Fallen Angel (NEW) - CH 3 PG 11 10-Jun-17

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Angels11

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Junglebee
awesome update..

Glad u liked it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Any,You started new FF and mujhe no khabhar,Did you kick me out of PM list.No matter what,BMing this now😃

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Angels11

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Originally posted by: NautankiSaali
Any,You started new FF and mujhe no khabhar,Did you kick me out of PM list.No matter what,BMing this now😃

Emptied out my complete PM list yaar. Felt bad that i send PMs to 400 ppl & the likes on each chapter were hardly 15-20 😳

Planning 2 start afresh. Do send me a buddy request 😊

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Originally posted by: Angels11

Emptied out my complete PM list yaar. Felt bad that i send PMs to 400 ppl & the likes on each chapter were hardly 15-20 😳

Planning 2 start afresh. Do send me a buddy request 😊

I understand your pain,really,I do. Nah,I don't really need PMs to follow your work,Just a note in your ongoing work will do ,for me😃.In my defense, I had a couple of trips and then the fasting ,had me busy, so couldn't keep up with the pace.Will be bacfk in full form after Eid😃. I checked,you are still in my buddy list😳

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Angels11

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Originally posted by: NautankiSaali

I understand your pain,really,I do. Nah,I don't really need PMs to follow your work,Just a note in your ongoing work will do ,for me😃.In my defense, I had a couple of trips and then the fasting ,had me busy, so couldn't keep up with the pace.Will be bacfk in full form after Eid😃. I checked,you are still in my buddy list😳

No problem dear. Hope u ll enjoy this new story as well. If u liked Shattered Dreams then u ll like this as well. Here the characters ve shades of grey & their motives always suspect 😊

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Angels11

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Chapter 2 Sneak Preview

ASR's temper rocketed.

Where the hell was Sheetal. Most likely she must be with those simpering bimbos, Pam & Kirti who were perennially hanging on her arms.

He muttered an expletive when he found her room empty. Suddenly he heard some commotion & rightly guessed that the racket was originating from the pantry area. He gravitated towards the source of all this ruckus & as he neared he could hear a babel of voices, loud snickering & giggling.

Sheetal's team was huddled around a girl who was standing with bowed head. That slight frame looked vaguely familiar & he inched closer to get a better look. He was surprised to see her head whip up & saw a pair of beautiful hazel brown eyes staring at him. Their gaze collided & she immediately averted her glance. However in that split second that he had captured her attention he had recognized her. He was strangely intrigued. What was she doing here.

Except her no one else had noticed his presence. It was as if she had sensed his presence though he was not in her immediate line of vision. This piqued his interest further but was distracted by the ensuing round of uproarious laughter.

So you claim to be a designer but dress in such gunny sacks. Pam drawled sarcastically.

You do realize that this is AR Fashions, the leading fashion power house in the country. We have high standards & how dare a trailer trash like you step into these hallowed portals.

Whom are you planning to design dresses for, Delhi's rag pickers? Kirit swooped in for the kill.

This taunt was greeted by a fresh round of mirth and guffaws. He saw the girl's fists clench around her dress tightly, the only reaction from her while her face half concealed behind those long tresses was oddly inscrutable.

He looked at the mob convulsed with gleeful merriment & he felt a sudden onslaught of repulsion at their callousness. Were the people around him always been this shallow & vapid. He closed his eyes momentarily & then took a deep breath.

ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!

Everyone just froze & turned simultaneously to behold ASR in towering rage. There was a stunned silence.

Edited by Angels11 - 10 years ago