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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi ..

just read ur story ...must say its different..
but its really difficult to digest that here geet did wrong to maan ..maan had two kids ...oh he is already married and he hates geet ...he had a son from geet maneet who knows abt them ..story will maanbe able to forgive geet ...???
hooked to ur story ..negative geet hard to believe

thanks
waiting for next


i know it is.. but i wanted to try an unusual scenario..
because i seriously thing that a guy should be punished by law for rape not just forgiven.. so if a lot of people think that it is Ok to forgive a guy after rape if he shows remorse.. then i want to know their reaction for a negative Geet atleast for a short span
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2 : The Confrontation

Boy: u little tyke..

Before Maaneet could hit back, he was restrained by Geet.

Officer: ye kya hangama ho raha hai.. This is a public place.. All of you leave the premise now and take it elsewhere.. The mother can stay back to sign the release paper..

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Dadi: What was that Ayaam.. Why did u hit him.. Where are ur manners

Ayaam was resolutely looking on the floor all the time while he was getting scolding from everyone outside the station. The Tara saw Geet coming outside the center with her son. Before Maan could stop tara she dragged Ayaam with her.

Tara : Excuse me Mam.. Our boy would like to say sorry to your son..

Geet : No its Ok.. Its not important..

Tara : It is important for us that he realizes his mistakes and says sorry..there is never too late in saying sorry... so .. Ayaam.. Do you want to say something..

Ayaam : Sorry..

Maaneet: What.. I cant hear you...

Ayaam glared at Maaneet but still said Sorry for the sake of his chachi..

Maaneet : well I don't forgive u.. Go to hell.. The way u r glaring at me... you are not sorry at all..

Geet was mortified. What was her son upto now.

Maaneet what wrong with you.. He is saying sorry right..what else do you want..

Maaneet : I want him to beg me.. His entire family to beg us to take us back..

Enough..

Maan has had enough. He was in no state to handle more of this mental torture. What did the boy think of himself . He had no manners. No wonder with a mother like that. Maan went ahead and grabbed that boys arm.

What is with you and your attitude ha.. Kis baat ka attitude😡.. What is so special about you that u have this attitude.. Kya hai khas tumme.. Topper ho.. Brilliant sportsperson ho.. Or have u done a great favor on my son ... Tumhara surname hata du toh kya aukaat hai tumhari.. Next time u show this attitude in front of me.. I swear..

The boy had not moved his eyes from maan. His expression said that instead of fear and anger, he was in awe of Maan, nothing else. As if he relished getting scolded.

Maansi: Leave him Papa lets go...

Dadi : But is he really your son Maan.. He looks like 9-10 yrs old.. I mean that was before you and ayesha..

Maan: enough Daadi he is not my son... his mother has lied to him..

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Ayaam : Papa can I go back and pick my pen.. I dropped it there.. I will be back in 5 min..

Geet was still reeling under the shock of Maan's statement. But she did not blame him considering her lifestyle choices 10 years back and what she did to him. Her son stood like a rock not reacting at all. She knew even he was doubting her now if she had lied to him. She suddenly noticed a small figure standing in front of her.

Ayaam : Why are u back now..

What..

Ayaam: Ma told me that a woman called Geet hurt my Papa very badly in past..

I am sorry about that..

Ayaam: My mom told me to always protect Papa and Maansi from you... I will not let u or ur son to hurt my Papa again.. U think I am small.. Insignificant.. But I am my Ma's son..

No no I will not hurt anyone again.. Ur Ma where is she.. How old r u

Ayaam tried stopping his tears and said very bravely.

Ayyam: I will turn 7 in few months.. And it doesn't matter where my mother is.. U do what u r told.. Stay away from Papa

Maaneet : Let me see what u r going to do..

And there started another fist fight. Well it was more of a one sided fight with Maaneet throwing most of the punches. By that time Maan had come back looking for his son and his blood boiled on the scene in front of him , he furiously walked towards both the boys. He casted a murderous look at both of them.

Maaneet : Ur son was threatening us ..

What

Maaneet : to stay away from you..

Both of you go out.. Aaayam stay with tara Chachi.. And I mean it .. Stay with her.. And U.. Go and sit in your car..

