Ishra ss-main teri parchaiyee hoon,pt 7 on pg 132 updt on Sept 1 - Page 40

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Author's note- before updating this part,I want to thank all of my dear friends to like this story so much.secondly I am updating this coz two of my buddy is keep on demanding its updt.they r abhu and anisha.Anu u want this updt as ur reward for ur great result.so a big Congo dear.hope u r happy now and lastly please don't ask for next updt soon coz I have many more stories to updt.


PART 4

Ishita came out of Raman's room leaving him sleeping.she went to toshiji's room and knock the door.

Toshiji- kaun.

Ishita- maa main.can I come in.

Toshiji- haan puttar,why u r asking.

Ishita came inside and saw toshiji was sitting wearing head band.

Ishita- kya hua maa.

Toshiji- kuch nahi ishita.bas thoda sar dard hai.tu aa mere paas.

Ishita came to her and start messaging her head applying oil.

Toshiji- ohho don't do this.I am good.

Ishita- let me do maa,phir pata nahi karne ka haq rahe yaa nahi.

Toshiji- aisa kyun bol rahi hai.kya tu meri bachchi nahi rahi.Raman toh khota hai ,he don't realise but I know he loves u only.

Ishita eyes filled hearing this.a tear fell on toshiji' s hand.she realised that ishita is crying.she held her hand and make her come in front.toshi ji cupped her face and asked-why u r crying.

Ishita - woh mujhse pyaar nahi karte maa.she aside hiding herself in toshiji.toshiji hugged her tight.she started crying like a small kid,pouring all the hurt and pain which she was storing in her since morning.she can't show her tears to Raman as she knows he will go crazy seeing her cry and will do anything to make her happy even if it make him sad.

Ishita was crying saying continuously, he don't love me maa.while toshi ji was just consoling her letting her pour her pain.after crying for sometime she felt light.her hiccups lessen and she was all silent.toshiji thought she fell asleep but she was wide awake.

Toshiji- I thought u slept.

Ishita- kya neend aayegi.ab toh aankhen bandh karne mein bhi darr lag raha hai ki kahin phir koi sapna naa dekh loon.

Toshiji- I never knew that my ishita is so coward.I always thought she loves my son unconditionally and can go to any extent for him,but I was so wrong.

Ishita look at toshiji all confused.

Toshiji- I never thought u will let ur Raman go so easily.I thought u will fight for ur love but I was so wrong.

Ishita- fight?? With whom.Raman se ladun apni khushi ke liye.unki khushi ko Maine kabhi apni khushi ke aage nahi rakha.woh shagun se pyaar,

Toshiji didn't let her complete and said- from how many years u know Raman.

Ishita- from last seven years.

Toshiji- aur tab bhi tujhe lagta hai that he loves shagun.he can love anyone else then u.

Ishita was all confused.

Toshiji continued- mera puttar pagal hai.he don't know what he actually wants.he is not realising that u r his true love.give him sometimes.u know its like that he badly needs u from last two years and since u were not with him,he find a supplement for him.jaise kisi ke paas branded samaan kharidne ki taqat nahi hoti toh woh uska sasta duplicate leta hai .yeh waisa hi hai,tum Raman ka branded samaan ho joh usse lagta hai ki uske pahunch se pare ho isliye woh shagun jaise saste duplicate ko laaya hai.

Ishita smiled hearing this a little.

Toshiji- yes its true puttar.pyaar bhookh ki tarah hoti hai agar naa mile toh bsdhti hi jaati hai aur phir insaan ko sukhi roti bhi amrit lagti hai.

Ishita- these all r just thoery maa,I know Raman don't love me.

Toshiji- then I think u r also blind like Raman.if u want I can prove that Raman loves u but for that,

Ishita- for that??

Toshiji- I have to fix ur marriage with some other boy.if he see u with another boy he will surely understand his feelings for u.just say yes for marriage.baaki main dekh lungi.

Ishita- no maa,I can't do that.what if he don't love me.I love him and always loved him.this not a game ki woh shaadi Karen toh main bhi karun.if he has any feelings for me then he should come to me himself.koi zor zabardasti nahi honi chahiye.waise bhi it said,if u love someone very badly,set him free,if he comes back,he is urs forever ,if not then he never was,I have set him free.now he has to come back to me himself.I am not going to play any dirty game to win my Raman.

Toshiji- tune toh apna tay kar liya that u will not fight for Raman.but tell me one thing honestly,apne dil pe haath rakh ke bata kya tu apne Raman ko uss shagun ke bharose chod sakti hai.does she deserve ur Raman. She said holding her hand tight.

Ishita look at her .

