Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 - Chapter 123 & note - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar ideas aate kahan se hai tumhe?
They are just brilliant,
so your writing and so you yourself.
Love you dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update dear.so happy that manik got his memory back.I feel sad for him he doesn't know that cabir is dead.Nandu got her manik back.and manik he need her TLC.I liked the way manik said her to come here and tried to kiss her cheeks. cutie manik.and that bloody Neel he was blackmailing nandu he know that her life was manik.I hate Neel.Very well written update. Thanku soo much for this episode dear.Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly how are you now???
Ur finger ok????take car dear...health shd always be the first priority...

Coming to the chapter...well ...no offence but
W*F is wrong with manik..i mean...pehle thoda thoda nandini ki memories ko bhula...phir apni puri life ki memories bhul gaya aur ab 3 saal pehle ki memories bhul gaya...and wht does the doc have to say????
Curiosity is really killing me like anything...
And abt ranbir...he really is a true bro...the way he is helping manik and fab five by just for his bro cabir and the bond he shared with his friends is commendable...
Mukti's state was so u knw...it must have been hard for to keep herself sane after seeing her bff cum brother back after 3 years...
Nandini...wht do i say abt her...really love has some powers man...the way she has been fighting for herself, for manik , for manan with the world even when manik wasnt there...cant even imagine what she must be suffering through...
Its true destiny always brings them together coz they are meant to be but in wht circumstances and situations...
I knw all that matters in the end is manan are together but still...i can already see a lot of probs coming on their way...
If manik has actually forgotten these 3 years then how and what is nanidni gonna tell him abt neel ???? Coz she being the poor naive and caring soul would not really like or want manik to know wht she has been suffering through coz she knows that after knowing everything he would suffer through a really bad guilt trip ...
And abt the fab five...i dont knw wht is gonna happen...
Right now i actually cant really figure out how the story is gonna tirn and twist...i cant even guess wht will be in store for the next chap...
But then that is something that is keeping me really excited,curious and waiting like anything for the next chap...
Wonder wht would neel do now...coz i dng have any clue abt that either...
And if somehow manik comes to knw abt these 3 years as well...how will he react ...i mean abt neel, his dad whom he actually liked,the way he left nandini in the middle of nowhere,fab five,cabir being dead and ranbir taking his place...
I really dont have a clue abt wahts gonna happen and neither do i have a clue abt wht shit i have just typed ...i guess i just wrote all wht i felt and my queries...
You really are an amazing writer...the way you always somehow manage to amke us smile,cry like anything,laugh like fools,blush like tomatoes, and mess up our brain by your updates is just commendable...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Please no more complications. Let Nandini tell Manik about Neel. If not her, let Navya do the honours! And end Neel's track soon. Take care ,especially of your fingers 😊. Update soon . ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Response to my lovely Readers
Its been forever since i last replied to u all. I know u dont complain and would rathet have me not over stressing myself.but every once in a while its very important to stop, turn around and the people who make life worth living, no matter how busy or upset you are.
You should know each one of ur words make a difference. i love you.

@thamannamanan1 : Girl i miss you. dnt see your comments on wattpad either. busy?
This story is at a very crucial juncture and it could go either way. lets hope whatever happens, happens for the best.

@vijayfan : Hey thank you for suggesting me to listen to music, especially A.R.Rehman.Writing n music keep me alive.I know u want neel to die asap. me too, but he is here for a purpose, like we all are.n he can leave only after his purpose is fulfilled.

@adin: I m sry but this is the max i can manage for now. read my other story in between.

@RebeccaSweety:Oh well, comment of the day!!Cant even express what it means to read these words. I feel blessed to have been able to give you something so der to ur heart.its this love that keeps me going, despite hard days, despite sickness and personal and professional upsets.I know every update wont be magical but i will try my level best to live up to ur expectations.

@sarkar2015 : Thank yoy dear for ur love... just wait n watch is all i can say for now.

@monstermanik : Thank you dear for the concern u have for me. Except for my dad in india and my mom in heaven and my readers i wonder if any one bothers whether i m alive or dead. As for the story, Life never promised promised to be easy but nandini is a fighter n her strength is manik. she wont lose.She cant.

@devilhusi: Gold is not gold till it goes through fire, the purer u r , the more challenges u wud hv to face. But she will win..she will.. she has a long way to goalong with her manik.

@jesse93: I love you too dear. Ideas dimag s\ke andar se dhund ke lane parte hain par kabhi kabhi dimag dhoka bhi de deta hai. Thats when I need to step back and think to come back stronger.