Maaneet : No..

If you don't leave in 10 sec .. I swear to god .. I will personally drag and drop u der.. He noticed that Maaneet had disappeared before he had completed his sentence..

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What the hell are u doing here ... this is the last time I am talking with u.. Why r u in my city

I have started a new branch..

Why here.. Akela nahi chod sakti mujhe? U r back to take advantage of my situation again.. Do you understand it kills me to even look at your face.. It was all your plan right.. This entire drama.. Did u plan it with ur boyfriend

Nahi.. Wo mai..

Wasn't it enough that you almost destroyed me completely back in those years for your bet. So tell me how did you enjoy your win . Did you take more drugs? Put on some other bet? Destroyed some more life too.

No...

U know how I felt after that night.. I wanted to bleach my skin to remove ur touch.. U made me hate myself.. Because of u I distanced myself from my love.. I thought that I no longer deserved any love ... and now you want to get back into my life.. Are u trying to do the same thing again... blackmail me, drug me and then... u know what that is called these days... Rape..

No No... I am sorry.. Really.. Really sorry Maan..

Geet tried touching Maan.

Stay the hell away from me.. Don't touch me..

Maan..

Aur ab.. What the hell is this new child drama.. Kiska khoon mere sar par.. Did u think that I will accept it after knowing your history..

No no don't blame him for my faults... he is our son..

Liar... arey even your own family will not trust your lies.. After all.. We both know you were not a virgin when u forced me to... chiii.. Maan closed his eyes shut trying to push back those nightmarish memories.. And u had even shared ur future plans that since u were over with ur obsession over me u cud move on to new men... So please .. And have some mercy on the poor boy.. He thinks that I am his father... clear his misconception... Or I will do it for u..

Maan stormed over to his car in anger. He did not know how did he manage to get that out of his chest. This was the confrontation he had bottled over himself for a long time. The entire times his hand in his pocket had clutched his wife's managalsutra the entire time. She was giving him strength even after her death..

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Coming up..

How could he Sid.. Any guy would die to sleep with me..

Sid : Leave that middle class guy baby... take this ecstasy pill.. And head to bed..

Leave me Sid.. Now until and unless I have had my ways with him.. I could not be with any other guy... junoon ban gaya hai wo mera.. I want him by hook or crook..

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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Khush ho jayo bacha log...
update is here
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Posted: 8 years ago
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oh oh that was superb ...
Maneet is really something 😲 .. mahnn i am so liking his character .. like a hero of story , though he is hyper ..
ayam is cute .. he loves his mom .. Finally maan pulled his pent up frustration ..i felt bad for him ...
It will be hard for him to forget the incidence ... and maneet ? i really felt bad for him :) ..
will be waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
geet sach mein itni buri thi...maan k saath itna kuch ki thi...feeling bad fr d little boy...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#96

maan denies yhat maaneet his son it's hurt him
but Ayam told geet to stay away from his dad
maan also don't accept maaneet as his son
and warn geet

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Posted: 8 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: abba12

oh oh that was superb ...

Maneet is really something😲.. mahnn i am so liking his character .. like a hero of story , though he is hyper ..
ayam is cute .. he loves his mom .. Finally maan pulled his pent up frustration ..i felt bad for him ...
It will be hard for him to forget the incidence ... and maneet ? i really felt bad for him :) ..
will be waiting for next


Thnx for ur comments
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: love2_soma

<div align="center"><font color="#993300"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">geet sach mein itni buri thi...maan k saath itna kuch ki thi...feeling bad fr d little boy...

nice update...

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">loved it very much...

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">thank u very much fr d lovely update...

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">continue soon plz...</font></font>
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Thnx for ur comments
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: sanum23


maan denies yhat maaneet his son it's hurt him
but Ayam told geet to stay away from his dad
maan also don't accept maaneet as his son
and warn geet


Maan is right fro his pov
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update .
maaneet is 9/10 years old ? means geet was first in maan's life after her ayesha came in maan's broken life . maan seriously hate geet too much . I guess she did something in her past that's why she is receiving now all the hatred . feeling bad for maaneet ..he is suffering coz of his mother's mistake . continue soon.

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