Toshiji- I know Ishita. U might thought that I am being selfish but shagun is not good.woh Raman se pyaar nahi karti.the way she was looking around,she was all concerned about his wealth.I am Raman's mother and she wants to be his wife but the way u can love him ,comfort him ,noone else can do.he needs u ishita,he needs u.he is like a baby to u ,he is possessive, protective towards u but with shagun he is not the Raman we know.jitni tujhe uski jarurat hai usse kahin jyada usse teri zarurat hai.

Ishita- what u want from me maa.

Toshiji- I want u to be with him always.give him sometime to realise his love for u.u can think I am selfish,u can even hate me for that but don't leave his side.

Ishita- I can never hate u maa,u know that.aur rahi baat shagun ki,toh main kisi ko Raman ko takleef pahunchane nahi de sakti.if she is not good for Raman then she had to face my wrath.if I can sacrifice my happiness for him then I can go to any extent for him.she said determined.

Toshiji kissed her forehead and said- I know u r the best.they were talking when they heard him shouting on top of his voice- ishi ,ishi,where r u.

Toshiji- here he goes.go and see what's wrong with ur Raman.she said stressing on ur Raman making her smile.ishita went to his room while he was busy in fussing over everything, making the room a mess and shouting her name continuously.

Ishita- Raman what r u doing.what u r searching.why u r making the room mess.

Raman turned hearing her voice and glared at her.

Ishita- what??

Raman- tum kahan thi.

Ishita- maa ke paas.

Raman- and can I ask what u r doing there.come on u were with her all the time.I came after a long time.u should spend ur time with me but nahi tum toh mujhe sula kar chali gayi.he said making a dirty face.

Ishita couldn't help but smile at his cuteness.toshiji is right ,he needs her much more then she needs him.

Raman- now u r standing like statue.not saying anything.

Ishita- kya kahun.u were sleeping so I went.

Raman- toh tumhe itni achchi massage nahi karni chahiye thi.main nahi sota.

Ishita- but u were tired.its better that u sleep.

Raman- OK come,let's sit and talk.I have so many things to talk.he said making her sit on the bed.she sat down and he lay down keeping his head on her lap.she got conscious and try to get up when he said- kya hua.why u r so conscious as I am doing this for the first time.u know naa I love to lay like this.pehle toh kabhi mana nahi kiya.

Ishita- pehle ki baat aur thi.now u r big enough not to do such things.moreover ,

Raman- moreover??

Ishita- shagun may feel bad.

Raman- shagun??why she will feel bad.she knows what u mean to me.sab kuch tere baad aata hai.aur kuch badla nahi hai.I will trouble u like before.samjhi motu.

Ishita- toh leto.noone can stop u.

Raman- of course,I am the Raman Kumar bhalla. He said smiling.

Ishita- haan dahi bhalla.she said smiling and both smiled remember their first meeting.

Flash back

It was football match between two class, 10 a and 10 b.Raman was the captain of his team and was very much sure that they will win the match and was waiting for opponent team.after sometime their sir call both the team and the captains shake hand and start playing.the match was going tough ,the captain of the opponent team was playing so good.it was the last five minutes both the team was on same score and the ball was with captain of opponent team.Raman was running behind him and was trying hard to snatch ball from him but he was just to smart.Raman thought of a trick and laid his leg just before his leg and he fell taking Raman along.his cap came off her head and her longs hairs was all over Raman's face.Raman was thrilled to realise that she is actually a girl that too a beautiful girl.she struggle to get up but Raman wounded his arms around her.she hit him to get rid of him but his hold was too strong.he was smiling like an idiot when she was struggling to free her.

Raman- nahi chutega.bahut tez se pakda hai.

She heard his words and look at him and was lost in him.they were looking at each other all lost.when a boy from Raman's team took the ball and hit the goal marking their victory.

Ishra saw this ,ishita made a face and said- ab toh chodo ,haar gayi main.

Raman felt bad and left her instantly.

Ishita- u might have won .but u won by cheating.or else noone can defeat me. She said with moist eyes and went from there.

Raman felt bad seeing her crying.he was about to go behind her but his teammates come and start celebrating.

After some time Raman went to the class to look for her but she was nowhere .he was searching for her and finally found her in a corner crying.

He went to her and said- I didn't do that to make u cry.please forgive me.he said kneeling in front of her holding his ears.

Ishita raise her head and saw him.he was also looking that he may cry any moment.

Ishita- its OK.I am not crying for it.

Raman- toh kya hua.

Ishita- I got hurt and its paining.and its all because of u.u made me fall.she said showing her elbow.

Raman saw this and said- I am sorry.let's go to first aid room.someone will attend u.

Ishita- I went there.it is closed.

Raman- oh OK.saying so he went a brought his hanky dipped in water and start cleaning her wound while she was crying in pain.he was blowing air in between.after that he searched something to bandage it and when didn't found any thing he tied his hanky .

Raman- now it will be good.now can u stop crying.

Ishita- why??

