#T2. ARIYA SS JANE ANJANE RISHTE part 54 on page 94 2/10 - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

first of all its not over stretched at all
I love to read ur all stories 🤗 ❤️
u r absolutely right abt giving riya what she lost in her life all those happiness😃
riya & rajat moment was emotional 😭
both were talking abt their mom roshni & their childhood😭
after a age riya laugh so freely & arjun love it 😉
oh god aarav got fever
thank god its nothing serious arjun was really worried
wow arjun plan to know what riya like or dislike with Aisha's help 🤗
riya deserve all those happiness 😃
continue plz


Thanks dear i really need it. I was really confused.
You r really good reader
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Superb update
Love it
The story is perfectly fine
Great job
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon


Thanks tia
I really need it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kashvi19

di awesome update
riya n Rajat all moment just superb
their emotional talk , their support n their cute fight all mast tha
poor arjun dono bhai behan ne use bich mai le liya or ladne lage
I love his dailouge
mai kaha bich mai hu ye mere piche aa kar chup gaya or tum mere aage khadi ho lol
arjun sweet threat not to disturb his cutie n children n riya use opportunity n pull Rajat he he he
all siblings fight like that
Rajat too good love their bonding
anuarj n rijat both pair of siblings are different but both are loveable n awesome
omg Arav ko fever kyuki usne masti ki
wow arjun tell ri ilu in sleep but she think that's for roshni. uff riya wo tumhare liye tha.
hai na di
ariya care for Arav n sleep like happy family
anuraj sad for arav but happy for trio future
wow Arav fine
wooo arjun admit his love for ri in front of Aisha n ask her help
n Aisha call riya to come one shopping
now want to know Aisha ye karegi kaise
di mere liye to story or interesting hoti ja rahi hai.
ap pls ise aise hi continue rakho.
want to see how arjun give all deserved happiness to riya
pls update soon
thanks for pm


Thanks kashu
For your support n response
Yes he will give her a lot of happiness
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven

awww its an awesome update didu
riraj's moments emotional

unki past life masti mazak
dono hase bhi or roye bhi maa ki yaad me rosh ki yaad me unse saath masti
awww choti khichta tha rajat ri ki hehehehe
awww in dono ke bich bechara arjun fas gaya hehehehe
or uska wo dialogue muhaaa its funny

mai kaha bich mai hu ye mere piche aa kar chup gaya or tum mere aage khadi ho

hehehehe its so awesome didu
sahi kaha tha apne didu arjanu alag he or riraj alag rajat bhai ki tarah hi raha he or arjun parent ki tarah tha dono anuarj or riraj dono sibbling ki apni apni alag bonding he
n they are special in their own ways
on no arav ko fever aa gaya extertion ke karan
hayye arjun ne i love u kaha riya se ufff or riya madam samjhi ki rosh ko kaha pagal ladki
aye hayye ek happy family ki tarah ariya with arav ek room me ek hi bed par so gaye
but i m happy ki arav thik he use kuch hua nahi ufff me to dar hi gayi thi
OMG arjun ne ayesha se keh diya that he loves riya
mene ye bilkul expect nahi kiya tha
m shocked
didu koi nahi story mast ja rahi he
riya deserve karti he jo usne khoya he use mile wo sari happiness deserve karti he
ayesha help ke liye ready wow
lets see ki wo kya kya karti he arjun ki madat ke liye
superb didu
koi change ya jaldi bazi ki jarurat nahi he
jo khoya he use arjun riya ko dena chahta he to isme galat kuch nahi he
agar uske purane adhure sapne pure nahi honge to naye dekhne ki himmat kaha se aaegi usme unke bhi adhure rehne ka dar hoga use har pal
riya ne bachpan se apni har icha har khwahish kurban ki he ab jab uska pyaar uski har khwahish har icha puri nahi karega to kon karega
use propose karne se pehle ye jaruri he
continue soon didu


Thanks dear for longie comment
Thanks for your support n love dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Darlingladdu

Awesome update

Cute tha. Arav ki dekhbhal dono kitne pysr se kar rahe the.
Riya aur Rajat ka rishta kitna pyara hsi.
I realy loved it. Specialy confession of Arjun with Aisha.

Please jaisa chal raha hai waisa ho badiya hai.
Ariya ka pyaar,ek dusrey ke liye samakh sath hi Arav ko leke pyar bhi toh jaruri hai.

Pleasr jaise aap likh rahe ho waise hi likho.