@rockstarlover: THanks dear

@Vaanii078: Thanks dear, not just for this comment but every comment that you leave without fail. It means a lot, to know that few of my readers are like family and even though we havent physically met, we have a bond between us, a bond of words

@jenny1011: THank you so much. Felt so so happy reading your comment. Finger is ok, tied to the traction for the next three weeks but its the regular things i used to do earlier that have become difficult. I keep running into freak accidents because i cant balance things in my hand. So ccooking, cleaning has become a botheration.
At times I feel lonely too.
I loved how you are totally clueless about whats going to happen next. Thats a big plus for me, to leave the readers blank. Yes there will be problems, there will hiccups because of the messed up past but have faith in your writer, I will steer them home. it may take a while, but eventually they will reach where they were meant to. just that dont lose hope and interest. Some chappies have very less or no manan. Some are plain narration and are not magical enough but they are important to take the story forward :) Love you

@ac2000: How can there be no complications? is real life ever problemfree. But then every problem gives us a new lesson, every fight brings us closer to the people we love. Light is because there is darkness, the day comes because there is night to offset it, keep faith and keep reading.

@shoanna: U know I love you :):)


Finally, For those of you missing Manan because right now this story is going through a lots of twists and turns, Please read my other short story Silence Speaks (if you already havent ). Be happy and God bless you all. My finger is doing ok. Thank you for your love, concern and blessings... u guys rock!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
I am reading other story also ..
and you are amazing writer
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1_drop_of_rain

Response to my lovely Readers

@RebeccaSweety:Oh well, comment of the day!!Cant even express what it means to read these words. I feel blessed to have been able to give you something so der to ur heart.its this love that keeps me going, despite hard days, despite sickness and personal and professional upsets.I know every update wont be magical but i will try my level best to live up to ur expectations.


its us who shud thank U..
I had been so depressed fr d past few days.. misd manan lyk hell..
bt now I hav dem bak all tnks 2 ur wonderful soulful story which keeps me glued to it..❤️
d nly request I hav 4 U, is plz dont end dis soon.. I read ur cmnt whr Uve mentioned dat U WONT, bt stl Im constantly havin dis fear.. plz dont end it & keep writin..😳
i cherish ur work so much.. keep it up.. 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
oh..dear u know how much do i love u nd ur stories...thank u for replying back...and i should thank u for taking ur time and replying back...i just love ur stories...sooo...much...can't express
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 75



Manik and Nandini settled into Ranbir's car while Navya, Alya and Dhruv got into Mukti's. It had been one hell of a week. So much had happened, especially in Nandini's life.

As the car started moving, Nandini felt a strange sadness overcome her, like she was leaving a part of her behind, as if a chapter in her life had been prematurely closed. She was leaving Panchgani, forever, because Manik's accident had cost her more than just her sleep, health and sanity. It had cost her, her job too. Five days of continued absence had been just the VALID reason, her principle needed to fire her.

Those five days, that she literally lived in the hospital, only ever going home to freshen up and bring food for Manik. Her house, on the other hand had become some sort of a camping place for Fab5. Each one of them would shuttle between Mumbai and Panchgani, turn by turn.

The developments at the hospital had woven one twisted tale on their own. When they reported to the doctors that Manik seemed to be stuck in the past, they started an endless trail of investigations, checkups and questionnaires. Together, they could locate his specialist doctor in Mumbai whom Manik was consulting before leaving for Denmark. The doctor, in turn got them in touch with the doctors in Europe.

X number of case studies, cross country calls and troubleshooting led to the following final conclusion.

Human brain is the world's most complex circuit and the first accident manik had , had badly screwed up his. So instead of having a continuous hard disk storage, his memory was now partitioned into three. The first one was till his 1st accident, the second started from that point and continued till the time in Denmark when Manik had a complete black out. The last part was from then to the moment before his second accident. This accident had brought back his earlier memories but caused his current ones to fade out." One heck of a cross connection" the doctor had said. However, going by historical data, Chances were really high for him to regain this last portion, may be as soon as within a few days or weeks. But the part in between was the trickiest. Since his brain was actively degrading then, he might never remember those intermediate 6 months.

