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Chitra John

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Posted: 9 years ago

#611

Awsm update... bt stil curious to knw... wat hppnd to our jasmine

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#612

@doll.12 - thank u so much for the lovely comment. and as for your question, if my parents didn't have a happy ending my dear
then I would not have been here, typing away till my heart's fill!😉

@Monikaarora - hello monika darlinggg.. welcome back and hope you are doing your exams well. thank u for taking ouut time
for this. good to see you back after long.😛

@diadecember - mehsoos?? of firesafirefire's???

@ms.nautanki - you cried? seriously?😲

@Susegad - aapke pehle comment ke liye aapki dhulayi hogi.
and for the second comment--- ummahhh!!! you cried? hehehehe chalo my purpose of writing is served!😎
and about Rishi... bande ko entry tho lene do pehle!!😳

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET - thank u dear and welcome aboard!! i hope to see a happy ending too.😉

@Madhuri53 - i loveddd your back to back comments. made my day!! about my parents.its somewhat similar, not entirely.
like i had mentioned once, i have added a bit of my evilness to my parents' story and served it to you all in the platter named Maaneet!

@---nishu--- - aur tumne jo kaha who bhi ek paheli hain!
but i loved it. Super Like. yeah this is kind of a puzzle i am creating
like you know building the edges bit by bit before i reach the centre!

@TaranaGeet- You were missed, Woman! so glad to see you back. 😃where had you been?

@sophiezz- general rule!!😆 the thing is he hasn't seen geet with any other male rather than Dev. Just give him some time.😉

Chapter - 11

What is it That We Share?

He watched her sleep peacefully, finally. It had taken him a lot of time to convince her that he would stay by her and wouldn't vanish the moment she'd be asleep. But when did sleep come to him so easily to him these days! She had brought him back from the dark then and now he had to hold himself to bring her back now. He stood by the window and pushed away the curtains, letting the soothing breeze caress him. faint moonlight danced into the room and along with it, brought the fragrances of his beloved... of his sweet sweet jasmine. There was once a time when the bakula tree held their heaven but gone were those days and all that remained was the fond memories of that time. He breathed in that scent of the flowers and time traveled back in time when he had realized what this woman meant to him.

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He smiled looking at the invitation card again and couldn't hold that anxiousness. Will she agree if he asked her out? What would be her reaction then? The project he was working on was almost complete and he had been invited to a party by his clients and he wanted to take her. Grinning, he walked back home, finally. The entire family welcomed him and then there was dadima who seemed to smirk at his happiness. It was much later in the night that she had come to his room and caught him staring at the invitation like a fool.

"so, are you going to ask her or not?"

She had caught him off guard for a moment and quickly covered it up.

"ask whom dadima?", he asked, laying his head on her lap as she caressed her head.

"You think you can hide anymore from your dadima, child?"

That look on her face was of an experienced woman whose eyes had the knack to catch hold of anything going around her. he knew she knew and there was no hiding.

"so tell us Maan, since when is this going on?"

He sighed, "I don't know dadima!"

"You don't?"

"No. Its like it has been with us forever. Like it feels new yet it feels so old."

"did you tell her that you like her?"

"No. Not yet. I just want to make her feel special. Thats it."

"then you much act quickly son. The party is tomorrow right?"

He nodded and watched her walk out of the room, bidding him a good night. He had wanted to rush to her and sit with her under that tree and talk of numerous things in the world but then he let it be. she was busy with her work and he didn't have a heart to disturb her knowing how stressed she was.

His father had been so proud of him seeing his hard work and he felt like he was the conqueror of the world. He was very close to his father and to make him happy, he could do just anything. and happiness knew no bounds when his father had told him how proud he was. As a consequence, he had ended up driving to her office and barging into her conference hall with that MSK aura around him. to say she was shocked would be an understatement but then she had to take hold of the situation.

She quickly excused herself and stored towards him, murdering him with his looks.

"what are you doing here Maan?"

"I am here to see you jasmine.", he answered, as a matter of fact.

She wondered if this man really knew how to behave where!

"I am in the middle of a meeting. you could have waited na!"

"But i want to talk to you right now Geet!"

She rolled her eyes, so very aware of the numerous pair of eyes looking at them.

"Not now Maan. Just wait for a while."

But when did he remain himself when he was with his jasmine? He stood coolly with his hands in his pocket.

"I said I want to talk to you. And I want to talk Right Now."

"Maan.. . do you realize you are jeopardising my job here? What is this behaviour?", she reprimanded hi, angry that he wasn't listening.