Update soon

Thanks for the PM

LOVE
LADDU


Thanks dear for all ur support n ur response
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zida

superb part
I am just waiting whan arjun say I love u to riya


Thanks dear
He will say soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 46



Next evening

Sam give day off. Anuraj already on their trip .sakshi is with abhay .shreetu is at arjun home n playing with arvee .samjun in meeting with commissioner. N risha is going on shopping.

At shopping mall

ai - riya sabse pehle kya khareeden

Ri - tumne kya socha hai

Ai - are yar kuch samjh nahi aa raha . bahut confused hu. Mom dad baki preparation mai busy hai .unko bhi kitna kam hai .or I am single child .kash meri behan hoti to kuch suggest karti.

Ri - hay Aisha don't worry mai hu na .tumharai behan hi samjho mujhe aaj se.or tumhari sari shopping ki responsibility meri.

Aisha tearily hug riya n thanks her.

Ai - aaj tumne mujhe apni Behan ki jagah di hai ri to mai bhi wada karti hu tumhari jindgi mai khusviyan lane k liye kuch bhi karungi.

Ri - to ayu chalen

Ai smile - haa ri chalo.

They enter bridal attire shop.

Ri - ayu hum na engagement, fir mehndi , haldi , sangeet fir shadi ki dress lenge .ok.

Ai - ok. Par shadi ka joda red hoga mera fav colour.waise ri tumhara fav color kya hai.

Ri - pink. You know mai na bachpan mai di k sath khelte waqt humesha kehti thi meri shadi mai main pink dress pehnungi ek dum princess style mai hogi meri shadi.

N she get sad n silent.

Ai - haa shadi ek bar hoti hai apni pasand ki har chij hona chahiye.

Ri sadly smile

Ri mv meri kismat mai shadi hi nahi hai ayu to pasand na pasand ka kya.

Aisha understand but change her mood

Ai - ri engagement k liye kaun sa color lu .dekho mujhe ye blue or orange dono acche lag rahe hai.

Ri - tum try karo mai dekh kar bataungi.

Then both of them order all function dress for aisha .n do a lot of fun. Both coming closer.

Both are returning in aisha car.

Ai - waise ri college mai tumhara koi bf nahi tha.I mean tum itni preety or beautiful ho.

Ri smile - ayu us waqt bas mai kuch banna chahti thi. Shree or li bas ye dono hi mere bff the. Hmm kuch logon ne propose kiya but i said no to them.

Ai - ohh. Par fir bhi ek chahera ek ummed to har ladki k man mai hoti hai.ki uska prince charimg uske liye ye kare wo kare. Or jo
Ladki bachpan mai hi apni wadding dress ka color decide kar sakti hai usne to kai sapne dekhe honge.

Ri - chodo na ayu

Ai sadly - tumne bas kehne k liye behan kaha na roshni puchti to nahi batati kya.khair chodo.

Ri smile - blackmail haa. Ok baba batati hu par tum kisi ko mat batana.

Ai wink - tumhare dulhe k alawa kisi ko bhi nahi i promise

Ri move her head in disbelief .n conti

Ri - actully jab mai college mai thi kai girls k bfs the but mujhe humesha ek loving caring n understanding husband chahiye tha na ki temperory bf. You know ek bar to mere man mai ek stupid si wish ayi

Ai - kya

She ask her curiously

Ri - wo ..wo ye ki wo mujhe aisi jagah shadi k liye propose kare jaha sirf sacchai or purity ho. Main na jameen par hu na asman par .jahan har taraf ful hi ful ho unki mehak humare moments ko or mehka de ek dum kahaniyon k jadui bageeche ki tarh.. uski har ek bat uske dil se nikle or mere dil tak pahuche .

She said all this dreamily

Ai - wow ri but

Ri - i know aisa possible nahi. Just a weard dream.


Ai ask naughtily- what about first kiss.

Ri mouth open in o shape .

Ri blush - aisa kuch nahi socha.

But next second.

Ri - waise ayu tumhara first kiss kaisa tha

Now aisha blush

Ri - not fair ayu maine itna kuch bataya now i want to know.

Ai blush

Fb

After their recounsil . sam take her to date in his house. He decorated all very well n he himself cook for her.

Ai - sam ye sab apne khud kiya .

Sam - ha aisha you are very special to me .tumhe khokar pata chala tumhare bina to meri jindgi jeene layak hi nahi. Isiliye special thing for my special lady.