Raman- coz I don't like u crying.

Ishita smiled hearing this.Raman too smiled and was going when she said- my name is ishita iyer and urs.

He turn and said - Raman Kumar bhalla.he said proudly.

She smiled and said- yeh kaisa naam hai,Raman bhalla,dahi bhalla jaisa.kya tum sirf dahi bhalla khate ho.she said laughing hard.

Raman made a face and said- tumse kya motu iyer.he said to tease her.

Ishita- main motu iyer nahi hoon.

Raman- toh main bhi dahi bhalla nahi hoon.

They start fighting again and went to opposite directions.

Flashback ends

Ishra were smiling,ishita was keeping her head on his shoulder while Raman was wounding his arms around her.

Ishita- kitne pagal the hum.har baat pe ladhna aur phir roothna manana.

Raman- yes but it was our golden days.we were always together.

Ishita- and u never let me cry.meri har crazy wish puri karte just because u can't see me crying.u use to hate my tears.

Raman- I still hate ur tears ishi.I can do anything in the world to make u happy.he said looking to her.she too look at him.they shared an intense eye lock.which was broken by the sudden opening of door.

Ishra look at the direction and saw shagun coming inside.

Raman made a face and said- dont u know ,u should knock the door before enter.

Shagun saw ishra very close and said- I just come to inform ki mumma aa gayi hai.niche aa jao.saying so she went down fuming in anger.

Ishra look at each other like they want to say something but couldn't. Ishita look away and said- Raman chaliye.aapki shaadi tay hone wali hai.she said with great difficulty.

Raman too look away and said- u go,I just come.saying so he went to the washroom while she went out of his room with teary eyes.

OK that's all for now.I don't know how this story is shaping up but hope u guys like it.please spare two minutes to drop ur comments and hit like.will wait for it.

Ps-180+ likes with long comments for early updt.
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Super duper update..

Toshiji consoling ishu and trying to make her understand that she need to fight for her love not to give up...she need to see that Raman loves her to death but he is buddhuuu or chalu...She is his jaan, his existence...and he is stupid...and toshiji badi smart h ...she saw real face of shaggy the bitch...she is here for money ...He cant be there without for sometime and then he with her thinking about past...But WHY WHY WHY WHY??MAN RAMAN bhalla is dahi bhalla bcoz his brain has only dahi...huh!!! He dont like shaggy , he loves ishu then why behaving like foolish...His parents like ishu, ishu like him...they want to be together then why...huh!!! I have to wait for Ramu prov...uska do na...kya chahta kya h yeh banda...

So schl love story...how cool she play basket ball...she would have won...he was lost in her...it was love at first sight??? They were in moment but shaggyyy...aaaghh!! Paise ki bhooki aaa gyiii...Raman also irritated...he was with his ishi...he can be forever...

I am liking toshiji idea...a boy for ishu...may be some friend of ishu...how about mani??

Superb update 👏

Cant wait for next..

Monday? Tuesday?
Edited by .chiquitita. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


New user name?😕
Its cute❤️
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Originally posted by: Roohachu



New user name?😕
Its cute❤️


Yupp new one...i dont know anybody likes it...gayu said put it blame on her... 😆
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Originally posted by: .chiquitita.


Yupp new one...i dont know anybody likes it...gayu said put it blame on her... 😆



Its cute n lovely
I like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please please update fast Di...can't wait now...what will be toshji doing..
Update fast fast fast...😛😛😛
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Part 3
Such a beautiful update!!!!
I loved it!!
So yeh Raman ki koi chaal haihun?!!?!?!😉
Toshiji ko pata chalgaya!!!!😉
Aur ab woh bi is chal me shaamil hogayi!!!😛

I love the way she assured Ishita and gave her the kangans and told her to trust her!!!
I loved what Toshiji said to Shagun:"Toshiji- tumhe bhi woh milega jiske kaabil tum hogi.dusre ki cheez chinne se achcha hai usse kamana sikho.ishita puttar tu jaa.Raman tere bina khayega nahi."

Excellent - I love Toshiji in this!!!👏

Love Raman's antics when Ishita went to give him his lunch!!!
Putting his head on her lap, asking her to feed him - finally both feed each other"!!!!
Then he asks for a head massage - so sweet!!!

He is talking non-stop and she tells him to stop talking so much and makes him lie down as he has fallen asleep:"Ishita- Raman,thik se so jaiye.saying so she removed the finger again when he said in his sleep- ishi ne kaha hai.

Ishita smiled and kissed his forehead lovingly and said- ishi ne finger hata kar sone ke liye kaha hai "

Beautiful - please update soon and also thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 1
awesome update
ishu is so caring
raman love shagun
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part 2
lovelyy
raman love ishi only hope he relize soon
loved there milkshke antics
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congo for 50 pges in 2 update
lovely story

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