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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

Rudra started driving his Jeep much faster. He closed his eyes and started recalling the incident happened in Beerpur. That is, when he and Aman missed Paro at Beerpur and returned back to home, he was shocked to see Paro in his home. Paro returned back to her Rudra again. So he thought to rush towards rooms in home.The rooms are empty.Rudra didn't realize his feeling for Paro eventhough she is the reason for his father's worse condition. But his inner feelings still wants Paro to be safe. With no more thoughts ahead, he take bath and starts getting ready to go BSD office. Then he remember his cellphone was left in his father's room.

Mythili spreads chillies in the porch and found some cloth in golden color was hidden behind the flower pot and ask Suheri to see that. Suheri pick that and say its Paro's wedding attire. Then Mythili said yes its Paro's...and before completing the sentence she noticed the corner of dupatta is non-stitched. She get the cloth from Suheri and silently thinks about something deeply. Suheri ask the reason for her silence. Mythili replied her with a puzzled face, that this dupatta is non-stitched which means... (didn't completed the sentence) and both of them rushed towards Dilsher room where Paro's stuff's are present.

There they search for Paro's bag and found her wedding attire present in the bag. Mythili says to Suheri that one is a torn attire which was stitched by Paro and worn at Mela. Then Mythili realized the truth & understands her bad behaviour towards Paro and explains everything happened to Suheri. At that time she heard the voice of Mohini calling her, so that she gave the attire to Suheri and ask her to keep it safe. Suheri goes to her room and placed it in her cupboard.

Rudra came back to his father's room and searched for his mobile. He found it at the back of head board of cot. When Rudra is about to take it, he found some torn piece of cloth which was stuck in the cot. He takes that and says, it means someone had tried to kill my father at that time when I arrived to check Dilsher. Rudra then recalls every moment from last night and he conclude that someone was missing at that time when all the family members are with me but but who is that culprit.Who...??... Mohini.

Yes, she was missing at that time; she was the one who came to hospital late and she is the last person too, Which means Mohini had tried to kill my father and not My Paro (For the First Time Rudra said "My Paro" that too without even thinking a second). He says after I reached here, Mohini tried to hide behind the cot and that time her dupatta may got stuck in it. So that she couldn't get away from there and so she came to hospital last as late person. Rudra concluded this murder attempt case but there was no solid proof against Mohini. Rudra leaves to BSD.

At BSD Headquarters, once again Rudra started his search but this time he included some enemies in the list. First person in the list is none other than Tejawat, secondly Laila, thirdly Mohini. Rudra strike out mohini's name because at that time of kidnapping she is busy to attack Dilsher. Rudra split BSD soldiers into three teams and orders them to find Tejwat and Laila. Rudra stops Aman and ask him to stay with him and help him in finding Paro. Both the soldiers started their search for Paro in the entire chandangarh. At evening, All BSD teams are informed about the search operation results. Finally Laila is captivated, now she is in BSD cell.

At hospital, Dr says, Dilsher is fine now but have to take care of him well. He also stated that he will recover from his coma state soon and stay with him or else if he stays in hospital, we will take care of him well. When Danveer was about to talk, Mohini interrupt them and says we are all his family so we will take care of him even better than your service at hospital. Then Dr agrees to discharge Dilsher. Danveer thanked his wife and says, for the first time you did a good thing. Mohini smiles. Samrat pays the hospital bill. Sumer asks his mother what is she doing and about her plan for Dilsher. Mohini smiles and says I tried to kill Dilsher, but now it's your turn to kills him. Sumer stunned and Mohini leaves him.

At Ranawat haveli, Phone rings, Mythili picked it and says hello. Samrat informs her about Dilsher's discharge and asks her to make arrangements for Dilsher. Mythili cleans Dilsher's room and Suheri also helped her.

At BSD, Rudra meets Laila who sits in the chair at centre of the room. Rudra comes before her and she started asking questions. Laila asked how are you Rudra, How is your marriage life, why you take me here Rudra, Are you not satisfied with your new wife. Rudra said don't talk any more words and he started asking about Paro. Laila says wow so your wife is missing, with only 3 or 4 days of marriage life has been completed, she runs away from you as like as your mother, or else she may not be satisfied you,... before she complete her sentence Rudra shouts Laila...

Laila laughs and says your wife also left you alone as like your mother did, accept the truth Rudra, I am the only one person who loves you more than anything in the world but you refused me and married some other women. Now see what happened. Laila is about to touch his cheek. But Rudra moves away. Laila smiles and says now I can see a new Rudra who is madly in LOVE with Parvathi and typical Indian husband. Rudra leaves the cell angrily. Laila says you're not my old Rudra.


Precap: Some old and dark palace, A girl found with her hands are tied along with the pillar.

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That's it. Friends I need your feedback to continue this Fan Faction.

Note- Frnds if you want PM pls buddy me.

Special Thanks to Devi Prakash(My Sister)

Edited by -BhavyaEsther- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi I am new here I read your story Amazing story plz continue story I like Rangrasiya but jab ye confirm howa k myrah paro nahi hai tu phir mainay serial hi nahi dekha if you don't mind I have a idea serial main paro or rudra ki shaadi jaldii nahi honi chahiye thi v.k sir paro ki safety k liye usay kahin bijhwa detay or phir 6 month leap hota or phir rudra change hojata or ussay paro k liye feelings hoti or wo paro ko miss karta or phir paro BSD join karnay ati paro bilkul change ho jati modern ho k ati or rudra ussay dekhta hi rahjata or phir laila bhi kuch nahi karsakti phir love story start hoti tu serial definitly hit hota if you don't mind tu plz fan fictions main kuch aisa hi kardena agher idea acha lagay tu😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz PM me when you update next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: uroos

Hi I am new here I read your story Amazing story plz continue story I like Rangrasiya but jab ye confirm howa k myrah paro nahi hai tu phir mainay serial hi nahi dekha if you don't mind I have a idea serial main paro or rudra ki shaadi jaldii nahi honi chahiye thi v.k sir paro ki safety k liye usay kahin bijhwa detay or phir 6 month leap hota or phir rudra change hojata or ussay paro k liye feelings hoti or wo paro ko miss karta or phir paro BSD join karnay ati paro bilkul change ho jati modern ho k ati or rudra ussay dekhta hi rahjata or phir laila bhi kuch nahi karsakti phir love story start hoti tu serial definitly hit hota if you don't mind tu plz fan fictions main kuch aisa hi kardena agher idea acha lagay tu😳

Thank U so much for ur Feedback dear,.
Dear frnd I know vry little bit of Hindi.,Now I can Understand ur suggestion aft read it twice..
In my Story no more Myrah..
This PaRud Story NT MyRud...
No more Modern Paro in my story..
Pls nxt time giv ur suggestion by English..
Love
Bhavya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😉

Originally posted by: uroos

Plz PM me when you update next

Sure dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: bluetitliya

Great update👏

So glad Rudra has now got know about Mohini.

OMG in the precap I think its Paro😭
Tejawat is back in action 🤔
This time Nobody can save him from Majorsaab😈

PS: I have a doubt dear.
During the time Paro disguised herself as Gowri,
She was not married to Rudra right,
then how come here Laila is referring Paro as Rudra's Wife?

Thank U dear..
I'll clear ur doubt in my nxt update,.
Stil PaRud r NT married...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was a lovely chapter dear. A great read.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marvel-freak

That was a lovely chapter dear. A great read.

Thank U Dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very short, but sweet Rudra for calling "my paro"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pavinitishiv

very short, but sweet Rudra for calling "my paro"

Mmm😉

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