be comfortable , aur FAB 5 ko apna hi group samajh." Throwing a can of beer at Ranbir, Manik remarked with a naughty smirk.

It was futile, wanting to go out because Manik would clearly not let him. So he changed the topic hoping desperately that the rest of them would behave, especially the loudmouth Alya. "But manna parega is Neel ko, kameene ne apna koi digital trace hi nahi chora, the only thing you get when you search his name is a f**king Linked In profile aur wo bhi I am sure ki DP photoshop ki hogi saale ne."

"I know man, but agar Neel teda hai to hum saale circle hain. Dekhte hain kitne din who hide n seek khelta hai. I got his address in mangalore and apparently this guy has a brother. uske family, schooling etc ka information to maine nikal liya but we need something substantial."

"Mangalore?! To saala Mangalore ka hai, waise I have a couple of friends from there..tu mujhe raat ko sare details message kar and let me get in touch with my friends to dig out some info. I bet usne mangalore mein bhi muh to kala kiya hi hoga. Waise yes, baaton baaton mein I forgot to mention, main jis firm mein kam karta hun, they run an NGO for spastic kids. They are currently hiring people. Ask Nandini if she wants to try her hand."

"Thanks Bro, will let her know. Wo kafi upset thi after whatever happened in Panchgani, and she loves kids.. It might actually work out for her."

The two were busy chatting when Mukti barged in followed by Dhruv and Alya.

"Finally time mil gaya tujhe friends ke liye, haan?" She put one hand around Manik's neck and punched him in his belly with the other.

"Dekh Ranbir, ise kehte hain dosti, na Hi na Hello seedha bimar friend ke pet mein punch." Manik, half bent under the impact of the punch, was grinning from ear to ear.

"Chal Manik, zyada melodrama mat kar... and who are you talking to? Mr. Ranbir Dhawan, who promised to take me and Navya out on a dinner and then conveniently forgot because he was watching Wimbledon. Aur us din se he hasn't shown his face in the fear that we might strangle him to death."

All three of them broke into peels of laughter, but from the corner of his eyes, Manik noticed Dhruv and Alya sitting silently in one corner of the sofa.

Manik went across to their side and enquired "Hey buddy, wassup? How are you Alya?"

"All good buddy" Dhruv replied for both of them and though they both smiled, it felt cold and curt, almost staged. Were they upset with him for not calling them over earlier. But hadn't he called them on friendship day & told them he was out? Whatever it was, Manik was sure would sort out on its own over the evening.

"How is your health buddy, Nandini kaisi hai, you didn't call her?" Dhruv asked and even before Manik could reply back Mukti put in lightheartedly "Please ek din to mushkil se romeo ne hume yaad kiya hai, please don't bring Nandini into this for God's sake."

Ranbir, sitting quietly, maintaining a safe distance from Alya, wondered for a while if the jab at Manik had been too sharp, but then by now he was well acquainted with the funny but harmless nature of Mukti. He knew she meant well.

"Yes, Mukti is right, tonight is for friends, for old times sake... girlfriend to aati jaati rehti hai... Kyun Mukti? "

"Haan beta bolle sare dialogues yanhi, uske samne to teri zabaan chalti nahi"

"But why are you guys so quiet today, lets play some music... it has been like forever...what say buddy? And yes I have ordered chinese, Alya's favourite." Manik tried to involve them into a conversation. Their uncustomary silence was making him feel uncomfortable & with each passing second, he was wondring more and more if he had unintentionally hurt them at any point of time.

"I don't like chinese anymore, my taste has changed and by the way you should have invited Nandini" Alya said, her voice dripping sarcasm, looking straight into Maniks eyes, "Infact you could have also brought in Nandini's...oops your best friend Navya" she turned towards Mukti and then back at Manik "she would have had company here. Waise bhi this is not an Exclusive FAB 5 hangout. We already have outsiders."

Manik and Mukti who were both leaning against each other, straightened up. Manik took a quick glance at Ranbir and reprimanded Alya in a hushed tone. "What are you saying, he is Ranbir, cabir's twin bro." Ranbir on the other hand, sensing the rising temperature, pretended to take a call and casually got up & walked across to the far end of the room.

The gesture wasn't lost on Manik. He clearly understood, Ranbir had done it to save him of embarrassment and this infuriated him further.

"Precisely my point Manik. Why is everyone here behaving like Cabir is back? Its his brother, not him."

"What's wrong with you Alya? This was supposed to be a hangout and you are ruining it, you are being..." Manik was careful to keep his voice low. Now he understood why Ranbir had been skeptical.

