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hellooo alll..

first of all a big sorry my dear guys...i knw u all wana throw jutas and chappals on me..for being gayab... But m back na..

pleasee..sorry..!

this one is for Khwaishfan ..chetna its for u...for supporting me...and always being a warm reader.. u were the one who never gave up...and i knw its was ur birthday yesterday...so wishing u a very happy belated birthday...sorry i m a day late..

and yes..ill update all the stories...so chillax guys..i missed u all


Part 18- " Will u Marry?"

I was having such a cute little dream .Its been ages since I had one..I smiled a little and tried to stretch my hands...But felt a strong grip around..

I lazily opened my eyes...furrowing my brows as the pressure only increased not letting me turn..

" stop..moving Let me sleep" I heard him groan...sharply...before making me squirm under him..

I snapped my eyes...as I felt his breath tickling my face..

" what m I doing here" I screamed inwardly..yet just a gasped breath came out from me..

I stopped my protest and observed him..carefully..watching him sleep peacefully..

It the dawned upon me.. that I was in His house, on his bed,with HIM.

I gulped my saliva..and yesterday's incident flashed back in my mind making my heart heavy... without second thoughts I wrapped my arms around Maan..and gave him a little squeeze

I bit my lips..praying to complaining babaji...why was he in pain..

I so so lost in the spur of the moment that I dint realize..when he made me lie under him..and began caressing my cheek with his thumb..

I closed my eyes...when he nuzzled his nose my cheek and said " stop..looking at me like..that..do u want me to eat u up..before u leave..hmm.." which that he bit my cheeks..

I hissed...and pushed..him.. I dint knw..whether the redness on my face was due to my blush or anger.. But he definitely understood maybe which made him smirk so hard..I was meltinginside...this guy..,his voice..and just one touching..was making..me... i paused my sinful thoughts and Sprawled outside the bed..and started walking towards the door..

I paused near the doorstep..clutching my duppata..I could feel his piercing gaze on my back..

I tucked...my hair..and contemplated how to put this in words...

Sighing I just closed my eyes..sand said " take care... there is someone for you..." And I ran outside...

I nervously entered my house.. holding my shoes...so that it dosent make noise simultaneously praying that no one saw..me..

I sighed as I almost reached my room..

" na na..Not so easy my girl..where were u whole night.." I bit my lips..." I was so close" I muttered myself..as I found sanjana..coming in front of me..with a raised brow..

"wohh...actually...ah...umm.." I spoke...nervously...trying to get something out of me..while..she was staring me..as if..trying to solve a puzzle..

" wooohh...yeh..? what..geet..form a sentence atleast..like..its so simple...let me form it for u..u can say.. I was with maan...it was my first date..and we were so lost in each other that..we forgot everything even the time..." With that she nudged me..giggling...

" no...who,.aisa...nai nai..." I said immediately... but the red hue on my cheeks gave it all..

" ohh...its fine geet.. I knew u guys were...stuck in the jungle..maan had told me...so chillax" she said..giving me a side hug...and taking me inside..

"what..when..we..where stuck.." I murmured to myself...

"anyways..u go get changed..ill wake up dad...and we can have breakfast..go.." She shook me..as I was lost ..thinking..when did maan call her...

" oh...soo sorry..ill be back in a jiffy and ill make breakfast for u guys..m soo sorry.." I said..i realized I should be taking care of her..and not the other way ..

" Relax...ya..i can cook too..and ill be more than happy to do so..and I have cravings for aloo paratha." Sanjana said..licking her lips...".and dad can help me..u get freshen go"

I smiled widely and nodded...while making my way into washroom...

I had a quick bath..not letting myself to think about maan..But I knew...I couldn't stop..

I joined my hands..to babaji...and prayed..

" geet come fast.." I heard sanjana scream.. and I quickly ran in to the balcony to get my shrug...

As I pulled the shrug..i found dad and maan...in the lawn. Engaged in some serious thoughts...

Inspite of being a little far I could..see their expressions...and they were definitely tensed..I knew both of them.. I blushed at my thought..thinking " u knw maan hmm" and then whacked myself..mentally for going off topic..

While I was lost in talking to myself..i found..dad walking inside..and maan making his way into his house..

I decided to ask dad what was this about..and made my way downstairs..

This was the most amazing time..i was family with my cute family..dad me sanjana..and mom.. Well.. I wish she was there... But ..

" geet try this one too" sanjana...stuffed my plate with another type of paratha...excitedly..

" what..i already have 2 sanjana..." I mumbled...somehow...chewing the paratha..

" well.. I can have..so stop arguing and have it.." I shook my head at her comment..and found dad smiling..

I winked at dad..and smiled warmly..at him..He returned my smile..but I felt..it was a smile.. I faintly smiled back..

There was something wrong..i could feel..it..Dad s smile.wasnt the same.. It was more to hide what's going on in his mind..

"geet I want to ask u something.." I heard dad say as he grabbed my hand...

" offcourse dad... " I said patting his hand..

" geet..i want u to get married...will u marry..." he paused.. " for me.."


dont forget to drop in ur comments..and wish...chetna!!

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Wow new update thank u loved maaneet moments sanjana is so nice her father wants her to get married shocked plz do cont soon thnx for pm
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Nice update dear geet father asked geet to get married

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