But he was her little valiant knight who had learned to conquer her heart. all he did was just hold her hand and drag her out. She protested and she threatened him, albeit in a low voice lest people suspected but he went on his way. There were things that couldn't wait.

He stopped only when they reached his car and he shoved her into the passengers seat and locked it. he went and sat on the driver's seat and closed the doors. She was seething in anger and that unprofessional behaviour of his had upset her.

"what the..."

"shhh. Shut up.", he pressed his finger on her lips. She became quiet but not
pacified. He could still feel her hot breaths on his skin doing something to his insides. Once she was quiet, he pulled out the invitation from his pocket and thrust it into her hands.

"what is this?", she snapped.

"just read it Geet.", he spoke softly.

"Its an invitation for a party Maan. You dragged me out of my conference just to show me this?" she was exasperated. This man was crazy he seemed.

"yes I know well its an invitation for a party."

"then what was the need to sabotage my meeting? I am going bye."

He held her hand while she tried to unlock the door.

"Stop. Come with me!"

She stilled and turned back to him, "what?"

"yes Geet. I want you to come with me to the party."

Her gaze locked on his and then she saw something she couldn't describe. She was angry indeed, but then him asking her for a party almost melted her. did she mean that much to him?

Like he read her mind.

"Yes. Come with me. I want to celebrate this success with you and no one else."

She thought she couldn't melt more but then she did. Her lips involuntarily curved into a soft smile.

"couldn't you have waited?"

"No. Be ready by 7. I will pick you up."

She walked back into her office grinning like a teenager meeting with her crush. But this was her valiant knight. Always up on his toes to surprise her by his acts. She felt dazed even when she was getting ready. she stood in front of the mirror, zipping her black knee length dress. She knew there was something between them and he knew it too. But none spoke.

She felt herself gasp, looking at him, wait for her in the hall of her house, looking absolutely gorgeous of man in his black dinner suit. With hands in his pocket and that bow tie proudly jutting from his collars make him look no less than a beauty to behold. But she squirmed under his gaze. Her heart fluttered as his dark eyes took in her view, telling her how wonderful she looked just with those dark orbs. The drive throughout was silent, perhaps the best thing that could have happened at that poignant moment.

During the dinner, Geet saw a new face of him, holding her protectively and talking to his clients simultaneously. It was then she realized how passionate he was about his work and how happy they were with her knight. She felt proud. But that pride turned into embarrassment immediately when someone praised her, calling her Maan's date! She couldn't explain that feeling, rather it was better left untold and unexplained. Thats the beauty of certain things. She was lost in her own world when he swayed her away for a dance. It was then she realized how closely he held her, one hand by her waist and the other gently holding her palm and guiding her steps.

"You seem lost jasmine!", his soft voice brought her back the real world.

"huh??",she looked at his face, after a long time.

"what are you thinking?", he gently pushed away that stray strand of her hair that obstructed his view of his sweet jasmine and felt her shiver.

"I...I was just thinking about what the other person said."

She chuckled seeing him confused and inched closer to him, tightening her grip over his shoulder.

"Is it a date Mr. Khurana?"

That smirk on her face made him smile. His eyes glinted in the dark

"Anything you can assume it to be Miss."

He twirled her and brought her back to his arms.

"You could have asked me over the phone Mr. Khurana. You didn't need to create a scene in my office."

He laughed at that.

"I enjoy being the center of the show Madam. And had I done that, would you have agreed?"

He had that playfulness in his eyes as well as his voice.

"tell me Geet, would you have said yes?"

She bit her lips in thoughtfulness but then gasped feeling his finger tug her poor lips away.

"Don't do that!"

She left a breath she was holding, "Perhaps yes, Perhaps No."

"Stick to one, woman!"

She giggled in his arms but he wanted an answer.

"tell me Geet. Answer me."

Their gazes locked still as their bodies moved in sync.

"What is this Maan?"

"What is what?"

"this thing that we share? What is this? It threatens to engulf me whole and I feel there is no way to escape."

The music changed and he dictated a steady pace.

"I don't know."

That was all he could answer. Like he had told dadima, this had been with them since forever. And there was no answer to her questions... not yet.

"you always have answers to all my questions Maan.. since the time i have known you. Then tell me. What is this? Will this remain? For all I know is that this is beyond friendship... beyond every other relationship we share. Its something more. Do you feel it too?"

His soft nod affirmed her speculations. He was on the same boat as hers. As clueless as her and as confused as she was.

"then tell me how you feel! Tell me Maan.."