She smile tearily n hug him .both take dinner n now they are dancing on soft music

Sam - aisha can ...can ..ii...i

Ai - kya hua sam

Sam - can i kiss u aisha .

He said in one breath.

Ai - what??

Sam - sorry wo mujhe laga to puch liya.agar tumhe pasand nahi to.

She start crying..

Sam - sorry Aisha plz ro mat.

Ai - nahi sob wo mujhe kiss karna nahi aata .

Sam smile n take her face in his palm n then kiss her on her lips first gently then he deepen kiss.

After some sec he release her

Sam - koi baat nahi mai tumhe sab sikha dunga.

She smile shyly n run from there.

Fb end.

Riya is laughing on her n she pout.

Ai - rii

Ri - ok baba sorry. But kuch bhi bolo rathodsirr ne khud khana banaya .how romantic. Nash koi humare liye bhi banata.

She tease her.

Like this she drop her at home n left .shreetu already left. Arjun make arvee sleep after feeding them dinner. Now he is waiting for her.

Ri enter

Ar - so kaisi rahi shopping.

Ri - bahut badiya.

N she tell her all thing except her talk with aisha.he is very happy to see riya happy.

Ar - kuch khaya tum logon ne


Ri - ohh no baton or shopping mai hum khana to bhul hi gaye.

Ar - tum bhi na.chalo sath mai khate hai.

Ri get shocked.

Ri - apne bhi nahi khaya.

Ar - nahi tumhare bina khane ka man nahi hua. Maine khud tumhare liye kuch banaya hai.

N he left without seeing her reaction.

Ri - ye kya maine to uhi aisha se kaha tah ki kash koi mere liye bhi banata or yaha..

She is in shock..

Guys he dont know its her wish par wo khud se riya k liye ye karta hai.

Ar - riya

Ri - haa

Ar - jaldi jao change kar aao.

She left hurriedly n come after 15 min .n here he set table.

Ar - an tumhari tarah accha khana banana nahi ata mujhe .pehli bar ye chilli paneer or kheer banayi hai.

Ri - dono mere favourite.

She lostly say arjun smile.

Ar - kaho na riya, ek min

N he take a spoon n feed her

She is shocked did really he feed her with his hand. Arj smrik after looking her face

Ar - riya ab chew to tumhe hi karna hoga.

She come in present n start chewing n arjun look at her with curious face

Ri - its really good.

Ar - really wow Maine kar diya .

He happily jump.ri look At him amused.he take his dinner silently after saying her sorry.

Ri - waise apne khana q banaya .mai bana leti na.

Ar - tumhe rest kaha mil raha hai. Pehle picnic for Arav ki bimari or aaj shopping or sath mai ghar or office ka kam .to Ise mera Chotu sa thanku samjho humara itna khayal rakhne k liye.

It brings tear in her eyes.

Ar - plz riya ro mat warna fir cutie Rajat or bacche mujhe punishment denge or tumhari di bhi Ruth jayegi.

She smile n they clean all n she left.

Ar - or in sabse jyada mai ab tumhari ankho mai ansu bardash nahi kar Sakta.

His phone ring.its Aisha .
She tell him all convo.

Ar - thanks Aisha

Ai - no sir ri ne mujhe Behan kaha hai to uske lite kuch bhi.or apne mujhpe itna vishwas kiya hai to mai use pura karungi.

Ar - no Aisha its really mean a lot.

Ai - ok to aap mujhe kuch de dijiye.

Ar - haa bolo

Ai - apni dosti or ek wada ki meri Behan ko humesha khush rakhoge.

Ar - ok friends . n pakka wada.

Ai - waise apko bhi thanks.

Ar - to tumhe pata chal gaya.

Ai - aisha apne dosto ko acche se janti hai.

Ar - so you enjoyed it.

Ai - very much.I hope u too.

Ar -yup ..OK bye.

Actually arjun send sam at Aisha home to give her surprise dinner .n do SAM's work also. He want to give Aisha happiness for what she is doing for him.then come n make dinner for kids n them.

TBC...


Uff finally I write it. I don't know kaisa hai. But really kai bar delete karkar ke likha hai.plz drop your opinion.

Thanks

Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u so much for the pm di ur stories are always good
Now the story line... Arjun made dinner for Riya so sweet
Riya and Ayesha sisters woww
Hoping soon for the confession
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was nice update dear
riya & aisha moments was great
arjun made food for riya that too her fav dish
it was totally nice update
pls do cont next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb
can't wait for next part
continue soon
thanks for pm

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