IPKKND FF: KHUSHI by JALEBI JANE Thread 1: EPISODE 001-052 - Page 36

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Posted: 8 years ago
Kishmish wrote:
There is truly nothing more sensuous than watching a woman dress and undress



I SO agree.

But when I originally posted that 'remove your saree for me' episode, I received some criticism that Arnav was objectifying her, treating her like a toy for his pleasure. Which is why I added that scene in the car from Arnav's point of view, to share his perspective. He is discovering himself as he discovers her.

It would find it impossible to tell this story---any story which contains sensuality---if I have to tiptoe around gender roles and social and sexual history of the oppression of women etc. :-)

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Posted: 8 years ago
Anu567 wrote:
Another beautiful update...you know my favourite lines already...taking a woman is the work of a moment, but possessing a woman is done in layers...totally outstanding! Arnav is trying to redeem those instant vows and quick fix wedding he gave her with more traditions that matter. Perhaps more, as they are literally done from the heart this time around. But is it too late to win over the pristine and innocent Mrs Raizada? Beautiful scene with the ring and again the one in the beginning where Anjali is reading Khushi. Arnav's sensual excitement in his beautiful wife is breathtaking! 👏


Thank you again, Anu. I was just thinking the same: I'm enjoying Arnav's awakening as much as Khushi's.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Janu75 wrote:
Arnav by his gestures trying to erase the uncertainty of their marriage..
Khushis hesitation has unknowingly made Arnav perform the ritual of "sagaai"

You have laid out the scenes beautifiully



Thank you for your comments on this thread :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved part 11👏
Engagement😃
Arnav needs to let Khushi know that its permanent, eager for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Incredible update. Loved it. Poor Khushi, she should have been on top of the world but she is so confused with Arnav's behavior and the thought of the six month marriage???
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful update.. love the ring scene. waiting for next already.
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Posted: 8 years ago
"His ring on her finger"

Indeed, knowing that someone belongs to you, even if it is as tiny as her finger adorned with his ring brings such a thrill and satisfaction. Glad that Arnav is experiencing these feelings slowly.
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Posted: 8 years ago
"Taking a woman was the work of a moment; possessing a woman was done in layers. And each layer enhanced the next."
Khushi has turned the shrewd and practical ASR into a sentimental and poetic Arnav.
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Posted: 8 years ago

KHUSHI by Jalebi Jane (Maya) EPISODE 012


KHUSHI ASKED HIM, "Yeh sagai ki anguthee hai?"

"Hmm," Arnav replied.

Our eyes were busily admiring Khushi's ring, but had we been watching him closely, Sisters, we may have noticed that slight tightening around his mouth as he braced himself for more questions.

But none came.

They halted at a traffic light and Arnav glanced at her. She was studying the ring and appeared to have forgotten his presence. Looking at her he felt a slight twinge for the trap he had laid; however, he rationalized it as a necessary evil. He was confident---nay, certain!---Khushi wanted a life with him, and this small deception would give her what she wanted.

The end justifies the means.

The light flashed green and they continued on the road. He saw that she had turned to peer out of the window at the changing landscape, her face the picture of quietude. She was enchanting; he was enchanted with her. Why had he wasted so much time? Risked so much? The glare of the afternoon sun made her pale saree almost disappear---she was just eyes in a shimmery shroud. Her skin, dewy radiance; her beautiful mouth, glossy temptation. It was impossible to believe that this was the same tigress who had emptied a pail of water on him earlier this week.

Arnav smiled inwardly. The afternoon was not over---he may be doused yet.

KHUSHI BECAME AWARE of their surroundings when Arnav reversed into a parking spot. They were parked in front of the same cafe where they had plotted how to bring Payal and Akaash together.

"We'll stop and have tea here," Arnav announced.

They went inside and were seated at the exact same table as that last time. He ordered for them. Tea and pakoras. When the hot pakoras arrived she realized how famished she was. Full of trepidation about this afternoon, she had not done justice to her lunch. The server poured the tea while she prepared a plate for Arnav. She was fully conscious of the ring weighing on her left hand as she placed his plate near his teacup. She couldn't help but admire it from every angle. That is a woman's prerogative, is it not, Sisters?

They ate in silence. She refilled his plate without his bidding. And was dabbing some chutney on a morsel when she heard him ask, "how will you explain the ring?"

Khushi didn't quite follow. "Kya?" she frowned.

He tilted his head and clarified in a matter-of-fact tone. "The family believe we are already married---so if they see you with an engagement ring at this point---?" His words ended with a question mark at the end.

The pakora halted just near her lips.

Khushi didn't understand. She couldn't follow. What is this man saying?

"Wait! What do you mean believe we are married? We are married."

"We have a verbal agreement, Khushi. I applied sindoor and fastened a mangalsutra, but it was not officiated."

Not officiated? Not what---!

The pakora dropped from her hand and landed near her teacup. I am not married. Hai, Devi Maiyya! This could not be!

"But I am married. I feel married. Am I not married?" she repeated, circuitously.

"Not officially," he replied.

To her ears, his tone was alarmingly casual, but then again, Arnav Singh Raizada believed in live-in relationships---Gasp! Khushi shot out of her seat, and demanded, "if you didn't intend to marry me, why did you force me to agree to it?"

Arnav pulled her back down. "Don't make a scene, Khushi!" he said. "What court or official did you imagine would legitimize a six-month marriage?" he expanded. "I don't think we broke any laws, but---"

"Kya?!" Khushi was plunged into a deeper nightmare. "We have been living like man and wife for over a week and we are not married!" she sputtered. She was back on her feet.

Once again, Arnav forced her to sit, this time not releasing her hand. The reality was too awful for her to consider. After all the pain they had caused. After all the difficulty in reconciliation. After all the trouble to have them accept their marriage---what if the family learnt they were yet unmarried? She recalled her conversation with Nani this morning. Her hopes. Her expectations. Khushi's eyes widened and she groaned out loud when she realized something even worse: they had actively convinced the family that they were enjoying intimate life---so if they ever learnt that there was no marriage---!

Something had to be done.

Her eyes burned with unshed tears. She took up his other hand, and clasped them both to her bosom. She begged him. Beseeched him. "Listen to me, Arnavji---you must marry me properly! Officiated-type marriage. Immediately! I cannot return to Raizada House without us being married. I WILL NOT!"

The ARGroup attorney had been waiting for Mr Raizada's call with the prepared documents. He was at the cafe within half an hour and before the clock struck six, Arnav and Khushi were---for the second time in one week---bound in a legal and legitimate marriage. Arnav Singh Raizada could not have hoped for better results. Not only had his objective of dispensing with the six-month clause been achieved, but Khushi had proposed to him.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Khushi proposed him... Seriously he is clever as a fox. Except his brain did go in hibernation

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