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Congrats for new story. Definitely gonna read it. but becoming impatient to read ur story 😊
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Interesting prologue n cs
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Interesting prologue and CS. Story based on friendship. Looking forward to read more.
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Congrats for new SS
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Congragulation for the new SS ...nice concept
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congrats for new story...

I would love to read it...
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Kan aaye ga tomorrow
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Originally posted by: maansee


Kan aaye ga tomorrow

Tomorrow never comes😆😆
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Cute Banner by Lakshmi again,,Hai na ek dum cool😆😆


Chapter1

Oyeee Maaannn...

Maan heard the voice and cursed his luck for listening to that voice..

Maan to himself-Why ? Why is she always behind me? Does she not have any other work accept poking her nose in to my affairs? God.. Why I m always her prey? Why we are neighbors? Why my parents decided to buy a house in this society only?..?Did they not find any other society in such a big city?

He wanted to run from there But knew that she would not leave him without talking to him..She had that authority that she could invade his house even without asking anyone..His parents loved her..and she always used to take advantage of their love against him..

He sighed and knew that he did not have any other option other than listening to her.. He turned glaring at her to shout at her for troubling him for her nonsense talks but found her glaring back at him with her two big hazel eyes which were full of mischievousness..

15 years old Maan looked at her and frowned at her with anger He had understood that she was up to something as he knew her too well..Her shining eyes were telling him that he was again going to be trapped in her trick .. He did not want to talk to her.. Though she was one year younger but he was scared of her ..He did not know what she wanted from him..

She was always had an eye on him and used his faults against him.. She was so smart that no one could say what was in her mind..He knew that he always tried to avoid her but She had an upper hand as his own mom loved her a lot...He just wanted to get rid of her and he did not know when it was going to happen.

She came near him-Maan ek baar me sunte kyun nahin ho? How many times I called you?

Maan-Kyun sunu main tumhaari baat? I m not your servant .Kya chahiye? Geet look I have told you so many times that don't disturb me and mind your own business..

Geet-Haww.. ye lo bhalaayi ka to zamana hi nahin hai.. why I will disturb you? Mujhe aur koi kaam nahin hai kya... And I care for you so I was calling you..Main to bas tumhaari madad karna chahti thi

Maan cut her-You and help? Seems completely opposite... Now shoot.. Why you were calling me? jaldi bolo Geet

Geet innocently said-Kuchh nahin.. wo kya hai na aaj maine tumhen canteen me dekha kisi ladki ke saath..wo kya naam hai uss ladki ka..Haan..Richa... correct Richa hi naam hai..kya kar rahe the tum uske saath? Kuchh chakkar hai kya tumhara uske saath bade romantic dikh rahe the

Maan-what ? Me and romantic? That too in school? Are you mad? What was I doing? I was just sitting with her..

Geet-O really? But you know I saw something else too.. I saw that ..that

Maan gulped his saliva God knows what she did see.. he was sure that she was going to pull an elephant out of a rat hole

Geet was one class junior and was in same school.. and she was very active girl in the school..No activity was there in which she did not participate.. she could be seen in the every corner of the school..so it was not possible for Maan to hide himself from her and more over everyone knew that they were neighbors so she could ask anyone in school about him..

Maan again asked-Tell me na Geet what did you see? I swear I did not do anything..

Geet-Liar.. I clearly saw that..you..you..chhaddo.tumhen kyun bataaun?..I think I should tell this to aunty.. after all she too should know that what his innocent obedient and studious son is doing in school with girls..

And she left from there

Maan-Geet ruko..please don't test my patience.. Now tell me what do you want?

Geet- Hmmm ye hui na baat... Jyada kuchh nahin..bas 50 Rs..

Maan-What? 50 rs?? I don't have any money

Geet-See you are again lying . I know you have.. aunty was saying something about you having money.. if you say no than I will ask aunty.. I m sure wo to de hi dengi..She loves me a lot..and if I tell her about you she will give me double amount

Maan wth some anger-why do you need 50 rs?

Geet- wo kya hai na I want to buy an ice cream..

Maan-Then ask you mom..why me?

Geet pouted-Mamma ne paise nahin diye..Daant diya mujhe...to ab tum hi bache..if you are not interested then I have no other option than to go to aunty

Now Maan was definitely sure that she was going to his mother with some cooked up story about him..and his mother was going to believe her as she thought that she was a very honest girl and he did not want to be scolded by his mom without any of his fault..

Maan-Ruko Geet..and he took out 50 Rs from his pocket and she almost snatched from his hand-Thank u maan.. You are so sweet..

Maan in an irritated voice- Really?.. when I became sweet for you.. You did not feel the same about me few minutes ago while blackmailing me?..Now tell me what did you see? I m saying the truth Geet..I did not do any thing

Geet-I know ..You did not do anything wrong... You were simply sitting with her and was having your snacks..

Maan's eyes got wider with shock.. He was now shooting hot glares at her

Geet looked at him-Tumne kya socha ki main aunty ko kya bataane wali thi.. Maaannn How mean ? tum mere bare me aisa sochte ho ki mian jhooth bolti hoon man chugli karti hoon?..Ruko I m going to aunty to tell that you think like this about me..

Maan gulped his salva -Geet Please don't.. I did not mean that? I m sorry..I though you really saw something..

Geet-Really? That means you were doing something with her ? waise ek baat bataao..jab tumne kuchh kiya hi nahin to darr kyun gaye... bolo bolo.. kahin aisa to nahin ki tumne sach me kuchh kiya ho jo maine na dekha ho??and she looked at him with suspicious eyes

She was watng for him with her raised eyebrows

Then she again asked-Bolo na Maan.. I want to know

And Maan held his head-Kuchh nahin meri maa. You go and enjoy Ice cream with these 50 rs. Chaho to 50 aur le lo par mera peechha chhodo... and he left from there cursing himself for messing with her..And He realized that he pleaded to her without any fault.. He had lost 50 rs from his pocket money and he even said sorry to her without any fault...He cursed Geet now and thinking that he will take his revenge one day...

He left and on his back he heard Geet giggling at his plight-Poor Maan.. Body to lion jaisi aur heart chuhe jaisa..Darponk kahin ka..

And Maan turned again looking at her with red eyes and seeing him angry she excused herself-N..nahin Maan I was not saying about you ...and one more time thanks for the money and she slipped quitely from their before his anger could burn her alive..


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Edited by Rashmi... - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally de hi di rashmi di na update wo bhi ek dum mast geet as a lomadi and maan as a cuha maza aa gaya update padkar ek dum awsome

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