The music was long forgotten, the dance continued and they lost track of time and tide. At one point, there comes a moment that demands your entire attention, your time from your life to seek answers to the unknown. And this was their time.

"How I feel? I feel like I have known you from eternities and yet I feel as if I am learning to know you. What we share has been forever and yet what we share is so new to me that I lose myself."

She leaned closer and placed her head on his chest, moving in a slow rhythm of the music. Both his hands now circled her, holding her close to his heart.

"I feel the same too Maan and I am so clueless. What name shall I give to what we share? May be then this tempest within me shall cease to exist."

She felt him kiss her forehead and closed her eyes. His warm musk that made him very male surrounded her, mixed with his cologne, he felt very warm.

"shhh. Don't try too hard jasmine. Just let it go. Sometimes its better we leave things take their own course. And thats why let us leave this here and now and let us leave this thing between us unnamed!"

The party slowly came to an end and their drive was silent again. they were lost in that moment that they had left behind. It was late night. He dropped her in front of her house.

"good night Maan. Thanks for the surprise."

She turned to leave when he held her hand and she stopped. She turned back and he pressed a kiss at the back of her palm.

"You still have a bigger surprise coming up Jasmine. Now, sleep well."

She wondered what his bigger surprise could be but then she let him take his steps. For she knew whatever it was, it would indeed be etched in her soul forever.

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"Maan...", she squirmed in her sleep. Her hands moving on the unadulterated bed on her side. He sighed and quickly slipped beside her, taking her in his arms.

"you aren't asleep yet?", she mumbled, half asleep, half awake. She snuggled close to his chest.

"I was just working on something Love."

"come to bed.", she wrapped her arm around him, yawning.

And then she felt she smelled something. she sniffed a bit and crinkled her nose.

"what is it Geet?"

"Why do I smell jasmines?"

It was then he realized the winds had played with the flowers. The window he had left open had let in the smell of those flowers. He caressed her forehead softly.

"Because they are."

"we don't have a jasmine plant around, do we?", her voice was drowsy and his soft caress made her lose her consciousness to the sleep goddess.

"We have Geet. That creeper on the fence outside."

She wanted to ask something more but then sleep was too overpowering. He pulled the duvet on them and tried to sleep but couldn't. The past was back again to haunt him and she was the only one who could cure him. but then, he couldn't ask her for help. He would have to fight those sleepless nights alone. He was, for a change, glad that Naina would be here with them for a while to help them out. And perhaps she could bring about a positive change in Geet.
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soch_ti

@soch_ti

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#613

Couldn't find the appropriate words to describe what I feel after reading each and every chapter... it just leaves me with something incomplete yet so complete. ...
Dadi knows her potta so well... Proud Dad... that part felt so tangible... He loves to be her drama queen...*CUTE*
Dance floor conversation was pure Love...
Geet's pain is so... what happened to her?
Your writing is so blissful like a painting having perfect blend of vibrant, edgy, and pastel colours.
Thank you.

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@Endgame

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#614

Beautiful update wow dadima aware of their relation both are unknown what to call their new found relation but they are liking this lovely part thnx 4 update

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#615

This was so beautiful & wonderful part
True to the T
Very nice update

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#616

Amazing update
Daadi ma knows her pota's secret
Loved Maaneet's convo

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#617

wow so maan invited geet for a party that too crashing her meeting 😆
kind of dadi knows already hmmm

but what happened in the past that even though geet and maan are married that geet is kind of still so paranoid what is it... waiting for next 😭

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#618

wow lovely emotional beautiful update yar..te way my maan remembering his past which gave him so many beautiful memories..te way his excitement to take his geet for te party and dadi got him and te way he barging to her conference making his sherni growled but he know how to melt her was lovely..te way geet was numb seeing te way my maan holding her and making her to feel special, yes no words is need to confess their heart , they silence is enough,lovely beautiful date..te way geet searching my maan who consoling her but who will console his burning heart..i love te update so much yar

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#619

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! beautifully written! Past - dadi confronts Maan abt Geet! she reminds him of the party! Maan forcibly takes Geet frm wrk! he is taking her to the party! Maaneet attend the party! Geet shy wen she is referred 2 as his date! Maaneet talk! no words r needed! its always been there! Present - Maan assures Geet! bt wt is he hiding?? wt happened in the past??? update soon 😊👏⭐️

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#620

it's always very painful when you remember your treasured past and that's give us the feeling how helpless we are now.

same is with maan.with geet is such condition he couldn't sleep .he don't know how to come out of this feeling.only geet seems to give him some peace, he want.

their unnamed relation so beautiful and pure.

loved it

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