Of course Manik had no knowledge that he was playing the accidental protagonist in the 'Memory loss' side track. He was happy in the company of his friends and his love Nandu. In fact, he was happy to have landed up in the hospital because he was thinking that his accident had actually achieved at the feat that he had miserably failed at...to bring his scattered friends back together. Little did he know that this was just the tip of the iceberg, that life had many more secrets and challenges to throw at him, that his friends had old habits, that his girlfriend could be easily tricked and scared, that Cabir was no cabir but his brother Ranbir and that there was a green eyed reptile in his paradise. In fact Manik was so happy that he didn't even think about informing his dad. As long as his credit card worked, he didn't really need to contact him, not when he had his real family around.

His friends though had had a full-on laughing session in his absence, about the doctors 'circuit comment'. No this was not the making-fun-of-their-poor-hospitalized-friend kind of laugh, it was the what-the-hell-is-God-upto kind of hysterical outburst. Ranbir promised that if they all survived this ordeal in one piece, he would script a book and market it himself. He was damn sure, it would become India's fastest selling best seller. Alya volunteered to do the cover and illustrations and Navya promised free publicity on her radio show. But beneath these lame plans were crying/aching/worried/confused hearts.

Collectively they had also decided that as soon as they reach Mumbai, they would all sit down and tell Manik the filtered version of the truth. Filtered because they couldn't tell him the part about his disappearing and whatever Nyonika did to screw them up in his absence. Nandini decided to totally cut out Neel's part because she was scared as hell after that message from the wierdo. And because no one other than Navya knew about the real Neel, no one pestered her either.

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Ranbir pulled up his car at a dhaba on the pretext of being give-me-food-or-i-will-die level of hungry. They ordered a feast and as they comfortably settled waiting for the food to arrive, he suddenly blurted out "I am not Cabir, Manik, I am Ranbir"

What the hell was he upto? His statement literally shook Nandini out of her depressive thoughts. Wait a second. This wasn't part of the plan. Weren't they going to tell him everything together on reaching Mumbai.

"You know what Cabir, tere jokes ke standards are degrading by the day. You need a system upgrade or is it tera hunger which has gone into your head. "

Ranbir smiled, oit of sadness."For once Manik, I am not kidding. I know its Shocking, but the sooner you know the better it is. Dont freak out with what we are going to tell you next. The accident you were talking about happened three years ago." He couldn't bring himself to utter the next line but he had to "and Cabir couldn't make it through. He died in the accident and I am his twin, Ranbir." He had intentionally asked Manik and Nandini to sit in his car, intentionally halted it at the dhaba on th epretext of being hungry.

He was well aware of their plan of revealing everything in Mumbai and that's exactly what he didn't want. Because he didn't trust Dhruv and Alya to stick to the plan. For that matter, he didn't even trust Mukti's maturity at times. Nandini was the only one, he felt had both the right and the understanding to do this. Besides whatever his brother had told him about her, he had seen it all in mere five days. No-one knew Manik better , no-one could have possible loved him more. She wouldn't do anything that would harm the already injured boy.

Had Ranbir had known the truth about the last three years, he would have told Manik himself, but now he hoped Nandini wouldn't go by the original plan of telling only half the truth to Manik. He had seen enough life to know that half-truths were worse than lies, they lead you nowhere. People say that a lie told in someone's interest is better than 100 truths, but Ranbir blieved, a lie is always a lie, and when the truth comes out, it breaks more hearts than it saves.

"Sun Cabir, not now ok...yeh joke-joke game hum bad mein khelein kya? " Manik was getting irritated now.

Nandini was shocked, but more than that she was fuming with anger. The way she looked at Ranbir could give any human being 2nd degree burns. But now that he had pressed the trigger, she had no option but to follow through. She wrapped her arms around Manik and began "Ranbir is not joking Manik. There are things you need to know, things that have been washed off your memory."

Manik looked at Nandini and then at Ranbir. His bandaged head felt giddish.

"The accident really happened 3 years ago and we lost Cabir. You did made it through, but you had an injury on your head and you started forgetting things, especially me. Then you went to Denmark for treatment alone & we lost all contacts with you. 3 years passed by and one day we accidentally bumped into each other in Mumbai. I was shocked to see you, but you didn't recognize me."

Manik wasn't reacting anymore. Where they narrating a script to him, or is life truly stranger than fiction? He wasn't even listening to that part about the memory loss. His ears and mind were stuck on Cabir. People who have to lose their loved ones are unfortunate and here Manik was mourning twice over. Sometimes, it becomes difficult to justify the unfairness of life. "Continue" He spoke in a deadly calm voice.

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update ...
manik got his memory back ..
but not fully he dnt remember anything happened in 3 yrs ...

waiting for next update ...

cont soon ...

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