Mukti tried to distract Manik, before it soured any further "Rehne de na Manik"

"Why are you stopping him Mukti, let him speak na, so I am ruining it Manik, by being mean?? What was it supposed to be? A hangout , a reunion, or a practice session? And what were we supposed to do, sing along on your tune." Dhruv pulled Alya by her hand, gesturing him to stop, but she just wouldn't.

Manik was shocked. Why was she speaking like this. What wrong had he done?

"Baat kya hai Alya? Whats the matter with you?" Manik shrugged off Mukti's hand and no more cared if he was loud enough.

"The matter is not with me, its with you. Its always about you. Your friends and your priorities have changed. Itne dino se you were with Nandini only. In one month, she didn't tell you once about us, or us about u, till the accident when she needed our support. Then also, she used us and the moment you were discharged, she showed her true colours. Ek taraf she tells us that we will together tell you every thing and fir chup chup ke she tells you everything without even informing us. If this is not having double standards, what is?"

Ranbir felt he had to speak in now, because Alya was blaming Nandini for a crime she hadn't done. "See Alya, it was me.."

"Oh please you to just shut up. You are an outsider. Don't interfere between us." Alya retorted back immediately and Mukti lost it.

"Don't you start with your rants again Alya and he is not an outsider." Manik had by now grown silent, trying but failing miserably to make sense of the mayhem around him.

"Let me speak Mukti. The fact is that we once used to be friends till these outsiders dropped in and took our place. First it was Nandini who claimed Manik, then you became best friends with Navya aur abhi both of you are fighting with me for Ranbir. In sab mein to main exist hi nahi karti. Tumhare decisions to choro, even dinners, trips, night-outs, we don't even feature in them. When was the last time someone asked me, how I am doing?" Her voice was beginning to crack.

But Mukti wasn't going to take it lying down, even her patience was running thin, she had witnessed this way too many times and everytime she thought she would thought and come around, it had only gotten worse.

"May be you never recovered from your break-up with Manik. Your insecurities have become so deep rooted, that you have become this jealous bitch. You are jealous of Manik's relationship with Nandini and my friendship with Navya. They never tried replacing you, you just lost your sanity. Where were you when we set up the meetings, you never turned up, and even when you did, all you did was rant and crib and blame us. " She had crossed the limit, she realized it immediately but then words once uttered cannot be undone. It was the truth, yet she regretted having spoken it out like this.

"This is why you called us here Manik?" At last Dhruv asked.

Alya was on the verge of tears, of all people she hadn't expected Mukti to call her a JEALOUS BITCH. No one really understood her, why then should she care for any of them. "What are you taking about Mukti, if I am a jealous bitch, then you were no better than a depressed wh**e, spending nights with random guys because my brother dumped you."

"SHUT THE f**k UP YOU GUYS!!" Manik literally shouted his lungs out. His head was spinning, his ears were burning with those words. What had become of the gathering, he had so enthusiastically arranged. Were they the same friends he had spent an entire lifetime with, friends who could once die for each other were swearing and spitting at each other. Not even in his wildest dreams had he imagined, he would one day witness something like this. All the camaraderie at the hospital had been a big farce then. May be he was better off without a memory.

Ranbir, too was shell shocked. Even he hadn't expected things to take such a bad turn. He felt guilty, because his presence had in a way triggered this whole mess.

Standing motionless, Mukti was gaping at Alya, still trying to weigh her words... Alya was sobbing, And Dhruv stood there, silent like a lamb, not knowing what to say and to whom.

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Edited by 1_drop_of_rain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yaar they seriously need shock treatment,
patients hai, sab ke sab.
Haan mere baby aur Ranbir ko chhod zarur sakte hain.
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update ..

y always aliya b dhruv has to ruin everything ..

stay blessed
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi...how are you doing...?

After reading the chapter ...I'm low...I was expecting this blurting session...but you know why I feel pathetic ..its because...I'm standing on both the ends.

I can feel the pain of Manik...he had it enough...life has been way cruel to him and now the poor guy really deserves peace ..its disgusting to know...how he is being treated...he had so many revelations...and he has a lot of nuisance to handle...!
But...In spite of all these ..I can understand Alya..too...She was once ..head over heels for Manik...,and then all of a sudden her world came crashing down to her feet...she found comfort in Dhruv...who treated her worse...and then she fell for a guy..who wanted to snatch the life of her first Crush...then..Dhruv was back...and then he walked out..she risked her heart for the fourth time and what she saw was enough to transform her heart...still she smiled..she genuinely felt happy...for her friends..!!! But now...her actually aching heart...has took away her sanity to act and react...!

I cannot suggest the next update...when I'm so messed up myself...but I know...you have it all planned...and it will surely be good!!..

You are writing beautifully...keep up the good work...Lots of love!
Edited by Candlewick - 8 years ago

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